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BARACUS: The Ordeal.A.D.41.

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crux_male (22).jpg PROLOGUE:

I hang,on my Crucifix,in agonies
Sweating,burning,crazed with pain
Wrists and Ankles cruelly affixed...
Nailed,impaled upon coarse wood
I curse,weep,implore,but in vain...


Groggily,I cast my mind,pain-fogged
How did this come to be,to ME?!
I...Baracus,condemned to death !!
An inhuman ordeal,brutal indeed.
Dimly,I recall...How it all began....


(To be continued.....)
 
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I hang,on my Crucifix,in agonies
Sweating,burning,crazed with pain
Wrists and Ankles cruelly affixed...
Nailed,impaled upon coarse wood
I curse,weep,implore,but in vain...


Groggily,I cast my mind,pain-fogged
How did this come to be,to ME?!
I...Baracus,condemned to death !!
An inhuman ordeal,brutal indeed.
Dimly,I recall...How it all began....


(To be continued.....)
I'm on tenterhooks...
 
View attachment 610747 PROLOGUE:

I hang,on my Crucifix,in agonies
Sweating,burning,crazed with pain
Wrists and Ankles cruelly affixed...
Nailed,impaled upon coarse wood
I curse,weep,implore,but in vain...


Groggily,I cast my mind,pain-fogged
How did this come to be,to ME?!
I...Baracus,condemned to death !!
An inhuman ordeal,brutal indeed.
Dimly,I recall...How it all began....


(To be continued.....)
Although I am tempted to say that's a waste of a fine looking prick!
 
EPISODE I: Tribunal.....

Baracus pic.jpg

Trembling,with fear,anticipation & emotion
I stand before the Forum,a dubious trial
Nervously I'm awaiting deliverance
Soon,the verdict,gravely administered
(wonder what's it's going to be ....??)


"Baracus, Noble of Rome,please stand.
The Court of Senate has reached a verdict
Your implication too great to ignore
Therefore you've no right of appeal
Prepare to accept your fate..."


"Henceforth we find you GUILTY !!
Your charge...High Treason, a foul crime.
Summarilly punishable by Death !!
You will be taken to be Hanged...
To expire slowly...On the CROSS !!"


The penalty announced to dismay....
But there's more to come....
"The court agrees that sentence be delayed
Suspended for TWO Years beginning now
You will enter a life of hard Slavery...."


Vainly I babble,curse and protest wailing
My pleas falling upon deaf,impassive ears
"NO,Noooo,it's totally untrue,I DIDN'T DO IT !!
I beseech you,my esteemed friends....
By all the Gods of Rome I'm begging you !!"


"Please spare my Wife and family..all iask
They are innocent and undeserving
Please don't make them suffer as I do
Show them mercy I implore of you
I was betrayed,conspired by enemies..!!"


Wide-eyed I stare,looking for hope
There is none,ignored I collapse despaired
Incomprehensible a sense of unreality
Impassively, the order is coldly given,
"Imperial Guards,take him away !!"


Big,strong soldiers take my arms
Drag me To the Cells,as I protest
I'm fighting like a man possessed
Descending dark,gloomy,smelly steps
Towards imprisonment ,an uncertain fate


Neck steel-collared,Wrists,Ankles chained
Stripped of my Noble Robes, naked I cower
Laughing, cruel,knowingly, they proffer me...
A dirty,smelling,discoloured Loincloth.
"Hurry up and put it on,worthless SCUM !!"


Barely dressed, I'm thrown into my unlit Cell
Door slams shut,bolts drawn imprisoned...
I slump to the cold,smelly and rough,floor.
Totally, utterly hopeless I despair
No choice in the matter as I wait....to DIE.


(To be continued .....)
 
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EPISODE II: Imprisoned....1824861175.jpg

I crouched in the stygian blackness
My "home" a dank stinking prison cell
Plenty of time to reflect, my injustice.
Contemplating events that conspired
My fate's been decided,I'm to die....


What'd I DO,to deserve this awful fate ??
I'd been a Nobleman, in Rome's high society
Somebody with a grudge betrayed me,WHY??
A whirl of shame,emotions and anger
How long must I wait,in this shithole ??


Slumped on the stone floor...undignified.
Disgusting excuse of a Loincloth I'm awarded
Pathetic,embarrassing, barely covers privates
I've soiled and pissed myself,Vomited,too.
A combination of cold,fear and nerves....


