dommmu
Governor
After a busy weekend, I finally got around reading the final part of your story. I guess Valerie deserved what she got, although it was probably only the tip of the iceberg
The ending was very surprising, though I did not quite buy the twist. I liked the idea of the first 2 1/2 parts better where it looked like a sex adventure gone out of control.
But the best part of the story was how you managed to create and keep that dense, athmospheric setting from the beginning to the end. Kudos to you for that!
The ending was very surprising, though I did not quite buy the twist. I liked the idea of the first 2 1/2 parts better where it looked like a sex adventure gone out of control.
But the best part of the story was how you managed to create and keep that dense, athmospheric setting from the beginning to the end. Kudos to you for that!