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Good stuff, KD. Pray continue!
I'm agree with point of view that shorter KD stories are better. I like trials too but without too much dialogue beetween judges in it what only slow down action. I rather prefer describing of beating from planning it - I'm bored of it.Excellent beginning, KD! Personally, I don't care if you never get back to "Liberty." The level of humiliation and abuse had reached a point in that story beyond which I couldn't go, but that's personal preference. I really enjoy these shorter stories. I started reading this story with a sense of eager anticipation (Hey! another KD story!) and you don't disappoint. Personally, I really love it when you include the trial, that's one of my favorite parts: the innocent beauty caught in the toils of merciless, unjust justice. And you always describe the scene and the emotions so convincingly. You didn't include a trial in your last story, and I missed it, even though the description of the whipping was outstanding as always. Now I eagerly await the continuation of this story. You think maybe Sarah could be restrained (bound or shackled) in some awful stress position while awaiting sentencing? Le Craupadine, strappado, murgha, something like that? I think their God would want it that way.
I really admire your writing. As always, thanks for sharing your work.
I'm with you Jon on Liberty and on this story. Less is more (or Moore). So my vote is that Sarah certainly receive her well-deserved flogging (since leaving the country before posting her thoughts should have occurred to her as it should have to Martha O'Donovan), but, please KD, no ridiculous over the top one. Just my opinion, of course.Excellent beginning, KD! Personally, I don't care if you never get back to "Liberty." The level of humiliation and abuse had reached a point in that story beyond which I couldn't go, but that's personal preference. I really enjoy these shorter stories. I started reading this story with a sense of eager anticipation (Hey! another KD story!) and you don't disappoint. Personally, I really love it when you include the trial, that's one of my favorite parts: the innocent beauty caught in the toils of merciless, unjust justice. And you always describe the scene and the emotions so convincingly. You didn't include a trial in your last story, and I missed it, even though the description of the whipping was outstanding as always. Now I eagerly await the continuation of this story. You think maybe Sarah could be restrained (bound or shackled) in some awful stress position while awaiting sentencing? Le Craupadine, strappado, murgha, something like that? I think their God would want it that way.
I really admire your writing. As always, thanks for sharing your work.
I've taken the liberty of nominating a few stars, starlets and models to portray Sarah Fleming in the upcoming film. Also, I've indicated some stress positions that could be inflicted upon Sarah as a sort of "penance" while she awaits actual execution of her sentence.
First off, this is how Sarah Fleming appears at the beginning of the story as described by King Diocletian; dressed demurely in a navy blue skirt and white shirt:
View attachment 544669 (Japanese model Yumi Sugimoto)
Now I realize Sarah is British and (I assume) occidental; still, I love the look.
My own first choice for the role would be Sarah Roemer. Not least because of the coincidence of the first name. I've heard this same thought expressed in many a crime and spy thriller: "Coincidence? The universe is rarely so lazy." (Sherlock Holmes)
View attachment 544672 (Sarah Roemer as Scarlett Dowling in "Falling Up." Here as Sarah Fleming at an embassy function.)
View attachment 544679 And here awaiting punishment in Le Craupadine. (Sarah Blake of Hogtied standing in for Sarah Roemer as Sarah Fleming. See how that works?)
My second choice would be Alexis Bledel. I kinda have a thing for her anyway.
View attachment 544680 Here as Sarah Fleming receiving an update from the Embassy Official about the progress of the case against her. (Alexis Bledel as Ryden Maltby in "Postgrad." )
View attachment 544681 Here, as Sarah, doing some last minute shopping before submitting to house arrest at the Embassy per orders of the religious court. (Alexis Bledel as Beth Vest in "The Good Guy.")
View attachment 544682 Here, forced to stand in the Murgha position for "disobedience" and "belligerence" during questioning. (Unknown model.)
View attachment 544685 And here, bound by her wrists and stretched up on her toes in the public square, as an example to all blasphemers. (Julia I of MetArt.)
There are of course many other candidates on my "Potentials" list, all vying for a part that would make them a household name, just as "Fifty Shades of Grey" did for Dakota Johnson. Or at least she's a household name in like, North and South Dakota. However, as the site will only allow me to download ten images, I'll have to content myself with just two more:
View attachment 544692 The dark horse candidate, Kylie Quinn, a hardcore porn and bondage model. I recently discovered her on the Society SM site. I won't download bondage images of her since they're available only on the site. I think she's just as cute as a damn bug. And believe me, she looks great wearing nothing but rope.
And finally, the one KD had in mind all along anyway, Lol:
View attachment 544691 Keira Knightley is Sarah Fleming, trying to relax by the Embassy pool before trial.