After what seems like forever eternal
The unmistakable noise of bolts drawn
Cell door flung open,a deafening sound !!
I recoil blinking my eyes at the torchlight
Framed in the doorway, two large Guards.


"GET UP....YOU FUCKING BASTARD !!
Ha,Ha,Ha,it's time for you to serve...
We're taking you to the Galleys,yeah...
Gonna be chained to Oars,whipped too !!
You'll soon wish you had fucking died !!"


One reaches in,grabs my wrist-chains
Up I stumble,confused,disoriented,I sway
I'm led out,trembling, weak and scared...
Brutally encouraged by the Cane,
Sharp pains across my aching bottom...!!


In the courtyard I see several others
Unshaved,odourous,filthy wretches
Blank stares, gazing in the distance
Mostly Menfolk,condemned to Slavery Bizarrely I see,there's frightened Women,too..


Looking around, chained I cynically observe
The males,like myself clothed in rags
Not so,the females,unfortunately for them
Their nakedness,shame and degradation
Its obvious to see they're being taunted !!


"Look at those little bitches,yeah look !!"
"Those tits of that one,I'd love to suck !!"
"I'd fuck that blonde one, she's hot for cock''
"Here,show us your cunt you dirty slut !!"
"Enjoy your lives as Sex-Slaves,you Whores!!"


Angrily I felt such pity for them,so unfair !!
It's no way to behave,the sadistic trolls
Admittedly I'm also in a desperate situation
What will our destination eventually be....??
Coffle-chains affixed,we soon march...to Hell.


( To be continued....)


 
EPISODE III: Transported...20180809_190621.jpg

A desperate sight,we must make,
Trudging miserably through cobbled streets
Chained together by the neck,in lines
Men,Women,young & old,Black and White
All condemned by Rome,Slavery awaits...


Days into Nights,we continue along
Encouraged by our Whip-masters
"Move,you pathetic,worthless cunts!!"
Only gain respite once it's darkness
We sleep fitfully,huddled together...


I'm awakened by a loud screaming
I see Guards raping one of the girls
It's inhuman,appalled,I shout to stop !!
Suddenly a fist across my face...
"What's it to you...do you want to be next ??"


Helplessly l watch,bloodied nose
Poor girl's crying,protesting fights in vain
On her backLegs splayed,thrashing exposed
Men,grunting,thrusting,copulate and climax
After quite some time they stop, lust sated.


The following morning, we set off yet again
Chained,abused shuffling across Italy
I hear the girl weeping,in pain and shame
One of the rapists comes up,hostile intent
"I won't forget YOU !!" Finger across throat.


For several long days,we'd travel miserably
Every night I'm feeling afraid,scared.
Guards don't make idle threats,oh no !!
They still molested the helpless girls
People mysteriously disappeared....


Eventually,after time they spilt us up.
I'm transferred to a smaller group
Ahead I witnessed my destination...
A Galley Ship built for trade
My new home,on the High Seas


Just before we can embark
Slaves lined up for inspection
Teeth examined,muscles felt...
Genitals fiddled with,arsehole spread.
I'm designated a crew number,26.


Head roughly shaved,beard also
Dragged to an upright post l resist
I'm being branded, like a beast !!
Sizzling indescribable pain,I'm yelling
On my reddened Right arm,....'XXVI'...


Head swims from the agonised pain
I'm thrust roughly,down below deck
Rows of rough wooden benches
Mostly occupied,some are not..
Men,and some Women,defeated,chained


I'm hustled along,looking for a space
They find one,they motion me to sit...
I'm next to an older man,underweight.
We glance at each other,silent hopelessly.
My cruel journey has only just begun...


(To be continued ....)
 
EPISODE IV: Enslaved...b8a019f2bc231c12ccd53249e752065e.jpg

Chained to mighty Oars,straining
Condemned to Crucifixion
Suspended sentence, of Forced Labour
At the whims of Imperial Court...
(How long has it been,thus far??)


Suffering the Whips indiscriminate
Back-breaking,toiling,heave and push
"Move it,you fucking piece of shit !!"
A crack,lashes my back,I curse,scream
Perpetual indescribable torment and pain


I was once a rich Nobleman
A man of much influence,power
Betrayed,deposed by fellow Romans
False charges of High Treason,denied
Given no appeal,merely sent to die...


