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The Betrayal

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The Betrayal


Marcella hangs nailed to her cross erected along the side of the street that passes in front of the stately house behind her. She is utterly naked and exposed to whoever passes by. The street is the Via Tusculana -- where the wealthy and upper-class live. Not the crass nouveau riche who live at the far other end of the Via Tusculana. At this end only the best people, of old money and rank live, in their opulent houses surrounded by lush gardens and tended by armies of servants and slaves. Well, Marcella thinks to herself, at least I’m being gazed at and harassed by the better citizens and not the rabble, although many a common tradesmen and slaves who serve the upper-class do pass by and gather to watch her writhe about in agony on her tall cross. She is a generously endowed and lovely young woman, barely twenty years old. Through the burning haze of her agony she still cannot believe this has happened to her. Yet, she saw it coming, for nearly three years now. But at the end it was so sudden, so unfair! Why? Why? She knew the answer: these were not the ”best people” at all. She grew up with them. She knew them and even loved them. But now she knows they are really beasts -- unscrupulous and unconscionable monsters. Not at all the people she thought they were.

Marcella was crucified in front of the house she had lived in her whole life. Well, not as a member of the wealthy family who occupied these walls. Of course not! She was not of the senatorial class of citizens, or even of the equestrian class; she was not even a full citizen per se. She was the daughter of a freedman and woman who had served the master and mistress of this house up until the time of their deaths almost seven years ago. Her parents first served the young master as slaves while he was on campaign in Gaul, serving as a Tribune of the legion. He was the scion of a noble family that had faithfully served Rome for many generations. His bravery in battle and impressive diplomatic skills earned him a sterling reputation. Upon return to Rome he married well and came to live in this huge, opulent house, his family's historical residence in the city. He was soon elected to the Senate -- which was nearly pro forma, there having been senators in his lineage for generations. He was, however, an able man of noble bearing and character, who deserved the title and honors that went with his station.

The senator had brought Marcella’s parents to Rome with him and, in reward for their loyal service to him, soon released them from their servitude. As free persons – though not quite full citizens -- they gratefully continued to serve him and his growing family of several sons and as many daughters. Three sons came first, the last born almost a year before Marcella’s birth. Marcella’s parents were not young when she was born. In fact, it was quite a surprise when her mother, Aleyda, became pregnant. It was seen as a good sign. Her father, Theoderid, suggested their new daughter be given a Roman name in honor of the senator and his beneficence toward them. Aleyda agreed and so the baby was named Marcella.

The senator’s three daughters were born next, the first soon after Marcella’s birth and the last two spaced about a year apart. Marcella grew up in the house among the children of the senator and his wife who thought of Marcella almost as one of their own. She played with the senator’s children and was accepted by them as both a younger sister to the boys and an older sister to the girls. She had free run of the house as a child and even as a young woman when she had specific duties and obligations to the family tend to.

Marcella’s life was idyllic, or nearly so. But then, in her thirteenth year, her mother died of a cancer that slowly gnawed on her until she was reduced to nearly skin and bones at the end. Her heartbroken, beloved father died barely a year later. He had broken his thigh in a fall. The senator spared no expense and he was given the best medical care possible. He was splinted and was resting comfortably when he started breathing heavily. He struggled with breathing for a minute or so then suddenly died. Marcella was with him by his bedside. The medicus gently explained to the distraught, sobbing girl that this often happens when a large bone, like the thigh, was broken. The senator, too, and his wife, consoled Marcella, assuring the budding young woman that she would always have a place in their hearts and home. After all, they both thought of her as a daughter and loved her as one of their own.

Marcella continued to grow up with the senator’s children. When younger, she often rough-housed with the boys, but as she matured she enjoyed quieter pastimes with the girls, with whom she formed deep, sisterly bonds of affection. As the “older sister” she helped shepherd them through their turbulent years of puberty as they grew into young womanhood together. Though never quite receiving the same return of affection as she gave, Marcella nonetheless felt protective of them and loved them as her true family.

But greatness of nobility and character does not always pass down the generations. The senator and his wife died suddenly, under suspicious circumstances. Marcella, then seventeen, was devastated. She loved the senator and his wife, whom she considered step-parents, almost as deeply as her own parents won. She mourned with her brothers and sisters and comforted them – especially the girls, as an older sister would. Her oldest brother, being of legal age, became master of the house. He soon married. His wife, though lovely and poised, was austere and distant, never giving Marcella more than a glance and ordering her about almost as a slave.

