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Dear folks. This is my first story for the cruxforum. I took one of many fantasies that are in my head and wrote a story in german language. Then I had a translation program "translate" the whole thing. Oh my dear! It is not real English what came up. I had to correct the write word by word. Even then - I´m pretty sure - the write is full with mistakes. My English ist not so very good.
So please excuse my "Wronglish". I hope you will enjoy my first story. Because it is very long, I had to split it in four chapters. I will try to put every day one chapter online.
Yours
Sassi
The Forbidden Drink - Chapter 1
(for LittleSis)
The eighteen year old Kathrin visited the medieval market at the Porta Nigra. She attended almost every market, which took place at the landmark of her hometown Trier. Medieval markets pleased her very well. She loved to stroll between the stalls and look at all the beautiful things that were offered for sale by the dealers.
She walked through the right gate of the old Roman building. The Porta Nigra raised massive and dark into the sky. The name Black Gate was the right name for the building. Hundreds of years ago the stones might have been bright. Today they were dirty and dark. The building looked almost menacing.
The Romans had built it about two hundred years after Jesus' birth. At that time, Trier had been called Treverum and it had been the second largest city in the world to Rome.
The Romans ... Whenever Kathrin looked at the Porta Nigra, she had to think of the little fantasy story that did go around in her head, since she was a school girl. At age eleven, she had dreamed at night that she was a poor beggar girl in the time of the Romans. She had entered the palace of the roman prefect of Treverum and had stolen a loaf of bread. The guards had caught her and they brought her to the place beside the Porta Nigra and crucified her.
This dream went around for a long time in Kathrins head. Again and again she played in her head the little movie of the barefoot beggar girl in his ragged tunic, which was towed by brutal guards over the pavement lay to the large wooden cross. They took the ragged tunic away from Kathrin, layed her on the cross and than a roman soldier came with an hammer in one hand and four long nails in the other...
Kathrin shook hear head. It was the year 2014 and she was no longer a little schoolgirl and for sure crucifixions were not taken in the middle of a city. Crucifixions were allways done outside the town.
She turned to the market stalls. Soon Kathrin was captured from the atmosphere of the market. She looked at the costs of the things at the stands. She came to a stall at the very end of the market. A woman in an oriental robe offered elixirs of all kinds in small glass bottles. There were drinks against the loss of hair, medicine for stomach ache and healing potions for womens diseases. A bottle of green glas contained a love potion.
When Kathrin looked at that bottle, the stallholder smiled: "A little sip of that into the drink of a man, and he will fall in love with you, sweetie." Kathrin smiled. A funny idea, that kind of stuff for sale. Probably quite regular soda was in the bottles or herbal tea. The bottles were pretty. They were small and they had different colors. There were brown, green, blue and clear. "Three euros a bottle, sweetie," lured the market women. Something moved under her robe. Suddenly the head of a snake appeared in her neck. "Oh my god!" Kathrin said. She took a step back.
"Don´t worry, girl," the market woman said. "This is Lycca, my healing serpent. She does no harm to anyone." She smiled enigmatically. Kathrin noticed that her eyes had a strange color. They had the color of honey with a little bit violet like she knew from amethyst crystals. Colored contact lenses, she thought. The accessories can be ordered in the trade for cosplay.
The market woman stroked the snake. "Lycca is one of the last of its kind. Her venom has healing power." She sank her eyes in Kathrins: "Lyccas venom made me to a witch." Suddenly she smiled, as if nothing had happened: "Want to buy something? A little special to make your facial skin soft as a peach?" The woman chuckled: "Not that it would be necessary, girly." Kathrin studied the colorful bottles. She pointed to a bottle of clear glass, which stood in the back of the stall: "What is this?" "Oh that ..." The woman waved with her hand. "That's not for you, sweetie. And it is far too expensive. This is for very special customers." Kathrin looked at the bottle. The clear liquid in it was from the same color as the eyes of the market woman - a soft honey tone with a hint of amethyst. She grabbed the bottle and looked at it.
"Tempus Mutare" was standing on the label. "This elixir will cost one hundred euro, baby," whispered the woman market. "Pretty expensive for a beauty water", said Kathrin.
