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Before the Vivisection

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darkshadows

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(This was inspired by the Blood Femme Rebellion thanks to GJ pain)

The order has come to power and it has a reach that was iron, cold and brutal. It was after the fourth world war and its history was unique. No one really won that war, but rather the order rose from the ashes. It’s an iron Phoenix, with no passion but cold efficiency.

Traitors were not tolerated, and the order had atheistic hold on the land. And to demonstrate this, most were put to quick deaths except for the damned as some call them. The damned were religious martyrs, trying to bring back their old fairy tales, or traitors or assassins. The damned were taken to the iron platform and vivisected alive.

Jane and Austen were the last of a small rebel group, who were wiped out but killed a high ranking general. The Order has fallen into a state of disarray but they would make an example of these two rebels.

Jane was a dark raven haired beauty and she had athletic build. Her lips were pouty but her breasts were smaller almost boyish. For whatever reason she kept her public hair. A black mound of forest surrounding her pussy.

Austen was an average build and had sandy brown hair. He also had a mound of pubic hair surrounding his 4 inch penis.

Jane and Austen were lovers and they had not been high ranking in the group, but they were efficient. Each joining for their reasons. Jane remembers seeing her mother and father stripped naked and marched through the streets. They were led to the platform where they were victims to a living autopsy. Austen on the other hand had lost his brother when he was shot down. They joined and soon the two were drawn to each other.

Now they stood in the iron room, their clothes ragged and torn. The masked council looked over them, plain iron masks, voices disguised by mechanical voice changers.
“You are traitors, and thus the maximum punishment must be enforced.” Said the center masked figure.
“You will be led naked through the streets to your platform and you will be vivisected.”
Jane thought of her parents, and then she felt the warm liquid run down her leg. Austen said nothing but he also felt the same liquid run down his leg. And he collapsed on the ground in his knees, as vomit spewed from his mouth.

End Part One.....
 
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Part 2-Who is Marcus Velor?

It was with out a doubt he was one of the richest men in the order. Only one of his wealth could afford the books on his table. The works of Shakespeare, Melville, and Faulkner, and that was fiction. Kant, Faccault and Jung was on another table. It was important to read, to study the human heart. To tell his story in performance art, the finest the order has seen.

He was in his forties, and his hair was dark and peppered. He had a short beard and reading glasses. He often wore sweater vests, over button up long sleeve shirts. The door bell rang and he let his wife answer it. She came to him afterwards, while he was enjoying his read of Foccaults theory of the Panopticon. It seemed widely appropriate considering his occupation and job calling.
He received the message and he looked to his wife. “I must perform tomorrow....”
She was younger in her thirties, blonde hair and a curvy figure. Not skinny not fat. He was not turned on by his job but she was. She forced the book down and led him upstairs.

Soon he felt her wet vagina swallow his enlarged and throbbing member as her naked body rode him. Her breasts jangled as she fucked him, riding him as her body went up and down, impaling herself. Her hips moved in a swerving rhythmic motion, and the. It increased and increased and soon they both moaned as he released in her. Soon afterwards she was asleep and he was not. He gather his pajama and dressed. Back downstairs he found the note and papers. He studied them...:

“You are our finest artist. And you are to tomorrow vivisect two rebels, a male and a female.”

He was not rich with our reason. He was the finest performance artist out there, the orders name for executioner.

End part 2....
 
Part 3 the examination

Jane and Austen sat in the cold cell. The room was white, sterile, mechanical. They were wearing only under garments. Briefs for Austen and bra and panties for Jane. She huddled in the corner and he tried his best to comfort her for the ordeal to come. They knew had at least 9 hours left.

The door opened and a woman in a white coat entered. She had a gun at her side. Her hair was red but face was average at best. Though her eyes were cold.
“Stand up. I am here to evaluate you for the the performer. So that he is not in any immediate danger from any....toxins you have.”
They said nothing but stood up.
“Naked now.”
Jane was hesitant and refused. The woman walked to Jane and slapped.
“You dumb cunt. Naked now!”
Jane with energy decided to not obliged and she hit the woman back. The woman staggered.
Austen went to stop her knowing this was stupid but felt a bit of retribution. The woman snapped and two armored guards entered. No sign of himait just pure metal.
They aimed their gun and shot Jane and she was out.
Austen saw his lover fall and then he obliged.

He had been there for an hour. Strapped naked to the table he had come three times as the doctor had raped him. And he did this as he was forced to watch Jane torture. Her body was eagle spread and the guards had attached clamps to nipples and clit. She was shocked as she watched her lover rode and forced to have sex. This was their punishment after their humiliating examinations. He watched her naked body shudder as the red hair woman raped him riding his cock. Her tits sagged her stomach was some what flat, and her pubes were classic 70s style bush. He moaned and then he was pushed backwards. James body her small nips shuddered as she watched and was shocked.

Austen was on his back and then he felt it, he felt the strap enter and he wa violated but for whatever reason he came. As Jane was electrocutes over and over. And he felt the pressure as his cherry was popped...