Her brothers, too, soon began distancing themselves from her. Always more emotionally remote, they were now brooding young men who had begun treating Marcella less than a sister and more as a servant, even to the point of becoming physically aggressive, grabbing at her as she passed, trying to “cop a feel” of her womanly breasts and firmly rounded ass as she tried to pretend she was not offended and humiliated. She protested, and they apologized, but it didn’t change their behavior for long. Marcella began avoiding them all the while praying their behavior would change as they matured.

Her sisters too, began emotionally distancing themselves from her. Marcella was certain it was because of the disrespectful behavior of her “brothers.” She loved her sisters but knew in her heart they were becoming as spoiled and thoughtless as her brothers who were developing into cruel and entitled young men. She also began to suspect her sisters disliked her for her appearance. Marcella never thought much on it when their relationship was good, but as she matured she knew it was true. Marcella never thought of herself as a beautiful woman, but she had blossomed into one. Her sisters, however, though cute enough as children, never grew into great beauties, despite the refined looks of their aristocratic parents and the rather dark, arrogant handsomeness of their brothers. Something was missing in their character, too, which seemed to manifest itself in their physical appearances and demeanor as upper-class young women.

While Marcella grew from a tomboy into a tall, beautiful, and full-figured young woman, her sisters turned out pale, listless, thin-lipped and somewhat plain. As the hormones of puberty and young womanhood flooded their bodies, they all seemed to be plucking dark hairs that appeared on upper lips, chins and defiantly tried to fill the spaces between already bushy eyebrows. The eldest sister even developed unfortunately hirsute nipples that did nothing to improve her overall sense of womanliness and attractiveness, such as it was. Though wishing desperately that it was not true, Marcella was well-aware of the growing gap between her and her step-sisters and brothers.

Matters came to a head nearly two years after the old master and mistress had died. There was talk of revolution in the air as the old order was being assaulted as being out of touch and corrupt. Suspicions were being raised about the death of the senator as he was widely recognized in his day as a reformer who has attracted many enemies. Suspicions even swarmed about that his eldest son had conspired to have him eliminated so as to preserve the entitlements of the rapidly distant and uncaring upper class. Marcella heard of these accusations and determined that it had become too dangerous to remain with her step-family any longer. Marcella didn’t want to think her oldest brother was involved in anything murderous, but it was clear to her that her oldest brother was not the man the senator had been. Rather, quite the opposite. He had aligned himself with the aristocracy that was determined to remain in power. His positions had slowly convinced his other siblings that their future lay with an entrenched, isolated, privileged social structure. Having none of their parents’ noble character they quickly fell into line. Almost overnight Marcella went from being a sister to the enemy; a member of the lower class that was to be subjugated and not lifted up. The chill in her relationship with her step-brothers and sisters was palpable; she had to flee.

They caught her as she tried to leave the city in a hired carriage. Hired thugs brought her back to the house she grew up in. She was locked into a cellar room, one that she knew from her childhood as a place where she and her sisters would hide away and play, and talk, and try to imagine themselves one day married and happy. Now this formerly happy room was a prison. She cried herself to sleep curled up on the floor, but was suddenly awakened by the sound of the heavy wooden door opening. Her brothers walked in. Rubbing sleep from her eyes she was suddenly terrified by their hulking presence. They advanced on her, calling her filthy names and making vile accusations that she had betrayed her step-parents and had conspired with others to have then murdered so she could become a wealthy lady in the process. They even accused her of attempting to kill them, her very step-brothers and sisters. Marcella protested, vehemently, desperately trying to convince them it was all not true, but this was the story they had concocted and were sticking to. And in the end it would condemn her. The brothers even brought their sisters to the cell who also agreed that Marcella had been involved in their parents’ deaths.

Marcella could not believe her ears. After all the love and affection she shown over the years to not only her step-brothers but, far more sincerely, to her step-sisters, it was a stab to her heart she could not bear. Marcella began crying. Huge tears ran down her face as she howled in terror, humiliation and betrayal as her brothers seized her and tore off her clothes, leaving her naked in front of them. They were beasts now, not true brothers in any sense. She could see they all had erections and knew what was about to happen. Her mind and stomach recoiled; she vomited, but this did not deter the savage assault that followed. Even her sisters helped hold her down as she was raped. Each brother took a turn violating her. Marcella saw through tear-clouded eyes that her sisters were masturbating as she was being raped. What sorts of monsters are these, she thought?