The shopkeeper smiled mysteriously. The snake peeking out of her neck. Kathrin was studied by cold reptile eyes. "No beauty water", said the woman market. She leaned forward and whispered: "It's an elixir that changes the time! The person who drinks it, will travel back in time." "Oh that's why it costs so much," said Kathrin. She grinned. This woman really gave a great show. "All right," said the snake owner. Suddenly she winced. "Gosh, I need to go Verena on the stand for lamp oil!" She looked Kathrin pleading: "Listen, honey, could you perhapsstay for a quarter of an hour on my stand? At the moment it is not much going on anyway, if someone comes along and wants to buy something:.. Each bottle three Euro."
"Okay," said Kathrin. The market woman stuffed the snake in her robe: ". Thanks, sweetie. I am very soon back here." She turned to go. "Don´t touch the time-elixir!": Then she turned around and went away.
"All right," said Kathrine and waved. "Your expensive special elixir will stay untouched like a virgin." She wachted the trader disappear between the market stands.
A few minutes went by. Kathrin was quiet alone at the market stall. No one came by to look at the display. It seemed as if the people ido not see the stall. They passed by without taking a look. "The good wife won´t make good money," she spoke to herself. "Your stand is in an unfavorable point. Nobody is buying something. Wrong place for your stall."
Kathrin squinted at the bottle of honey-colored elixir. "Tempus Mutare". "Change the time."
She grinned to herself. Travel to the past.
"It would be nice," she said softly. She looked around. She was all alone. The market trader was not there.
Suddenly it itched Kathrin to do it. She grabbed the bottle and opened it. A heavy sweet smell crept into her nose. Quickly she took a small sip. Then she closed bottle and placed it hastily back into place. Hopefully the dealer would not notice anything. But she had absolutely to had a taste of that stuff.The elixir tasted incredibly sweet. Something as that Kathrin had never drunk. Whatever was contained in the beverage, it rose quickly to Kathrins head. She felt light and weightless. "Wow! That´s harder than whiskey!" she murmured.
She registered, that her legs lost power and sie sunk down to the floor. Than she fell asleep.
(will be continued)
So please excuse my "Wronglish". I hope you will enjoy my first story. Because it is very long, I had to split it in four chapters. I will try to put every day one chapter online.
Yours
Sassi
The Forbidden Drink - Chapter 1
(for LittleSis)
The eighteen year old Kathrin visited the medieval market at the Porta Nigra. She attended almost every market, which took place at the landmark of her hometown Trier. Medieval markets pleased her very well. She loved to stroll between the stalls and look at all the beautiful things that were offered for sale by the dealers.
She walked through the right gate of the old Roman building. The Porta Nigra raised massive and dark into the sky. The name Black Gate was the right name for the building. Hundreds of years ago the stones might have been bright. Today they were dirty and dark. The building looked almost menacing.
The Romans had built it about two hundred years after Jesus' birth. At that time, Trier had been called Treverum and it had been the second largest city in the world to Rome.
The Romans ... Whenever Kathrin looked at the Porta Nigra, she had to think of the little fantasy story that did go around in her head, since she was a school girl. At age eleven, she had dreamed at night that she was a poor beggar girl in the time of the Romans. She had entered the palace of the roman prefect of Treverum and had stolen a loaf of bread. The guards had caught her and they brought her to the place beside the Porta Nigra and crucified her.
This dream went around for a long time in Kathrins head. Again and again she played in her head the little movie of the barefoot beggar girl in his ragged tunic, which was towed by brutal guards over the pavement lay to the large wooden cross. They took the ragged tunic away from Kathrin, layed her on the cross and than a roman soldier came with an hammer in one hand and four long nails in the other...
Kathrin shook hear head. It was the year 2014 and she was no longer a little schoolgirl and for sure crucifixions were not taken in the middle of a city. Crucifixions were allways done outside the town.
