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Jack and his family crucified, a story

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All characters are of age. Jack is 20, Leah is 46, Lilly is 20, Hannah is 19 and Adeline is 18. Here’s part one, enjoy and pls share your thoughts!

Jack undressed in shock and did his best to help comfort his weeping aunt and cousins,whose slowness to strip down was met with a rifle butt to the rib.
His Aunt prayed out loud with her eyes shut and head to the sky, as she knew exactly what the punishment for being caught practicing Christianity was. Her friend Jennifer and her family were the first household caught with a Bible, and Leah had watched their naked agony and tried to comfort them in what little ways she could before she couldn’t bear seeing them like that any longer. “What if the soldiers find us? We’re known for being Christians,it’s only a matter of time.” She remembered thinking. But they couldn’t escape their small town in only a few days, so they followed the 22 hour curfew and relied upon prayer.
 
All characters are of age. Jack is 20, Leah is 46, Lilly is 20, Hannah is 19 and Adeline is 18. Here’s part one, enjoy and pls share your thoughts!

Jack undressed in shock and did his best to help comfort his weeping aunt and cousins,whose slowness to strip down was met with a rifle butt to the rib.
His Aunt prayed out loud with her eyes shut and head to the sky, as she knew exactly what the punishment for being caught practicing Christianity was. Her friend Jennifer and her family were the first household caught with a Bible, and Leah had watched their naked agony and tried to comfort them in what little ways she could before she couldn’t bear seeing them like that any longer. “What if the soldiers find us? We’re known for being Christians,it’s only a matter of time.” She remembered thinking. But they couldn’t escape their small town in only a few days, so they followed the 22 hour curfew and relied upon prayer.
Good setting for a story, but :
Persecution of Christians in a modern setting? What is the backstory of the persecutions?
What is the relationship? Leah is Jack's aunt, are Lilly, Hannah and Adeline her daughters?
 
Good setting for a story, but :
Persecution of Christians in a modern setting? What is the backstory of the persecutions?
What is the relationship? Leah is Jack's aunt, are Lilly, Hannah and Adeline her daughters?
Unfortunately that will come to the so called modern world sooner or later. But naturally we could today prosecute people not believing the corona narrative or so, we have a lot of story possibilities. But me still struck in few of my stories.....
 
I'll already start denying global warming!:rolleyes:;)
That is a good start, going against the official religious believes, speaking out the truth, also brought the most prominent crucified one on the cross, have you thought of asking for autopsies on the so-called corona deaths? And naturally you must be on right place, doing the above in Texas is probably of no use. I also had the idea that you could actively fight and preach against equal rights, with the.... how are they caught.... a yes, females. No use to do that in Iran. Probably you would like to insist, that there are just 2 genders. There are many possibilities today, to become an enemy of the state..... But most sure, if you ask for lowering the tax, for all. That works nearly everywhere.
 
That is a good start, going against the official religious believes, speaking out the truth, also brought the most prominent crucified one on the cross, have you thought of asking for autopsies on the so-called corona deaths? And naturally you must be on right place, doing the above in Texas is probably of no use. I also had the idea that you could actively fight and preach against equal rights, with the.... how are they caught.... a yes, females. No use to do that in Iran. Probably you would like to insist, that there are just 2 genders. There are many possibilities today, to become an enemy of the state..... But most sure, if you ask for lowering the tax, for all. That works nearly everywhere.
Choose your battles, of course!

Rule out something Corona-related, since social restrictions would forbid onlookers to come and attend the crucifixion.
 
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