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... and a very final one for 2017 year :

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(this one is a part of a 30" long travelling sequence that will probably be disgarded for final movie)

Happy new year everybody :sun_smiley:
whoops! amazing
it's realistic until it hurts ... amazing
I can not wait for the whole movie!
I buy a trailer and a 30min film for quality I love to pay and in addition it is a scarce item ...


I also wish a great deal of good ideas and sex to 2018 thanks!;):popcorn:
 
... and a very final one for 2017 year :

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(this one is a part of a 30" long travelling sequence that will probably be disgarded for final movie)

Happy new year everybody :sun_smiley:

I have to say it again--this is amazing work, Bartnel. Crux was never really my thing but you and Jedakk have turned me on to it. May I humbly offer two suggestions--"upgrades," if you will, that have been represented on CF and elsewhere, and that likewise appeal to my fevered, sadistic brain? First, have the victim's feet nailed flat to opposite sides of the stipes, so that her legs are splayed open like a frog prepared for dissection. Also, have a sedile with a large horn on it and show it penetrating her vagina or anus when, exhausted, she tries to ease herself down on the sedile.
 
Yes! The spectators cheered when I pissed (and worse!) soon after I was crucified. The shame was indeed horrible, but I was already naked and exposed on the tall cross. I could not keep them from looking between my legs and staring at my breasts. What could be worse?

I'm not a whore! I'm a respectable young woman. I had so much to live for! Why has this happened to me? Why? Why?

Now, after hours on the cross, they keep me watered--as much as I can drink. I know it just keeps me alive longer, but I cannot refuse the cup when it is offered. I must drink as my body demands it. I sweat it away as I struggle on the cross, straining against the nails, but it also fills my bladder. So I continue to piss. Shame upon endless shame! They point at me and shout "Look, look. She's pissing again!" when the dribbling starts and cheer when a strong stream follows. My relentless pain and humiliation are just entertainment for them.

I can't control myself. Just a steady, painful dripping now. How long must this go on? I just want to die! I want to die!
i like what you are writing i can imagine the pain suffering an her feeling of the pain an shame. her lovely body exposed naked an defenseless. the rude comments made about her body. the men thinking of her naked body in front of them an what they want to do to her...an yet they can just imagine . her beauty even has the females watching thinking about her. thanks for your story!!
 
The current scene I'm working on is one of the hardest I had to do for this movie :
Elaine is raised to her final position on the cross (before the nailing of her feet)

Movements of the suspended girl, one of her executioners pulling on the rope, the other climbing on the ladder to secure the patibulum ...
Short extract :

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( Also one of the most cruel in my idea )
 
The current scene I'm working on is one of the hardest I had to do for this movie :
Elaine is raised to her final position on the cross (before the nailing of her feet)

Movements of the suspended girl, one of her executioners pulling on the rope, the other climbing on the ladder to secure the patibulum ...
Short extract :

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( Also one of the most cruel in my idea )
Well done, Bartnel!!!
 
The current scene I'm working on is one of the hardest I had to do for this movie :
Elaine is raised to her final position on the cross (before the nailing of her feet)

Movements of the suspended girl, one of her executioners pulling on the rope, the other climbing on the ladder to secure the patibulum ...
Short extract :

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( Also one of the most cruel in my idea )

Yes, I agree. Hauling her up like this has got to be unimaginably painful for her. Would she faint, do you think? Or piss?

At first I thought they were positioning her ass over a sedile, but it seems the executioners are going to be raising her up higher and what I though was the sedile is actually the footrest.

Wow! What a sensation for her: feeling her ass being dragged over that footrest and maybe thinking for a moment it's something for her to sit on, only to pause momentarily as another agonizing lurch raises her even higher. She watches the ground fall away as her feet struggle to find any purchase against the upright. Soon her feet will find the footrest but they'll keep slipping off until they are nailed.

This clip fills me with dread and chills! But I can't stop watching! I imagine it is me who is being crucified! I close my eyes and wonder: what would it be like for me?

A magnificent clip Bartnel!
 
