First Story: A Viking Broken

[Harsh Martinet]

I make no bones about liking Barb`s writings and posts and admire her openness and good humour, if I am a surrogate, it can only be a surrogate grandfather

I was at school in 1940s England, so I endured my fair share of corporal punishment. Subsequently, any one threatening me with violence usually required some form of medical attention, so no, I have not been flogged in that sense. I am sorry that you misinterpreted my original response to your post, my meaning was the opposite of the way you read it.

Probably shouldn't have used the angry choice. Was being sarcastic in both of my replies.
The second reply wasn't meant to refer to you personally.
I don't ever personally attack anyone here on the forum. Just hear to have fun.

 

[twonines]

Probably shouldn't have used the angry choice. Was being sarcastic in both of my replies.
The second reply wasn't meant to refer to you personally.
I don't ever personally attack anyone here on the forum. Just hear to have fun.

Snap, neither do I.

 

[Harsh Martinet]

 

[Servus Venandi]

Hello everyone, I've decided it's about time I finally made a contribution. This is a scene a friend of mine did with me together, so I apologize if it isn't the normal story format. Hopefully you all like it! It was very fun to write.

A proud, strong woman breaking on the cross and begging to be enslaved instead ... is a tantalizing scenario.

Nice story by any standard, and especially for a first go.

 

[cruxmeplease]

A very fine tale, well told! Thank you

Why thank you! I had fun writing it!

 

[cruxmeplease]

A proud, strong woman breaking on the cross and begging to be enslaved instead ... is a tantalizing scenario.

Nice story by any standard, and especially for a first go.

You are far too kind! I appreciate your words! Hopefully there will be more to come!

 

[Jollyrei]

"If you let me down..." her lower lip trembles before she bites it, more tears winding down her cheeks.
"Please."

I think this is the pivotal element that makes this story. Well told. Such loss and despair. So she puts off death, but at such cost. Well told.
Please write more.

 

[cruxmeplease]

I think this is the pivotal element that makes this story. Well told. Such loss and despair. So she puts off death, but at such cost. Well told.
Please write more.

Coming from such a legendary writer as yourself, thank you very much. I love all of your stories so much!

 

[Jollyrei]

Coming from such a legendary writer as yourself, thank you very much. I love all of your stories so much!

I return the thanks then, for your very kind compliment, and I shall hope to find the time to write another at some point soon.

 

[69-VLAD]

Excellent story thank you