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Nobles is important regulators in the city, and they are arbitrary, everything is they have the final say, they can put the other nobles elected to become king, can also be deposed king, noble right is very big, sometimes, was elected to the king of the noble also self-effacing to other nobles, they are important to maintain order, each has its own army, Their daughters can also participate in the war under special circumstances, known as the "Take the place of father in the war", is the embodiment of virtue in the city
 

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Heralds served as messengers, diplomats, and guides for the king.
Each of them is a rook class, also known as Royal Guard officer.
They are the highest military attache in the army, and the shogunate general is their supreme commander.
They are loyal to the king, but they provide services for the shogunate general and can also handle judicial cases.
They are senior city officials.
 

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The Royal guards (锦衣卫) is a powerful city defense force formed by the knights.
They are the cruelest and fiercest of the despot's men. They are skilled archers, well armed, well trained, and responsible for public order. Their organization is a mystery, their military system is unknown, and they have made untold achievements in countless battles, like a sword in the hands of a king
 

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Barber is an important person who trains attendants and shaves all nobles. He has more rights than anyone in the city.
These barber are some bottom citizens. He has a good relationship with every eunuch and likes to deal with businessmen. He is often an important role in the story. Because he works in the service industry, he needs businessmen to provide a lot of goods. It should be noted that, He is not a good man. Their quirks often make people uncomfortable, but they still have a lot of scenes and are irreplaceable.
 

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The barber's job is to please the nobles and good citizens. Among the attendants he trained, there are those who specialize in the management of female prisoners, equivalent to the warden, but the gender of this job is all women.
These women run some romantic places and provide services for the work of barbers. The most famous woman is Lulu Tang. She is also the most beautiful in the industry. She is a cruel warden and has many unique means to punish female prisoners. She believes that this behavior is just and enjoys the rights it brings.
 

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Northeast Asia because the climate is cold reason, all the queen is wearing clothes, they also like shinchow city with clothes levels to represent the identity of the queen modelling is the style of the Chinese costume dramas, they can be white, color of skin is not limited to Asian, but black, because of the author's aesthetic, so had to removed from the shinchow nearby the queen, Other writers could have created black characters, but not in our story
 

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Female generals are from the nobility class.
They are all cruel characters who look bad to provoke. However, Shinchow City does not need female generals.
The tragic fate of the victim of society.
 

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Pirates are from the businessman class.
This group of women are awakened female rebels, who fight against the tyranny of the tyrant, using the sea as a woman's protector, and constantly attack the tyrant's city.
 

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I want to say,Shinchow city is not a pure East Asian city, just because my resources are East Asian.

In this conservative society, the shame of women of any background is magnified, and they are bound by old ideas under the dressing culture, which leads to the unique women in Shinchow.

The core of this city is a hierarchy, which makes slaves different from Roman civilization.

In the questionnaire survey, we have eliminated a lot of punishment methods about the ancient East, such as spanking with a stick.

It shows the fantasy port city of western style, but there is a slave owner living in an East Asian Palace, I hope the authors interested in this fantasy port city can describe it together.

Because it's a free city,and Shinchow city history has disappeared, and you can decide its past and future.
 
Some Shinchow city Girls' Names
First, a note aboutShinchow city personal names

i)In the first place, I have made a very detailed list of their birth, from which they owe all their social status, which is an important part of their name. This means their last name.

Example: If a person is from King, his surname is Wang. This is just royal birth. Others can just use what I wrote down in the birth form.

Example: For example, if someone is the queen of a powerful tribe, she can be called by her last name, such as Vera Queen ,“Queen” which is her last name.

ii) Gens name (nomen gentilis) A family name, or more like a Scots clan name, handed down through the male line, and implying a shared ancestry among all members of the gens, though ancestors may actually have only been followers, retainers, tenants or clients of the head of the clan. Men were not allowed to use such sacred names when they were young, and when a boy came of age he was given a name by an elder of rank in the clan. This name was used for very formal occasions. There were only three families in the city, so there were only three names, Park, Ryom and Chong.
Women are forbidden to use Gens name (nomen gentilis) because they are subject to slave rules.

iii) Cognomen a nickname, or perhaps our 'user name' is closer, that a man acquired or gave himself and generally used has his everyday name in adult public life.

High-class women in the Imperial period didn't have cognomina, They can't see strangers.Even the queen, chieftains, generals and pirate leaders hide behind the curtain with masks and give orders to men.

A women/slave would only have a single name, given by her Male family members/owner. It might be a garbled version of her 'own' name, more likely a derogatory nickname or a mocking imitation of her speech (cf. more recent slave-names and racist stereotypes); often a slave's names alluded to the region she came from, that had to be stated by law on the titulus she wore on her neck when she was on sale in the market.

Their owners are usually a group of businessmen with little insight, and the nobles don't like to give them elegant names. They are most likely to be associated with animals. For example, grumpy women are called lions, tigers, snakes and terrible beasts by their owners. Color is also very important, such as white snakes, white lions and white foxes. Those docile women are called cats, hens, heifers and all docile animals by their owners.

The women who work for barbers have some unique names. They all have a name representing the waiter, tang.

In order to distinguish these women, their names are prescribed, Lulu, Lingling, Vonvon,and Lili, Mimi, Leenleen, etc.

The names of queens and chieftains of this matriarchal tribe are varied and arbitrary. Their tribe is in a secret place nearby. They can only be seen if they are captured by the tyrant's army. It is enough to hear of a queen or chiefess of a powerful tribe.

Shinchow people do not have a correct English writing standard, so creators can name themselves as they like. Names are not as important as their identities. It is enough to specify what the characters in the story are, and the most important characters are hairdressers. Eric Park is their name. The name doesn't mean anything.
 
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