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Mina Berkeley's Voyage

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With apologies to P.N. Dedeaux, whose bull pizzle whipping of "Clotilda" I borrowed freely from (see Elephas' "Corporal Punishment of Women-Stories" thread) and with thanks to Praefectus Praetorio, whose invaluable suggestions made this a much stronger chapter, and ever mindful of Jackie's suggestion that I remember the mind set of the victim--I hope you enjoy. And if you don't, I hope you blame those I just named. :rolleyes:




OVER A HURDLE​


As the crowd filled in the market area, Judge Higgens’ carriage pulled around behind the platform. The Judge and a conservatively dressed, doughy faced gentleman in a clerical collar dismounted from the carriage and approached the Warden.
“Warden Tompkins,” the Judge said, “This is the Reverend Hurst, who is sailing on to shepherd the souls in New South Wales. He was on Defiance with Miss Berkeley, and gave testimony against her. He has asked for an opportunity to offer up some words before you begin.”

The Warden touched his hat to the Judge and the clergyman.
“Aye, your Lordship. If it please you, first the doctor will inspect the prisoner, and then we’ll secure her to the hurdle before the Reverend speaks.”
Both Tompkins and the Judge noticed the Reverend Mr. Hurst staring at Mina.
“Mr. Hurst!” the Judge said sharply, “Is that quite agreeable with you, sir?”
“Yes, your Lordship, by all means,” he stuttered, blushing furiously. He got a grip on himself and said to the Warden, “It is our Christian duty to remind the benighted sinner that God cannot be mocked. As that young sinner is finding to her cost.”
He pointed at Mina, without looking, but then couldn’t help himself and gave the nude young woman an eager, if guilty, glance.


While the three men talked, an overweight, bleary eyed physician inspected Mina. The good doctor felt of Mina’s arms and shoulders, and made a show of looking at several of her whip cuts and her chafed and bloody wrists, and made sure to palpate her welted breasts. He looked in her eyes, and listened with a cylinder of horn to her lungs. Those who knew the doctor knew that he had killed more patients than he had cured. He was usually drunk, as he was now, but his imprimatur was needed for the punishment to continue.

Mina was disgusted by the overt fondling of the odious man. Her arms were pinned to her side by two soldiers, and in any case she was too weary and in too much pain to resist.
“She is sound. A healthy young woman. You may continue.” the doctor finally said.
The crowd cheered as Mina was escorted by four soldiers and the Sergeant of the Guard on her short journey to the hurdle.
“You two, hold her fast, if you please,” the Warden said to the two soldiers at Mina’s side. “And you, my lads, fasten her ankles to the legs,” he instructed the other two.

Atop the hurdle was a thick wooden bar, over which the person to be punished was bent. It had been worn smooth over the years of its use, and had a sheen to it, for it had been polished with the sweat of the many who had suffered on it. Darker, more sinister stains also blotted the wood, for those sufferers had lost more than sweat to the device. Noticing those stains, and fearing what they represented, Mina’s breath caught in her throat. The soldiers at her side held her still while the other crouched down, and spreading her legs to shoulder width, fastened either ankle to a leg.

“Now,” the Warden said, slapping the log, “Bend her right over, my lads, stretch her over!” Each took one of her wrists and pulled her over the bar. The first two soldiers fastened her wrists in the leather straps at the base of the legs. Mina grunted in discomfort. Stretched as tightly as she was, the bar pressed painfully into her stomach, making it difficult to breathe.
“Not so tightly, boys!” the warden said. “Slack her halyards a bit, give her some room to find her wind!”
As the soldiers eased up on the straps, Mina found, to her relief, that with the extra slack she could push up with her hands and the balls of her feet and raise herself an inch or so off the bar.

The Warden ordinarily preferred that a prisoner be bound and stretched tightly for a whipping, both because of the increased suffering of the position, and the increased accuracy of the whip strokes. But he had prepared a “surprise” for Mina, in the same sense that falaka had been a “surprise,” and was willing to sacrifice some accuracy for the pleasure of watching the pretty little slut wiggle about. And he expected to make her wiggle, right enough.

