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The Contest

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While looking at old backup folders found this story I wrote long ago, I think 10 years ago
I hope my writing has improved a little since then.
I would love to know how the girls that often get into trouble in this forum would do in a similar dilema

The Contest




six young female bodies dancing in the night, at the light of the fire. Chants where heard, then male voices, yelling orders. And screams, female screams, trying to escape, to get away, but they were surrounded, and it didn't take long before all six of them fell in the hands of the guards.


Their hands were tied behind her backs, were put in line and another long rope was passed around the neck of each woman.

Fear in her faces, and breathing heavily, partly for the sprint trying to flee, part for the terror they were felling. They all knew to well where were they going, and what would happen, tied and fully surrounded by guards there was no escape.


The guards led them to the prison, the heavy doors closed behind them, they knew the only way to get out there was to be executed.


The women were put each one in a separate cell and left there for the night. their sleep interrupted several times by the agonized screams coming from the nearby torture chamber.


In the morning the door opened and several men entered the hall in front of the cells.


"Welcome" the High Inquisitor said. "It's good to know your friend Lisa gave us accurate information on where to find you, took us four days to get that information out of her. Too bad she died shortly after that"



"As you were caught in fraganti we don't need your confession to the charge of witchcraft, we can proceed directly to your public execution. As you know for the charge of witchcraft you must suffer the most vile and horrible death an evil mind can imagine, but holy men as we are we cannot provide you with the just payment for your crimes, that's why we have decided that to punish you we need to rely on the most perverted people in the town: yourselves!".



"It's very simple: each of you will think on the most slow and painful death you can imagine, we will then judge the first and last place, the winner will be set free, the one in the last place will suffer the death described by the winner, with some enhancements we can add from the other submissions, even her own one. The remaining will watch the execution and get ideas for next week when we will repeat the same procedure".



"We will judge the variety and originality of the punishment, as well as if it's a good example for the crowd. We have a well equiped dungeon, and very able torture masters, so let your imagination go wild. You have until the night, when we will be talking to each of you in private".


The Contest - part 2


In the morning all the prisoners where chained with their hands behind their back, another chain restraining the ankles. They were led to the main hall to hear the sentence.


Once they were standing in front of the big wooden desk in the center of the room, the Inquisitor spoke:


"Silvia. You have made the town a real good telling us how to deal with the most perverse criminals, you are free to go after watching the execution".


She couldn't contain a sigh of relief knowing that her life was spared, but then felt guilt by thinking on what would that freedom cost to one of her friends.


"Maria. You will be given another chance next time, you will witness the execution, and then be returned to your cell".


"Rose. You too will have an opportunity for redemption next week".


"Catalina. You too".


"and also..."- He looked in the eyes of the remaining girls enjoying the


moment- " Cecilia".


"That means that you, Isabella, are condemned to death, your former accomplishes being the architects of your demise. the sentence will be carried immediately. I will leave the details as a surprise, let's just say that every inch of your body will pay for your sins during the next six hours or more".


"Guards! take her away and prepare her. And take the other to their special seats!"


Isabella started crying and screaming while the guards dragged her to another room where they removed all her clothing, and tied her spread eagled to a table.


The barber was summoned in the room, he then started to remove all hair from her body. The poor woman was trembling in fear and started to cry.


"Save that for when we really start working on your body" one of the guards said, followed by the laughter of his comrades. Meanwhile the barber had just finished the armpits and was working on the crotch area. "No please, what are you doing?" the girl cried. Finally he produced some scissors and started removing the hair from her head also. After that a funnel was forced inside her mouth and she was forced to swallow a bitter liquid. "It's an stimulant, will keep you from fainting so frequently during your execution, I've been told it also makes your body more aware of the pain" He said as the last drops where put down the funnel.


"Ready, we can now proceed with your sentence, aren't you eager to get rid of your sins?. Bring the Horse!"


The poor girl watched as the torture device was dragged into the room. It was shaped like a horse indeed, with wheels instead of hooves. It was made of wood, with a very sharp edge, in the edge were 2 holes about 3 inches in diameter each. "This will be your vehicle to the execution platform, you will be riding this while we give you a tour for the town. But before we put you in there's something we still need to do".


Having said that he put his fingers in a bucket full of lard put them inside the poor woman's anus and vagina, who turned red with embarrassment. After that she was untied from the table and her wrist quickly tied behind her back; she was utterly helpless while two guards grabbed her by the legs and put her on the


horse's sharp edge so she rested over the two orifices. She screamed as the hard wood dug deep between her legs. Wasting no time both guards tied a rope to each of her ankles and tied the other end to the lower part of the horse, the ropes were then tightened, bringing her further down on the horse as she screamed in response.


