The Pilgrimage Ends

[Naraku]

Great story Naraku. I am sorry I am late to the show but real life interfered. Next time you write a piece of art like this resist posting all in one day!

Tree

No body said you have to read it all in one day.

And here's a pic of what we think events may have looked like.
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well done Melissa!!!

I second that emotion.
(Smokey Robinson & the Miracles)

 

[thehangingtree]

No body said you have to read it all in one day.

I wouldn't have listened if they did. I was suggesting you and others who post stories break them down over a few days. With real life a massive post as yours and others makes it difficult commitment. You broke no rules and I only discuss why I can't get to 'bigger than bite -sized' stories' sooner than I do. Do what you want but support other artists on their threads...

 

[Jon Smithie]

Wow! I don't usually care for stories about punishments that end in death, but this is well written and quite convincing.

 

[Jollyrei]

And here's a pic of what we think events may have looked like.
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That's a wonderful image, Melissa.

 

[Barbaria1]

Truly a great effort Nara! Just caught up on this now. Impressive piece of writing!

 

[pontiopilato]

Naraku,

More hot fiction from you- thanx! Now we should have some idea how fried chicken feels on the way to becoming fried chicken.