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Felice anticipates her ordeal

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Part 1

Felice knew she was condemned and stood in anticipation of the coming sentence. She was filled with dread and a strange excitement as to what lay in store for her. The imagination of those prescribing the ordeal knew no bounds. In a strange way, she delighted in the idea that so much thought would have been put into it, thought about her. She felt a rush of excitement at the attention and thought given to her.

She hoped that the ordeal would purify her and she knew that this could only realised be by taking the worst depravity imaginable upon herself and giving her body to it. That was her anguish but with such intrigue as to what they could dream up for her. There were no rules, no limits, just their depraved imagination.

The judge was ready. She couldn’t quite believe the depravity written in front of her. She felt aroused and became wet at the thought of what was about to be bestowed on Felice. It was a finely tuned prescription, written by the finest depraved minds in the land, both men and women.
 

montycrusto

Slave Trader
Part 1

Felice knew she was condemned and stood in anticipation of the coming sentence. She was filled with dread and a strange excitement as to what lay in store for her. The imagination of those prescribing the ordeal knew no bounds. In a strange way, she delighted in the idea that so much thought would have been put into it, thought about her. She felt a rush of excitement at the attention and thought given to her.

She hoped that the ordeal would purify her and she knew that this could only realised be by taking the worst depravity imaginable upon herself and giving her body to it. That was her anguish but with such intrigue as to what they could dream up for her. There were no rules, no limits, just their depraved imagination.

The judge was ready. She couldn’t quite believe the depravity written in front of her. She felt aroused and became wet at the thought of what was about to be bestowed on Felice. It was a finely tuned prescription, written by the finest depraved minds in the land, both men and women.
A very fine start, I must say, I’m hooked already! I don’t know yet if your setting is modern, historical or futuristic, I look forward to finding out. But this chapter reminded me so much of my drawing “Harsh Sentence” where the heroine (“Justine”) is about to hear what punishments the judge has decided on :
https://www.cruxforums.com/xf/threads/drawings-by-montycrusto.7143/post-420744
Anyway great start, looking forward to more :D
 

Yslavman

Condemned
Part 2. The Setting and First Ordeal



The judge’s mouth was dry as she began to read slowly

The Setting

Purification will take place through extreme depravity, public spectacle, humiliation, pain and torture. Your body will be used throughout the ordeals for the benefit and pleasure of others and all on public view.


The ordeals will be for a period of three days at this holiday time. At the end of the three days, if you are still alive, the public will vote on whether you live, die by crucifixion or enjoy a further period of ordeal.


For the period of three days, you will receive no food or drink but you may ingest any thrown in your face, poured over you or ejaculated into your mouth.

The ordeal begins with removal of all clothing and hair and the purification of your anus. You will be stripped, shaved and your bowels emptied immediately following this pronouncement.



The First Ordeal

For your first ordeal, you will then be taken to the stake, one specially devised for you in the centre of the arena.

The stake is a one metre high, 15 centimetre square stake upon which is placed a two metre cross beam.

On the top of the centre post is an iron bridle with a iron ‘O’ ring around which your teeth will he clenched. The metal frame will completely immobilise your head and mouth and cause you severe pain. Your neck will be constricted with a metal noose to add to your suffering.

Your arms will then be outstretched, palms down against the cross beam with the full length of the arm being bound to the beam.


Your arms, neck, mouth and head are completely immobile, your back exposed and your cunt and buttocks protruding. You will now be conscious that the height at which you are pinned means that you can neither kneel or stand: another agony to be endured.


In order to add spice and as a visual delight, we ask that both your breasts be nailed by the nipple to the wooden post This will be done with considerable care such that the nipples do not tear but can move up and down the long nail enough to allow movement during the ordeal, each movement causing severe pain along with arousal.


You are now ready for feasting upon.
It is first the turn of the men.


Twenty men, selected by the drawing of names will be injected with serum to ensure they are hard and full.

Each man is obliged to perform on you, it is their honour and duty as citizens, to be watched by their families and friends as part of the holiday festivities.


Each man is allotted seven minutes and must climax fully. If they do not, then both you and they will receive seven strokes of the whip.

They are permitted to use whichever orifice they choose or all of them: mouth, cunt and anus.

As you are no doubt able to estimate, it is a lengthy process and we will allot two and a half hours for the procession of the twenty men together with time for crowd ratings and approval along with whippings.


After each five men, you will he hosed with cold water, wiped with lubricant and the neck clamp released to allow to you to swallow fully.

No semen must be allowed to spill from your mouth. In the case that this occurs, a little reminder will be given to you with a needle inserted beneath a fingernail. The pain, I am advised is beyond excruciating.


You will also rate each man as to the pleasure level you receive and your own rating, along with that of the crowd, will result in three people’s champions.