The current scene I'm working on is one of the hardest I had to do for this movie :
Elaine is raised to her final position on the cross (before the nailing of her feet)

Movements of the suspended girl, one of her executioners pulling on the rope, the other climbing on the ladder to secure the patibulum ...
Short extract :

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( Also one of the most cruel in my idea )
The only trouble I have with this thread is that I run out of superlatives! :dogpile:
 
The current scene I'm working on is one of the hardest I had to do for this movie :
Elaine is raised to her final position on the cross (before the nailing of her feet)

Movements of the suspended girl, one of her executioners pulling on the rope, the other climbing on the ladder to secure the patibulum ...
Short extract :

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( Also one of the most cruel in my idea )
you can see the pain in her face...well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Thx everybody :lol:

@Marcella : you are right, this is the footrest.
And unfortunately for her, she will not faint... because she finally agreed to drink the liquid she previously refused ( I suppose that having the wrists nailed convinced her to try to ease the pain ?... this scene is still to do :treadmill: )
 
Great clip, Bartnel.
I like the detail of the executioner helping her over the footrest. It is a weird situtation, when, in such a peril, a helping hand from an executioner is appreciated by the condemned.

The executioners are not necessarily cruel men. They are just duly appointed officials carrying out a lawful execution--which happens to be crucifixion--according to the current standards and practices for criminal justice.

I mean, it's not like they take any pleasure at all in the fact that the condemned person is a beautiful, young woman. Right? Just doing their jobs.;):rolleyes:. (Such a waste though, isn't it? She is so fucking gorgeous, and so young!)

I'm sure when each one gets home in the evening they'll be glad to relax, play with the kids, have supper.

"So, honey, how was work today?" Asks the wife.

"Oh, same as always, I guess."

"That's what you always say, dear. Don't you think the kids would like to know what their daddy does to keep a roof over our heads."

"Yeah, daddy! Tell us!" They all shout in unison.

"Well, I have important paperwork and procurement duties. My partner and I are responsible for the prisoners. Tough lot they are. Very dangerous. We had to carry out an execution today, too. Nasty business." He goes on to discuss his day, leaving out the details of the crucifixion. The kids have lost interest and are throwing food at each other. His wife yells at them to stop and gives him a hard stare for not helping enforce discipline at the table.

The executioner looks across the table at his wife as she tries to restore order among their brood. She's a good woman, he thinks. Gave him five healthy kids--four daughters and a son (at last!). By the gods! She was such a beauty when they married: slender figure, great tits, lovely face. But she's gotten thick around the middle now, and her once perky breasts are now rather saggy after having nursed five babies (six, actually--one died). Her belly is stretch-marked and flabby and she has varicose veins in her legs. Her face is lined and tired; her youthful beauty just a memory now. She's only 26 but has really let herself go, he thinks to himself. Yet, he loves her still.

When they fuck tonight he'll try to remember his wife as she looked before she lost her figure. He longs for her youthful, tight pussy as he drives his cock into her. She groans in pleasure as he tries not to lose his erection. He wants to please her. (If only her pussy was tighter!) In the dim flickering light of a burning oil lamp he tries to see her as the beautiful young girl he married. But the face that appears to him as he shuts his eyes and concentrates is not that of his wife. No, it is the face of the beautiful young woman he crucified in the morning. And the body he imagines is hers too: the large, firm breasts with their tumescent nipples, the long legs and taut belly. And her tight pussy! Yes! The tight pussy he and his partner enjoyed (as was their right) before they nailed her to the cross. The thought of her naked, writhing body inflames his passion and strengthens his erection as he and his wife climax together.

The face (and body) of the young crucified woman is still in his mind as his wife cuddles next to him and drifts off to sleep, snoring lightly. He rolls away from her. His erection has returned. He takes his throbbing cock in hand and strokes slowly, thinking of the young woman. She's still on her cross, he realizes. Probably still alive, too. Her gorgeous body is stretched over the wood, her magnificent breasts heaving and swaying as she struggles in absolute agony. He sees her tortured body bathed in soft moonlight. He strokes faster. I'll see her in the morning, he thinks to himself, as he reaches orgasm.
 
