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Hi everyone! Here's a story that I wanted to write for a while, and now I finally found the time to do it. So, please enjoy!

THE CHINESE PRISONER


1. The Task

The story began on a Monday morning. I arrived at 8 am at my office where I went through the files of my patients. Oh, please let me introduce myself first. My name is Pandora, like the lady from the Greek mythology, the one with the box. I’m not sure why my parents gave me that name. Did they think that I would bring a major calamity over humanity or what? Anyways, after High school I studied medicine and became a doctor. And then I got my first job as doctor in an institution for correction and punishment of female criminals. That’s about it what is to say about my life for the moment, let’s return to the events of my story.

Well, as I said before, I arrived at my office, and there was a knock on the door.

“Come in,” I said.

The door opened, and a man dressed in blue jeans and a leather jacket entered. He was about 20 years older than me, wore a cowboy hat and in addition, sunglasses. He was the only person I’ve ever met who seemed to wear shades 24/7 without being blind or an albino. Every time I saw him I had to think about that song by Cory Hart about sunglasses and nighttime.

“Dr. P,” he said, nodded slightly and tipped at the brim of his hat with one finger.

“Mr. T,” I replied and nodded back. We had our own code when we addressed to one another. In fact, Mr. T’s name was Tree, Tree like Bush, as he always used to say. “What can I do for you?”

“The Boss wants to see you,” he said.

“What? Right now?”

“Yep,” he said somewhat short-cut.

“Why?”

“How the hell should I know?” he snapped back, took a cigarette out of his pocket and put it in his mouth.

“Umm, I would rather appreciate it if you didn’t smoke in my office,” I said when he got his lighter out next.

Tree glanced at me with an indifferent look for some seconds, then shrugged his shoulders and lit his cigarette nonetheless. He inhaled, blew out a white smoke pillar and said: “Don’t be late, Dr. P. The Boss hates to be waiting.”


“The Boss” was a man in his late sixties. His real name was Admihoek. Close friends called him “Admi”, people like me however were supposed to address him only as “Sir”. His office was larger than some apartments I’ve seen, and it was filled with expensive furniture. When I entered he sat at his heavy desk of some noble wood, mahogany or some sort. At the right hand wall there was a big sofa, where Tree sat while smoking his cigarette. Next to the desk, a young woman knelt on the floor. She was stark naked, held her hands openly on her thighs, and was completely motionless like a statue made of marble. Eulalia, or Eul, as she was called by most of us, was the pet of the boss. Her only purpose was being there and looking pretty, at least that was what I believed.

“There you are, Doctor,” said the Boss. “Please, have a seat.”

I did as he said and noticed that Eul was following me with her eyes.

“How are you doing today?”

“Fine, Sir. I’m fine.”

“That’s good. Now tell me, how long have you been working here?”

“Five years, Sir.”

“Five years!” exclaimed the Boss and laughed. “How the time goes by… And you like your job?”

“Yes, Sir.”

“Well, whoever says he doesn’t like to see naked ladies every day certainly is a liar,” remarked Tree. The Boss laughed even louder, and for a second there was a smile even on Eul’s lips.

“Now, let me tell you why I called you,” said the Boss. “You’ve heard about the suicide bombing last month?”

“Yes.”

It would have been strange if someone has not heard about it. A bus exploded in the city center. Many people died, a lot more were severely injured. The FBI and the ATF got involved and found evidence of a suicide bomber. The big question was if there was a group behind the case.

“They’ve arrested a friend of this bomber,” explained the Boss. “She’s been found guilty and will be publicly crucified in two weeks from now. At this very moment, she’s on her way to this place. Now, I want you to get close to her and find out if there are more people involved.”

“But why me?” I asked. “Tree is the guy for interrogations. I’m only a doctor, I’m not even a psychologist.”

“But you have an advantage no one in this room has: You’re a Chinese, and so is she.”

“My parents are Chinese, I was born in Europe.”

“That’s not the point, there is a link between you and her… Use that opportunity. Well, what do you say?”

I thought about it for a while, and then I nodded.

“Okay, glad to hear we have a deal,” said the Boss. “I expect updates on a regular base. And remember: time is ticking…”

“Yes, Sir, I’ll do my best.”

As I went out, the Boss handed me the file of the new prisoner. Her name was on the front page: Yupar.

TO BE CONTINUED
 
Hi everyone! Here's a story that I wanted to write for a while, and now I finally found the time to do it. So, please enjoy!