For the Champions reward, they, their wives, girlfriends or whoever they prefer to choose, is given a two hour ordeal on the guest post. You will be surprised at how many women in the crowd crave what you have been given.

Whoever is nominated, cannot refuse. The penalty of such refusal is to be forcibly gagged and tied to the post with iron nails driven through the hands.
 

melissa

Administrator
Staff member
Hi there Yslavman. Please continue your story on this thread by clicking on Write Your Reply and posting the next bit. Don't start a new thread for the same story.
 

Yslavman

Condemned
Part 2. Felice’s ordeal continues.

Now for the women

Having watched their men, erect and enthusiastic. take you so often in all ways, the seething jealousy of the women is aroused to hysteria.

They want you humiliated, dirtied and made undesirable. You are filth to them.

It is now almost three hours into the first ordeal and you are beyond exhaustion, your legs no longer able to support you as they plead for respite.

You will receive a mercy in the shape of a lubricated large smooth metal phallus which will be attached half way up the vertical post. The crowd will wait until you take it fully inside you and feel the relief of weight off your thighs.

As you settle, we make the final adjustments to allow you full exposure to the women.

The bridle will remain encasing your head but will be detached fromthe vertical post to allow your head to be pushed backwards and reattached to the post with two iron rods such that your gullet is vertical. Your neck collar is to be removed.



The ropes attaching your arms to the cross post will be unwound and removed and each wrist then nailed into the wood allowing you to settle uncomfortably into the new position.


A tube will then be inserted slowly down your mouth and throat along with a large funnel, ready to receive the gifts of the women.
This will also stifle your cries of agony as your ordeal continues. To enhance the pleasure, we order that your nostrils be also clamped so that breathing is by mouth only.



Twenty women, also chosen by ballot, are to be brought forward, totally naked and bladders full as instructed. They are ready to be part of the theatre.


You will notice a platform above your head allowing each woman to sit or stand and empty her bladder into the funnel or onto you as they wish. They are also permitted to masturbate and squirt in the same manner or to lactate. Everything that goes into the funnel will be swallowed.


Each woman will step up in turn on to the platform and after she is fully relieved, is allotted seven minutes to punish you in any way she chooses. She is offered a strap on dildo for your anal pleasure and a variety of whips and rods for your back, thighs and arms.


As you can imagine, you will endure a lengthy ordeal at the hands of the women. It will be several hours of exquisite pain, depravation, humiliation and pleasure.


As with the men, both the crowd and you will rate each woman as to the spectacle they offer. Three champions are similarly chosen to be affixed to guest posts for a period of two hours during which time, the women of the crowd can use them in the same way that you are to be used. Refusal is futile and punishable with hot irons on three parts of the flesh being chosen by popular vote.


One final delicious twist is that an electric current will run through the phallus and the nipple nails. The level of current is sound sensitive to the level of crowd noise. You will be unable to do anything to relieve yourself from it’s constant pain and pleasure. It will however, be turned off when you are swallowing the contents of the funnel.
 

Yslavman

Condemned
The judge needed a break. The depravity that Felice would endure was unimaginable and the creativity of what was in store for her was something she had never seen before.

She retired to her chambers but found she was overcome with a seething jealousy of Felice. All that attention and spectacle. She was missing out. If only it were her.

Her mouth was dry and her pussy wet as she opened the draw and reached for the vibrator. She had used it before and found that she was using it more regularly as she needed relief for the arousal she received from the sentences and ordeals she read out each day.

Her black stockinged legs and tight black skirt was too much and the moment that the tip of the vibrator touched her between the legs, she began to come incessantly.

She fantasised about being watched, performing for all to see.

Her ultimate fantasy...she dare not admit. Slow torture and Crucifixion.

How delicious would that be.
 

Yslavman

Condemned
Part 3: The women have finished

The crowd have reached fever pitch and you have swallowed and urinated again the fluids of twenty women and the semen of many men. Your urine will not be wasted, it will all be collected. People will pay good money for a vial of the condemned’s fluids.



You have been whipped, electrocuted, violated and endured agonising stress positions and deprived of breath. Pins have been driven through your nipples and wrists and your head caged and mouth stretched open.


The crowd need respite and you need to be cleaned and displayed in public. The three champion women will administer to you, all will be naked and they will cream and massage your wounds and tender flesh. You will receive both pain and pleasure from this.

Once cleaned, you will return the honour to the women using your mouth and tongue to clean their bodies, licking their sweat and juices. Each will be brought to orgasm by you as their payment for their service to you.



Of course, if you fail to satisfy each of them fully, a punishment awaits.

This will be in the form of foot caning. Your legs will he spread and the feet held by two of the champions while the third administers 30 strokes of the cane to each foot. In the case of you finding this unbearable, you may elect for the caning to switch to your cunt.



As you are aware, it is rare for a woman to be fully satisfied and the crowd would delight in your howls as you face caning.
 
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