When they were done with her they left, locking her in the room for the rest of the evening. In the morning the door opened. Marcella was curled up into a fetal position, still sobbing. Strong arms pulled her to her feet. She dribbled urine and semen as they dragged her outside, to the front of the house she had grown up in, the house that only recently held such fond memories for her. In front of the steps that led up to the entrance she saw a cross assembled on the ground. She instantly knew it was meant for her. She shuddered and recoiled at the sight, digging in her heels as strange men dragged her toward it. Her so-called brothers and sisters were assembled. A small crowd was gathering too. Marcella realized she was about to be crucified! Why? I did nothing! I only loved my step-brothers and sisters with all my heart! Why were they doing this to me? Why?

End, part 1
 
Part 2.

Her brother began speaking, condemning Marcella as an ungrateful servant – a slave actually – who had betrayed the kindness of his and his sibling’s parents. He pointed towards her, stabbing with his finger, as she stood naked and exposed in front of the crowd. Their parents had graciously made Marcella part of their family but she had cruelly betrayed them – the fondly-remembered senator and his lovely wife – for her own selfish and wicked gain! Other conspirators had already been caught and executed, but Marcella was the last. It had taken nearly two years for the truth came out! The final proof was the fact that Marcella had tried to flee. Only a guilty person flees, he argued. Marcella, the sister they thought they knew and loved was in fact a viper, a deadly serpent who struck at the heart of their family! And she would not be allowed to get off with a quick and easy death! No! She would be crucified which was the only justice such an unredeemable act deserved.

Marcella tried to protest, shouting it wasn’t true, but the energized crowd was ready to see such a lovely young woman crucified. They shouted her down. Marcella looked over at her sisters, standing by her brothers, shouting curses at her as she was dragged to the cross and thrown down upon it. How could you, she thought? My sisters! We grew up together! I loved you! How could you do this to me?

Marcella could not find it in her heart to curse the family she once thought loved her. She was too numb and terrified as her arms and legs are pulled over the wood. She tensed her body, crying loudly, as the point of a nail is pressed into one wrist, and then the other. She looks down her body, between her heaving, pillowed breasts, as two leering men pull her legs to the sides, exposing her pussy to the crowd.

“See! The guilty bitch does not even beg for mercy,” shouts her brother standing over her. He looks down with a sneer on his lips. Marcella can only soundlessly ask why? Why?

“Proceed,” he commands.

Simultaneously, each huge spike is driven through her flesh and into the wood. Marcella’s body jerks in agony as the spikes are driven. The first blows pierce her wrists and embed the spikes. Half a dozen more blows pound each nail deep into the wood. Marcella faints but revives as a bucket of water is thrown over her.

“Don’t let her pass out,” shouts her brother. “I want her to feel all of this!”

Marcella’s spread legs are bent and her feet positioned on the upright, right foot over left foot. She feels the tip of the foot nail pressed between the bones of her foot. She sees the hammer fall but closes her eyes as she screams. The agony is even greater than when her wrists were nailed as the huge nail is driven between the bones and tendons of her feet. It takes nearly a dozen blows to drive the nail and secure her feet. Marcella remains conscious throughout the process, screaming, and then piteously groaning as the horrific pain from her wounds intensifies, spreading like liquid fire through her body.

“Raise the cross,” comes the command.

Marcella screams as her cross is slowly raised. As she moves upward to a vertical position she can feel the drag and push of raw flesh on her nails as her body falls forward. Then, with a final lurch and a sudden, sickening drop that makes her full breasts bounce, the far end of her her cross is fixed into the hole dug for it. It teeters back and forth a bit as it is secured in place. Marcella is crucified! She looks down from her cross. She seems so high in the air it gives her a sense of vertigo. Her stomach rumbles and saliva suddenly fills her mouth. She heaves, trying to vomit, but there is nothing left in her stomach.

