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Prisoner 3019 (JCP Story)

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This was written about 2 years ago and originally posted to my now-abandoned tumblr blog. It's set in a near-future authoritarian dystopian state called the NAFR. I have a few other stories-in-progress set in the same world. Hope you all enjoy!

PART I:

"PRISONER 3019, YOU HAVE BEEN BROUGHT BEFORE THE TRIBUNAL FOR PROCESSING! YOU WILL ANSWER ALL QUESTIONS HONESTLY, CLEARLY, AND CONCISELY! IS THAT UNDERSTOOD?"

Katie squinted into the blinding halogen lights pointed directly into her face. She was in a roughly twenty by thirty foot concrete cell. The wall across from her was replaced by an enormous mirror, which she instinctively knew could be seen through from the other side. When she looked, however, she couldn't see her interrogators, only the pitiful sight of herself.

She was completely naked. Her pale bare arms were stretched above her head and cuffed in steel chains to the rough, damp concrete wall behind her. Her straight brown hair was disheveled, and her breathing was ragged with terror. She was shaking, from the cold or the fear, she couldn't tell.

"IS THAT UNDERSTOOD?"

"Yes!" She meant to shout, but it came out as more of a squeak. She heard a low buzzer, then a roar, then the breath was knocked out of her as two torrential jets of icy water erupted from the corners of the room, drenching her, drowning her, stinging her bare skin. It was hellishly cold. She twisted this way and that, gasping for breath, until after ten seconds that felt like years, the hoses turned off. She slumped against the wall, drenched half-choking, half-sobbing. She hadn't seen the hoses with the lights in her face.

"ALL QUESTIONS WILL BE ANSWERED PROMPTLY. IS THAT UNDERSTOOD?"

"Yes!" She shrieked reflexively. Now shivering in earnest, her teeth chattering, she dragged herself back to her full height. She felt as though she'd been dunked in ice. At least, she thought grimly, they couldn't see her crying when her whole face was already soaked. The loudspeaker crackled again.

"PRISONER 3019: YOUR FULL NAME IS KATHERINE CLAIRE FARREN. CORRECT?"

"Correct." She spoke robotically, distracted by the ache in her shoulders.

"YOU ARE NINETEEN YEARS OLD, CORRECT?"

"Yes." Her bare feet were starting to go numb from the cold.

"ON APRIL 10th, 2038, YOU WERE APPREHENDED AND ACCUSED OF POSSESSION AND CONSUMPTION OF A CLASS 1 PROHIBITED PSYCHOACTIVE SUBSTANCE AS DESIGNATED BY THE NORTH AMERICAN FREE REPUBLIC DEPARTMENT OF CRIMINAL CORRECTION. CORRECT?"

"Correct." Katie closed her eyes. She hadn't even smoked the weed, it was Vanessa's. She had just been at the party.

"DO YOU PLEAD GUILTY TO THE CHARGES?"

"No!" She looked around, hoping she could somehow meet someone's gaze through the mirror, someone who would understand. She hadn't smoked. "I'm innocent!"

The buzzer sounded again. Then the water returned, drenching her anew, stinging her face, her chest, her shoulders, the cold cutting right into her, right to the bone. She screamed with what little breath she could draw, but no one could hear over the roar of the hoses. Then once again, it was over. She crumpled against the wall, still shaking, desperate for breath.

"Please," she whimpered, "You have to understand, I didn't-"

"DO YOU PLEAD GUILTY TO THE CHARGES?"

"But I didn't-"

Another buzzer, then the water came again, so cold that it might as well have been scalding hot for all that her shocked nerve endings were able to differentiate. It was just pain. The force knocked her off her feet this time, but her manacled arms caught her before she hit the ground. She tried to stand but caught the jet right in her face. It filled her nose and mouth, it stung her eyes. She fell once more. She couldn't breathe. Then it stopped, and she slumped and dripped and cried.

"DO YOU PLEAD GUILTY TO THE CHARGES?"