THE CHINESE PRISONER


1. The Task

The story began on a Monday morning. I arrived at 8 am at my office where I went through the files of my patients. Oh, please let me introduce myself first. My name is Pandora, like the lady from the Greek mythology, the one with the box. I’m not sure why my parents gave me that name. Did they think that I would bring a major calamity over humanity or what? Anyways, after High school I studied medicine and became a doctor. And then I got my first job as doctor in an institution for correction and punishment of female criminals. That’s about it what is to say about my life for the moment, let’s return to the events of my story.

Well, as I said before, I arrived at my office, and there was a knock on the door.

“Come in,” I said.

The door opened, and a man dressed in blue jeans and a leather jacket entered. He was about 20 years older than me, wore a cowboy hat and in addition, sunglasses. He was the only person I’ve ever met who seemed to wear shades 24/7 without being blind or an albino. Every time I saw him I had to think about that song by Cory Hart about sunglasses and nighttime.

“Dr. P,” he said, nodded slightly and tipped at the brim of his hat with one finger.

“Mr. T,” I replied and nodded back. We had our own code when we addressed to one another. In fact, Mr. T’s name was Tree, Tree like Bush, as he always used to say. “What can I do for you?”

“The Boss wants to see you,” he said.

“What? Right now?”

“Yep,” he said somewhat short-cut.

“Why?”

“How the hell should I know?” he snapped back, took a cigarette out of his pocket and put it in his mouth.

“Umm, I would rather appreciate it if you didn’t smoke in my office,” I said when he got his lighter out next.

Tree glanced at me with an indifferent look for some seconds, then shrugged his shoulders and lit his cigarette nonetheless. He inhaled, blew out a white smoke pillar and said: “Don’t be late, Dr. P. The Boss hates to be waiting.”


“The Boss” was a man in his late sixties. His real name was Admihoek. Close friends called him “Admi”, people like me however were supposed to address him only as “Sir”. His office was larger than some apartments I’ve seen, and it was filled with expensive furniture. When I entered he sat at his heavy desk of some noble wood, mahogany or some sort. At the right hand wall there was a big sofa, where Tree sat while smoking his cigarette. Next to the desk, a young woman knelt on the floor. She was stark naked, held her hands openly on her thighs, and was completely motionless like a statue made of marble. Eulalia, or Eul, as she was called by most of us, was the pet of the boss. Her only purpose was being there and looking pretty, at least that was what I believed.

“There you are, Doctor,” said the Boss. “Please, have a seat.”

I did as he said and noticed that Eul was following me with her eyes.

“How are you doing today?”

“Fine, Sir. I’m fine.”

“That’s good. Now tell me, how long have you been working here?”

“Five years, Sir.”

“Five years!” exclaimed the Boss and laughed. “How the time goes by… And you like your job?”

“Yes, Sir.”

“Well, whoever says he doesn’t like to see naked ladies every day certainly is a liar,” remarked Tree. The Boss laughed even louder, and for a second there was a smile even on Eul’s lips.

“Now, let me tell you why I called you,” said the Boss. “You’ve heard about the suicide bombing last month?”

“Yes.”

It would have been strange if someone has not heard about it. A bus exploded in the city center. Many people died, a lot more were severely injured. The FBI and the ATF got involved and found evidence of a suicide bomber. The big question was if there was a group behind the case.

“They’ve arrested a friend of this bomber,” explained the Boss. “She’s been found guilty and will be publicly crucified in two weeks from now. At this very moment, she’s on her way to this place. Now, I want you to get close to her and find out if there are more people involved.”

“But why me?” I asked. “Tree is the guy for interrogations. I’m only a doctor, I’m not even a psychologist.”

“But you have an advantage no one in this room has: You’re a Chinese, and so is she.”

“My parents are Chinese, I was born in Europe.”

“That’s not the point, there is a link between you and her… Use that opportunity. Well, what do you say?”

I thought about it for a while, and then I nodded.

“Okay, glad to hear we have a deal,” said the Boss. “I expect updates on a regular base. And remember: time is ticking…”

“Yes, Sir, I’ll do my best.”

As I went out, the Boss handed me the file of the new prisoner. Her name was on the front page: Yupar.

TO BE CONTINUED
OMG! I'm just half-chinese but this starting makes me exciting :)
 
Thanks for your likes. And now, the continuation.

2. First Encounter

The security-transport with Prisoner Yupar, No. 89734, arrived at early afternoon. Like all the unlucky ladies here, Yupar went through a number of standard procedures:

- Notification of name, age, height, weight etc.

