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This is a great windar and Barb story, could end in disaster for the girls (and men) (but a grisly tale to set us up for the holidays) or happy ever after, making grandchildren.

What is it about salt production? Slaves always needed, terrible conditions, short life. This mine, cold and dark. The salt pans in The People's Sports Academy For Young Women (in Archive) harsh sun and heat. Both God-awful places worked by girls who didn't deserve it. Next time you waste that salt on your plate, think of those girls!

Just a 'flavour' of what salt pans were like, from the above:
The sun was shining on the backs of Daisy and Emm, hundreds of miles away, as they laboured up and down the salt mountains... The days ran one into the other everything becoming routine.... Every day started with its bowl of gruel, finished with the soup and bread, and in-between they slogged out to the pans, feet, hands and limbs chaffed by the salt, lips caked white... Everywhere the smell and the taste in their mouths - a taste it was impossible to get used to... Always the heat... Always exhausted.... And then, after supper, after the showers, that happy half hour together before tiredness overcame them...

Thanks, OS. We will have to see how it ends. We may surprise even ourselves.

Salt has always been valuable because of the difficulty of obtaining it (like gold). I'm sure every one here knows that Roman soldiers were paid in salt (hence the word salary).

The center of salt mining in the US is around Syracuse. Syracuse, New York, that is. These days, the vast majority of it is used not for food, but on the roads in wintertime.
 
Chapter 12 What Is To Be Done? Sheriff John Miller

Birthdays have a way of making a man take stock of his life, especially when they are a round number like 50, which is what today’s is for me. What do I have to show for my time on earth? My wife, Clara; she’s been a good wife and she’s distraught, as am I, over our daughter Sarah, sold into slavery in the salt mines when her husband Charles defaulted on the mortgage on his plantation.

Then there’s my other daughter, Barbara, the one Clara doesn’t know about. She and her mother Pat ended up slaves on Charles and Sarah’s plantation after their small farm defaulted on its loans. They escaped, my deputies brought them back to the plantation, and they ended up sold to the salt mines as well-my only two daughters and my old lover, all toiling together in the salt mines.

And finally, there’s my job as Sheriff, charged with capturing runaway slaves and returning them to their owners to be brutally punished. When we caught Barb, I had my deputies torture her with splints under her toenails to get her to reveal where Pat was. There’s something I can be proud of, having my own daughter tortured. But I guess it’s OK, since I didn’t know she was my daughter then. And the brave girl never talked; Pat walked in on her own, driven by hunger and cold.

That’s the so-called system we live under and I’m a cog in it, up until recently, a willing one. I could spend the next 10 or 20 years propping it up, until I’m too old to work anymore, but for what? All I really want is to see my daughters and try to set them up with some kind of life besides toiling in the mine until they die an early death from exhaustion. Maybe even have a couple of grandkids. That shouldn’t be too much to ask.

But they were locked inside the mine and outsiders, even sheriffs, weren’t allowed contact with the slaves. I needed someone inside. Then, I thought of George. He had been the overseer at Charles and Sarah’s plantation; they were sure that he had aided Barb and Pat’s escape. There wasn’t enough evidence for criminal charges, but they had fired him and I heard he had gotten hired at the mine to run the night shift. I also knew that the mine employees often drank at the Thirsty Miner Tavern, just down the road from the mine, before work.

So, the next afternoon, right after lunch, I told my Deputies that I had some business in town. I rode off in that direction, but stopped after a few minutes and ducked into the woods to change into civilian clothes so as not to attract attention, before doubling back. It was about a two hour horseback ride to the tavern and I arrived early enough to get a table where I could see the entire room. I nursed a beer very slowly; I needed to remain clear-headed.

Around, four o’clock, a tall, well-built man strode into the room and went up to the bar. It was George. I moved quickly to stand beside him as the bartender brought his drink. “I got that,” I said, slapping some coins down on the bar, “And bring another for me.”

George turned to look at me. “Sheriff? Sheriff Miller? Sarah’s father?” he asked looking a bit surprised to see me. “Isn’t this a bit out of your county?” he asked.

“It is,” I replied, escorting him to my table. “I came to see you. I want to see my daughter who has recently been sold as a slave in your mine. I also want to see Barb, the former slave at Sarah’s plantation.”

He smiled at me and didn’t look at all surprised by this request, “Yes, I know about how you are Barb’s real father,” he smiled. “You had a fling with Pat way back when, you rascal. I can’t say that I blame you. She’s might fine looking today and I bet she was even better back then.”