The electronic voice had not altered its intonation once. Katie understood. She knew people who had been arrested by the Republic before. This wasn't a trial, it was an inquisition. They didn't want an explanation. Just a confession. She turned to face the mirrored wall.

"Yes," she choked in the smallest voice of her life. She heard a quiet electronic chime.

"THE TRIBUNAL ACCEPTS YOUR PLEA. YOU HAVE BEEN CONVICTED OF THE CHARGES. SENTENCE WILL BE PASSED."

Katie leaned her head against the wall. Her shoulder ached fiercely where she had wrenched it in her fall. Goose pimples covered her naked body. She couldn't feel her feet. She wanted nothing more than to be warm and dry. She thought she might never be warm and dry again.

"TRIBUNAL CONCURS. PRISONER 3019 IS SENTENCED TO RECEIVE SIXTY LASHES. PUNISHMENT TO BE CARRIED OUT IN PUBLIC, TOMORROW AT 0800 HOURS."

Katie's stomach turned a somersault. Her mouth felt dry. Sixty lashes? They were going to whip her. They were going to whip her in public, sixty times. For a first offense! She was no longer certain her shaking was just from the cold.

"TRIBUNAL CONCLUDED. PRISONER WILL BE TAKEN TO HOLDING. NEXT TRIBUNAL IN FIVE MINUTES."

Three faceless giants in jet-black fatigues entered the cell. They loomed like granite tombstones over her as they unlocked her wrists from the manacles and dragged her from the cell. She stared straight ahead, her vision foggy, barely noticing the men's grip crushing her slender arms.

Sixty lashes. Tomorrow morning.

The men led her down a featureless concrete corridor. Her bare, wet feet slapped the cold, rough floor. She began to cry, but silently this time, because she knew that no one cared.

* * *​

They took her through a steel door into an antechamber of sorts lit by dim fluorescent. A middle-aged woman with one eyebrow sat at a gray steel desk. The guards stopped and held Katie in front of the woman. She looked Katie up and down, then disappeared into a closet behind her. After a moment she emerged and threw a bundle of gray fabric at Katie's feet.

"Get dressed." The woman said in a raspy monotone. The men holding Katie released her arms and she winced as the circulation returned. She bent down and picked up the clothes. They consisted of a shapeless gray tank-top and shorts that resembled baggy pajamas. The shirt had a barcode printed over the left-hand breast. Clumsily, she pulled them on, grateful to have anything at all to cover herself with after the hours she'd spent naked in the facility. There was still nothing to put on her feet though. She wondered vaguely if they would ever return her own clothes they'd taken from her.

A sharp shove from the guard behind her nearly knocked her over.

"Move."

They exited through the opposite door into a wider corridor lined with identical featureless steel doors. As they marched her down the hallway she gazed at all the doors, wondering who was inside each one. The only openings in the doors were the smallest of rectangular slits near the top, not enough to see inside. Finally, they stopped in front of one of the doors about 50 feet from the end of the hallway. One guard with a master key unlocked it and dragged it open. It made a heavy metallic scraping sound

The cell inside was barely larger than a toilet stall and about as inviting. The walls were sheer steel, the floor was pockmarked cement and the only adornments were an inch-thick canvas pallet and a small plastic bucket. Katie was suddenly overcome with a wave of claustrophobia on seeing it, and began to struggle against the guards' grips, begging not to be locked inside. They just laughed at her. Holding one arm each, they hurled her forward. She slammed hard into the cell's back wall, almost definitely bruising her shoulder, and sank down onto the pallet, stifling a grunt of pain.

"Don't worry," said one of the guards, "You'll be out of there bright and early." They shut the door and left her alone and afraid in the darkness.

Katie leaned against the back wall and hugged her knees up to her chest. Her head was spinning, her stomach was in her throat, she felt sick. For what felt like the millionth time in the last half a day, tears welled up in her round hazel eyes.

