Sacrifice by Crucifixion

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Sacrifice by Crucifixion​

Erin arrived dressed in a yellow bikini top and matching yellow shorts, at the tribe’s village excited at what was to come. She heard that this particular tribe in the Pacific had a ritual of sacrificing young women to their gods by a combination of crucifixion and heart removal. She came to the island village with another girl of around nineteen years of age. Her name is Linda and a blond dressed in a white bikini top and brown shorts. She looked like she had everything going for her except for one thing. She has a rare disease that breaks down her nervous system. In a year or so, she will be in unending pain requiring constant medication. The village elders greeted them as they entered the village. “Everything is ready for you.” said one elder to Linda. The elder held up a small back bag. In it were two sets of cuffs, two electric prods, two whips and two steel knives. The bag and its contents were provided by Linda’s parents. This tribe uses vine whips that are known to cause far more pain and skin damage than modern whips. The electric prods are for when they are on the crosses. The tribe normally uses torches applied to the breasts to keep the women awake during the day. The electric prods would cause less damage to the skin and would provide a sharper pain. Linda nodded softly and then smiled at the elder saying: “Let’s get started. I don’t want to keep your gods waiting.”

A male warrior went to each of the two women and cuffed their hands behind their backs. “Before our warriors escort you to the beach, they will test your commitment.” the elder said to them. The warriors proceeded to remove the bikini tops of both women. A Caucasian male came out of one of the huts and moved over toward Linda. “He is here to help with Linda.” The elder said pointing to the Caucasian man. “This one can go to the beach now.” The elder said pointing to Linda. Linda was led out of the village and down a path by the white man. Erin was led to one of the two poles in the center of the village and tied to the left one. The warriors then grabbed a whip each and moved over to her. The warriors started to whip Erin over the chest. Every lash created a small cut on her chest and caused her to grunt. Both the warriors took turns whipping her. She enjoyed the entire experience. Her chest became covered in small cuts and still she smiled after every stroke. After about ten or so minutes, the warriors stopped whipping her and untied her from the pole. The warriors helped Erin down the path that she saw Linda walk down. The elder followed behind a short distance carrying the black bag.

Linda started the walk to the beach with the Caucasian man. He didn’t give her his name and mentioning that her parents requested him to come along and help her out with the sacrifice. He placed his hand on her lower back as he guided her down the path. She noticed the bulge in his shorts as they walked along. “Your very lovely.” He said. It’s unfortunate that you got this sickness. Linda was taken back to the moment when her life changed. When the doctors discovered what was causing her to be tired all the time. The neurological breakdown that would leave her in extreme pain. The regimen of drugs that she would have to take in order to live what little life she had without the agony that would come. A regimen that would bankrupt her family. She wanted to think of something else besides her illness and got a very sexy idea in her head. “I am starting to feel a little light headed. Could you come behind me so you can stabilize me?” she asked. “Sure.” He replied and took position behind Linda. Her hands touching his crotch and his hands on her shoulders. “How is that?” he asked. “Good but, I need your hands on my chest. The man moved his hands to the front of Linda’s shoulders. “No no silly.” she said. “I need your hands on my breasts.” She stopped walking and turned around to face the man. “Do you like them?” Linda asked thrusting her chest toward the Caucasian man. “Your breasts are excellent.” he replied secretly wishing to have his hands on them but too respectful of Linda’s situation to just grab them. “Then by all means, touch them.” she said turning around. The man move back to supporting Linda and this time he reached around and placed his hands on her breasts. Linda let out a pleasant sigh. “Much better.” she said. They both proceeded down the path until they got to the beach. On the beach there were two crosses on the ground with a cart between the two. “Is that it?” Linda asked looking nervously at the cart. “It is.” replied the man.