It was a strain to hold herself off the bar for long. Mina eased herself back down. As she settled on the bar she started to cry and tremble again in hopeless dread of the pain of this further torture that was to be inflicted upon her. Her jaws ached and cramped from from being splayed open, and her head felt like it was slowly being crushed by the tight head harness of the brank. But even with all the suffering and pain she was now in, she was fully aware of how shamelessly exposed were her most intimate parts in the frankly sexual position she had been forced to assume. The two fleshy globes of her buttocks were offered up in utmost vulnerability.

Gazing down at Mina’s splayed legs and naked buttocks, the Warden’s manhood stiffened, pushing at the crotch of his breeches. She was a criminal, and deserved to be punished. But more than that, he thought, despite her good breeding and hoity toity ways, she had, like most women; like all women! the morals of an alley cat and the lusts of a tavern strumpet. Why, he should punish the little whore himself! He had wielded the pizzle on more than a few occasions and knew how best to make it sting. He glanced resentfully over at Ebo. After all, it was not fit, not at all fit indeed, that a darkie should view a white woman’s bared cunt and arsehole. What’s right was what’s right: he had to protect the dignity of his race!

The Warden wrapped a slender leather thong low around Mina’s waist. Then he untied his own neckerchief from around his neck, and wedged one corner of it under the thong at her back, and pushed the other end between her crotch and the bar, so that it nestled into the crack of Mina’s ass, and covered the puckered hole of her anus and the gaping slit of her sex. He could claim that he did this to protect the white woman’s modesty, but of course he had an ulterior motive.

It was part of his “surprise.”

This surprise had also, like the falaka, been inspired by his travels in the navy. During a stop in Bombay, he had witnessed the punishment of an adulteress. The woman had been tied down over a hurdle, much as Mina was. The skirts of the adulteress's sari had been lifted, and what looked like the thick root of some sort of plant was held aloft by the darogah, the constable, who after saying a few words in the babble the wogs called a language, plugged it into her vagina, then carefully replaced her skirts. Within a few minutes the woman had been writhing and twisting and crying out, then soon enough screaming quite shrilly, while other men and women scorned and mocked her, or simply went about their business.

While his shipmates drank and whored, he had spoken to the Hindu innkeeper, who spoke English well enough to explain.
“Ginger root, Sahib,” the man had said. “Make her hot! Oh yes! Very hot! Here!” The man slid a bowl of powdered ginger that was on the bar. Tompkins had heard that some liked to sprinkle it over their beer or ale, but to Tompkins mind, no true Englishman would ever do such a thing. Nevertheless, it had become a popular drink, called “root beer.”
“Interesting,” he had said then. He had drunk his ale, and then strolled back out to see how the adulteress was faring.

The Warden had been equally interested to discover, in the very market that had been appropriated for Mina’s punishment, that there was a variety of African ginger, that if anything, was even more potent than the Indian.

The day before he had purchased the thickest, freshest “finger” he could find among the spice merchants, and had this morning, immediately before fetching Mina from her cell, pared it very lightly, just to reveal the skin of the root. This he had carefully wrapped in a bit of damp cloth, and put in his pocket.

The Warden removed the finger of ginger root unobtrusively, for the Warden did not yet quite trust the temper of the Judge. Before tucking the handkerchief between Mina’s legs, he twisted the thick root into her asshole. It was substantially larger than the opening, so he had to bear down on it. He could feel Mina’s gluteal muscles clench to oppose its entry, but he twisted it in, as though he were drilling a large screw into a small hole.

Mina instantly felt the awful intrusion of the large something being forced into her back passage. Gasping and whinnying in outrage and terror, she clenched her buttocks as hard as she could. She grunted in pain as it popped through her anal ring and entered deep into her rectum. She trembled and writhed, and bore down even harder to expel the intruder. Alarmingly, she felt a growing heat in her rectum and anus the harder she clenched.