But then suddenly she was angry. It wasn't fair! No, she thought. They want to break me. I'm not going to break. I'm not going to be afraid. She closed her eyes and forced herself to steady her breathing. She found her hand reaching automatically for her right shoulder and the delicate blue tattoo of a robin etched into her pale skin there. Robin was her mother's name. Her mother had died three years before. Katie got the tattoo to remember her, and to remember everything she had taught her to live by. Katie stopped crying and her breathing calmed. Her mother would want her to be brave.

* * *​

Eight hours earlier, everything had been normal. It was Saturday and she didn't have any classes. Her friend Olive had told her that some other friends of theirs were getting together for a casual little party at Vanessa's. Vanessa lived off-campus, across town in a rented bungalow with a couple of grad students, so her place, away from the supervision of the University, was a popular hangout. So mid-afternoon, Katie, Olive, and three other friends of theirs all scanned their pass-cards at the gate, piled into Olive's hatchback and headed for the bungalow.

There were about a dozen of their friends there altogether. There was music, drinks, dancing, conversation, laughter...comfort...normality. When one of Vanessa's roommates brought out a small bag of weed, Katie had been impressed. That was kind of a rare treat. Not impossible to get, but you had to have the right connections. She could remember her parents talking about how much easier it was to come by in their time. The draconian government of the Republic had made a great many things more difficult. But as they passed the pipe around, nobody had been afraid. They were indoors, none of them had any kind of record of dissidence. They all felt invincible, the way you do when you're young and embracing independence. So when the Municipal Troopers had battered down the doors, there was no hope of hiding.

It had been instant chaos. The black-clad troopers were like ghosts, appearing everywhere in the house in a matter of seconds. Some of the partiers tried to fight. Others froze on the spot or dropped to their knees, pleading or crying. Katie and Olive, among others, bolted for the back of the house. They grabbed Olive at the Kitchen doorway and dragged her away, screaming. Katie didn't look back as she scrambled onto the counter. She made it partway out of the open window before a black glove closed around her hair and dragged her the rest of the way through, throwing her to the ground like a sack of bricks.

Her eyes watered, her scalp throbbed and white spots flashed in front of her eyes as she rose up onto her knees, dazed and disoriented. The trooper who caught her held the end of a shock baton inches from her face while another took handcuffs from his belt and grabbed her wrists, ordering her to remain silent. From inside the house she could faintly hear more screams, thuds, and the crackle of discharging batons, however, she was barely aware of her surroundings. Everything was blurry, and indistinct, as though she were underwater. She said nothing, and as a black canvas bag was thrown over her face, she finally fainted.

Katie thought of all the faces in that house, her friends, acquaintances, fellow students. She realized she had no idea what had happened to any of them. It was a psych-out tactic: the troopers isolated you from anyone you were with on arrest. The last person she had seen was Olive, grabbed from behind her as she dove for the window. Had anyone managed to escape the raid? If so, who? Would she ever see any of them again? Was Olive somewhere in this prison with her? What about Vanessa? Or Kieran, Olive's on-again-off-again boyfriend who had been in the car with them; or Jenny, a girl in the year above them who lived next door to Vanessa? Were they here, naked, chained, forced to confess? Would they be whipped also?

From the backyard, Katie had been dragged into the back of an armored van. She could tell from the heat and the smell that there were other bodies packed in with her, but, as they were all too afraid to say anything, she had no way of knowing if any of them were people she knew. She knelt in the dark, wrists aching, and had no idea if they drove for ten minutes or an hour. By the time the black bag was removed, she was alone again apart from her captors, inside a dingy tiled room in the detainment facility.

The guards uncuffed her hands so that a gray-faced man at a desk behind a barred window could scan her fingerprint and access her civilian file, but they kept their own hands on the hilts of their shock batons, sending a clear message. Katie wouldn't have tried to run. She knew she was in way too far over her head.

Once the desk attendant had edited the correct forms, the trooper led Katie through a door into another grim tiled room, this one containing an exam table and a wall of diagnostic instruments. A blonde woman in a lab coat had ordered Katie to strip, while a fat balding man had cataloged and then locked away every article of her clothing: her sneakers, socks, shorts, tank top, jean jacket, even her pale blue panties and bra and her black choker necklace. She'd probably never see any of it again.