I smiled back at him. “Yes, she was. And I know about you helping them to escape from the plantation.” A nervous look crossed his face for a moment. “Don’t worry, we’re on the same side. We need to help each other.” George looked at me long and hard, but that seemed to satisfy him.

“George,” I said, “I turned 50 yesterday and all I have to show for my life is two daughters enslaved in your mine and I helped put at least one of them there.” I grasped the sleeve of his shirt. “You are my only hope to get them out; you have to help me.”

“Get them out? I’d love to help you, but I can’t just spring them without a real, viable plan not just to get them out of the mine, but to get them to rebel territory. Without that, they’d be recaptured in no time and probably executed in the most brutal way imaginable. The bosses would know I was involved and have me made into a penal slave or even worse. However, I think I can arrange for you to see them for a brief visit.”

“Can you?” I asked. “I would be in your debt if you could. As for the escape, let me see what I can come up with.”

George thought a moment, before replying, “Meet me here in two days at the same time. Dress in civilian clothes like you are now. When you see me come in, don’t approach me. If the visit is on, I’ll touch my nose twice then I’ll have a quick drink and leave. Wait five minutes, then you leave too and walk down to the mine, to gate #2. I’ll meet you there.”
Uh-oh! Lookee out, Barb! :eek:
 
YOU DON'T USUALLY GET TO COME BACK TO THE SAME THREAD, UNLESS RESURRECTION FITS THE NARRATIVE STRUCTURE OF THAT REALITY. YOU'RE HERE NOW IN THIS THREAD. STOP COMPLAINING. :p
I have done this once with a character and Oklahoma had several earthquakes soon thereafter... the press blamed 'fracking' but Tree fucked up the 'space-and-time continuum'. Keep that quiet, please...
 
What's in this for George?
My thought exactly. How does this help George, unless he's interested in life as a rebel? Okay, he helped them once, but is he going to risk this gig he's got for a couple of slaves? I don't think the blackmail thing will hold, how would the Sheriff prove anything? With the word of a couple of slaves that he fathered? I don't think so. Looks too convenient. All George has to do is turn the accusation back on the Sheriff. Anyway, the crux of the matter, as I see it, depends on where George sees the best option.
Great stuff, Winder and Barb!:beer:
 
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My thought exactly. How does this help George, unless he's interested in life as a rebel. Okay, he helped them once, but is he going to risk this gig he's got for a couple of slaves? I don't think the blackmail thing will hold, how would the Sheriff prove anything? With the word of a couple of slaves that he fathered? I don't think so. Looks too convenient. All George has to do is turn the accusation back on the Sheriff. Anyway, the crux of the matter, as I see it, depends on where George sees the best option.
Great stuff, Winder and Barb!:beer:

George isn't doing what he's doing because he fears being blackmailed. The Sheriff needs him more than he needs the Sheriff. So what is his motivation? People aren't rational calculating machines; even economists now recognize that the so-called "rational actor" is a fiction; we all do things that are not in our pure self-interest.

First, George is in love with Barb. Possibly with Pat too. Maybe even, in a weird way, with Sarah. Can he be sure of a life with one of them in the free territory? No, but he can hope. Second, he believes in justice. Remember, on the plantation he objected to whipping Barb and Pat because they were falsely set up, but he did it because if he didn't Charles would have gotten someone else to do it. But then he helped them escape. He was happy to rape and punish Sarah and Amy because of what they did to Barb and Pat (OK he enjoyed the sex too). You can only imagine what he'd do to Charles if he had the power.

Third, he hates slavery because he's seen it up close. He can't free all slaves, but he can free a few, so he does it. Maybe once he gets to free territory he can take some actions to free more. And his "gig" sucks. OS talked above about how bad conditions are in the salt mine. Even though George doesn't have to mine the salt himself, he's exposed to it all day long and his life expectancy may not be so good either.

But you're right, rationally he should stay clear of the whole thing. But then Barb and Pat and Sarah and Amy would be stuck forever in the mine. We could write more chapters with more things they would suffer and they could die by one means or another. That might be an OK story. But I hope after this is over that you will agree that the escape was more exciting and fun.:D
 
I have done this once with a character and Oklahoma had several earthquakes soon thereafter... the press blamed 'fracking' but Tree fucked up the 'space-and-time continuum'. Keep that quiet, please...
So it has been you that has been causing the earthquakes here. I had to take out some earthquake insurance:confused:, and this is not California.
Now stop it!
 