My Wife imprisoned, tortured also
Enslaved to forced prostitution.
Frequently violated,no respite.
Daily routine of sexual depravation.
Awaits her execution,almost gladly...


Only Son taken in Heavy Chains
Sent to African slave-mines
Toiling naked and vulnerable
Routinely sodomized and brutalised
Hunger and thirsts almost daily...


My teenage Daughters,both Virginal
Abducted, stripped and Gang-raped
Sold into slavery and bondage
A Brothel life now assured,afraid.
They curse their misfortune, and me.


Back to my unfortunate self,
Disgraced,I stink of daily sweat
Filthy Loincloth, barely covered midriff
Old,discoloured damp and torn ragged
Stained heavily,over the years....


Every single morning,a ritual,I cringe
Masturbation or I'm flogged
Present my jism as my proof
Any sex heavily denied,unworthy.
Nobody dares risk the temptation...


At the far end,stands a Cross
It's X-shaped,designed for disclipine,
An effective deterrent,indiscriminate.
It's already occupied,a female,broken
Hangs limply,whip marks galore,suffers.


Miscreants strain and pull,curse the Whip
Working in a rhythm, to the drum...
Moving back and forth, everyone exerts.
Bathed with sweat and sea-water
Bodies unkempt,barely human,existing.


Up on Top Deck,owners lounge,uncaring
Fanned by slaves,young female Negroes
Food and beverages,entertained always
Enjoy their daily voyage,entitled citizens
Unlike the poor souls working at the Oars


Not everyone makes the journey
Sadly their ordeal takes it's toll
Weaker ones thrown overboard
Left to drown, whilst in chains
Death for them is a blessed relief.


As I perpetually row,and heave,swearing
Only have one single hateful thought
"For Mercy's sake have some pity,
Why won't they take me away ??
It's unfair, I now just want to DIE !!"


(To be continued...)
 
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EPISODE V: Flogged.... 20180808_172145.jpg

Here l perch,a miserable Galley Slave
Boat's moored,destination unknown...
Awaiting yet another monotonous trip
More,whipping,degradation & defecation.
But...Wait...an Overseer approaches...


"Baracus, Slave 26,stand up,now...!!"
He checks my brand,(XXVI),it matches.
Chains swiftly unlocked,l leave my bench
Confusion, dazed...dare I hope ??
Up I get,pulled along upwards...


in the welcome daylight,up on dockside
I'm blinking,getting my bearings...
Before me an Official, intimidating
Looks at me,grimaced,disapproving..
I'm filthy,sweaty,a torn Loincloth,dishevelled


Reaches,feels muscles,they've grown.
Years of relentless Back-breaking toil
Abused daily,tormented,sodomised...
No longer feel human,a mere machine.
His next words filled me with dread !!


"Baracus, Slave,former Nobleman,hear me....
The time has come to serve your sentence
Punishable by Death,Crucifixion,"Crux Capitata"
To die,on a Cross hereby nailed...
For as long as deemed fit,NO respite !!"


I collapse,I'd forgotten,how bloody stupid !!
Again I'm pleading,again in vain...
Decision made,hence sentence passed
There's no right of Appeal,grimly recall
i resign myself to my terrible fate.....


"Take him away, the time has come...!!
Commence the Flogging, FIFTY lashses !!
I'm shocked..."HOW MANY ?!" It's inhuman
They drag me across the courtyard
Two tall stone posts,that's my place....


Between the columns I stand,shuddering
Arms unchained,outstretched, fastened anew
Legs parted, Ankles manacled also
I'm helpless,unable to resist,displayed.
Heart is hammering,nerves shaking....


"Remove that DISGUSTING Loincloth!!"
Swiftly roughly it's undone,cast aside...
Naked I,stand,mortified,intimately exposed
Women giggle,Men jeer and point,obscene
I blush,the shame !! I'm humiliated, afraid...


Standing before me...my Nemesis
A brute of a man,Negro,bare-chested....
Qualified Whipmaster,knows his trade
Produces the flagrum,I can only observe
Multi-thonged,designed to cause pain !!


Gritted teeth,I pledge I'll be brave...
("I'll ride this out,I can do it !!") I brace myself
What happened next....such a shock !!
Blow was savage across my back...
I scream,I involuntarily pee,crowd taunting.