Then the lab coat woman had begun a medical examination. She shone a light into Katie's eyes and throat, took down her pulse and blood pressure, looked over every inch of Katie's slim body. She noted down every minuscule blemish, as well as the robin tattoo. Then she had put on a pair of latex gloves. Katie wanted to cry again remembering. The woman had shoved her harsh, probing fingers into Katie's mouth, peeling back her lips, feeling under her tongue and making her gag. She grabbed Katie's breasts, squeezing all around. Then she reached downward. She shoved her fingers into Katie's sex, deep inside, probing around and around, while Katie squeezed her eyes shut and bit down hard on her lip and whimpered. Then she turned Katie around and shoved the fingers up her ass. At this invasion, Katie had let out a little yelp and flinched, her foot involuntarily flying up and meeting the lab coat woman's shin.

Lab coat woman jumped back, there was an electronic crackling, and then Katie felt a sudden burning in her side and a searing jolt of current shot through her body. The guard behind her had jabbed her with his baton. Panting, Katie leaned on her elbows on the exam table, biting her lip once more, determined not to cry as the woman resumed her examination of Katie's insides.

After another interminable minute, the woman stepped away and threw away her gloves, allowing Katie to stand back up and gingerly turn around. The fat man had the woman sign a form and then the troopers had led Katie away through another door. She walked slowly and awkwardly, everything between her legs still sore. They led her into a hallway and sat her on a cold metal bench, where she was to wait to be called for the tribunal, the "processing" and the hellish water torture. The whole time, she never once saw a single other prisoner.

* * *​

Katie shifted uncomfortably in the dark cell. The whole experience felt unreal, like a bad dream or like something that happened to someone else, to another girl. It was all too much too fast, she couldn't accept it. But she couldn't deny the cold and the dark and the damp that surrounded her. She couldn't deny the hard steel wall at her back or the coarse cement floor beneath her. And she knew that greater pain awaited her still. Would they even tell her family? At least they would probably let her go after she took the lashes, wouldn't they? With a million questions turning over and over in her mind, Katie finally surrendered to her exhaustion and sank into the most uneasy sleep of her life.

She was startled awake a few hours later by a thunderous banging on the door of her cell. Reflexively, she shrank back against the wall, her heart racing. She winced at the stiffness in her neck from sleeping in the tiny metal box. She had no way of knowing what time it was. The cell door was pulled open by two troopers. They may have been the same ones from before, or two completely different men. In their body armor and face masks, they all might as well have been robots. One of them gestured at her with his baton.

"Come on out, little lady," he said. "Time to take your punishment."

* * *​
 
Wow, thanks for the great feedback everyone! I always worry my scenarios are a bit derivative so it's nice to hear such a warm reception.

Just cleaning up the next section. No need to keep you all waiting too long for a story that's been done for two years lol.

Don't worry. It gets much worse ;)
 
Execellent and very chilling (pun intended). I like the idea of the accused being naked in court-Barb usually wears something totally inappropriate.;)

I have to ask though, "North American Free Republic"-does that mean Canada has been annexed?:eek:
 
Execellent and very chilling (pun intended). I like the idea of the accused being naked in court-Barb usually wears something totally inappropriate.;)

I have to ask though, "North American Free Republic"-does that mean Canada has been annexed?:eek:

We tried that during the American Revolution and barely failed. I suspect this time every Canadian would fight to the death....at least until the 2020 election results are in :machinegun::2guns::para:
 
Montreal was taken....the attack on Quebec barely failed. Benedict Arnold figured prominently in both attacks and gained a reputation as an excellent warrior and leader.
Obviously, this soon changed.
Yes, Ben Franklin was involved in founding Montreal's main English-language newspaper, The Gazette. The premise that the Quebecois would happily take sides in a battle between two groups of Anglos was faulty.
 