So it has been you that has been causing the earthquakes here. I had to take out some earthquake insurance:confused:, and this is not California.
Now stop it!
Ok, I fucked up!!! Buy a log house. My earthquake insurance is $2.25/year with a 20% deductible because all they have to do is jack it up and pour a new foundation.

Damn... everyone bitches at me...
Tree
 
George isn't doing what he's doing because he fears being blackmailed. The Sheriff needs him more than he needs the Sheriff. So what is his motivation? People aren't rational calculating machines; even economists now recognize that the so-called "rational actor" is a fiction; we all do things that are not in our pure self-interest.

First, George is in love with Barb. Possibly with Pat too. Maybe even, in a weird way, with Sarah. Can he be sure of a life with one of them in the free territory? No, but he can hope. Second, he believes in justice. Remember, on the plantation he objected to whipping Barb and Pat because they were falsely set up, but he did it because if he didn't Charles would have gotten someone else to do it. But then he helped them escape. He was happy to rape and punish Sarah and Amy because of what they did to Barb and Pat (OK he enjoyed the sex too). You can only imagine what he'd do to Charles if he had the power.

Third, he hates slavery because he's seen it up close. He can't free all slaves, but he can free a few, so he does it. Maybe once he gets to free territory he can take some actions to free more. And his "gig" sucks. OS talked above about how bad conditions are in the salt mine. Even though George doesn't have to mine the salt himself, he's exposed to it all day long and his life expectancy may not be so good either.

But you're right, rationally he should stay clear of the whole thing. But then Barb and Pat and Sarah and Amy would be stuck forever in the mine. We could write more chapters with more things they would suffer and they could die by one means or another. That might be an OK story. But I hope after this is over that you will agree that the escape was more exciting and fun.:D
Don't feel you need to explain to me. I may point out an inconsistency in the narrative (because I'm picky like that), or complain if you resort to too much deus ex machina to move your story along, but I'm okay with figuring out George on my own. I just send out my speculations - I don't have to be right. It's almost better if you don't tell us that George is in love. Let us worry a bit. ;):)
 
Don't feel you need to explain to me. I may point out an inconsistency in the narrative (because I'm picky like that), or complain if you resort to too much deus ex machina to move your story along, but I'm okay with figuring out George on my own. I just send out my speculations - I don't have to be right. It's almost better if you don't tell us that George is in love. Let us worry a bit. ;):)
Yes indeed.. well, I'm worried... worried enough to keep right on reading!

The loathometer has settled down a bit, though...:rolleyes:
 
Don't feel you need to explain to me. I may point out an inconsistency in the narrative (because I'm picky like that), or complain if you resort to too much deus ex machina to move your story along, but I'm okay with figuring out George on my own. I just send out my speculations - I don't have to be right. It's almost better if you don't tell us that George is in love. Let us worry a bit. ;):)

I don't know any more than you what George is thinking. I'm just the bartender at the Thirsty Miner Tavern. The one thing I think I have figured out about George is that all that salt is giving him nose problems.:p

Yes indeed.. well, I'm worried... worried enough to keep right on reading!

The loathometer has settled down a bit, though...:rolleyes:

Bad news, Wragg. I just did a Google search on loathometer and your CF post has fallen to #3. "Crux Chronicle" should do a piece on this.
 
Chapter 14 The Escape Takes Shape (Sheriff John Miller 3)

I was fully prepared for George not to show for our meeting. After all, he had no family relationship to Sarah or Barb and I wouldn’t have blamed him a bit for not risking very severe consequences to help them. There was little doubt that if caught, George would face being enslaved himself at a minimum and possibly even a very bloody execution.

But, there he was at the agreed-upon spot, giving the agreed-upon signal. We sat in a secluded spot in the woods and plotted our strategy. “I think I can get them out of the mine,” George said. “But the escape will be spotted quickly and they’ll get the Sheriff of our county and a large posse together to find them very quickly.” I knew Sheriff Wilson and knew he would throw everything he had at a slave escape. I would have to come up with a diversion to make him send at least some of his forces in another direction.

“If you can get them out of the mine, then they have to head straight through the mountains to the rebel territory on the other side. If they try to go all the way around them, they will surely be caught,” I told him. George nodded his agreement.