- Confiscation of all private clothes and underwear.

- Cavity search for contrabands. Now some of you might think that I enjoy this part very much. But truth is, it just a part of my job, and I would do it without too many thoughts it.

- And last, but not least, they get to shower.

Afterwards the prisoners get an orange jumpsuit and are escorted to their cells. In Yupar’s case however, I had her brought into one of the interrogation rooms, still naked, as prisoners on death row were not allowed to wear any clothes. So there she was sitting on one of the chairs, had her legs pulled close to her body and her arms wrapped around them. When I entered, she lifted her head which she had rested against her knees and looked at me. She had bright, sparkling eyes, with a slight touch of defiance and fearlessness. She stared at me as I took another chair and sat down.

“You again…” she said.

“Yes, me again,” I replied.

“What do you want? More tests? More groping of my tits?”

“No,” I said. “I just want to talk.”

“About what?”

“About anything you want,” I said. “Like, is there anything I can do for you now?”

“Oh yeah, how about some clothes?” she asked.

“I’m sorry I can’t help you with that. Those are the rules for prisoners.”

“But I’ve seen others wearing these jumpsuits…”

“Yeah, but they’re staying longer than you,” I said. It was supposed to be funny, but I realized it wasn’t the moment it came out of my mouth.

Then there was this utter silence.

“I can bring you a blanket if you’re cold…” I said.

“I’m not cold, you stupid!” said Yupar and stared at me. “How would you feel if you had to be naked all the time?”

“Okay, I will see what I can do. Maybe we could make an exception, but I have to talk to my boss first.”

“Thanks for your efforts,” she said.

Then there was silence again.

“By the way, what name is ‘Yupar’?” I asked, trying to take back up the conversation.

“What name is ‘Pandora’?” she asked back.

“Well, that’s the lady from Greek mythology. You know, the one with the box…”

“Yes, I know. What I meant is, it’s a strange name for someone like you. You’re not even a lady…”

“That’s true.”

“I guess you were bullied a lot at school because of that name…”

“Actually not. Yes, there were some, but not that much. I had a happy childhood,” I said. “What about you? Do you want to tell me about your childhood?”

“You think that I had a violent father who beat and raped me as a kid, and that my mother neglected me and got drunk all the time, and that’s how I got to this step? I’m sorry to disappoint you, but I was happy, too,” Suddenly there was sadness in her voice.

“Are your parents still alive?”

“Yes.”

“Do they know about your situation?”

“I don’t think so.”

“Do you want me or someone else to inform them?”

“Hell no! It would probably break their hearts if they knew…”

“Do you have any siblings?”

“Yes, a brother. He’s 17 now, a good boy.”

She pressed her face against her thighs, and after a while I realized her body was shaking. So I waited, until after a few minutes she looked back up. Her eyes were red.

“Are you okay?” I asked.

She nodded and wiped over her cheeks.

“Fine, we’ll stop here and continue tomorrow. Is that okay with you?”

She nodded again. “I don’t really have a choice now, do I?”

“No, I guess not.”

Yupar stood up from her chair, and a warden came to escort her to her cell. From our conversation I got the impression that she was a caring young woman. She wasn't like someone who was able to help a terrorist killing people. I had to find out more…

TO BE CONTINUED

No Eul in this part...
 
Thanks for your likes. And now, the continuation.

2. First Encounter

The security-transport with Prisoner Yupar, No. 89734, arrived at early afternoon. Like all the unlucky ladies here, Yupar went through a number of standard procedures:

- Notification of name, age, height, weight etc.

- Confiscation of all private clothes and underwear.

- Cavity search for contrabands. Now some of you might think that I enjoy this part very much. But truth is, it just a part of my job, and I would do it without too many thoughts it.

- And last, but not least, they get to shower.

Afterwards the prisoners get an orange jumpsuit and are escorted to their cells. In Yupar’s case however, I had her brought into one of the interrogation rooms, still naked, as prisoners on death row were not allowed to wear any clothes. So there she was sitting on one of the chairs, had her legs pulled close to her body and her arms wrapped around them. When I entered, she lifted her head which she had rested against her knees and looked at me. She had bright, sparkling eyes, with a slight touch of defiance and fearlessness. She stared at me as I took another chair and sat down.

“You again…” she said.

“Yes, me again,” I replied.

“What do you want? More tests? More groping of my tits?”

“No,” I said. “I just want to talk.”

“About what?”

“About anything you want,” I said. “Like, is there anything I can do for you now?”

“Oh yeah, how about some clothes?” she asked.