I'm currently reading a new book, The British Are Coming, by Rick Atkinson, the first volume of his trilogy about the American Revolution. All of the events previously mentioned are covered in great detail.
 
PART II:

Katie was handcuffed again, and the troopers brought her out a back door of the prison facility into an alleyway where there was a waiting black van. She squinted in even the pale gray daylight of the early morning. It was a wet, gray, overcast spring morning, not exactly cold, but with enough of a chill to the air to make her shiver. Katie had slept sort of but she didn't feel rested at all. She felt run down and ached all over.

She climbed into the back of the van and sat on the floor. One trooper sat next to her, the other across from her, and they slipped a black bag back over her head. Of course, they wouldn't want her to have any way of knowing where she'd been imprisoned. She wanted to protest, but couldn't find the fight in herself to say anything. And she knew it would only bring her further pain.

Over soon, she thought. It'll be over soon.

The drive lasted maybe half an hour, during which time Katie tried to steel herself as best she could. The problem was she had no idea what it would feel like to be whipped. She'd never even been spanked as a kid. Surely it would hurt terribly, but she had no frame of reference for comparison. Would she be injured badly? Would she be crippled? The uncertainty of it all was the worst thing. She wanted to be brave. She wanted to prepare herself, but she didn't really know what to prepare for.

She knew where they would be taking her, though. Every university and college campus had its own Disciplinary Court, sections of nationally owned and maintained ground where punishments like floggings and executions would be carried out for the public to witness. The Disciplinary Courts had been an innovation of the NAFR government when they had voted to reinstate public corporal and capital punishments. Some were in town squares or parks, some were in front of office buildings, but college students found themselves in trouble often, for drug offenses or protest activities, and the Republic liked to punish them in front of their peers, to set an example.

The van ground to a halt, the engine idling.The troopers stood up and opened the back doors. They hauled her to her feet and pulled her out. She stepped cautiously off the back of the van, stumbling a little as her bare feet met chilly concrete. One trooper finally pulled the bag off her face. She took a deep breath of her first fresh air in a while and blinked as her eyes adjusted.

Sure enough, she was back at the University, just to the side of the central quad. Before her was a square cement-block courtyard, partially sectioned off by a waist-high fence. In the middle stood a morbid gallows post made of iron beams, and a few yards in front of that, a chest-height wooden post with a crossbeam on top and manacles at each end. She swallowed, feeling her heart race anxiously as the two troopers began to march her at a steady pace across the courtyard.

They weren't alone. Gathered around all sides of the courtyard were what looked like two or three hundred of her fellow students, likely everyone who didn't have class or a job to go to that morning, mandated by the University to witness punishment. She could see a few staff-members and professors scattered throughout the crowd as well. All the spectators were bleary-eyed and most of the students were still in pajamas; dragged out of bed as if for a fire drill. She was reminded that it was not even eight in the morning, her sense of time having gotten away from her in the dark hole of the prison. Looking around, she recognized some of the faces and felt a sudden hot rush of humiliation.

There was Dr. Hayes, the round-faced woman who taught her American Lit class, gazing at Katie with moist eyes and an almost motherly expression of distress. And nearer the front was Kevin Barnes, her ogre of a Natural Science professor, white-bearded and beady-eyed, watching the scene almost hungrily. Then she started seeing other students she recognized. There was Laney, her freshman year roommate, who looked like she didn't even know Katie. There were Dante and Mikey, two guys she knew from the Community Improvement Volunteering club. Dante was whispering something to Mikey while Mikey snickered. And across the far side of the courtyard were her friends, Aaron and Danielle, their jaws set in grim frowns, their fists clenched. She'd only gotten to know them recently. She knew they had both in the past felt the wrath of the Republic government but she didn't know the details. Still, they alone might understand what she was going through. Feeling nauseous, she cast her gaze downward. In the moment, she didn't even feel connected to these people. She felt like an object.

They stopped in front of the post. Katie found that she was sweaty, despite the chill in the air. One of the troopers uncuffed her hands from behind her back. She rubbed her wrists, raw and red from all the time spent in cuffs.