I continued, “The terrain is tough; I used to hunt and camp there often when I was younger and I know a pass that will take us through. But it’s cold up there and everyone will need boots and warm clothes and plenty of food, because there is nothing to eat up there. Naked, hungry women won’t survive.”

“I can’t store that stuff in the mine. If anyone discovered it, that would be the end. You’ll have to meet us with clothes and dried food in the woods nearby and then lead us through the pass. I’m not from around here and don’t know if I could find my way through,” George replied.

“That’s what we’ll have to do. I’ll need some time to accumulate the supplies and set up my diversion. Maybe a week.”

“I was hoping you could do it faster. Joe is very crafty and I’m worried that he will somehow sense something is up. Besides, one of them could screw up somehow and get a punishment that will make it impossible for them to travel for a while. I’m doing what I can to protect them, but there are limits to my authority.”

“I understand,” I told him. “I’ll get together what I can in 3 days. It may not be perfect, but I can’t let my daughters die a slow death in the mine.”

George held up his hand, cautioning me. “We’re going to have to include more than just them. Barb won’t leave Pat behind. And I don’t think Sarah will leave Amy. So that’s four. And then some of the slaves may see us and want to follow. I don’t know how many.”

I frowned. “Look, George, I’d gladly take every last slave in that mine to freedom if I could. But I can’t get supplies for an army and the bigger the party the easier they will be to find. Maybe it’s selfish to focus on my daughters, but blood is thicker than water.”

“John, believe me, I understand. Better to rescue a few than have a disaster in which everyone ends up dead. We’re on the same page. I won’t tell any of the girls until right before. The more people who know, the riskier it is.”

“That’s probably a good idea, George. I told them to do what you tell them as though it came from me. I just hope they listen.”

George chuckled. “Sarah’s kind of headstrong, as I’m sure you know,” he said. “Barb is too, for that matter, but I think Pat can keep her in line. And Amy is a real bitch. But we just need to get them moving, and once they’re out, they’ll have no choice but to keep going.”

“Alright, George, let’s meet back here in three days. If everything is go, we’ll do it that very night. I see your point that delay only hurts us. Besides, at some point, this drought will break and I don’t want to be up in the mountains in storms.” I rose and we shook hands. He disappeared back to the tavern. I waited a few minutes, then made my way towards home.

In the next three days, I managed to accumulate six pairs of boots and nine heavy woolen ponchos. Fortunately, Barb and Pat had boots and some clothing, being enforcers. I worried that it wouldn’t be enough if bad weather hit, but we would need some luck to make this work. I also managed to accumulate a backpack full of dried meats, dried fruits and nuts. If we moved quickly, it should be sufficient.

Before leaving that morning, I told Sarah’s mother, Clara, that I had to go away for a few days. She had some health problems and I didn’t think she would be able to make such a difficult journey. They would certainly question her once the escape was discovered and I thought it best if she knew nothing. I would try to send word to her once I reached rebel territory. Even if she decided not to join me, she would at least know that Sarah was safe and free.

I decided that the diversion for Sheriff Wilson would be to send one of my Deputies, Barney, to him with a message that there was a slave revolt on one of the plantations in the far end of my county and that we needed assistance. Now, my two Deputies, Chet and Barney, were not the sharpest tools in the shed, so fooling them with this cock and bull story wasn’t so hard. I had a fake note, supposedly from the plantation owner, that I waved in front of them as I sent Barney on his way.

Once Barney had gone, I sent Chet to the barn to saddle up two horses, telling him we were riding over to the plantation where the supposed revolt was occurring to assess the situation. While he was busy with that task, I grabbed a heavy iron poker and snuck up behind him, raised it high and whacked it down on his head. He crumpled to the ground and lay there, out cold, but still breathing. Working quickly, I gagged him and dragged him up to the hayloft, where I tied him securely to a pillar and covered him with hay. I figured it would take a while before he was found or came to and managed to free himself.

I quickly changed into civilian clothes, a heavy woolen shirt with a heavy sweater on top. I strapped the wooden chest that contained the boots and clothes for the escapees onto the back of my horse, leaving just enough room for me to sit, and filled the saddlebags with as much of the dried food as I could. I grabbed my rifle and two pistols and stuck some ammunition for each in the pockets of my jacket, and rode off, hopefully to meet George and my daughters and lead everyone safely to rebel territory.

There was no turning back now. Not for me, my daughters, Pat, George, Amy and any of the other slaves who might escape with them. It was do or die for all of us from here on out.
 