Now Marcella's full-throated screams fill the street as she feels the cruel bite of the nails. At first she hangs from her arms, her body tensed and rigid. She doesn’t want to move as any movement brings on spasms of searing agony. Then, without even thinking about it, she pushes up with her legs. The pain in her wrists is lessened a bit but the pain in her nailed feet intensifies to unimaginable fury. She faints and revives as sharp sticks are stuck into her breasts and armpits. As her lovely body writhes in agony the crowd hoots and jeers. Fiery humiliation burns through her as she knows her trembling breasts and exposed crotch are hungrily eyed by the crowd. She drops her head and hangs. Soon, the regular rhythms of pushing up and dropping down take over as she desperately tries to breathe, despite the awful agonies moving on the cross brings.

The day drags by. At some point someone put a ladder against the back of her cross and climbed up to press a weave of thorns around her head. The scalp wounds bled freely. Soon her head and face are drippings with rivulets of fresh blood. They dry as the wounds crust over. The sun is high. Marcella is desperately thirsty, but for the first time she has a few lucid moments when she can reflect on the intolerably sad fact that she is crucified in front of the house in which she grew up. She played on these steps, these pavement stones, in the street before her. Hopscotch with her sisters, and jumping rope, drawing on the stones with soft pieces of charcoal and chalk that grumpy slaves had to scrub away. She looks around. Yes, over there, those are the bushes in which the girls would hide from their brothers, screeching and laughing when they were found. And there is where she fell down badly scraping her knees. She couldn’t see the gardens behind her but she remembered every secret place where giggling girls could play. All the memories come flooding back.

She cries remembering these good times, when her parents were still alive. One night especially was so memorable and still a sweet memory in her mind. It was just before her mother died. Marcella had become friends with a young boy maybe a year older than she. She was so innocent then as a young girl blossoming into a woman. She sneaked out at night to meet her shy young man behind the garden wall. By the light of a full moon they kissed, each nervously wondering what to do next. He then touched her, eagerly and with little experience in such matters. His hand placed on her breast and along her thigh. She was suddenly filled with thrills that left her breathless with feelings she couldn’t fully understand. As they kissed some more she heard male voices. It was her step-brothers come looking for her. They shouted her name. Marcella and her young beau stayed quiet, barely moving, but the brothers found them. They chased the boy off and told Marcella they had come looking for her because people were worried that she had vanished. Though annoyed at being found, she knew they were looking for her out of concern. They were so protective and loving back then! What had gone so terribly wrong?

Marcella realized that she was falsely charged and crucified to cover up a most abominable crime: patricide and matricide! Her step-brothers and sisters turned on her, using her to further their own evil ends. Why? What caused them to slide into such depravity that they actually raped and crucified their own sister! Her heart broke at the thought even as she hanged in her agony. And her sisters! What happened to them that they would go along with what happened? She always loved them, so much, even though they did not fully love her back. Why had they betrayed her? That was the cruelest cut.

By evening Marcella was exhausted. She knew she was dying and would probably not last the night. As the sun set she was enveloped in darkness. As the moon rose she heard voices shouting down the street. A crowd with torches and hastily procured weapons was advancing. They fanned out, attacking the homes of the aristocrats, torching them. Her own house, behind her, was raided and torched. She could hear screams and pleas for mercy. She couldn’t care anymore. Damn them all! Let them die! There was a revolution! The old aristocracy was targeted for death! Oh why, why could it not have arrived a couple of days sooner? She might have lived and had her own life!

Marcella looks down at the revolutionaries running by her cross. One young man stops in front, holding up his torch to see her better. She looks at him through tear-clouded eyes. She is suddenly humiliated again at her nakedness. Could it be? Is it him? The young boy who years ago she met in secret, who thrilled her so? Yes, it is him, now all grown up, and so handsome! He looks up at her so intently, his eyes so sad finding her crucified. Marcella can see that he is whispering her name.

“Marcella, is that you? Marcella?”

“Yes,” Marcella whispers back. “It’s me, it’s me.

He draws a knife and approaches her. “I’m so sorry,” he says.

He slashes deep across her inner thighs, up near her crotch, severing her femoral arteries. Marcella feels gushes of warm blood flowing down her legs. She slumps on her cross, suddenly very light-headed as she rapidly bleeds out.

“Thank you,” Marcella cries, as the young man vanishes into the night, taking his light with him. An even darker envelope shrouds her as she rapidly descends into the welcoming embrace of death.

Her last thoughts are of the young man and what might have been.
 
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I am honoured that the little pictorial offering on another thread has inspired you Marcella.