The Warden reached under her stomach, pulled the neckerchief tight up into her crotch, and cinched it off to the thong in front. He gave Mina a hearty slap on the ass, and walking to the front of the hurdle, lifted Mina’s chin and looked into her wide, agonized, tearing eyes.
“You must not clench so,” he told her. “The more you clench, the more it stings. Perhaps, Miss Berkeley, you should have been nicer to me.”
The Warden winked at the Sergeant of the Guard and the detail of soldiers who had seen him insert the ginger root.

The Warden noticed that the Vicar had seen it too, and red faced, his eyes had settled with intense, and this time unabashed, regard on Mina.

Having prepared Mina to his satisfaction, the Warden escorted the Reverend Hurst to the edge of the platform. He held up his hand and shouted.
“Be silent and attend! Before the prisoner’s punishment continues, this good gentleman will favor us with a few words.”
The Warden bowed and touched his hat.
“They’re all yours, sir, but I recommend you not keep them too long.”

With a dismissive glance at the Warden, the Reverend Hurst turned his attention to the crowd. He introduced himself, and in a reedy and nasal voice, described his calling to New South Wales, and the responsibilities he would assume there. He told them that he had sailed with the young sinner who was even now being punished for her crimes against God and man, and that, in his poor opinion as a mortal, fallible man, she was highly deserving of it. With that, he launched into the main text of his homily.

“Be not deceived; God is not mocked: for whatsoever a man, or a woman, soweth, that shall he, or she, also reap.”

He smiled grimly at his clever interposition of the feminine pronouns.
He proceeded to invoke God’s vengeance on all sinners, but returned several times to that species of sinner who mocked the Most High. He gave God’s grievances against them a full airing.
But, he finally assured the crowd in conclusion, “I am not the final arbiter, nor am I the Judge, for He who Judges with the final Judgement sits at the throne of Heaven. We should all anticipate that Judgement with fear and trembling. Let us go to God in Prayer.”

Some in the crowd bowed their heads and turned their inner gaze heavenward. Most did not. They turned their gaze to the young woman bent over the hurdle.
For most in the crowd, it was a far preferable vision, for she was moving in a lascivious dance. It looked for all the world like the young woman was spreading her legs and arching her back to present her buttocks in sexual invitation. Then, after a minute or so, she would rest her hips on the bar as the invitation was not immediately accepted, only to push her hips and buttocks up off the bar again in frank display, apparently in eager anticipation of that invitation being at any moment accepted.

In fact, the burning irritation of the ginger root had made Mina frantic. It had increased dramatically as the minutes passed. Mina had quickly discovered the truth of what the Warden had told her. The harder she clenched, the hotter she burned. For the tighter her sphincter squeezed the root, the more of it’s irritating resin was released into the lining of her rectum. She had found that by relaxing her sphincter, against her every instinct and inclination, the maddening burn was alleviated somewhat. And elevating her buttocks, and opening her legs to the full extent, seemed to bring a modicum of relief as well. She was no longer cognizant of how it looked.

The Warden had been observing Mina during the long minutes of the Vicar’s homily.
Ah yes! he thought, the little slattern is feeling it now. Just you wait!

The Reverend removed his hat and bowed his head. He graciously invited God to join them, and assured His Eternal Majesty that all those gathered before Him were devoted and righteous followers of His will.

Almost all of them, anyway.

The crowd was becoming restive. They had not come for a sermon.
“Will the fool never make an end?” mumbled the Sergeant of the Guard.
“All things must pass, Sergeant,” Tompkins said.
And even so, eventually, did the prayer of the Reverend Hurst.
Rounding the final turn, he called down the blessings of God on England, her people, and her Monarch.
“God save the King, and all those who enforce his justice. Amen,” he said.
“Amen, Reverend!” a less devout voice shouted. “Now let’s get on with it!”
“Indeed,” the Warden said. He had come to a decision.

