Praefectus Praetorio
R.I.P. Brother of the Quill
A15 I bought last night and will review.
First, It is great!
I really like Carli, her body is fantastic! I actually liked her better with her leggins still on, very suggestive and sexy. I hope she resists more for more torture and of course a crucifixion.
Crux Dance scene is done very well. More exciting than many full Cruxs.
One personal preference, if you introduce another female character, could she have modest breasts. I love the girls you have, but a small breasted victim would be nice for variety.
I concur with your avoidance of overly bloody wounds. I praise your increasing use of bruises - more if possible! A girl looks so much better with her midsection well-beaten!
One small reservation. Maybe too much sex versus torture for my taste.
But Wonderful job! 25 Chapters? Great - if I live that long.
First, It is great!
I really like Carli, her body is fantastic! I actually liked her better with her leggins still on, very suggestive and sexy. I hope she resists more for more torture and of course a crucifixion.
Crux Dance scene is done very well. More exciting than many full Cruxs.
One personal preference, if you introduce another female character, could she have modest breasts. I love the girls you have, but a small breasted victim would be nice for variety.
I concur with your avoidance of overly bloody wounds. I praise your increasing use of bruises - more if possible! A girl looks so much better with her midsection well-beaten!
One small reservation. Maybe too much sex versus torture for my taste.
But Wonderful job! 25 Chapters? Great - if I live that long.