A Story

[willowfall]

I think I have posted this one before but I don't remember.

I always value critiques. If you like it please tell me why and what you think I could have improved on.

More importantly, if you didn't like it, I'd like to know why and how you think it can be improved.

kisses

willowfall

 

[Praefectus Praetorio]

I think I have posted this one before but I don't remember.

I always value critiques. If you like it please tell me why and what you think I could have improved on.

More importantly, if you didn't like it, I'd like to know why and how you think it can be improved.

kisses

willowfall

I am reading it between writing three stories. Not enough yet to really comment, but I like the start.