Chapter 15 The Escape (Barb)

It was just the end of another night shift at the mine. Pat and I, along with the other enforcers, fed the slaves, whipped the miscreants, and then herded the slaves to the space where they slept. Everything was running smoothly. We went about the usual task of locking everyone's ankle chains to their neck collars. I was about to lock Sarah and Amy up for the night. They knew the routine and were already on their backs with their legs held high in the air, when George tapped me on the shoulder.

"A word," he said, rolling his eyes as a signal to follow him.

"Stay where you are!" I snapped at Sarah and Amy. "Keep those legs high and spread until I come back!"

"Listen carefully now," George said in a whisper once I had joined him some distance away from the others. "We are breaking out to freedom within the hour. We'll need to get a head start before daybreak. So pretend to lock those two up for the night, but pass Sarah the word and let her tell Amy that she is going with us."

I returned to my charges and whispered to Sarah, "Don't react to what I am about to say. George says tonight is the night. I am only pretending to lock you up. Let Amy know what's going on, but do it quietly and don't cause a ruckus."

Then Pat, George and I sat down to wait. We dared not make a move until the sounds that sleeping slaves make filled the chamber. Once everyone seemed asleep, George gave the signal and I went over to where Sarah and Amy laid on their backs. I could see the whites of their eyes in the dim light. I was relieved to know that they were awake and waiting.

"Ok," I said, keeping my voice low, and placing a finger in front of my lips. "Now, get up quietly and follow me."

We joined George and Pat outside the chamber. The next problem was getting past the day shift, which was already hard at work. George dealt with this by having us formed up as a punishment detachment. He led the way followed by Sarah and Amy, shuffling along in their shackles. Pat and I brought up the rear, whips in hand.

Out in the main tunnel, we passed by dozens of naked slaves, sweating as they worked at their various tasks. No one paid any attention to us as we passed by until we ran into Zelda.

"Where you going with those two cunts at this hour?" she demanded.

George held up a handful of wooden stakes and a hammer, and said, "Some serious punishment today for these two. They will be on 'stake-out' all day in the gravel pit."

"Ahhh," replied Zelda. "I'll go with and give you a hand."

"Really not necessary. Don't you have a shift to manage?" retorted George edgily.

"I've got the time, and I love a good stake-out," she laughed.

So out we trudged to the gravel pit with Zelda following along. George gave me a 'now what?' kind of glance. I shrugged.

When we reached the gravel pit, we went through the motions of staking-0ut Sarah and Amy, just as Pat and I had been staked before. We spreadeagled them on the hard grainy ground. Zelda watched, and made helpful suggestions about how to position the stakes for maximum exposure of their nude bodies. I kept looking anxiously at the horizon, expecting to see the first sign of dawn. Thankfully it was still dark ... a short November day ... the only light coming from the arc lights above the pit.

"Sun will be up soon," cackled Zelda as she sat down on a large rock and stretched out her legs. "Can't wait to watch these two suffer out here in the cold. Maybe we should whip their titties a bit too!"

I sat down next to her, and began to chat her up about how things had changed since Pat and I first arrived and she nearly had me hung on my first day. While I kept her distracted, Pat wandered off behind her, picked up a large stone and brought it down hard on her skull.

She slumped to the ground unconscious, perhaps dead. I placed my hand on her throat to check.

"Quick, we've no time to waste," urged George as he began releasing Sarah from the stakes. Pat and I jumped to do the same for Amy. Slowly they got to their feet.

"I'm cold," whined Amy, flapping her arms like a big bird. Don't you have some clothes for us to wear?"

"Sorry ... if you want out of here, you just will have to tough it out," warned George. "We have a lot of ground to cover before dawn. They will discover that we are missing soon enough. Now hold still so I can remove your shackles!"

Once Sarah and Amy were freed, we headed out ... circling the shack and plunging into the forest. It was tough going for Sarah and Amy, making their way through the brush without any clothing ... and with bare feet too ... and from time to time they faltered ...

And when they did, I didn't mind ... and neither did Pat ... hurrying them with a lash or two. We may all be in this together, but memories of the way they once treated us still lingered.

Once the sun rose, and it was easier to see our way and we made better progress, but growing exhaustion and dropping temperatures took their toll as we climbed higher into the foothills leading to the mountain refuge. I knew somewhere up ahead, the Sheriff was waiting for us ... hopefully with warm clothing and footwear ... we just had to keep going.
 
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