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The Illustrated Chronicle of the Lady Jasmine
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xso
Tribune
The girls ought to be punished extra, since they are making the soldiers work more difficult!
xso
Tribune
Yeah.... also maybeThat's your ancestor with the whip, I think, Xso!
Yeah.... Also maybe me in my next life if I am Lucky.... I will be more brutal with the whip however...That's your ancestor with the whip, I think, Xso!
I was tempted, but it's a bugger to keep whip marks consistent across images.
The agony of poor Jasmine being tortured with guilt is most affecting -
I think she'd better strip off and demand that the Procurator have her crucified,
her guilt is clearly more than she can cope with!
An interesting solution to a guilty conscience, Eul... I wonder that Whitehall isn't lined with crosses!
gjpain
Governor
A good twist would be Jasmine's efforts to save the condemned girls to drive herseld on the cross, and during their suffering the slaves eventually will confess to Jasmine that they are guilty and her sacrifice is for nothing... lol i know how bad this would be for poor Jasmine
We have to wait what Wragg has in mind!
We have to wait what Wragg has in mind!
xso
Tribune
Wonderful continuation, thanks! Cassie is also superhot, she would look nice upon a cross........In the last pic the stakes are visable through the gate.....very effective... looking forward to see the criminals arrive there........
bobinder
ARTISAN
The tension is mounting - this is powerful stuff.Onwards toward the South Gate:
Great use of manipulation scenes and components, Wragg!
ShadowWolf
Tribune
It seems Wragg you are building an extra amount of pain in the pictures for Jasmine for the pain she is going to experience later on in the story. I am sure it will be a very enticing connection between the two
Very astute, sir!It seems Wragg you are building an extra amount of pain in the pictures for Jasmine for the pain she is going to experience later on in the story. I am sure it will be a very enticing connection between the two
Thanks, Bob... the light's all over the place, but that's how it is with this kind of work...Great use of manipulation scenes and components, Wragg!
These street scenes are really effective, Wragg, and a change in making Jasmine the focus rather than the condemned girls, who form a very effective background. It gives Jasmine's scene with her friend added punch, and we can't help but wonder if the friend's arm across her shoulders foreshadows something in her story further down the track.
I'm a bit speechless because the mass and quality of manips.
Loxuru
Graf von Kreuzigung
I think Lord Wragg has given up sleep, food, and all other things just to spend time doing this story. We must all pick up our game a bit to keep up.
I'm personally glad to see the comments from other people. Wragg has clearly put considerable effort into the details - almost little "Easter eggs" - that we can find if we look. The work is so well done that it would be a shame, in my opinion to miss any of it. So thanks to everyone who has noticed things I didn't see on first glance.
And to our dear friend Wragg, keep up the good work, sir.
xso
Tribune
Well said J!I think Lord Wragg has given up sleep, food, and all other things just to spend time doing this story. We must all pick up our game a bit to keep up.
I'm personally glad to see the comments from other people. Wragg has clearly put considerable effort into the details - almost little "Easter eggs" - that we can find if we look. The work is so well done that it would be a shame, in my opinion to miss any of it. So thanks to everyone who has noticed things I didn't see on first glance.
And to our dear friend Wragg, keep up the good work, sir.
Well, not quite all of them
Anyway, it's all Jollyrei's fault. Well, him and Bobinder.
"Wondering about an illustrated story of Jasmine," said I.
Instead of telling me not to be so daft they trawled the internet for images of Nadya, Sasha, and Kattie Clover (Cassia).
For which, of course, I am extremely grateful.
As I am for all the positive comments. I only hope Repertor would like it...