As the Sergeant of the Guard escorted the Vicar off the platform and back to the Judge’s nearby carriage, where the Vicar and the Judge would watch the proceedings from its relatively more comfortable seats, the Warden walked over to Ebo.
The man had exchanged his rhinoceros hide whip for the shorter bull’s pizzle.
“I’ll take that.” The Warden told him. “I’ll do the work myself.”
“But judge say Ebo do it!” Ebo objected.
“Don’t argue with me, boy, or I’ll give it you on your bare arse!”
Ebo’s eyes flared with anger, and for a second, the Warden thought the man might strike him. The Warden had been in many fights in his life, and was afraid of no man, but if he were to be afraid of someone, it would be Ebo.
But the fire died, or at least was banked, as quickly as it had flared.
“Sure, boss, what you say.” Ebo said. And with exaggerated care, he extended the whip to the Warden, handle first.
“Mind yourself, Ebo.” The Warden said, snatching the whip from Ebo’s hand, and giving the black man a withering look.
Then he turned his attention back to Mina.

The bull’s pizzle was, as the name indicated, a bull’s penis, dried and stretched to make a whip about three feet long, thick enough at it’s base to get a good grip on, and tapering to a thinner tip. It was a frequently used chastiser of slaves, and feared more than any other device among them. The tip of the pizzle, when dried, hardened into a small knot, or “stone,” and drove the pain of the whip deep into the flesh of the sufferer.

The Warden measured his distance and stood over Mina a moment, pausing as his appreciative eye drank her in. He marked the curve of her gracile form from her feet, up her long, slender legs, over the perfectly rounded, slightly quivering globes of her buttocks and down her back, noting the dimple of each vertebra. Her lovely breasts dangled from her chest like ripe, firm fruit, trembling slightly. The Warden’s manhood had rarely been standing so proud.
The crowd waited, their voices stilled for that moment of anticipation.

“God save the King!” the Warden cried.

Then he slashed down with the whip.
 
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Over A Hurdle (cont.)

The stone of the whip struck the crown of her right cheek, and left a pence sized red mark. The stroke sounded a loud, wet “Smack!” that made some in the crowd, no doubt the more tender hearted and gently disposed, cringe and gasp.

Mina’s explosive, agonized grunt rang out. Her buttocks instantly clenched at the vicious stroke, and her hips recoiled. She scrabbled at the platform with her hands and feet, jerking and pulling at the leather straps that held her. Almost immediately, as her gluteal muscles tightened and clenched at the impact of the stroke, an intense flame flared in her rectum.
“One!” the Sergeant of the Guard called.
A few cheers broke out, and voices of the less tender hearted, cried out “Well laid on, sir! That will serve her well!”

Mina was on a seesaw of pain. As her anal sphincter and gluteal muscles contracted in response to the intense agony of the whip stroke, the pain of the ginger root flared and grew inside her. In a few moments it had risen to an intolerable level, outweighing the pain of the whip, and she relaxed her muscles, spread her legs and elevated her buttocks to find some relief. To the Warden and the crowd, it looked like she was welcoming the next stroke.

The Warden waited for the young woman to offer herself up to the whip. When he saw that the moment was right, he slashed down again at the globe of her right cheek, aiming at the same spot.
“Two!”

Mina’s agonized, gabbling cry told how well the blow found its mark.
Mina did not know how she could endure this. The caning aboard ship had been painful, the whipping had been worse. But this—this shared the searing heat of the cane and the whip, but added a deeper, penetrating ache, as though a nail were being pounded into a bone. And when she clenched her muscles in response to the stroke, it felt like a hot iron had been thrust into her back passage.

Another tremendous “Smack!” as the Warden struck at the same spot again. Mina gasped and writhed under the impact. And then, inevitably, relaxed in a desperate effort to find some relief, any relief, and offered herself up again.
“Three!”
The mob was fully involved now, cheering and crying out encouragement to the Warden, and mockery at Mina.
Another brutal stroke to the same spot.
“Four!”

The Warden was thoroughly enjoying Mina’s dance of pain. He was the master! Who else could have thought of the ginger root? And anticipated her dance? Who else could so thoroughly and artfully inflict a such a chastisement? Not that black savage!
The Warden’s cockstand was becoming painful.
What a common slut! he thought. It was well that he punished her, not just for her criminality, but for her harlotry as well.
Here is another, hussy, and welcome! He thought.
He fetched her another brutal blow.
“Five!”