"You are almost ready, now just a little addition so you won't fall down". The guard then reached under the horse's body and started turning a handle, at once a rounded pole started raising from one of the holes in the horse and was pushing inside Isabella's ass. Another handle did the same for the other pole, the one directed at her pussy. Once he made sure both were well aligned he gave another turn to each handle, then another. both poles were about about 5 inches deep inside the girl's body by now. She screamed both on pain and despair knowing that this would be just the beginning.


Both handles were turned again slowly, causing more screams from the victim, the front pole was already starting to push her cervix, the other one rearranging her intestines. The guard stopped working on the front pole, and now just turned the rear one. One, two, three turns more, causing more pain than she had felt in her whole life It was already more than 15 inches inside. "We can make it come out of your mouth you know? but there are different plans for you." Having said that the horse was dragged out of the room into the courtyard, and outside to the streets.


A proclaimer was walking before her yelling "Hear ye, hear ye, come watch justice being done to the evil witch"


People looked out of the window, insulting the poor girl, throwing rotten fruits and even the contents of the chamber pot at her. Some were getting out of their homes and joining the grim procession. The journey continued trough the streets full of rocks and holes, each abrupt movement of the horse causing great pain to the woman whose voice competed with that of the proclaimer.


After about an hour of traveling every street in town they finally arrived at the execution platform, a lot of people were already gathered, Isabella could see her former friends in the first line, all of them chained except for Silvia, who didn't dare look her in the eyes.


At the platform were a gallows pole, ropes, a lot of strange looking devices and whips in a table. A hooded man wearing black clothes was directing two guards who where preparing a bed of coals.


The executioner made a sign to the guards, go then lowered the bars inside her body and released her from the horse, she was then dragged to the center of the platform and put face down. Her ankles where pulled behind her back and tied to her writs, then ropes were tied to her knees and pulled in different directions spreading her body.


The executioner then took three pear shaped devices of different sizes and approached the victim. He pulled her head by the hair, and when she screamed he stuck one of the pears inside her mouth, only the handle was protruding. He gave three turns to the handle, the device starting to expand inside her mouth, her muted screams reverberating through the metal intruder. He continued with the turning of the screw until it was impossible to move the device, the poor woman felt as if her jaw was about to break.


Having done that he moved between her legs, and putting the point of the biggest pear in the entrance of her vagina he started to push, even though the instrument was completely closed the insertion was painful, so big it was. He didn't expand it yet, but quickly repeated the operation with the remaining pear in her anus while muted screams came to her mouth.


Now with both pears inserted he started to turn the screws two turns each, and moving the device inside her. Then other turn and another probe until both were so tight that wouldn't move an inch and still he gave and additional half turn. All the while the woman was desperate crying and trying to beg for mercy, but only unintelligible sounds came out of her mouth, not that anybody would have shown any mercy to the witch.


The ropes on her knees where untied and she was dragged under the gallows pole. A double rope was lowered to the floor and each end tied to a ring in the handle of each of the pears in her crotch. Even the touching on the handles to tie the ropes gave her incredible pain. Now when they started to raise the rope again it was pure hellish agony as she felt as if her tender parts were being ripped apart. The windlass was turned slowly, each turn raising her a little more, each tick followed by a muted scream, and the yell of approval of the crowd.


After a few turns she was hanging completely by the pears, then the executioner went to the table to bring more instruments to further inflict pain to the condemned witch, he returned to his victim carrying a small vice like device, the inner parts of it full of spikes. He proceded to place it in her left breast and slowly turn the screws. The girl couldn't believe how they added even more pain to what she was already suffering, and feared that this wouldn't be the worst she would experience today.


Her generous sized breast was turning red as it was compressed and small drops of blood started to flow from where the spikes penetrated her skin. The same operation was repeated with the right tit, slowly, tears flowing freely from the poor woman's eyes.


After both vices were tightened he approached with two weights of about 10 Kg each and hanged them from the vices increasing the weight supported by her ass and pussy. Her breasts where stretched downwards and she just moaned, incapable of screaming.

As if the weight wasn't enough already he produced another weight, this one of 20 Kg, and attached it to the pear protuding from her mouth.


They left her hanging in her agony for an hour while they prepared the next tortures in her execution
 
The Contest - Part 3


Isabella was in great pain, the upside down position provided good blood flow to her brain making her well aware of every nerve in her body, the execution as it was right now was incredible painful, but she feared it would become worse when she heard the executioner walk behind her. She was surprised when he put a funnel in the pear stuck in her cunt in a hole specially designed for it.