The trooper holding Katie grabbed the gray prison tank top and yanked it roughly off over Katie's head, dropping it on the ground. Katie shivered as a cool morning breeze wafted over her pale naked torso and her arms sprang instinctively up to cover her chest. The attempt at modesty was futile however as the troopers grabbed her wrists and dragged her forward, pinning her up against the post and stretching her arms out to her sides. She remained stiff and tense, but did not resist them. She had to accept this. She had to take it, and maybe, if she kept her resolve, she could survive it. She took a deep, shuddering, ragged, terrified breath. Another trooper began to speak into a handset.

"Execution of punishment for seventeenth precinct Prisoner 3019: Farren, Katherine Elise," the trooper's voice crackled across the courtyard, amplified out of the loudspeakers on top of the van. "Charged with Category 1 drug offense. Punishment is sixty lashes. Begin!"

With two solid metallic clicks, her wrists were locked into the manacles at either end of the crossbeam. She pulled at the restraints as if to test them, but the beam was long enough that she had almost no slack to maneuver her arms at all. She felt the coarseness of the wood pressing against the soft flesh of her chest. She felt hundreds of pairs of eyes on her naked back. She felt completely helpless.

A third trooper now strode across the courtyard from the van. Katie heard the steel-toed boots on the concrete coming up behind her, then the trooper circled around to stand in front of her. Unlike the others, she wore no helmet. It was a woman in her late thirties, over six feet tall and built like a wrestler, all muscle. She had blonde hair scraped back into a tight bun, and sharp little black eyes like steel. In her gloved right hand, she held the whip that was to be used on Katie. Republic troopers' whips were fearsome things, about four feet long, black like oil and made of a stiff synthetic polymer that was pliable like leather but much denser. The woman gave it a test swing and it sliced through the air at frightful speed, whistling like a firecracker. Katie involuntarily flinched and yelped at the sight. The disciplinarian smirked at this, then approached Katie, holding up a small leather-wrapped dowel.

"You're legally allowed something to bite on, if you choose," she said in a surprisingly high voice for her size. Katie instinctively wanted to say yes, but something inside her stopped her. They thought she was weak. All of them: the troopers, the tribunal, the crowd around her. They all thought she was a pitiful, scared child to be beaten. She suddenly knew in her heart she had to prove otherwise. To prove it to herself as much as anyone. She would prove that she wasn't weak, that she wasn't to be underestimated. She would not scream.

"No," she said coldly. The blonde trooper raised an eyebrow, then shrugged.

"Fine. It's up to you." She pocketed the dowel, then strode back around behind Katie, who closed her eyes, and felt the woman's glove jabbing her bare shoulder.

"That's a cute tattoo," said the woman. "Hopefully there's something left of it when I'm through." She sliced the whip through the air again, striking the ground this time with a deafening snap. Katie flinched again at the noise. She raised her head and gazed one more time out into the crowd. Her eyes met Aaron and Danielle again, and theirs met hers. Danielle was wiping away tears while Aaron put an arm around her. A distant chime sounded across the campus. The clock tower was tolling that it was eight o' clock. Time for Katie to suffer.

"First dozen!" The trooper with the handset spoke again. Katie shut her eyes and clenched her jaw.

As if in slow motion, she heard the whip whir through the air. She then felt it slam into her bare back, just beneath her shoulder blades, with a wet meaty crack of fiber on flesh that rang out like a thunderbolt across the courtyard. Then came the pain. First it felt like an itch, then it gradually blossomed into a searing strip of fire across her back. She strangled down a cry and writhed in her restraints, trying to work through the pain. Fuck, it hurt so bad. She hadn't known what to imagine, but she felt sure this was worse than anything she could.

Before she could catch her breath, the second stroke came, just below the first. The impact slammed Katie forward against the post. The same burning pain spread from the stripe through Katie's entire body. Katie stifled another moan, then gasped, gulping down air as though surfacing from underwater. Her eyes were hot with tears. How could she take even another five lashes, let alone fifty-eight? She bit down on her lower lip, steeling herself.

