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Hondoboot2 said:
I hate starting new Threads, I don't like creating unnecessary wasted space. I just did not know where to place this little poem I just wrote (please cut me some slack, it just popped into my head, and I wrote it in about 5 min. It is close to bedtime). I am nowhere near the many great writers on this forum (Tree, Eulalia, LittleSiss,Barbaria,Pkindenhaag...etc). You guys and gals inspire me to try a poem myself . Depending on the response, I may add more on this same Thread, therefore I won't have to start another thread. Ok....here goes...........

My lover, meet me at lands end at twilight time
At the cliff where the rocks meet the crashing sea
We'll make love under a starless sky
Take my hand
Don't be afraid
Tonight will last forever
Meet me at lands end where the rocks and sea lie below
Let's make love like never before
Afterwards we'll take a journey into the place
Where the living meet the dead
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Great to see this Hondo and such an interesting analogy.:beer:
 
Now for the conclusion:

Now, after this orgasmic ecstasy
Comes the realization that this fantasy
Must come to a conclusion we both wish
Come my love, let's embrace as we
begin the final journey
The journey into the darkness to meet the dead
The rocks and sea await us below.
Come, let's leave this life, and enter a new world
The world of the dead
;)
 
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Hondoboot2 said:
I hate starting new Threads, I don't like creating unnecessary wasted space. I just did not know where to place this little poem I just wrote (please cut me some slack, it just popped into my head, and I wrote it in about 5 min. It is close to bedtime). I am nowhere near the many great writers on this forum (Tree, Eulalia, LittleSiss,Barbaria,Pkindenhaag...etc). You guys and gals inspire me to try a poem myself . Depending on the response, I may add more on this same Thread, therefore I won't have to start another thread. Ok....here goes...........

My lover, meet me at lands end at twilight time
At the cliff where the rocks meet the crashing sea
We'll make love under a starless sky
Take my hand
Don't be afraid
Tonight will last forever
Meet me at lands end where the rocks and sea lie below
Let's make love like never before
Afterwards we'll take a journey into the place
Where the living meet the dead
Click to expand...
Hondoboot2 said:
Now for the conclusion:

Now, after this orgasmic ecstasy
Comes the realization that this fantasy
Must come to a conclusion we both wish
Come my love, let's embrace as we
begin the final journey
The journey into the darkness to meet the dead
The rocks and sea await us below.
Come, let's leave this life, and enter a new world
The world of the dead
;)
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Dark, gloomy...atmospheric...seductive

A contemporary E. A. Poe...
 
The Hammer Man (a Chaotic Poem)

(I have a feeling this only works in English. Apologies for the inconvenience. )

I am the one hammer man

And I hammer all that I can

Your wrist and your feet

Oh, your screams are so sweet

Your pain is part of the-


No, it's they whole point, isn't it?


This wouldn't happen to an innocent

They're usually sliced by a knife.

But only the worst get this punishment

And for that, we take your-


Who am I kidding? I do this go fun


I am no angel of justice.

I do not worship laws of man

I despise nothing about you

I even believe you pretty

I do love naked females

I take joy in their misery

I see them tied up in irons

I would bet that they can't get away

When they try to hide their bodies

And I laugh for their future pain

And so does Archie and Sebastian.


Those are the names of my two hammers.


At night I lay Archie by my bed

Of course, after washing away the red.

And then before sleep Sebastian and I play, while reflecting on what we accomplished to-


But that is one piece of information too many.


Just think on this pretty girl.

As you lay splayed on your cross.

That I'll hammer your down twice

First with my hammer, than with my massive gigantic Cock!
 
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