“I’m sorry I can’t help you with that. Those are the rules for prisoners.”

“But I’ve seen others wearing these jumpsuits…”

“Yeah, but they’re staying longer than you,” I said. It was supposed to be funny, but I realized it wasn’t the moment it came out of my mouth.

Then there was this utter silence.

“I can bring you a blanket if you’re cold…” I said.

“I’m not cold, you stupid!” said Yupar and stared at me. “How would you feel if you had to be naked all the time?”

“Okay, I will see what I can do. Maybe we could make an exception, but I have to talk to my boss first.”

“Thanks for your efforts,” she said.

Then there was silence again.

“By the way, what name is ‘Yupar’?” I asked, trying to take back up the conversation.

“What name is ‘Pandora’?” she asked back.

“Well, that’s the lady from Greek mythology. You know, the one with the box…”

“Yes, I know. What I meant is, it’s a strange name for someone like you. You’re not even a lady…”

“That’s true.”

“I guess you were bullied a lot at school because of that name…”

“Actually not. Yes, there were some, but not that much. I had a happy childhood,” I said. “What about you? Do you want to tell me about your childhood?”

“You think that I had a violent father who beat and raped me as a kid, and that my mother neglected me and got drunk all the time, and that’s how I got to this step? I’m sorry to disappoint you, but I was happy, too,” Suddenly there was sadness in her voice.

“Are your parents still alive?”

“Yes.”

“Do they know about your situation?”

“I don’t think so.”

“Do you want me or someone else to inform them?”

“Hell no! It would probably break their hearts if they knew…”

“Do you have any siblings?”

“Yes, a brother. He’s 17 now, a good boy.”

She pressed her face against her thighs, and after a while I realized her body was shaking. So I waited, until after a few minutes she looked back up. Her eyes were red.

“Are you okay?” I asked.

She nodded and wiped over her cheeks.

“Fine, we’ll stop here and continue tomorrow. Is that okay with you?”

She nodded again. “I don’t really have a choice now, do I?”

“No, I guess not.”

Yupar stood up from her chair, and a warden came to escort her to her cell. From our conversation I got the impression that she was a caring young woman. She wasn't like someone who was able to help a terrorist killing people. I had to find out more…

TO BE CONTINUED

No Eul in this part...
How do u know I use to do things wzout letting know my parents ! ;)
 
Once again, thank you for the comments. And on we go!

3. Something’s wrong with the World Today

When I entered the Boss’s office the next morning, almost everything was the same as the day before. Mr. Tree was lingering on the sofa again. But this time he was in a half lying position while Eul knelt in front of him between his knees and fumbled with his fly. Both of them seemed so occupied with what they were doing that they totally ignored me.

“Good morning, doctor,” said the Boss with a smile. “How’re you doing today?”

“I’m fine.”

“Good. So what is your first impression on Prisoner No. 89734?” asked Admi.

“She’s healthy, good in shape, maybe a little bit defensive. But I think that’s just her way to hide her fear.”

“Yes, that could be the case,” said Admi. “Is there anything else you’ve found out?”

“Yes, her… her parents…” I began, but was distracted by a slurping sound coming from the direction of the sofa. I turned around and saw Eul’s head going up and down, while Tree stretched out on the sofa. “Do they really… have to do that here?” I asked.

Mr. Tree looked at me and grinned. “We could go to your office if you prefer…”

Admi ignored it and said: “Doctor, you were about to tell me something about the parents.”

“Yes, that’s right,” I said, trying to find tracks again. “Her parents are still alive, and she has a teenage brother.”

“Could anyone of them be involved, too?”

“Hard to say at this point, but I doubt it,” I said. I considered telling him about my doubts towards her guilt as well, but then I decided that it wasn’t the right time yet. I didn’t have any hints for her innocence. To be honest, I hardly knew her at that point.

“Anything else?”

“Ah yes, she wants to have some clothes…”

“Denied,” said the Boss without even thinking for a second. Then he added: “Come on, Doctor, what is that about? How many women have you seen crucified in the last five years?”

I didn’t answer, because I didn’t have to. I couldn’t remember anyway. Let’s just say, there were many.

“And how many allowed wearing clothes?” Admi continued.

“None.”

“Exactly. Go tell Prisoner No. 89734 that she came to the world naked, and that it’s the way she’s going to leave it!”

I don’t know why, but I wasn’t ready to accept the answer. So I said: “Sir, in this case, it could be beneficial for us too if we granted her that request.”

“How could that be?”