The third lash landed and Katie jerked in her bonds and grunted. Then the fourth, sharper, harder, and Katie gasped, arching her back. Each fresh stroke brought additional pain while the pain of the previous ones remained, growing into a throbbing ache throughout her entire back. She gripped the crossbeam of the post until her knuckles were white. She couldn't scream. She would not scream.

The blonde trooper laid on three more strokes, three more white-hot streaks across her shoulders. Each new lash felt like a giant raw nerve laid open. Even the air drifting across her back hurt. Tears were streaming down Katie's face now. She couldn't stop herself from struggling, writhing this way and that as though she could somehow shake off the mounting agony. They came at a steady rhythm, about one lash every five or six seconds. The trooper wasn't even breathing hard from the effort, though she put a tremendous force behind every swing. She was a true professional. What kind of person did you have to be to get so good at this?

The twelfth lash was a new level of agony entirely. The trooper swung the whip on a fierce vertical stroke, cutting right across the existing welts down Katie's back. Katie lurched forward as the pain exploded from her spine. She bit down on her lip so hard that she tasted the coppery taste of blood and felt a trickle of it run down her chin. The scream rose up in her throat but she forced it down inside.

"Mmmmmnnrrrrrrggggghhhhhhh!!!"

She started to wonder if she should have taken the dowel between her teeth after all. That was only a fifth of her punishment. In the brief respite, she opened her puffy red eyes, struggling to focus her gaze through the tears. She found Aaron and Danielle, both silently weeping. She looked around at the other faces. A few others shed tears as well, a great many just looked nervous or tense, a sickening few watched the scene gleefully, and a great many were simply stone-faced and unreadable. She supposed it was easier to witness suffering like this if you just divorced yourself from your empathy.

"Second dozen!" The voice on the loudspeaker rang out.

The whipping resumed, the new lashes crossing over the first set now, tearing into the already tender skin, compounding the pain. Katie was having to stifle a scream with each stroke now, keeping her teeth firmly embedded in her bleeding lip, the cries escaping only as grunts, strangled yelps, whimpers or sharp exhalations. Sweat glistened all over her bare body and plastered her dark hair to her face and forehead. She gripped the wood of the post with her fingers and the cement ground with her bare toes. Her entire back felt as though it were on fire and the impact of every stroke felt as though it would break her in two.

Finally they reached stroke twenty-four and another brief rest. Katie slumped forward, resting with her chest bent over the top of the crossbeam and her head hanging limply forward. Thirty-six. Just thirty-six to go. Thirty six more tastes of hellfire. Through the fog of agony she tried to think of something to give her strength. She saw her mother's face. She would be strong for her mother. She would survive for her mother. She forced herself to straighten back up, the movement racking her with fresh waves of pain from her back.

"Third dozen!"

Whir. Smack. Straight across her shoulder blades. Twenty-five.

Whir. Smack. The tender small of her back. Twenty-six.

Whir. Smack. The tip of the lash snapped around and bit her side. Twenty-seven.

Whir. Smack.

Whir. Smack.

She tried to surrender to the torture, to ride it out. She leaned against the post and let each fresh wave of pain wash over her. She tried to let her mind drift away, out of her beaten and tormented body, but each impact brought her sharply back to earth, her vision flashing white and red. She wondered how bad her back looked, if she was bleeding. In fact, Katie's slender, pale back was covered in a brutal lattice of puffy deep red and purple welts, the skin red and raw all around. And still the beating continued.

The third dozen was completed. It was more than halfway over. Katie couldn't contain it anymore and began sobbing openly now. She couldn't remember a time when she didn't hurt. She didn't know what her life was without this pain. She had nothing but the lashes she'd received, and nothing to look forward to but the lashes that were yet to come. From somewhere behind her, she heard a chuckle. It was the woman trooper who was whipping her.

