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Whew! Wonderful! Horrifying! Great writing!
I have come to really appreciate Garcia and Diaz. Their contrast earlier seemed a little bit of a distraction. But now I see them as two of the three views of the action. The victim's internal suffering, Diaz's lust for her pain, Garcia's cruelty but also horror at the extremes.

Great job. Can't wait for the next!
 
The views of the crowd, and a general description of her changing skin and demeanor, are far preferable, for me, to a blow-by-blow account of 60 lashes.
 
Juliette hugged the post. The pain was awful. Her whole torso felt like it was on fire. Another lash landed. She tensed. More agony seared through her. She felt sick. Her vision clouded. She was sweating, trembling. She was aware of the polished wood against her breasts. She began to relax. She pushed her head into the post. Her eyes were closed. She heard the call. “Twenty-eight.” She wasn’t even half way. This was impossible. After everything she’d been through, they’d still found a new way to hurt her. She’d be dead that afternoon. But that seemed a terribly long way off. She heard the terrible noise, the shuffle of feet, the whistle of the lash and new pain, terrible pain. She found herself shouting, looking up at the grubby ceiling, muscles tight. Stars danced before her eyes. She heaved, sliding her cheek to the left of the post, great spasms passed through her. The 30th reached across her, biting into her ribs, splitting the skin where it was stretched because of her slumped position. She roared with pain, leg flicking up, head rolling back. This was awful. This was the worst yet. She was aware of her crotch pushing against the post, her weight falling back. She felt faint. When she opened her eyes she couldn’t focus. She retched again.


Slowly she realised that she was still waiting. The next lash hadn’t arrived. She felt cold, intensely cold from the inside. A hand had her hair. What was happening? A man in a white coat was speaking to her. A small bottle was held under her nose. She coughed. Smelling salts. Did they still use them? She felt more alert. Half-way, she realised. This was a check at halfway. Another doctor took her pulse while the first one prepared a syringe. It was plunged into her thigh. “Keep you awake,” he said with a smile, slipping the bruised buttock. She shouted in pain. A water-bottle was held to her mouth. She drank, water dribbling down her chin, mingling with the drool. A hand reached between her legs and lifted her. Disgust, belatedly, assailed her and she squirmed. ”Stand up straight,” said a voice. She had little option. Her bonds were tight, her arms pulled out in front of her. Through the daze of pain, she felt an ache in her shoulders from the strain. Thirty more. Thirty. It was hideous.


They stepped back. It was beginning again. She pressed her forehead into the wood. Fall well. Don’t beg. Keep it together. The whistle, the strike, the pain. Her body tensing, leg kicking up, shudders rolling through her. Nausea. She hugged the post tighter. The pain, the pain. And more to come. Her body was slick with sweat, sliding on the post. Another lash. White lights spun before her eyes. Her breath was knocked from her. She retched and gasped for air. Her world was swimming. An ocean of agony. The stage felt unsteady beneath her feet.


Diaz folded his arms. What a triumph this was. Her screams rang through the hall. The screams that marked his victory. He had done this. He had taken this enemy and broken her. There was a lot of blood now but the floggers were relentless, the whips snaking out and tearing at her skin. The leather was stained now, blood spraying from the whips as they flashed through the air. The wet thud, the howl, the sobbing. Finally, her legs gave way and she slid down the post to hang by her wrists. Her screams, though, showed she was still conscious, still feeling it all. There was no let up. Forty-six, forty-seven. Others in the room perhaps felt he was going too far. Garcia, certainly, thought so, but he hadn’t been embarrassed on television by this woman. People would know now you didn’t mess with him. Word would leak out. His enemies would know they risked not just the noose but whipping, torture and humiliation. She had gone now. She was a carcass, hanging, trembling, screaming, too weak to stand but strong enough still to suffer.


