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Bartnel's Inferno

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I so much agree Barb and Sharkman -
this is one of my favourite Bartnels, the 'intimacy' of the close-up,
I feel I'm there, frightened, lip trembling, eyes holding back tears,
yet there's a strange sense of trust, of resigning myself into the hands of the Exectuioners,
who are firm but not brutal with me,
I hear his soft word assuring me,
so long as I behave myself and don't struggle,
they'll just do what has to be done ....
I can feel that blood-streaked cloth of my slave-tunic brushing my breasts
as my last bit of covering is lifted off me,
I can feel the warm desert wind on my whip-sore bare body,
I hear the excited croaking of crows, see vultures wheeling high,
I tremble ...
I smell the odour of excited men, my own sex-scent too,
mingled with the aroma of my fear ...
 
I so much agree Barb and Sharkman -
this is one of my favourite Bartnels, the 'intimacy' of the close-up,
I feel I'm there, frightened, lip trembling, eyes holding back tears,
yet there's a strange sense of trust, of resigning myself into the hands of the Exectuioners,
who are firm but not brutal with me,
I hear his soft word assuring me,
so long as I behave myself and don't struggle,
they'll just do what has to be done ....
I can feel that blood-streaked cloth of my slave-tunic brushing my breasts
as my last bit of covering is lifted off me,
I can feel the warm desert wind on my whip-sore bare body,
I hear the excited croaking of crows, see vultures wheeling high,
I tremble ...
I smell the odour of excited men, my own sex-scent too,
mingled with the aroma of my fear ...

Well said ... :)
 
so long as I behave myself and don't struggle,
they'll just do what has to be done ....

They'll just do what has to be done. Nothing to worry about, don't struggle.
They'll just take your soft naked body, lay it on a couple of pieces of heavy wood, and nail your limbs to them.
No need to worry.

They may find, once you are nailed, that they can't help taking advantage of your wonderfully available womanhood, one last time. The blood and the excitement of seeing you naked in front of them will be too much. And after all they aren't paid well, they take what reward they can get.

I smell the odour of excited men, my own sex-scent too,
mingled with the aroma of my fear ...

I think too often we neglect smells in our stories and art. Scent is often in the background, not our primary sense, but it contributes strongly to our mood at times like this. These two short lines capture a very powerful atmosphere, Eul, and I'm sure the scents contribute to the situation, the physicality and raw eroticism of the situation enhanced by a sense that is sitting just under their conscious awareness.
 
Hey, Bartnel, love the work you posted here recently. I especially like the forced stripping!

Yes her body must be stripped totally nude when it is scourged and nailed..raised up totally nude on the cross for all to lust after..all the reactions of her nipples becoming very erect...and her pussy and asshole cumming... must be easily seen by all....and her pussy ass and nipples and mouth should be available tor any abuse the crowd sees fit.
 
Again, something new :)
This summer was entirely used to make experiments and here's the very first attempt of something I promised to someone long ago ;) !

Again, I tried to set up dynamic long hair ( not an easy thing to do well ) :

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Love the easy access to her lustful asshole in this one....for the crowd to have easy acess to abuse it while she dances the dance of lust...maybe some deep anal....fisting...large objects to stretch it out..
 
2 other tests : this time I tried black & white output for animated gif

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The result is interesting for outdoor rendering because sky gradient is better viewable without those awful color bands

Low angle view on beautiful breast :
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Excellent Nailings....Both of them dancing beautifully...pushing up on their nailed feet to catch their breath....nipples fully erect...pussys and assholes must be soaking wet....the guards should stick them with the spear every so often to speed up their dancing..

Another pic about the 2 sisters story :

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(they wonder desperately what will happen to them, as they know that their father won't come to free them ...)

Love to see these two forced to eat each others pussys and assholes while totally nude and just prior to their nailings....the guards spreading their legs and forcing the head of the other onto her pussy and asshole...getting them soaking wet and eager for their nailings...
 
In this story, the elder one Julia was publicly undressed, whipped and raped :

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And the younger one, Lydia, was undressed before the queen and given, with her sister, to an orcs group to be gangraped :

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Their bodies must be fed...prior to their scourgings and nailings....strong heavy cumshots from many huge erect cocks.. in their mouths and strong ejaculations deep in their assholes....for the nutrition and energy for a long dance of lust raised up totally nude on the cross....the totally nude bodies now part of the cross...their only purpose to satisfy the lusts and abuses of the crowd...
 
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Are you guys trying to get me killed
don`t answer that
shall we play Mr. Bartnel

Nailed to the cross!...your fate is to become one with the cross and dance the dance of lust to satisfy the lust of the crowd...