She turned to the market stalls. Soon Kathrin was captured from the atmosphere of the market. She looked at the costs of the things at the stands. She came to a stall at the very end of the market. A woman in an oriental robe offered elixirs of all kinds in small glass bottles. There were drinks against the loss of hair, medicine for stomach ache and healing potions for womens diseases. A bottle of green glas contained a love potion.
When Kathrin looked at that bottle, the stallholder smiled: "A little sip of that into the drink of a man, and he will fall in love with you, sweetie." Kathrin smiled. A funny idea, that kind of stuff for sale. Probably quite regular soda was in the bottles or herbal tea. The bottles were pretty. They were small and they had different colors. There were brown, green, blue and clear. "Three euros a bottle, sweetie," lured the market women. Something moved under her robe. Suddenly the head of a snake appeared in her neck. "Oh my god!" Kathrin said. She took a step back.
"Don´t worry, girl," the market woman said. "This is Lycca, my healing serpent. She does no harm to anyone." She smiled enigmatically. Kathrin noticed that her eyes had a strange color. They had the color of honey with a little bit violet like she knew from amethyst crystals. Colored contact lenses, she thought. The accessories can be ordered in the trade for cosplay.
The market woman stroked the snake. "Lycca is one of the last of its kind. Her venom has healing power." She sank her eyes in Kathrins: "Lyccas venom made me to a witch." Suddenly she smiled, as if nothing had happened: "Want to buy something? A little special to make your facial skin soft as a peach?" The woman chuckled: "Not that it would be necessary, girly." Kathrin studied the colorful bottles. She pointed to a bottle of clear glass, which stood in the back of the stall: "What is this?" "Oh that ..." The woman waved with her hand. "That's not for you, sweetie. And it is far too expensive. This is for very special customers." Kathrin looked at the bottle. The clear liquid in it was from the same color as the eyes of the market woman - a soft honey tone with a hint of amethyst. She grabbed the bottle and looked at it.
"Tempus Mutare" was standing on the label. "This elixir will cost one hundred euro, baby," whispered the woman market. "Pretty expensive for a beauty water", said Kathrin.
The shopkeeper smiled mysteriously. The snake peeking out of her neck. Kathrin was studied by cold reptile eyes. "No beauty water", said the woman market. She leaned forward and whispered: "It's an elixir that changes the time! The person who drinks it, will travel back in time." "Oh that's why it costs so much," said Kathrin. She grinned. This woman really gave a great show. "All right," said the snake owner. Suddenly she winced. "Gosh, I need to go Verena on the stand for lamp oil!" She looked Kathrin pleading: "Listen, honey, could you perhapsstay for a quarter of an hour on my stand? At the moment it is not much going on anyway, if someone comes along and wants to buy something:.. Each bottle three Euro."
"Okay," said Kathrin. The market woman stuffed the snake in her robe: ". Thanks, sweetie. I am very soon back here." She turned to go. "Don´t touch the time-elixir!": Then she turned around and went away.
"All right," said Kathrine and waved. "Your expensive special elixir will stay untouched like a virgin." She wachted the trader disappear between the market stands.
A few minutes went by. Kathrin was quiet alone at the market stall. No one came by to look at the display. It seemed as if the people ido not see the stall. They passed by without taking a look. "The good wife won´t make good money," she spoke to herself. "Your stand is in an unfavorable point. Nobody is buying something. Wrong place for your stall."
Kathrin squinted at the bottle of honey-colored elixir. "Tempus Mutare". "Change the time."
She grinned to herself. Travel to the past.
"It would be nice," she said softly. She looked around. She was all alone. The market trader was not there.
Suddenly it itched Kathrin to do it. She grabbed the bottle and opened it. A heavy sweet smell crept into her nose. Quickly she took a small sip. Then she closed bottle and placed it hastily back into place. Hopefully the dealer would not notice anything. But she had absolutely to had a taste of that stuff.The elixir tasted incredibly sweet. Something as that Kathrin had never drunk. Whatever was contained in the beverage, it rose quickly to Kathrins head. She felt light and weightless. "Wow! That´s harder than whiskey!" she murmured.
She registered, that her legs lost power and sie sunk down to the floor. Than she fell asleep.
(will be continued)
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