“It would be a sign of trust, and that would help her to open up to us. Isn’t it what we want?”

Admi sighed. “Fine, I’ll think about it. I like you, but you better don’t push it too hard. And I want to see some real results for it.”

“Yes, Sir, I won’t disappoint you.”

“Good, see you tomorrow then.”

Tree groaned while Eul got up, wiped over her mouth and took her place again next to Admi’s desk. Tree looked at me and gave me a pat on the back and said with a big grin on his face: “You need to loosen up, Dr. P. Maybe it would help if Eul gave you head. What do you think?”

“No thanks.”

“Well that’s too bad. Anyway, I’ll see you around, must get back to work.”


Half an hour later one of the wardens knocked at my door. His name was Smith, and he was a muscular, 34-year old man with short hair and a receding chin.

“Yes?”

“Here are the clothes for prisoner Yupar,” he said holding a bundle in his hand.

“Thanks. You can just leave it on my table.”

“Whatever,” he muttered. When he was about to leave the room, he stopped at the door and turned back around.

“Is there anything else I can do for you, Mr. Smith?” I asked.

“May I speak openly?” he asked.

“Sure,” I said.

“You should have turned that Chinese bitch down…” he said bluntly.

“Uh… what?”

“That’s my opinion. I mean, she has to accept the rules here like everyone else, too. She’s not comfortable being naked? Well, guess what? That’s not our problem. I don’t give a damn about her feelings. Did she care about the feelings of the victims and their families?” he asked furiously. “And I think that she’s getting away much too easy… Did you know that there was a method of execution in ancient China where the condemned was cut to pieces alive? I heard that it was used on people who committed crimes against the emperor or the state or both. That seems more appropriate for that slut. Something’s seriously wrong with the world if we cared for the rights of people like her.”

“Are you done now?” I asked.

“Yeah, I just had to let it out,” he said and left.


Yupar was lying over the table with her head resting on her forearms. She seemed to be asleep, but when I came closer, she sat back straight. Her black hair was unkempt and hanging into her face, and she seemed hardly able to keep her eyes open.

“Had a tough night?” I asked.

“What gave it away? My delightful appearance?” she asked. “My head feels like someone’s kicking it real hard, and I had to throw up this morning.”

“Might be your nerves,” I explained. “You’re not the only one feeling this way before the final day. I’ll give you something so you can sleep.”

“Okay thanks,” she said.

Then I put the orange uniform for prisoners on the table and said: “Congratulations, you’re the first woman on death row to be allowed to get dressed.”

She slowly reached out for it, as if she was expecting me to take it away again, as a bad joke so to say. Then she unfolded it, stood up and put it on. Once again I noticed she had a very beautiful and well-shaped body. She was slim, and her breasts were not big but very nicely shaped. Her skin was smooth, her hands and feet were well-manicured.

When she was dressed, she sat back down and asked: “Why are you doing all this for me?”

“It’s my job, and you’re my patient.”

“But I’ll be dead soon anyway, so why do you even bother?”

“Because you’re not dead yet, and as long as you’re alive, I bother. We all have to live until we die.”

“Huh, you’re a funny guy, and a wise one, too…”

“I take that as a compliment,” I said. “What about you? Do you value life?”

“Yes, I do.”

“Really?”

“Of course, you might not believe me, but I like my life as it is… was… whatever. I had my friends and my dreams.”

“Did you have many friends?”

“There were some.”

“What about a boy-friend?”

“Not at the moment.”

“But you had one…”

“I’m 28 and not a virgin anymore, if you had that in mind.”

“Was the suicide-bomber your boyfriend?”

“That’s none of your business.”

“I’ll take that as a ‘yes’.”

Yupar said nothing.

“I don’t get it, if you say that you value life, why did you help him destroying the life of others?” I asked.

“I didn’t want to destroy the life of anyone.”

“No? But you helped somebody building a bomb.”

“Yeah, but I didn’t want to blow up the bus with people inside. I thought he would do it at night when the bus was empty.”

“Why?”

“We wanted to put a signal.”

“A signal for what?”

“You wouldn’t understand.”

I had to admit I slowly lost my patience. “You know what? I don’t believe you. You’re either lying or hiding something.”

“Well then go fuck yourself,” said Yupar and stood up. “You told me yesterday that it was up to me what we talk about. And now you’re here asking all these questions. So who’s the liar? Warden, we’re done here.”

The warden came and led her away. I remained for some time. I had to come up with something different. This was getting harder than I expected.

TO BE CONTINUED
 
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