It's such a sad story. I always find stories of betrayed love and unjust punishment like this to be so tragic. A Cinderella story but without the happy ending.
 
Part 2.

Her brother began speaking, condemning Marcella as an ungrateful servant – a slave actually – who had betrayed the kindness of his and his sibling’s parents. He pointed towards her, stabbing with his finger, as she stood naked and exposed in front of the crowd. Their parents had graciously made Marcella part of their family but she had cruelly betrayed them – the fondly-remembered senator and his lovely wife – for her own selfish and wicked gain! Other conspirators had already been caught and executed, but Marcella was the last. It had taken nearly two years for the truth came out! The final proof was the fact that Marcella had tried to flee. Only a guilty person flees, he argued. Marcella, the sister they thought they knew and loved was in fact a viper, a deadly serpent who struck at the heart of their family! And she would not be allowed to get off with a quick and easy death! No! She would be crucified which was the only justice such an unredeemable act deserved.

Marcella tried to protest, shouting it wasn’t true, but the energized crowd was ready to see such a lovely young woman crucified. They shouted her down. Marcella looked over at her sisters, standing by her brothers, shouting curses at her as she was dragged to the cross and thrown down upon it. How could you, she thought? My sisters! We grew up together! I loved you! How could you do this to me?

Marcella could not find it in her heart to curse the family she once thought loved her. She was too numb and terrified as her arms and legs are pulled over the wood. She tensed her body, crying loudly, as the point of a nail is pressed into one wrist, and then the other. She looks down her body, between her heaving, pillowed breasts, as two leering men pull her legs to the sides, exposing her pussy to the crowd.

“See! The guilty bitch does not even beg for mercy,” shouts her brother standing over her. He looks down with a sneer on his lips. Marcella can only soundlessly ask why? Why?

“Proceed,” he commands.

Simultaneously, each huge spike is driven through her flesh and into the wood. Marcella’s body jerks in agony as the spikes are driven. The first blows pierce her wrists and embed the spikes. Half a dozen more blows pound each nail deep into the wood. Marcella faints but revives as a bucket of water is thrown over her.

“Don’t let her pass out,” shouts her brother. “I want her to feel all of this!”

Marcella’s spread legs are bent and her feet positioned on the upright, right foot over left foot. She feels the tip of the foot nail pressed between the bones of her foot. She sees the hammer fall but closes her eyes as she screams. The agony is even greater than when her wrists were nailed as the huge nail is driven between the bones and tendons of her feet. It takes nearly a dozen blows to drive the nail and secure her feet. Marcella remains conscious throughout the process, screaming, and then piteously groaning as the horrific pain from her wounds intensifies, spreading like liquid fire through her body.

“Raise the cross,” comes the command.

Marcella screams as her cross is slowly raised. As she moves upward to a vertical position she can feel the drag and push of raw flesh on her nails as her body falls forward. Then, with a final lurch and a sudden, sickening drop that makes her full breasts bounce, the far end of her her cross is fixed into the hole dug for it. It teeters back and forth a bit as it is secured in place. Marcella is crucified! She looks down from her cross. She seems so high in the air it gives her a sense of vertigo. Her stomach rumbles and saliva suddenly fills her mouth. She heaves, trying to vomit, but there is nothing left in her stomach.

Now Marcella's full-throated screams fill the street as she feels the cruel bite of the nails. At first she hangs from her arms, her body tensed and rigid. She doesn’t want to move as any movement brings on spasms of searing agony. Then, without even thinking about it, she pushes up with her legs. The pain in her wrists is lessened a bit but the pain in her nailed feet intensifies to unimaginable fury. She faints and revives as sharp sticks are stuck into her breasts and armpits. As her lovely body writhes in agony the crowd hoots and jeers. Fiery humiliation burns through her as she knows her trembling breasts and exposed crotch are hungrily eyed by the crowd. She drops her head and hangs. Soon, the regular rhythms of pushing up and dropping down take over as she desperately tries to breathe, despite the awful agonies moving on the cross brings.