Garcia thought of the stately, elegant woman she’d been when they’d arrested her, of how beautiful she’d been as he’d forced her to strip off the ball gown, and he looked at her now. He remembered the thrill of seeing her naked before him, than long, lean body with the full breasts and rounded cheeks. Now she was battered and bleeding, the smooth skin of her back ripped, her buttocks swollen and bruised, her face haggard with pain. Her legs were still impossibly long, wrapped awkwardly under her as they were, those powerful shoulders now taking all her weight.


Her cries were growing weaker, agonised sighs rather than screams. Each lash struck and her body jerked at the force but she was no longer flinching. The life was being drive out of her. Her head lolled back so they had to stop to move her pony-tail out of the way. The doctor approached and waved the bottle of smelling salts under her nose again. It was ridiculous. Why insist she feel this suffering? She would be dead in a few hours anyway. She retched noisily.


Waves of pain swept over her. Retching sent spasms of agony through her back. There were hands on her, lifting her up. She could feel them sliding on her wet body. They forced her to stand again, but her legs felt numb. Her forehead pushed against the wood. She looked down and saw her damp breasts flattened on the post, saw streaks of sweat, saw the lines of blood running down her legs, the floor at her feet stained red, smeared by her shuffling feet. She understood somehow that they hadn’t finished, that there were more lashes to come, more pain. She heard the whip. It hit her under her right shoulder blade. Her head flicked up and more agony was added. She felt her legs tremble. And there was more to come. More to come. She felt cold. She wept. Death could not come soon enough.


Still three more. Diaz folded his arms. He would enjoy these. There was blood, a lot of blood. From the left, shwack, into her left shoulder. A dull twitch as spray shot up, a moan, another flicker of her legs. The wait, the delay, letting her anticipate. Another blow, savagely hard, cutting across the centre of her back. Thicker blood. Blood running down her body, dripping from her. One to come. She was shaking, weeping, all control gone. The left hander, with noticeable effort, the tip of the whip tearing at her ribs. A half turn of the body, a gurgled scream. “Sixty.” Her body sliding down the post, hanging by her arms, whipped to within an inch of death. The flogging over. His victory almost complete.
 
She was only semi-conscious as they picked her up and carried her out of the hall. She heard somebody say she would be back to be hanged that afternoon. She knew she should be terrified, but she was so weak, in such pain, she just wanted it to be over. She was taken into a cell and laid down on a bench. She flopped, arms and legs hanging loose as she felt the atrocious pain in her back and buttocks. She felt herself beginning to drift, but then the guards were on her again, fastening her wrists and ankles to the legs of the bench. This wasn’t just to secure her, she knew. There was no more need for that. No. This was for more torture. She sobbed again.


She heard guards barking like dogs. She heard them watching videos on their phones, videos of her, squirming as a dog licked her, of her shamed into sucking its penis. She heard their laughter. Mostly she felt pain. Ever slight movement, every whisper of air over her back burned like liquid fire. One held his phone before her eyes and she saw herself, legs pulled part, barbed wire wrapped around her head as the dog lapped away.


Then silence. He was there again. Diaz. He pulled her hair so she was forced to look at him. He grinned at her. “Nearly done,” he said. “Maybe a speech? Some fine last words?”


She looked away. He wretched her head up and she saw in his hand he held a bottle of chilli oil. Fall well, she told herself, but how could she? She lay her head down on the bench and waited for the agony. It came soon enough, with laughter and more mockery as he poured the oil over her ravaged back. It burned with a terrifying depth, agony reaching deep inside her. He splashed it up and down and left and right and she screamed and screamed and screamed, her heart thumping, sweat beading again on her bloodied brow. Her throat was sore with screaming, her eyes sore with crying, her soul sore with everything.


The wounds were horrible. Thick and bloody, inflamed so he didn’t want to touch them. But she deserved it. When the oil had run out Diaz ordered her flipped over. He hadn’t intended to fuck her again but he couldn’t resist. He made sure she was strapped down tightly. Arms, legs, waist. Then he sent them all from the room.