Are you guys trying to get me killed
don`t answer that
shall we play Mr. Bartnel

Your body is to be fed well Dorothy...strong heavy cumshots to drink down and fill your lustful asshole to give you the energy for a long dance of lust..during the anal your nipples will be fully erect showing your lust and the fact you were born for deep hard anal....at least 25 huge erect cocks will fill your ass with the hot cum your body lusts for and needs..ejaculating deep in your asshole.....then your scourging....raised up high with the leg spreader on....scourged with the short whip...that makes those deep beautiful stripes your body is lusting for.....100 stripes front and 100 rear...not negecting your fully erect nipples ....eager pussy and lustful asshole....by then you will be lusting for your nailing....you will crawl to the crossbeam and stretch out your arms...and your wrists will be nailed.....you will then be raised on the cross upright...totally nude......supported only by the nails in your wrists.....the pain and pleasure so great you will assist us in eagerly placing your feet in positon to be nailed...to take the pressure off of your wrists....lusting to be nailed....your feet will be nailed....you will cease to exist...your feet will never touch the ground again...you will become part of the cross...your only purpose to dance the dance of lust and satisfy the lust of the crowd ...your luscious pussy and ass juices will be drunk by all...as head executioner I will drink of them first locking my lips on both your eager pussy and lustful asshole....tasting and drinklng down every drop....savoring the taste.. as you dance on the cross.....the women will be especially eager to taste you....hundreds wil line up to do so .....and you will be fed periodically with ladders on the sides of the cross...for the huge erect cocks to fill your mouth with the strong ejaculations to drink down...that your body needs to produce more of your luscious juices to feed the crowd.....your body is part of the cross now...and eager and ready to satisfy all the abuses of the crowd....

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Did she actually had a chance ? ...

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( Apostate can be happy now ;) )

No.....It is time for her nailing....to become one with the cross...raised up totally nude to dance the dance of lust....and enjoy the many pleasures of the cross...and her many orgasms..... and the abuse of the crowd..

Hello everybody,

Here is the very last extract I will show about Elaine story, another whip animated pose :

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The last scene of this story is currently being rendered, and I expect it will be completed at the end of this week...
This project was an absolute madness for me to do ... and, I suppose, the last.

People who asked me documentation about this one will receive it soon ...

an excellent scourging....it should prepare her body well for its nailing....

I prefer the closeup myself.

This would be an excellent crucifixion for you Piper Marie....the pain/pleasure in your wrists would be so great as we raise you on the cross upright...you would help us to nail your feet.....putting them in the proper position eagerly and quickly to take the pressure off of your wrists......lusting for the nailing....we would nail them with a huge nail...and you would then dance the dance of lust beautifully totally nude ...nipples erect....pussy and ass soaking to please the lust of the crowd...

It's only what this girl expects, the night before I'm to be crucified -
and these guys aren't all bad, I feel like some of them are almost my friends,
so long as I'm compliant and co-operative, kneel or lie as they order, with my holes well open..
But I know they're going to be whipping me and nailing me tomorrow.

All those strong ejaculations of that hot cum your body needs and lusts after in your mouth and deep in your asshole will give you the nutrition and energy for a long dance of lust on the cross Eulalia..to please the lusts of the crowd...your guards all need to feed you well to prepare your body for its scourging and nailing....

Love the animation on her pussy when her feet are nailed Bartnel....it looks like it is cumming very hard!....Pleasure in suffering!

A lot of work currently !

I'd like to share 2 pics from my WIP movie, about the young journalist Elaine :
When crucified, she looks at her nailed wrists :

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(this is the same resolution as in the movie)
an excellent nailing...her body has been lusting for this for a long time
 
Another important moment in this part od the story (this scene was just finished rendering yesterday) :
One of the bad guys, offers her a drink which is some kind of "cup of mercy", but she rejects it because she don't clearly understand what will happen to her .

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(My idea : a second offer will come later, when she will have her wrists nailed, and she will accept, but will the guy agree to give her ? )

Great work Bartnel...watching her nude body react to her soon to be nailing is very sexually stimulating...but....the scene after this one where she is forcibly taken totally nude to the patibulum arms stretched out held down and nailed...and the patibulum being dragged to the cross upright....is that available??
 
I agree that total nudity is more arousing, but I always thought that, if it is the same from beginning to the end, it looses its effect quite fast (for example, a beautiful nude girl appears a lot more naked in a crowd of clothed people than in a crowd of naked people and it's the same in a temporal timeline : if she is naked from beginning to end, we hardly notice she is naked at the end).
So, I think it could be interesting to have her wearing something (even torn) at the beginning, like here :

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then undressed (only a little loincloth left) to be whipped, and finally completely naked to be nailed on the cross ?
I find the stripping of the victim at the scene of the execution most arousing, and that the victim is forcibly stripped rather than allowed to undress herself. This is a fabulous scene you have created here Bartnel, and I like your suggestion of a scanty loincloth to be then revealed, perhaps tied loosely around the hips by a cord, that may be tugged free allowing the last vestiges of covering to fall away...
 

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