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The executioners are not necessarily cruel men. They are just duly appointed officials carrying out a lawful execution--which happens to be crucifixion--according to the current standards and practices for criminal justice.

I mean, it's not like they take any pleasure at all in the fact that the condemned person is a beautiful, young woman. Right? Just doing their jobs.;):rolleyes:. (Such a waste though, isn't it? She is so fucking gorgeous, and so young!)

I'm sure when each one gets home in the evening they'll be glad to relax, play with the kids, have supper.

"So, honey, how was work today?" Asks the wife.

"Oh, same as always, I guess."

"That's what you always say, dear. Don't you think the kids would like to know what their daddy does to keep a roof over our heads."

"Yeah, daddy! Tell us!" They all shout in unison.

"Well, I have important paperwork and procurement duties. My partner and I are responsible for the prisoners. Tough lot they are. Very dangerous. We had to carry out an execution today, too. Nasty business." He goes on to discuss his day, leaving out the details of the crucifixion. The kids have lost interest and are throwing food at each other. His wife yells at them to stop and gives him a hard stare for not helping enforce discipline at the table.

The executioner looks across the table at his wife as she tries to restore order. She's a good woman, he thinks. Gave him five healthy kids--four daughters and a son (at last!). By the gods! She was such a beauty when they married: slender figure, great tits, lovely face. But she's gotten thick around the middle now, and her once full breasts are now rather saggy after having nursed five babies (six, actually--one died). Her belly is stretch-marked and flabby and she has varicose veins in her legs. Her face is lined and tired; her youthful beauty just a memory now. She's only 26 but has really let herself go, he thinks to himself. Yet, he loves her still.

When they fuck tonight he'll try to remember his wife as she looked before she lost her figure. He longs for her youthful, tight pussy as he drives his cock into her. She groans in pleasure as he tries not to lose his erection. He wants to please her. In the dim flickering light of a burning oil lamp he tries to see her as the beautiful young girl he married. But the face that appears to him as he shuts his eyes and concentrates is not that of his wife. No, it is the face of the beautiful young woman he crucified in the morning. And the body he imagines is hers too: the large, firm breasts with their tumescent nipples, the long legs and taut belly. And her tight pussy! Yes! The tight pussy he and his partner enjoyed (as was their right) before they nailed her to the cross. The thought of her naked, writhing body inflames his passion and strengthens his erection as he and his wife climax together.

The face (and body) of the young crucified woman is still in his mind as his wife cuddles next to him and drifts off to sleep, snoring lightly. He rolls away from her. His erection has returned. He takes his throbbing cock in hand and strokes slowly, thinking of the young woman. She's still on her cross, he realizes. Probably still alive, too. Her gorgeous body is stretched over the wood, her magnificent breasts heaving and swaying in the moonlight. He strokes faster. I'll see her in the morning, he thinks to himself, as he orgasms.

Wow. Impressive writing and insight. As I'm reading this, I'm thinking, "Get out of my head, Marcella!" (Needless to say, not that I've ever executed anyone, but I think this is exactly how I would compartmentalize everything if that was my job.)
 
The executioners are not necessarily cruel men. They are just duly appointed officials carrying out a lawful execution--which happens to be crucifixion--according to the current standards and practices for criminal justice.

Good writing, Marcella! Interesting thoughts to explore!:clapping:

Actually, his wife meanwhile knows what job he does (no husband can conceal that for his spouse), but she is a good housewife, so she pretends to know nothing. After all, he has a stable, well paid job and he takes care for their living resources.

So she also knows, 'working' with young pretty, naked women is part of his job. And she knows he is a man, like a man is...

But when they have sex together she creates fantasies that she is the condemned to the cross, and he, or one of his other young and strong colleagues, is her executioner. She imagines that she is raped and then nailed to the cross. These thoughts every time arouse her intensely.

So, she does not ask questions! Her secret fantasies are a source of good sex, and after all, whatever her husband does during work, the condemned women, regardless how young and attractive they are, are all doomed to die on the cross, so none of them is by any means a threat to her marriage.
 
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