He's behind me,keeping count,so efficient
I scream,I curse,imploring spasmodic jerking
A swish,a crack..."AAARGH !!" it so burns !!
A constant merciless rhythm,I lose track.
Sobbing,heaving I can't bear this anymore !!


I pass out,temporary relief,darkness...
Shocked awake,cold brackish seawater !!
The salt stings,pinpricks of burning pain
Adding yet another foul odour,the stench !!
This cannot go on,have pity....PLEASE !!


Eventually after time it stops,job done
My body is a wretched,bloodied sight
Unchained,offering no resistance...
Barely alive,I'm dragged,stumbling...
Dungeon awaits...eventually the CROSS !!


(To be continued...)
 
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EPISODE VI: Humiliated.... 20180808_213550.jpg

Down dungeon steps we descended
Naked,whipped,dehumanised,I feel...
Into a cage,I'm rudely pushed,"GET in !!"
There's others,so I'm not alone....
Hostile,suspicious, frightened stares...


Well it's obvious I'm not the only one
Everyone is condemned,and rightly so
Murderers,Rapists,Thieves,Deserters...
One thing I'm quite certain of...
I won't get much rest...if at all !!


I crouch down against the cold wall
Floor is again stcky and foul smelling
Thoughts gathered are far from good
Eventually I lose consciousness, slipping
My wounds have surely defeated me...


l jolt awake, to hideous sounds
Someone's struggling, fighting cursing
The smell of blood fills my nose
At my feet,is a corpse,a male...
Not long dead,throat bruised,strangled


it's quite hopeless, I'm REALLY scared
lnstinctively bunch up against clammy wall
Knees up,trying to avoid trouble I hope
Discomfort and pain,impossible to sleep
My ordeal,it seems is only beginning...


After a time,the moment arrives
Soldiers come,to take us away...
The point of no return,we're doomed
Our final journey,the Via Crucis
The way of the CROSS.....!!


Outside I rejoin the other prisoners
Wretches,condemned to death...
Some people struggle,some resigned
Eventually it's my terrible turn it's now
My Crossbeam awaits,time's up !!


I'm pushed violently,forced to kneel
Hurt my knees on the stones,I wince
Extend my unchained arms outwards
Soon across my shoulders,a weight
Rough wood beam,bound round arms...


Just as I think it can't get any worse...
A bad memory soon reappears....
One of the Guards I recognised,likewise !!
Menacing he walks up to me,taunts..
"Well,well,what HAVE we got here, for me ??''


Before I can either protest or move
He grabs my hair,foul rancid breath
My mouth is forced open wide !!
He extracts his stiffening member..
Disgusted,appalled,I'm commiting Fellatio !!


Degraded,I suck his foul tasting dick,I gag
He's thrusting,grunting,he soon cums...
Dribbling down my mouth,I'm shocked.
To add to my shame,he pisses on me !!
"There,that'll teach you !!" He thumps me.


The awful taste,a choking ordeal...
I'm too shocked to comprehend,numb
I'm fighting not to be sick,I lose....
I cringe at what's taken place
The sex act I'd reluctantly done !!


Up l stagger to my feet,unsteadily
Heavy Patibilum scrapes shoulders raw
Vile taste of cum,stink of sour piss
Ashamed ,nude,I begin my bitter travels
Gesturing,hostile crowds mock and jeer...


For what was many many kilometres
We've reached our final destination
My heart sinks as reality sets in...
My place to be crucified, it's Devilish
Before me I see,my graveyard indeed...


(To be continued....)
 
EPISODE VII: Crucifixion.... 20180806_124820.jpg

Overnight we arrived, filled with dread
A Forest clearing, many acres indeed
Despite the surrounding trees and flora
Its rumoured to be unbearably hot,dry
Some would describe it as Hell on Earth


Terrified people await certain doom
Helpless victims,fastened to Patibulae
Men and Women,nobody is spared
Carnifex,commands,efficient,shouts
Soldiers select randomly,Who's next ??


After a time the numbers reduce....
Crucifixion continues unabated
Panicked,screaming individuals, nailed
Impatient,waiting,I'm scared,and hurting
Soon someone beckons at me...it's time !!