The day drags by. At some point someone put a ladder against the back of her cross and climbed up to press a weave of thorns around her head. The scalp wounds bled freely. Soon her head and face are drippings with rivulets of fresh blood. They dry as the wounds crust over. The sun is high. Marcella is desperately thirsty, but for the first time she has a few lucid moments when she can reflect on the intolerably sad fact that she is crucified in front of the house in which she grew up. She played on these steps, these pavement stones, in the street before her. Hopscotch with her sisters, and jumping rope, drawing on the stones with soft pieces of charcoal and chalk that grumpy slaves had to scrub away. She looks around. Yes, over there, those are the bushes in which the girls would hide from their brothers, screeching and laughing when they were found. And there is where she fell down badly scraping her knees. She couldn’t see the gardens behind her but she remembered every secret place where giggling girls could play. All the memories come flooding back.

She cries remembering these good times, when her parents were still alive. One night especially was so memorable and still a sweet memory in her mind. It was just before her mother died. Marcella had become friends with a young boy maybe a year older than she. She was so innocent then as a young girl blossoming into a woman. She sneaked out at night to meet her shy young man behind the garden wall. By the light of a full moon they kissed, each nervously wondering what to do next. He then touched her, eagerly and with little experience in such matters. His hand placed on her breast and along her thigh. She was suddenly filled with thrills that left her breathless with feelings she couldn’t fully understand. As they kissed some more she heard male voices. It was her step-brothers come looking for her. They shouted her name. Marcella and her young beau stayed quiet, barely moving, but the brothers found them. They chased the boy off and told Marcella they had come looking for her because people were worried that she had vanished. Though annoyed at being found, she knew they were looking for her out of concern. They were so protective and loving back then! What had gone so terribly wrong?

Marcella realized that she was falsely charged and crucified to cover up a most abominable crime: patricide and matricide! Her step-brothers and sisters turned on her, using her to further their own evil ends. Why? What caused them to slide into such depravity that they actually raped and crucified their own sister! Her heart broke at the thought even as she hanged in her agony. And her sisters! What happened to them that they would go along with what happened? She always loved them, so much, even though they did not fully love her back. Why had they betrayed her? That was the cruelest cut.

By evening Marcella was exhausted. She knew she was dying and would probably not last the night. As the sun set she was enveloped in darkness. As the moon rose she heard voices shouting down the street. A crowd with torches and hastily procured weapons was advancing. They fanned out, attacking the homes of the aristocrats, torching them. Her own house, behind her, was raided and torched. She could hear screams and pleas for mercy. She couldn’t care anymore. Damn them all! Let them die! There was a revolution! The old aristocracy was targeted for death! Oh why, why could it not have arrived a couple of days sooner? She might have lived and had her own life!

Marcella looks down at the revolutionaries running by her cross. One young man stops in front, holding up his torch to see her better. She looks at him through tear-clouded eyes. She is suddenly humiliated again at her nakedness. Could it be? Is it him? The young boy who years ago she met in secret, who thrilled her so? Yes, it is him, now all grown up, and so handsome! He looks up at her so intently, his eyes so sad finding her crucified. Marcella can see that he is whispering her name.

“Marcella, is that you? Marcella?”

“Yes,” Marcella whispers back. “It’s me, it’s me.

He draws a knife and approaches her. “I’m so sorry,” he says.

He slashes deep across her inner thighs, up near her crotch, severing her femoral arteries. Marcella feels gushes of warm blood flowing down her legs. She slumps on her cross, suddenly very light-headed as she rapidly bleeds out.

“Thank you,” Marcella cries, as the young man vanishes into the night, taking his light with him. An even darker envelope shrouds her as she rapidly descends into the welcoming embrace of death.

Her last thoughts are of the young man and what might have been.
My only regret is that I was not present to see you carry cross and be nailed to it!!!
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Love, always...

Tree
 
My only regret is that I was not present to see you carry cross and be nailed to it!!!
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Love, always...

Tree

Aww, that's so sweet!. Thank you Tree! I wish you had been there too. It would have made a perfectly horrible day just that much more horrible. :p

And from the CF perspective, more horrible is actually a good thing, isn't it?;)

You know, it just dawned on me. Why do I have Marcella and her young man whispering at the end of the story? She's outside, hanging on cross, and he's running around with a bunch of revolutionaries. He should have shouted her name! I should have played up the "lost love" angle better.
 
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Hi, Marcella,

Great to see you back in form with this short but poignant story. This tale clearly wastes little if any time moving quickly to its sad but perhaps inevitable conclusion. A great quick crux fix is this. Again, very well done!
It seems, Marcella left us June 16, 2018.
I dont know, what happen.
 
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