End of Part 3
 
Part 4-Marcus secret

He made sure the call was not traced. The plan was set, he knew it would work though he felt bad form jane and austen. They would die slowly, nude and screaming but their deaths would be the end of the Order. Marcus has grown tired of the order and soon he was ready to end it. He will die a quick death should everything go smoothly. The one thing that did not change was he loved his art and he had one last practice run.

She woke up, she did not know where she was. Then realized she was in the basement. Then she realized she was tied to an X and then finally the cold hit her she was butt ass naked.

Marcus walked in on his wife. She was annoying him so he decided to end her as he enjoyed it.
“What the fuck Marcus!”
He said nothing as he he went to the table. He would do some different to her, not vivisection.
She screamed and screamed but the room was sound proof. He went to her public area and he decided to remove her favorite toy. He pulled the clitoris and snipped it off. She screamed as she felt blood flow down her legs. But he took the scalpel and scissors and started on her leg. She tried to kick but it was futile as he cut a nice piece of flesh out. And square by square he started to removed her flash. He removed the flesh form her legs soon but she was delirious so he seasoned theme rub salt, a toss of it and she screamed in agony.
The he took his scalpel and made a slit in her belly. She stopped screaming started to choke as her intestines were pulled out. Blood ran down her mouth and gushes of it. He soon stopped knowing she was almost dead. He picked up a small device and placed it in her. It was a small round orb. He slid it in her stomach. As she was dying, he said”I made your fantasy real”

End of Part 4
 
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Part 5-the parade

Jane and Austen sat in their cells weakened from their ordeals. Austen from rape And Jane from torture. They wore white long shifts as they lay on the ground.

The door opened and two guards came in. They told the couple to stand and then they led them to a courtyard. It was time for the parade then the vivisection.
Once in the courtyard the guards instructed the prisoners to put their hands to the sides. The first guard made his way to Austen and with his hand placed them on the neckline of the shift. He pulled it open and ripped it open tossed it aside. His naked scarred body was available all to see. His average size penis dangled from a mound of Pubic hairs. Austen covered his genitals. Then they did the same with Jane as her small boyish tits got hard and she tried to cover them with one hand and her massive dark public hairs. But the guards moved on them and raised the couples arms. They put the couples hands in two cud’s spread with a metal bar that led to a collar. They did the same and it makes sure the couple would be seen completely naked. Jane started to cry and Austen felt sick.
The gate opened and there it was a crowd around the road.

Naked couple made their way on the road, the shards of rock cutting into their feet. The crowd started to jeer as they hurled comments. But the guards lined up not allowing them to throw things.
Comments spurred about Austen’s penis falling it small and making fun of janes tits calling her almost a boy. Jane felt overwhelmed and started to sob. Austen felt sick but could not puke.

As they made their Austen suddenly felt the blood rush to his cock. It got hard and he heard the comments about his dick being hard. He felt hit and tried to move his restrained hands to cover himself to no avail. The naked objects for all to say.

Jane heard comments about her being hairy and others complaining they can’t see her clit. She fell
To her legs as she wanted to vomit and she did, as it spewed. The guards yanked her by the hair and moved her along

They then came upon the platform. The whole head council of the order was there standing. And Marcus was there as well

Marcus looked to the naked couple and then to the council. He thought, the real victims are the coucnil. After today there will be no order.

End of Part 5
 
Part 6-The Vivisection of Austen

The restraints removed and both Jane and Austen were secured to the metal xs. They were both eagle spread, and they were full on display. They were left there for a few minutes so the crowd can sink into their naked bodies. Austen felt hot as his cock got hard and the crowd mocked him. They said even erect it’s still small.
Marcus stepped forward ready to do his final performance. The order council watched with no emotion or sexual urge. This was just a job to them.
Marcus points to Austen, and he notes Austen is his first. He took a blow torch and a scalpel. With that instead of starting with the V cut, he placed the scalpel at Austen’s genitals. Austen started to beg, please don’t please, but it was to late. In one clean cut Marcus cut off all of Austen’s genitalia as it fell down in a bloody mess.
Aghhhhhhhhhhhhhh, and Jane joined him screaming. Then the blow torch was used on him to cauterize the wound. Then with a strange form of grace Marcus stood up. Then he took the knife and he made a line on Austen’s chest and then another Line that was v. Then a line that went down his stomach. Austen passed out but Marcus took a cup of water and throw it in his face. Then he peeled back the muscle, and then with another tool, he broke open the rib cage. Austen started to cough up blood. Then with intricacy, Marcus started to pull out intestines and a kidney here and there. But in all of this he whispered sorry and placed the bomb into Austen’s dying body.

Jane sobbed as her tears ran down her naked body. She just could watch and closed her eyes and did not want hear his screams any more.

Then Marcus finished and left Austen with some organs to die as his voice turned into a groan. He turned his attention to Jane.