On the rough ground, is a long beam
The "Stipes",I understand, it's called...
I'm shoved over to it, tottering unsteadily
Before I know it,I'm now lying down...
Displayed across the harsh wood beam !!


It's getting warmer,the Sun is rising...
Men grab my undone arms,and pull
Uncomprehending,I submit,outstretched
Nails are produced, long,large and cruel
Instruments of fixation,permanently so !!


Hammer rises,and falls hard,connects !!
The PAIN,it's abominable,I screamed...
My head seems to explode sudden shock
Body jolts,and buckles jerking spasms
I can only observe my smashed wrists...


The agony,SO sudden,I foul myself...
Involuntarily pissed as well,disgraced
Guards exclaim in disgust,seen it often
Now for my feet,down they reached...
Again nails, affixed,again electrifying PAIN !!


I'm filled with torment,unbelievable hurt
Head is swimming,uncomprehending...
Soon it's time to lift my Crucifix,and me
T- Cross, jolts raised positioned upright
Titulus written,attached to Stipes-Head


My ordeal now truly begins I'm CRUCIFIED
I struggle to breathe,whilst moaning
Pouring with sweat,stinking I retch !!
Soon I observe,to my appalling dread
They produce a Cornu,for my arse....


Swiftly it's attached,I'm raised and dropped
Exploding, burning intimate massive pain
Vainly I try to ease my discomfort,I can't !!
Watching crowds enjoy my Anal humiliation
Crucified, naked,impaled,left only to DIE....


(To be continued....)
 
EPISODE VIII: Retribution..... 20180810_194536.jpg

Near my Cross,further Roman activity....
Troopers erecting a post,cursing and grunts
It's short and slightly stout,crudely hewn
Vertical beam a third-way up high...
Intrigued, I watch,fascinated, and concerned


Soon it's clear to see, the purpose intent
A Woman hauled roughly, resisting,chained
She's youngish,Olive-skinned and slight
Torn,ragged tunic,exposes much flesh
She'd been whipped,it's clear to see.....


Carnifex gestures,impatient, it's time
Rags torn away,no respect, just shamed !!
Naked shaking,instinctive hands to breasts
At her loins,an unkind afterthought
Coarse hemp rope,itchy and tight,it chafes


Between her legs,it's tightly attached
Pulled through Buttocks,knotted at her sex
Tied off at her Waist ,a cruel reminder...
It's very uncomfortable, clear to see...
Her face is pained ,I'm not surprised at all.


On her knees,she's immediately forced
Backs up agaist her "Stipes-Crucis"
Arms released,looped back,re-attatched.
Legs parted, then fastened,behind,exposed
Neck is roped,restraining,restricted bound..


I listen,and observe,soon understand why
Her crime of Infidelity, a Marriage cheat...
Punishment is severe,swiftly ordained
A Flogging and public humiliation,a Whore
Sentenced to Crux Humilus,and Oral rape...


Horrified,I watch,albeit,hopelessly
Soldiers, taking their obvious pleasure
Clearly ashamed,she's unable to resist
Sucking,swallowing, ejaculated upon...
Head,slapped,breasts,groped,taunted...


Unfortunately, I soon discover,my shame
I'm getting a natural reaction, ("Oh NO !!")
Limp Penis,soon becoming stiff, erect...
It has not gone un-noticed,no surprise
Her eyes meet mine,a look of disgust.


Rapist looks across, in mid-Fellatio...
Someone barks an angry command...!!
"Hey look at this ,he's getting excited (!!)
Someone whip the dirty pervert
YOU....!! Brutalise his pathetic Cock !!"


I cry out in vain protest,hoarsly...
(Surely,I've been tormented enough ?!)
Before long I'm screaming in AGONY
As I'm Genitally whipped,by Flagrum
Soon it's a bloodied mess,now flaccid....


Quite naturally,I pass out,I'm slumping
Cold,sewage water,brackish and foul
Shocks me awake,stinging pain !!
Jerking upwards,i gasp,bellow expletives
I'm soon moaning, bitterly self- pitying...


Eventually, after several hours,of abuse....
Roman troops,paying Citizens,both sexes,
Satisfied their wanton carnal lust...
She hangs lifeless, so it seems,very quiet
Defeated,degraded, raped,drooling Cum.