For Erin, it was a short walk to the beach. The beach had two crosses set on the ground. The Caucasian man was between the two crosses with a cart. The cart had a battery, four wires with clamps and a control box. Linda was seated on a log where the path reaches the beach. Erin walked over to the crosses with the two warriors right behind her. She stopped at the far cross. Linda got up from the log and walked to the other cross. Erin turned toward the two warriors with a smile on her face and asked “Before you chain me to the cross, how about you make love to me?” The elder shock his head “no”. “Sex during the sacrifice is against our religion.” he said. Seeing the look of disappointment on Erin’s face he added: “Oral pleasure is not considered sex in my culture.” “Is it alright if I sucked off my executioners?” Linda started giggling when she saw that the Caucasian man started to have the bulge in is shorts again. “By all means.” the elder replied. Linda walked over to the Caucasian man and got on her knees. She then started kissing his crotch area where his penis is. He removed his shorts and Linda started kissing the tip of his penis. She then moved to sucking on his penis. Erin kneeled down in front of one of the warriors and started kissing his crotch. Both of them took off their loin cloths. Erin was sucking off one while the other knelt down behind her and started playing with her breasts. The warrior grabbed Erin’s head with both hands and started pumping his penis in and out of Erin’s mouth. He increased his pace and he got more and more excited. The second warrior kept fondling and squeezing Erin’s breasts. The first warrior grunted as he ejaculated semen into her mouth. He then removed his penis from her mouth. Erin kept her mouth open to show the warrior all the semen he pumped in it. She then closed her mouth and swallowed the entire load. The Caucasian man was next to cum. He shot his load into Linda’s mouth but, she was disgusted with the taste of his semen. She let his semen drip out of her mouth and onto her chest and shorts. “Sorry.” she said to the Caucasian man. “First time.” “That’s alright.” he replied. The second warrior replaced the first at Erin’s mouth and she immediately started sucking on his penis. The first warrior knelt down behind Erin and played with her breasts. Like the first warrior, the second increased his pace as his excitement level increased until he ejaculated into Erin’s mouth. Erin swallowed his load as soon as his penis was out of her mouth. “You should go to her.” The elder mentioned to the Caucasian man. “A third.” Erin added. “I’m game.” The Caucasian man walked over to Erin and placed his penis into her mouth. She sucked on it as he grabbed her head as started pumping her face. “This is good that everyone is having fun.” the elder said. “Less time you are stuck on that cross.” he said to Linda.

After the Caucasian man ejaculated in Erin’s mouth, he went back to Linda and escorted her to the cross closes to the village. The warriors escorted Erin to the other cross. The three of them got to work mounting the women to the crosses. First, the cuffs were taken off, to be replaced with single cuffs. Those cuffs were then attached to each side of the cross beam. Then, the feet were cuffed together and those cuffs secured against the main beam. The warriors raised Erin’s cross to an upright position while the Caucasian man and the elder did the same to Linda’s cross. Normally nails were used but, Linda’s family wanted her body back for burial.

Both women had to wait until sun down before the final part of the ceremony. Erin looked like she was enjoying the whole experience of being crucified. She smiled every time her breasts were shocked to keep her awake. Linda was having a harder time on the cross. She needed more frequent shocks and she was sweating more than Erin. “Not long.” the elder assured Linda. The sun started to descend under the horizon. The warriors attached the clamps to the nipples of both women. Linda was looking nervous but Erin’s excitement only grew. The box was powered up and the elder grabbed the remote control. He walked before both women and said a short prayer. He pressed the activation button on the control and electricity pulsed thru the wires. Both women grunted as electricity was being pumped thru their chests. Linda had a look of shock as her heart exploded in her chest. Erin on the other hand seemed to enjoy having her heart destroyed. After the box was turned off, the elder went over with the knife and cut in the chests of both women. He remove the bloody mass of flesh that was their hearts. He placed the hearts in a basket to be burned in the great bonfire tonight.

Linda’s body was shipped home to her family while Erin was buried on the island in the traditional spot for all sacrificed women. The island saw an influx of women volunteering to be sacrificed. Most had what is now being turned as Linda’s disease. Some volunteered for the pure pleasure of the experience. The village appreciated all the visits. END