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Priya's Punishment

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A break definitely.

This was going to be the last story about Priya, coming full circle from being punished in Trabbia, then punishing others back in Dorsbury, then being punished herself in public in Dorsbury. But people seem to like the story, so who knows?
Priya has always been a fascinating, multi faceted and enigmatic character,putting her in harness with the inimitable Barb made for very compelling reading!
 
Madi, I can't get this to download, no matter what reader I try, and I haven't had any trouble downloading archived stories before. Any hints?
I don't know, why you've this issues. I test it now and it work well on my pc. No issue with downloading all versions (pdf, mobi, epub).
Maybe you should change the device for downloading.

Question to the forum: Having more user similar issues?
 
“My God! He’s dead!” she suddenly exclaimed. “Barb! You’ve killed him!”

“What? ... You’re kidding, right? ... no? ... really? .... Oh Shit!”
:very_hot:
EXCELLENT ENDING AND YOU'RE WELCOME. ;):cool: ALWAYS GLAD TO DO A CAMEO. :rolleyes: :D

Great story again! :clapping::clapping::clapping:Sorry it's taken me so long to finish. Could only manage one or two chapters at a time.:very_hot:
I have to say (well I don't really, but I will anyway) that I'm never sure about whipping stories. I always think, what would possibly be erotic about having some girl's pretty bottom all bloodied, but there's so much more than that going on in these stories. And perhaps there's that little lurking bit of me that actually gets off on it. :confused::cool::D Nevertheless, the strength of the story is in the richness of the setting, the characters and the complex and embarrassing relationships. Well done again, Windar and Barb!!
 
I loved the ending as I had been hoping that the corrupt judge Marty would get his comeuppance.
However how will Windar, Barb and Priya get out of Killing a judge? This is going to take some serious explaining and deft legal work.
Maybe it would be better to clean him up, dress him, put him behind the driving wheel of his car and crash it.
He must have enough alcohol in his system to make drink-driving stick, especially if the car burns.
 
I loved the ending as I had been hoping that the corrupt judge Marty would get his comeuppance.
However how will Windar, Barb and Priya get out of Killing a judge? This is going to take some serious explaining and deft legal work.
Maybe it would be better to clean him up, dress him, put him behind the driving wheel of his car and crash it.
He must have enough alcohol in his system to make drink-driving stick, especially if the car burns.
Judge Martin Powers wasn't corrupt. He was a firm believer in "law and order" (for everyone except him and his pals;))
 
However how will Windar, Barb and Priya get out of Killing a judge?
You wrap the body in a carpet and put it in the car, preferably the judge's car. Wear gloves (fingerprints). In the dark, nobody will notice that it's not the judge driving the car. Drive up to a remote forested area, and dump the body in the woods. Even better, if the judge has a cottage, take the body there and dump him on the porch or front steps. Leave the judge's car parked neatly in the driveway. Meanwhile, Barb can follow in another car - don't drive the car onto the Judge's cottage property (don't want tire tracks). With luck, it'll take weeks for the body to be found, and when they do an autopsy, all they'll find is that the judge had a heart attack during sex at the cottage. Meanwhile, Goldman trots back through the woods to the road and Barb drives back to town, preferably before dawn. Dump the carpet in a dumpster or landfill somewhere along the way, some miles away from the judge's cottage. Easy.
 
You wrap the body in a carpet and put it in the car, preferably the judge's car. Wear gloves (fingerprints). In the dark, nobody will notice that it's not the judge driving the car. Drive up to a remote forested area, and dump the body in the woods. Even better, if the judge has a cottage, take the body there and dump him on the porch or front steps. Leave the judge's car parked neatly in the driveway. Meanwhile, Barb can follow in another car - don't drive the car onto the Judge's cottage property (don't want tire tracks). With luck, it'll take weeks for the body to be found, and when they do an autopsy, all they'll find is that the judge had a heart attack during sex at the cottage. Meanwhile, Goldman trots back through the woods to the road and Barb drives back to town, preferably before dawn. Dump the carpet in a dumpster or landfill somewhere along the way, some miles away from the judge's cottage. Easy.
And this is a subject on which Jollyrei is an acknowledged expert!
 
" Priya wondered at the nerve of Taylor doing the very thing that had gotten Priya where she was right now. "

Seems Dr Taylor does not practice as she preaches, a complaint from Barb and Priya could have her bent over for a caning.
Her "In" with the "Powers" that be better be real good or Dr Taylor would have a sore arse too.

Maybe she will make the mistake of taking a holiday in some Latin American country where Windar has "Contacts" giving Barb and Priya a chance to even the score big time. A sale to some outback brothel where the illegal miners and coke gangs might welcome a real American, Goth scrubber for a change would be a fitting outcome. Barb and Priya could sell Taylor cheap, ohh, say $100, might get a taker at that.:hmmm:
 
" Priya wondered at the nerve of Taylor doing the very thing that had gotten Priya where she was right now. "

Seems Dr Taylor does not practice as she preaches, a complaint from Barb and Priya could have her bent over for a caning.
Her "In" with the "Powers" that be better be real good or Dr Taylor would have a sore arse too.

Maybe she will make the mistake of taking a holiday in some Latin American country where Windar has "Contacts" giving Barb and Priya a chance to even the score big time. A sale to some outback brothel where the illegal miners and coke gangs might welcome a real American, Goth scrubber for a change would be a fitting outcome. Barb and Priya could sell Taylor cheap, ohh, say $100, might get a taker at that.:hmmm:
It's always an interesting scenario when the tables are turned. Barb and I have done that in quite a few stories. So who knows....
 
" Priya wondered at the nerve of Taylor doing the very thing that had gotten Priya where she was right now. "

Seems Dr Taylor does not practice as she preaches, a complaint from Barb and Priya could have her bent over for a caning.
Her "In" with the "Powers" that be better be real good or Dr Taylor would have a sore arse too.

Maybe she will make the mistake of taking a holiday in some Latin American country where Windar has "Contacts" giving Barb and Priya a chance to even the score big time. A sale to some outback brothel where the illegal miners and coke gangs might welcome a real American, Goth scrubber for a change would be a fitting outcome. Barb and Priya could sell Taylor cheap, ohh, say $100, might get a taker at that.:hmmm:
The unsupported word of two convicted criminals against that of a respected member of the medical profession? That sounds like a "false and malicious accusation" and the recipe for another flogging for Priya and Barb.
The idea of Allison getting her comeuppance is appealing though.
 
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