I like the result of this story, which is a slow, calm narrative that seems to be preparing for the final eruption, waiting for the moment when the mystery is revealed
Bummer- hopefully it will be corrected soon. Good LuckYesterday my external harddrive stopped functioning and I was not able to repair it myself. Today I put some techboys to work on it and hopefully they will get it going again and grant me renewed access to everything I had already written and what I was working on. For now the story is sadly on hold.