The weight in her mouth forced her to look down, so she could only see feet moving around the platform as the executioner went to the brazier and returned, even if she had seen she wouldn't have been prepared for the sensations when he started pouring boiling water down the funnel. The funnel had a very small orifice so the water flew slowly, each drop filling her with misery , the inverted position assured that the hot liquid reached every corner of her intimate parts.


She felt relieved when he finally put the kettle down and started unscrewing the funnel, but that turned into panic when she felt the funnel being placed now in the other pear, the one in her posterior. She almost when mad with the pain when the scalding water was slowly put trough the funnel.

Again the steps went to the table with the torture instruments and returned, stoping at about 2 meters behind her. The torturer took a breath, then she heard a strange whistling and inmediatly pain exploded at her side. Then the whip landed on her belly, then on the exposed underside of her breast. The executioner methodically whipped her in every part of her body, he even managed to land some hits on her back despite her legs and arms being in the way. Hit after hit until she finally fell unconscious, red marks could be seen all over her body when they carefully lowered the ropes and untied her wrist and ankles. They managed to wake her up so she could see the executioner throwing salt water all over her wounds, after a minute or two she passed out again.



When she was awaken again the pear in her mouth was removed and a funnel placed in her mouth, her jaw muscles so weak that she couldn't resist as she was forced to drink more of the herbal stimulant. A heavy rectangular grill was placed next to her, it had two rings at the middle and two at the bottom, and it was all covered with nails. Two men grabbed her and put her on her back over the grid, the nails painfully biting her wounded flesh. Her hands where secured to the middle rings, and her feet on the others.


She then saw with pained eyes as another grill of the same size was carried by two men and put over her, this one with the nails pointing down, the weight of the metal frame was enough to sink the nails deep in her body. Nonetheless the


executioner secured four screws at each corned of the frames and turned the handles bringing the frames together effectively crushing her body as she screamed at the top of her lungs.


"Scream all you want, this is but the preparation for the real torture" said the executioner.



Meanwhile the coals were ready to provide a slow and constant fire. The girl just wanted the pain to end as the frame was raised by four men and carefully put over the fire, supported by two stone blocks. those blocks had a round hole
each that coincided exactly with a cylinder at the top and bottom of the grill, allowing for an easy rotation.


As she was with her back to the coals the executioner starting rubbing oil over the front part of her body, then the turned her and did the same to the other side "This will assure a slow roasting".



Slowly, for what seemed like hours to the woman the grid was turned, allowing one part of her body to cool down while the other roasted over the fire, her voice started to fail after so much screaming. After some turns the executioner rubbed some more oil to make sure she was cooked slowly.

After a while the grill itself started growing really hot, transferring the heat directly under her skin by the spikes piercing her body, and what perhaps caused more anguish was when the pears started to get hot also sending searing pain directly inside her most sensitive parts.


After a few hours it wasn't really clear if the woman was still alive as she stopped screaming, some people started leaving the square, while the guards led the frightened remaining girls back to the dungeon


The Constest - Part 4



The prisoners were led back to the dungeon, and left there until the end of the week to think on the punishment they would suggest next.


Two days before the sentence Cecilia killed herself in her cell banging her head against the stones of the wall. The remaining girls were restrained until no movement was posible the rest of the time, to avoid someone else trying to escape from their fate.


On the appointed day after having a private conversation with each woman, they were led again to the main chamber to hear the sentence, not knowing what would happen to them.


"As now there are just three of you left this is what will happen today" the inquisitor spoke.


"One of you, true to our word, will be set free. The second place will be sent to the main square for her execution. And as for the third place ..." - the girls wondered what fate could be worse than death by torture - "... she will make a great service to the kingdom. She will be kept here to serve as training and experimenting for our interrogators, and also to discover new fast healing methods. That will be for as many years as God wants to keep her alive."

The faces of the prisoners were horrified at hearing that, the though of being made suffer what they have witnessed Isabella suffer a week before, or worse, and time and time again for heavens know how many time sounded like an horrible nightmare, the woman comdemned to that would really wish she was the one sent to the execution platform.

"And now to the sentence..."


" Catalina! stand up." the man yelled " to witness the demise of your accomplice really spured your imagination, you are free to go after the execution".

Catalina left out a breath she had been containing from the start of the speech with a sigh of relief. While the other sobbed knowing that whatever their fate it would be extremely painful.