Her body is wet with spend,a puddle of piss
Eyes dull,uncomprehending,head lolls...
Soldiers untie her,revived,back on her feet.
Sentence served,she's marched away,
Off she goes,to a tragic fate unknown......


(To be continued....)
 
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EPISODE IX: Injustice.... 20180810_132312.jpg

Throughout the day,crucifixions continue,
A charnel house of torture and noise...
Others made to suffer Rome's cruel justice
Men and Women,young,old,black and white
All consigned to their godawful fate....


Another,T-cross,raised,with much effort
The male occupant,he looks familiar...
We stare at each other in dull recognition
He's shocked,asks,"Baracus, is it you ?!"
I acknowledged with a solemn nod....


He looks sorrowful,a dreadful fate shared
Tearfully he asked,how this came to be...?
"I was implicated in a plot,against Caligula
In his vengeance, he'd demanded a cull
I was innocent, but deemed otherwise !!"


"Oh shit,not you,as well !! That's not right...
Haven't you heard,not that it matters..(!!)
The tyrant is dead,Claudius reigns instead.
Obviously previous convictions still stood !!"
I stare in total disbelief, this CAN'T be true...


Together we curse our ill-gotten fate
It's a total sham,a conspiracy,swept aside
It's pointless to complain,here we are !!
Hanging on our harsh obscene Crosses
Jointly condemned, to slowly,painfully die...


The heat,dust and irritating biting flies
Itching intolerably places I cannot scratch
Raw bloodied wounds,more fresh pain
Can't seem to feel my,nailed hands....
Pierced feet,going numb,it's hopeless.


Instinctively I attempt to raise myself
Fuck,it's impossible I can't do it !!
Nailed sadistically to the wood...
Rough coarse bark,scrapes my back
I'm affixed,spread,displayed like a insect


Rectal Cornu,for my rear passage,it burns...
No sedile for me,it's decided out of spite
Self-raped anally again,and again...
My Penis,previously whipped,throbs
Sex thoughts are far from my mind...


Sadly the fates took an unkind turn
After an hour,I observed my sad friend
He's thrashing unnaturally guttural sounds
With a groan,he soon jerked and dropped
Dead,his heart,it was weak,I despaired.


The day soon ends,it's growing dull
Sun is setting,this day is done for now
Pretty soon it will be night time....
Cold and dark,fearful times and sounds
My ordeal is quite far from over....


Through the dimming light,I observe
Soldiers carrying brushwood,freshly cut
They lay at the base of other Crosses
They walk past me,ignoring my plight
Other Legionnaires,carry buckets of pitch


Torches burn,carried aloft,flames crackle
Crucified victims,terrified,struggle and beg
To no avail,the soldiers soon ignite the wood
Immolated,a fiery awful screaming end...
Yet...I was spared,no idea why...WHY ?!

(To be continued....)
 
EPISODE V: Flogged.... View attachment 610948

Here l perch,a miserable Galley Slave
Boat's moored,destination unknown...
Awaiting yet another monotonous trip
More,whipping,degradation & defecation.
But...Wait...an Overseer approaches...


"Baracus, Slave 26,stand up,now...!!"
He checks my brand,(XXVI),it matches.
Chains swiftly unlocked,l leave my bench
Confusion, dazed...dare I hope ??
Up I get,pulled along upwards...


in the welcome daylight,up on dockside
I'm blinking,getting my bearings...
Before me an Official, intimidating
Looks at me,grimaced,disapproving..
I'm filthy,sweaty,a torn Loincloth,dishevelled


Reaches,feels muscles,they've grown.
Years of relentless Back-breaking toil
Abused daily,tormented,sodomised...
No longer feel human,a mere machine.
His next words filled me with dread !!


"Baracus, Slave,former Nobleman,hear me....
The time has come to serve your sentence
Punishable by Death,Crucifixion,"Crux Capita"
To die,on a Cross hereby nailed...
For as long as deemed fit,NO respite !!"


I collapse,I'd forgotten,how bloody stupid !!
Again I'm pleading,again in vain...
Decision made,hence sentence passed
There's no right of Appeal,grimly recall
i resign myself to my terrible fate.....


"Take him away, the time has come...!!
Commence the Flogging, FIFTY lashses !!
I'm shocked..."HOW MANY ?!" It's inhuman
They drag me across the courtyard
Two tall stone posts,that's my place....