He smoothed her hair back from her head, feeling the scars where the barbed wire had bitten. He ran his fingers over her lovely soft cheek. He kissed her. She didn’t resist, didn’t react. She just moaned in pain. He took off his jacket. “Your final fuck,” he said, running his thumb over her lips. He straddled her and sat down on her belly, enjoying the spasm of pain as she took his weight. He played with her breasts, so soft, so lovely. He stood again and took off his trousers. He had to be careful. He didn’t want to get blood on them. He removed his tie and his shirt. He slapped her, hard. She gave a slight grunt. He ran his hand over her smooth belly. “So lovely,” he said. “For a dog-fucking traitor.”


He kissed her again, enjoying her soft lips. He teased her breasts, finger circling the nipples. He slapped them, punched her, pounded his fists into her breasts. And then he could wait no longer. He pulled down his boxers and entered her. She spasmed in pain, seemingly to clutch at him. Every thrust he made increased her distress and thus his pleasure. He came quickly, but lay on her for a minute or two, hands caressing her breasts. He rolled off her and dressed. He took a cigar from his pocket and lit it up. He leaned over her, blowing smoke into her face.


“Where do you think I might put this out?” he asked.


He blew on the lit end so it glowed. He held it by her face. In her eyes he saw some recognition, less panic than resignation. He teased her, holding the cigar near her nose, then her chin, then her breasts, but there was only one place it was going. He returned the cigar to her his mouth and stoked the inside of her long thighs. Then with his left hand he held her thighs and, as she whimpered in fear, he took the cigar from his mouth with his right and touched it to her clitoris. Her body tensed, bucking in pain and she gave a silent hiss. As he ground the cigar, finally, unconsciousness overcame her.
 
Juliette was dazed. Nothing fully made sense any more. Doctors. She was vaguely aware, were attending her but her brain couldn’t process everything. She kept seeing Diaz’s leering face as he raped her one final time, kept hearing the barking of dogs. There was pain everywhere. Had they sedated her? She didn’t know. She just knew she was going to die and that she would welcome it.


At some point they had dressed her, in a loose black prison dress. The blood, she realised, wouldn’t show. Her hair had been retied in a pony-tail. She was helped to her feet by soldiers, not gently, but not with the mocking roughness she had come to expect. Her wrists were shackled behind her, an absurd precaution when they had to hold her upright, almost carried her to the hall where she was to be executed. There was an emptiness within her. When the fall is all that remains, fall well.


Garcia watched grimly as Hartmann was shoved to her knees. It was much fuller than it had been for the flogging. A couple of hundred pairs of eyes stared at her. What did the politicians think of the scars on her forehead? Did they realise what had been done to her? An official read out the sentence. “Juliette Hartmann,” he said, “You were convicted four counts of treason, eight of conspiracy, thirteen of sedition, sixteen of failing to report anti-government activity, thirty of collusion with banned groups, eighty-two of libel and 114 of propagating misleading information, with being accessory to 382 murders and with sexual deviancy. You were sentenced to death.”


A priest approached and performed the last rites as she looked at him with exhaustion, the guards marched her up the steps to the gallows. She could barely move, had to be lifted. They held her as the noose was draped over her head, not in case she tried to escape, but because she was too weak to stand. They tightened it and her head jerked slightly. There was a blank look of terror on her face. She deserved to die. He accepted that. He approved of it. But what she’d gone through…


They stepped back and her legs looked as though they might give way. She swayed but the rope held her up. There was something wrong. For a moment Garcia couldn’t work out what it was. But as the order to release the trapdoor was given, he realised. The rope was taut. He shook his head at the cruelty. She kicked, desperately, the noose tightening around her neck. They lowered her slowly to the level she was supposed to be, hanging beneath the stage, but her neck wasn’t broken. She thrashed, eyes bulging. It would, he knew, take her several minutes to die.


Diaz had denied her dignity even in that.
 
No mercy even at the end. A great story, King D!
 
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