"You smartass college brats are all the same," the woman sneered. "I've beaten dozens of you. You all act like you're so tough and confident, but when it comes down to my whip and your backs, you all turn into weepy little sissies." Katie merely continued to cry, her tears soaking the wood of the post. She refused to let the barbs get to her. The woman was hurting her enough already.

"Fourth dozen!" The loudspeaker interrupted.

Katie wasn't prepared for the extra venom the woman put into her swing for lash thirty-seven. She slashed the whip diagonally downward from Katie's shoulder to her hip and the pain cut through Katie like a stroke from a sword. She felt the end of the whip bite into her right shoulder, she felt the warmth and the wetness of her blood as the tender skin split open. Her vision flashed red, her resolve finally shattered, and she screamed, a deep, guttural animal howl of anguish that echoed across the courtyard. She didn't have to see to know exactly where the wound was. Her memorial to her mother would carry a scar forever. They'd broken her.

The woman trooper didn't even pause to soak in the victory. She simply kept the lashes coming at the same steady pace as ever. Whir, crack. Whir, crack. Punctuated by Katie's unending quiet sobs and pitiful yelps. As the lashes kept crossing over one another more of the weals started to split open and multiple tiny rivulets of blood trickled down Katie's back, mingling with the sweat that continued to drench her.

When the fourth dozen finished, Katie could barely even notice. Her mind was completely clouded by a red haze of pain. Thoughts came in broken, primal fragments. Every slight movement was torture. She couldn't stand up straight anymore, remaining slumped over the post, the last few lashes having been delivered downward onto her back instead of horizontally across it. Every breath she took came back out as a ragged moan.

As she lay there, waiting for the final stretch of her torture, she felt as though her entire perspective was crumbling. She'd grown up in the North American Free Republic, had lived under the regime her whole life. She always knew to be cautious, to be afraid, to look over her shoulder and watch what she said and who she said it to. It was instinctive, but abstract. When people disappeared and came back weeks later pale and limping, or never came back at all, even when it was her friends, she never asked questions, never let it touch her. She just tried to live a normal life, follow the rules, stay within expectations, not draw attention to herself and find happiness wherever she could. And look where that had gotten her: stripped, groped, beaten, bleeding, and broken on the ground of her own place of learning. She had done everything the Republic had asked of her, and the Republic didn't care. They swept her up and crushed her in their machine without a second thought like anyone else, and now she understood. This always could have happened. There was no consideration, only brutality, only violence. Her nearly two decades of feverish obedience meant nothing. She meant nothing. And she hated it. Hated the Republic. Hated herself.

"Fifth dozen!"

Whir. Crack. Forty-nine. Katie lost her balance. She dropped to her knees, her arms hanging in the manacles over her head. She let herself scream, a piercing wail that dissolved into desperate sobs. She no longer cared. She no longer owed them anything of herself.

Whir. Crack. Fifty. Katie howled again, as much in anger as in pain. Her throat was dry and she choked.

Whir. Crack. Fifty-one. That one cut her again. Her whole back was a raw nerve, laid open and scorched by the very air.

Whir. Crack. She shrieked, roared, wept. Drops of her blood began to stain the pavement. Her sweat stung the open wounds. Whir. Crack. Be brave. She must be brave. Katie sucked in a sharp breath through her teeth, gripped the crossbeam above her head with all her might and pulled herself slowly, agonizingly, to her feet. Every muscle in her back screamed from the effort. Hot tears streamed from her eyes. She planted her bare feet firmly apart, tossed her sweat-soaked hair back from her face and stood, leaning on the post for support, staring straight ahead, but looking at nothing.

Whir. Crack. She cried out, but remained still.

Whir. Crack. She screamed until she choked through tightly gritted teeth. One more.

The blonde trooper swung the whip as if to cut Katie in half. Katie was thrown forward as her back once more exploded with white hot pain. One last scream tore itself from her throat, then she slumped forward, panting as her consciousness slowly dissolved into the blood-red fog.

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Author's note: Still a small epilogue to come! Sadly, though, that's curtains for the main event.
 
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