Although his accuracy was not as good as he ordinarily expected, the Warden was satisfied with his work so far. All five strokes had clustered in the same small area of Mina’s right cheek, and a deep redness and a blister was forming. He liked to give several blows to the same spot, to really “pound the nail,” as he liked to think of it. It was now time to pound the nail in the other cheek.

The Warden wiped his brow, set the pizzle on the hurdle, and stepped away to wet his whistle from the flagon of ale he’d left with one of the guards.
“Hot work, sir,” said the Sergeant of the Guard.
The Warden only nodded.

He took up the pizzle again, and regarded the woman’s trembling butt cheeks. He measured his distance and struck Mina’s left butt cheek a ferocious blow.
“Six!”

Mina grunted in despair and agony. The five on her right cheek had driven her to distraction, and now it was to begin all over again.
And Mina began her slow dance of agony for the next five strokes.

After ten strokes, the left cheek was the twin of the right: both were red with welts, and bluish bruises were forming.
Oh! The Warden thought, The little minx! How she would like me to drive my cock into her tight cunny!
He could smell it! The aromatic must of her sweaty cunt; and what was that scent on the breath of wind?-- a hint of ginger! He wanted to rut on her like a dog ruts on a bitch in heat. And when he was done with her cunt, he would use her back passage as well! Unplug that arsehole, and heat it up properly!

Thoroughly sweated, the Warden stepped away and took another swig of ale. Rudely wiping his mouth with the sleeve of his shirt, he took up the bull’s pizzle again and returned to his work. Another five cuts to the right.
“Eleven! Twelve! Thirteen!” called out the Sergeant of the Guard at each vicious blow of the whip.
Another two strokes, to fifteen, and he turned his attention to the left cheek.
“Sixteen! Seventeen! Eighteen!”

He was not pausing so long between strokes for this set, but delivered them one after the other, in a lust to punish her, pounding the nail in deep.
A couple more. The sound they gave off was flat and dull, as though he were hitting her with a rubber mallet.
“Twenty!” sang out the Sergeant of the Guard.

The Warden set the pizzle down again, and grabbed Mina’s buttocks. The soft flesh was delightfully hot to his touch. He kneaded it with his hard hands.
“Mustn’t let the blood clot up!” he shouted in explanation.

Mina bucked and gagged at the outrage. His brutal kneading spread a bone deep ache through her buttocks. She wailed in protest.
The crowd roared in riotous approval.

“That’s it, Warden, warm ‘er up good!”
“Rest yer hands Warden, I’m a baker, let me knead that dough!”
After thoroughly massaging her, he gave Mina a tremendous slap on the ass. Then taking up the pizzle again, he fetched her another two blows to each cheek.
“Twenty-four!” the Sergeant of the Guard called.
 
Over A Hurdle (cont.)

Mina’s buttocks were quivering and trembling spasmodically. She prayed hysterically for relief. She had suffered each stroke thinking that she would die, to the extent that she could think coherently at all. The pain was as though a red hot mouse had clawed its way deep into her buttocks and was twisting and turning in its new found den. She knew this was going to kill her, and for the first time in her life she welcomed death. But the physician was right about Mina: she was young and strong, and the Reaper didn’t even glance her way. In her head down position, Lethe would not even grant her the boon of unconsciousness.

Like a true craftsman, the Warden stopped again to evaluate his work. His accuracy had suffered somewhat, but that was to be expected, given the greater freedom of movement he had allowed the young traitress.

But she was suffering, that was sure. Her face was a mask of pain. Her eyes were clenched in a narrow squint, and her face was flushed and swollen. She seemed to be staring with bright intensity straight in front of her.
The blisters had developed nicely. They were swollen now, and filled with blood. As well, the repeated blows had turned the underlying flesh purple.

For Mina, it was unbearable. The greater portion of her mind was filled with sheer animal suffering. The still cogent portion prayed and pleaded for death. Her heart was pounding inside her. Her breathing was necessarily quick and shallow from her strained position, though if she could have stopped her breath entirely she would have done it, and gladly. Her body seemed to be vibrating with muscular tension. The pain was unrelenting. She grunted aloud with every stroke. They cut into her like a red hot knife, leaving a throbbing, sickening ache. The Warden had been correct when he had whipped her feet. That now seemed like a nothing, a lark, compared to this. She would have done anything, anything at all, to end it. But her body, in complete disregard of her will and her suffering, labored on.