Between the columns I stand,shuddering
Arms unchained,outstretched, fastened anew
Legs parted, Ankles manacled also
I'm helpless,unable to resist,displayed.
Heart is hammering,nerves shaking....


"Remove that DISGUSTING Loincloth!!"
Swiftly roughly it's undone,cast aside...
Naked I,stand,mortified,intimately exposed
Women giggle,Men jeer and point,obscene
I blush,the shame !! I'm humiliated, afraid...


Standing before me...my Nemesis
A brute of a man,Negro,bare-chested....
Qualified Whipmaster,knows his trade
Produces the flagrum,I can only observe
Multi-thonged,designed to cause pain !!


Gritted teeth,I pledge I'll be brave...
("I'll ride this out,I can do it !!") I brace myself
What happened next....such a shock !!
Blow was savage across my back...
I scream,I involuntarily pee,crowd taunting.


He's behind me,keeping count,so efficient
I scream,I curse,imploring spasmodic jerking
A swish,a crack..."AAARGH !!" it so burns !!
A constant merciless rhythm,I lose track.
Sobbing,heaving I can't bear this anymore !!


I pass out,temporary relief,darkness...
Shocked awake,cold brackish seawater !!
The salt stings,pinpricks of burning pain
Adding yet another foul odour,the stench !!
This cannot go on,have pity....PLEASE !!


Eventually after time it stops,job done
My body is a wretched,bloodied sight
Unchained,offering no resistance...
Barely alive,I'm dragged,stumbling...
Dungeon awaits...eventually the CROSS !!


(To be continued...)
Flogged nude by a black brute of a whip master! I'm so jealous!
 
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A cold,uncomfortable night I'd endured
Hanging on my Cross of despair,still
Morning,arrives a new day dawns...
Smoke rises,from charred blackened posts
The stench of burnt flesh indescribable.


I'm still suffering my "Crux Suublimus"
Naked,nailed,condemned, slowly to die..
A penalty, so severe for my serious guilt
I...Baracus, deserving of nothing less
Nailed to the coarse wood,a dying ordeal


Through the haze of smoke and pain,
Soon I'm dimly,somewhat vaguely aware
There's somebody else,nearby,crucified...
Sharing my awful bloodied fate
Who....?? Intrigued, I raise my eyes..


It's a Woman, quite a young one...
An attractive one,I will thus admit
Pale, soft,and quite obviously feminine
Tormented flesh,dirty and bruised
She's naked,on her own T-Cross of pain


She soon looks across at me,focuses
Eyes meet,she starts to speak..
Voice cracking,with emotion and effort
Full of feeling,pain and bitter hate..
Talking in an unknown foreign tongue.


What is she trying to convey,to say...??
Sounds really angry,scared,pleading
I cannot understand, I'm really sorry
Shaking her brunette hair,she whispers
Her face drops,tears soon follow...


Like myself,she struggles,it's so cruel
Her slender arms,wrapped round beam
Legs crudely
parted,bound,roped behind
Displaying her sex,violated,obscene...
Punishment hideously uncomfortable.


I try to show sympathy it's quite sincere
But naturally she doesn't understand...
She curses at everyone,myself too.
I've made her feel ashamed,disgraced
I can only apologise but it's hopeless...


For ages we suffer,writhe and hang...
Struggling to breathe and survive...(WHY ??)
Hunger,thirst,burning intense tortured
We've both defecated,to great shame.
Suffering constant agonies in the heat...


Eventually she's losing,fading fast..
Not strong enough to continue, or care.
Full of pity and hate,despaired enough.
She croaks hoarsly,her last rasping words,
"Bb..Bar....Bb. .. Barbaria.." gasps and dies.


As she succumbs I feel remorse.
My eyes sting with salty hot tears...
(Is it for her...or for me ??)
She's deemed fortunate,out of it now.
Myself...I continue to suffer agonies...


(To be continued....)
 
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EPISODE IX: Injustice
Good chapter! There you unexpectedly meet an old acquintance, sharing the same fate, the same hopeless suffering as you do, then he dies, you live on, in agony.

EPISODE X: Companionship
Then, another interesting companion. She dies too, you live on, without hope.

The tyrant is dead,Claudius reigns instead.
Obviously previous convictions still stood !!"
Typically Claudius! :confused:
 
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