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ooops - it's already 2330 on Yupar's birthday where she is - just in time to join the good wishes!

And a happy birthday to other members whose day it is today - Tanatos and mp5stab especially! :beer:
 
Aw, Yupar, I missed your Birthday :(

Happy Birthday to the girl with the best aim in the world

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Who's spirit triumphs over adversity

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And who we all love to bits

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Happy Birthday, Yupar!!

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The Thousand Yard Stare

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Behold, as yonder maiden fair
A thousand yards within her stare
A sign proclaims her name as ‘Blaire’
As bleeding, nude, she hangs.
We look upon her body, trim
And wonder why a fate so grim
Befell a girl so young and slim!
She twists with dreadful pangs!

We see a watching, angry, guy
Watching, as the girl on high
Struggles, grimly, not to die
With pain etched on her face.
He lifts his hat as we approach
It seems he was her cycling coach -
“She only can herself reproach!
“She came last in her race!”

(Picture is by Mermaid Hunter, he also did a series for Cxslave's avatar but I'm blowed if I can find them :doh:)

(Cxslave is often known on the forums as 'Blaire')

Happy Birthday Cxslave!!
 
The Thousand Yard Stare

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Behold, as yonder maiden fair
A thousand yards within her stare
A sign proclaims her name as ‘Blaire’
As bleeding, nude, she hangs.
We look upon her body, trim
And wonder why a fate so grim
Befell a girl so young and slim!
She twists with dreadful pangs!

We see a watching, angry, guy
Watching, as the girl on high
Struggles, grimly, not to die
With pain etched on her face.
He lifts his hat as we approach
It seems he was her cycling coach -
“She only can herself reproach!
“She came last in her race!”

(Picture is by Mermaid Hunter, he also did a series for Cxslave's avatar but I'm blowed if I can find them :doh:)

(Cxslave is often known on the forums as 'Blaire')

Happy Birthday Cxslave!!
Great pic n words flower3

Happy birthday CX!
 
A sign proclaims her name as ‘Blaire’
As bleeding, nude, she hangs up there.

A little and humble perfection. FoC

That's kind of you, thanks Fox!

I do commit sins against poetry, for which I am soundly thrashed by Siss and Eul :))) but here's a snatch from Swinburne's Before Dawn

As scornful day represses
Night’s void and vain caresses,
And from her cloudier tresses
Unwinds the gold of his,
With limbs from limbs dividing
And breath by breath subsiding;
For love has no abiding,
But dies before the kiss


He's got a different metre in the main part of his verse, but the rhyme structure is aaabcccb, so 'his' rhymes with'kiss'.

So I was attempting to rhyme 'hangs' with 'pangs'.

But there is nothing wrong with your suggestion:

Behold, as yonder maiden fair
A thousand yards within her stare
A sign proclaims her name as ‘Blaire’
As bleeding, nude, she hangs up there
In stark, surrendered shame.
We look upon her body, trim
And wonder why a fate so grim
Befell a girl so young and slim!
She writhes in white-hot pain.


An excuse for some alliteration, anyway :)
 
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