"Maria, you are to be taken to the main square inmediatly, your life ends today" and pointing at Rose he added: "And take that thing away back to her cell, and restrain her well, we don't want her attempting to end her own life". Rose started criyng, how could she be able to survive that kind of life, but the fact was that she didn't have any other option, she was absolutely hopeless in the hands of those cuel interrogators.


Maria was prepared the same way Isabella was a week before, she went for the whole procedure with a stoic calmness, knowing worse things could have happened to her today, but as they were reaching the execution platform she forgot all about the other woman fate and started worring about her own.


There was an horizontal wooden frame, from each corner a hung a chain, each of these chains could be pulled taut. It was in fact a rack, but where the victim was on the air. the frame was about 1.5 meters above the platform, so the executioners could get easy access to every inch of her body. At the side of the frame was a table with several devices, and in front of it a windlass whose purpose she could only wonder.


She was led down on the floor inside the frame, and her wirst and ankles quickly secured with the chains. Next the executioners and his assistants proceeded to pull the chains, raising her from the floor. Another few turns and she was sraight, leaving no slack in her body. But they continued pulling the chains, slowly , one turn at a time, stretching her to the limit, at first it was just an inconfortable sensation, but soon the pain started in every joint of ther body, finally they stopped when her arms seemed to be about to pop out of their sockets. The poor woman screamed all the 30 minutes this procedure took.


Now that they were sure she couldn't even move a muscle the executioner prepared for the next part of her torment: skinning.


He started by using a very sharp knife to just barely cut her skin, then move the knife under her skin and lift it a little so with the pincers he could grab it and slowly peel it off like he would a fruit. He could do so with very little blood flow so there was no need to worry for the victim diying too soon.



First it was the left arm, cutting around the wirst, then just above the shoulder, and next a long line along the arm he was able to remove it in one piece, next was the other arm, then the legs were treated in a similar fashion, all this with the ear shattering screams of the poor victim. Her limbs in a deep red color in constrast with the rest of her body.. but not for long, as the executioner now proceeded to make a cut just above her pubic zone, and follow that line under her body to end it in the same place. then does the same just below her breast, then pulls skinning her abdomen and back in just one go.


The breasts received a special treatment, each one skinned separately, and the executioner took special care to do this very slow savoring each howling of the vicitm. Next was the rest of the torso, making a cut just under her neck.


The executioner ordered the victim be given something to drink, he wanted her strong for the next torments. After she was given some stimulants to keep her awake the executioner grabbed a metal hook from the table and aproached the torture frame. With great skill he inserted the hook into her rectum, and then proceeded to move and spin it all the while the victim's screams were getting louder even.

Then he pulled the hook with great strenght, and out it came with some of her intestines. then continued to pull until they were at the windlass. Then an assistant came with a some nails and a hammer and they nailed her entrails to the wooden winlass. The woman couldn't believe what they were doing, or what she tought they would do next.

And right she was, for the executioner slowly started to rotate the windlass disembowling her in the most cruel way. At least it didn't take too long for her to be free of her suffering mortal body.
 
I've given 'likes' for the general concept of this story, the choosing part. The actual proceedures are a bit grim for me.
 
well, the accused themselves were the ones that selected the torments, no one would to choose something too mild, or perhaphs one would? comdemning herself to an horrible death to not be the mind behind some extreme cruelty being perpetrated?

maybe I have to talk judge Admi into putting this into action, except perhaps the part of being set free, maybe that would be changed to a peaceful life grinding coffee
 
yes, it's a fiendishly ingenious idea DM - but I agree with Old Slave,
I think the over-detailed descriptions of the tortures
don't make for such thrilling reading -
like you, I've learnt that building up the tension
and giving hints and a few key details of the torture,
along with more of the victim's responses
(external - struggling, facial expressions,
internal - what she sees, hears, feels...)
makes for more erotic S-M writing.
 
it is some old work I found, and posted as is, typos and all. I remember that after writing the first chapter I tought an even number would not work down the line so I wrote off one of the captives in a single line.

But perhaps the idea could work for a nice roleplay...
 
that's a thought - we could play it as a game here
if we can persuade some of the other Cruxettes to join in,
I'd be happy to try my luck -
we'd each have to submit our ideas for cruel punishments
(to you by PM?) then you (and other guys who you invite)
decide who's the winner and who's the loser,
and carry on till there's only one of us left :devil: :devil: :devil:
 
Cruxettes?
do you perform at the Radio City Music Hall?
 
DarknessMonger,

Boy, you really know how to hurt a girl. I can well imagine that death by disembowelment doesn't happen but rarely around here. Curiously interesting writing.
 
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