End of Part 6
 
Part 7 the vivisection of Jane

The cold hose hit her hard. She had pissed herself and sobbed after Marcus was finished with Austen. He was still alive somehow, as he became a groaning and moaning exposed piece of meat. Blood was flowing out of his mouth as he hint there.

Jane was squirming trying to get off the X, but Marcus was soon, on her. The hot scalpel was in his hand and he whispered in her ear, “I am sorry darling but your deaths will end the order.”

Jane did not know what that meant she felt hope and then she screamed, as she felt the knife tear into her skin. It made the curve cut and then there was the other cut. A bloody V was carved into the nude young woman, and then the V was cut down to her belly.

Marcus pulled the skin back, and then her muscle. She was screaming and passed out until awoken in total agony. Her whole body was in shock and she screamed as Marcus took the tool that broke open her rib cage.

Her organs were exposed as she faded in and out of conciseness, and then she felt blood gurgle out of her mouth as her intestines were being pulled out .

And then he throw in the device and feeling guilty he slid the scalpel and puncture her heart. Jane faded quickly and the crowd was stunned.

One of the order stood up. “She barely suffered, you will,...”

Marcus pulled out a detonator a small slim device. And he said. “Good bye”

The nuclear blast consumed the dead lovers, Marcus the order and most of the Citizens.

This is not the end...there is still one more executions


End of Part 7
 
darkshadows said:
Part 7 the vivisection of Jane

The cold hose hit her hard. She had pissed herself and sobbed after Marcus was finished with Austen. He was still alive somehow, as he became a groaning and moaning exposed piece of meat. Blood was flowing out of his mouth as he hint there.

Jane was squirming trying to get off the X, but Marcus was soon, on her. The hot scalpel was in his hand and he whispered in her ear, “I am sorry darling but your deaths will end the order.”

Jane did not know what that meant she felt hope and then she screamed, as she felt the knife tear into her skin. It made the curve cut and then there was the other cut. A bloody V was carved into the nude young woman, and then the V was cut down to her belly.

Marcus pulled the skin back, and then her muscle. She was screaming and passed out until awoken in total agony. Her whole body was in shock and she screamed as Marcus took the tool that broke open her rib cage.

Her organs were exposed as she faded in and out of conciseness, and then she felt blood gurgle out of her mouth as her intestines were being pulled out .

And then he throw in the device and feeling guilty he slid the scalpel and puncture her heart. Jane faded quickly and the crowd was stunned.

One of the order stood up. “She barely suffered, you will,...”

Marcus pulled out a detonator a small slim device. And he said. “Good bye”

The nuclear blast consumed the dead lovers, Marcus the order and most of the Citizens.

This is not the end...there is still one more executions


End of Part 7
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very good my friend, too pity marcus didnt spend more time torturing her!
 
Finale- the Retribution

The order was finished and the new provisional government was fair and nine cruel except to former order members and sympathizers.

100 naked men and women lined the road of the old capital. They were crucified, and mutiliated. But the crowds did not come to see that, they came to see something else.

The doctor who had raped Austen and tortured Jane was marched into the new capital. She was tied to a cross that was on a trailer. She was completely naked, her legs eagle spread so they can see her all even in her mass of red pubic hair. She was broken and crying but it was a far cry when she would torture and examine nude prisoners. She had been sentenced to death, by slow torture. She would be butt ass naked and exposed as she was slowly tortured to death.

On the platform was an upright torture rack, and she was untied and put onto the device. The man spoke, “this woman tormented the matyrs Austen and Jane before they mutilated to death. She will die as well, in a slow manner.”

The ropes of the rack were pulled and pulled to where they would almost pull her arms out of their sockets. She screamed and panted and she was left in that position. Then the first tortured brought out by a man in a black mask. It was a battery with three clamps. The woman screamed as they clamped to her tits and clit. Then the the switch was activated and she screamed as she was shocked and the crowd cheered. She screamed and screamed as the shock ran through her but she could not move due to her restraints.

Then that was stopped, and a hammer was brought out. The woman doctor whimpered as the executioner brought the hammer to her and showed. She suddenly spit on him and the executioner who was going to start on less pain full areas in retribution, slammed the hammer in her knee cap shattering it. She screamed and howled an inhuman scream.

Then another knee cap was shattered, and she howledd. And soon he slammed his hammer on her thighs and then her hips. Each time a sickening crunch and then her arms were broken and then he arms were popped out of place.

She was a broken mess, naked and useless meat. But then the executioner said to the crowd, let’s see
What her guts look like. He took a scalpel and with that he slit her tend belly. She started to choke up, and then his hand went into her. They started to pull out the intestines as the bloody ropes came out, she started to cough up blood. The crowd cheered “die order cunt” and then the executioner stopped.

We will leave her to die, he said. And then soon the crowd watched but left. The doctor lasted another two hours, and was alive enough to lose her eyes to ravens. She died blind and with that the order was finished.

The end
 
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