and eulalia what shall we do?Here is a manip and a little poem. Sorry, only in german!
I'm game if U R Hansi!and eulalia what shall we do?
Here's an attempt at the first 4 stanzas:
ALETTA hangs on the cross – it's already a couple of hours.
Now it's time for the Torturers, and she's trembling there, afraid.
They want to know, "Where are your tribe skulking in their camp?"
So far she hasn't told them, the German lass stays stum.
As she hauls on her arms, she moans, they're cruelly wrenched,
Rough ropes are holding her, they've left her nothing on,
Her bare legs spread so wide reveal her shame,
Nailed fast to the Crossbeam, she can find no support.
Over her thick pussy-bush there hangs a scrap of cloth,
Otherwise she's naked – that's just right for the thugs,
Young, sturdy, strapping girl-flesh – men's flesh already hot!
Legs, loins, belly, breasts, all giving them what they crave.
Her breasts weigh down her bust unnaturally,
It's hard for her to breathe, so tightly is she tugged,
Through her white flesh they see her ribs, her abdomen's pressed flat,
They pinch her legs, her loins, her tits, and cruelly mock and jeer.
Yes, the dictionaries tiptoe around it without getting to the point -pussy bush nice founding but he means it much hornier
not probably but sure but as i said nice finding send you tomorrow the other in english stanzasYes, the dictionaries tiptoe around it without getting to the point -
I thought it probably meant c***,
but 'pussy-bush' sound nice and picks up the literal sense of the German elements.
me toooo girlie and i'm very busy with the next 5 no 6Thanks - yes, I've tried to convey the imagery and 'sensation' of the poem rather than translating precisely.
I quite enjoy playing with rhyme and rhythm (as in E's Grin-Songs and some in E's Book),
but when I do that in a 'translation' I end up with quite a different poem,
so I've just used a simple, flexible stress-measured line for this one.
We hope to have more of Aletta up quite soon!
So tight inside their victim's bum they force the burning iron.
Shrieking shrill with the savage pain, she tugs and tugs at the nails.
On her thighs, her belly, quivering breasts, the torture-tools burn brands,
Till she hangs exhausted on the Cross, by blessed oblivion saved.
I hate starting new Threads, I don't like creating unnecessary wasted space. I just did not know where to place this little poem I just wrote (please cut me some slack, it just popped into my head, and I wrote it in about 5 min. It is close to bedtime). I am nowhere near the many great writers on this forum (Tree, Eulalia, LittleSiss,Barbaria,Pkindenhaag...etc). You guys and gals inspire me to try a poem myself . Depending on the response, I may add more on this same Thread, therefore I won't have to start another thread. Ok....here goes...........
My lover, meet me at lands end at twilight time
At the cliff where the rocks meet the crashing sea
We'll make love under a starless sky
Take my hand
Don't be afraid
Tonight will last forever
Meet me at lands end where the rocks and sea lie below
Let's make love like never before
Afterwards we'll take a journey into the place
Where the living meet the dead
I hate starting new Threads, I don't like creating unnecessary wasted space. I just did not know where to place this little poem I just wrote (please cut me some slack, it just popped into my head, and I wrote it in about 5 min. It is close to bedtime). I am nowhere near the many great writers on this forum (Tree, Eulalia, LittleSiss,Barbaria,Pkindenhaag...etc). You guys and gals inspire me to try a poem myself . Depending on the response, I may add more on this same Thread, therefore I won't have to start another thread. Ok....here goes...........
My lover, meet me at lands end at twilight time
At the cliff where the rocks meet the crashing sea
We'll make love under a starless sky
Take my hand
Don't be afraid
Tonight will last forever
Meet me at lands end where the rocks and sea lie below
Let's make love like never before
Afterwards we'll take a journey into the place
Where the living meet the dead
Don't do yourself down, Hondoboot! That is excellent, and I for one enjoyed it greatly!I hate starting new Threads, I don't like creating unnecessary wasted space. I just did not know where to place this little poem I just wrote (please cut me some slack, it just popped into my head, and I wrote it in about 5 min. It is close to bedtime). I am nowhere near the many great writers on this forum (Tree, Eulalia, LittleSiss,Barbaria,Pkindenhaag...etc). You guys and gals inspire me to try a poem myself . Depending on the response, I may add more on this same Thread, therefore I won't have to start another thread. Ok....here goes...........
My lover, meet me at lands end at twilight time
At the cliff where the rocks meet the crashing sea
We'll make love under a starless sky
Take my hand
Don't be afraid
Tonight will last forever
Meet me at lands end where the rocks and sea lie below
Let's make love like never before
Afterwards we'll take a journey into the place
Where the living meet the dead