“Mr. Tompkins, sir,” the physician interrupted. “I have observed the prisoner is developing some serious boils upon the upper aspect of her gluteal prominences. You must allow me to lance them, sir, lest they fester and mortify the subcutaneum.”
“I will lance them myself, Doctor,” the Warden told him. “Never fear. I won’t allow any festering or mortifying.”
“But it takes a trained hand, sir,” the Doctor objected, holding up his arthritic and visibly trembling own.
“A trained hand!” The Warden muttered, and paid him no further mind. Gripping the pizzle with both hands, one on the handle, and the other a foot or so apart, he sawed vigorously into one of the blisters. The coarse leather broke the blister open, and immediately blood spilled out over Mina’s buttocks, welling up from the torn blister.

Mina screamed an incoherent, grunting cry and nearly passed out. It felt like her flesh was being flayed from her body! As she clenched her gluteal muscles another streak of fire lit inside her bowels to match the fire on the surface of her buttocks.

The Warden relentlessly sawed open the blister on her other cheek as well, and Mina jerked and ripped at her bonds in her distraction, and then gagged and vomited bile in the extremity of her suffering.

The Doctor heard Mina’s distressed gagging and held up a hand for the Warden to pause. He busily checked Mina’s back with his stethoscopic horn, and looked into her eyes. Satisfied that Mina had regained her breath, he turned his attention to the freshly opened blisters. He offered a compress to staunch the flow, which the Warden accepted. After pressing down hard for a few moments, it appeared that the blood flow slowed acceptably.

“She is fit enough to continue. However, my recommendation is that you strike her elsewhere, lest she weaken from further from loss of vitality.” The Doctor had approached him to too closely, and the Warden was subjected to the full force of the man’s breath.
The Warden frowned.

“You drunken sawbones quack,” the Warden said quietly. “’Weaken from loss of vitality’, will she?” the Warden sniffed. “You should weaken from loss of drink, you sot.”
“Humph!” the Doctor said, and retreated to the edge of the platform.

But it was true, after all. Mina had weakened considerably over the course of her ordeal, as how could she not? Her grunts and struggles had grown markedly less fierce, and with the blood welling up from her wounds, Tompkins decided it would be best to bestow the last half dozen to the crease where her upper thighs joined her buttocks. It would be no favor.

He wiped the blood from the end of the whip, and found his distance.

During the delay Mina had dared to let herself believe that her punishment was over. She pulled at the straps binding her wrists with desperate impatience to be released.

Then another lightning bolt struck her. Lower down this time, but as excruciating as the previous blows had been. She wrenched in her bonds again, and cried out with despair and agony.

Five more strokes followed hard upon it, two more to the same spot, then to her opposite leg; three more vicious blows at the join of hip and thigh.
“Thirty!” shouted the Sergeant at Arms. The crowd cheered. The Warden ignored them, but took the neckerchief from the crack of Mina’s ass and, unfurling it, found a corner of it that was not stained by blood or sweat, and made a show of wiping his brow.

Before being unbound, Mina was once again sluiced with a bucket of seawater. Burning into her welts, cuts, and blisters, it revivified every nerve cell. Mina thrashed in her bonds as her body burned. Only when she quieted again, utterly spent with her exertions and her suffering, mewling softly like an injured cat, did the Warden signal for her to be untied and released from the hurdle.
 
The Warden had been correct when he had whipped her feet. That now seemed like a nothing, a lark, compared to this.
So true! Your descrition of her pain and suffering is wonderful. Only sorry it couldn't go longer. But we don't want you to kill her. Never waste a good piece of ass!
 
Over A Hurdle (cont.)

Mina’s buttocks were quivering and trembling spasmodically. She prayed hysterically for relief. She had suffered each stroke thinking that she would die, to the extent that she could think coherently at all. The pain was as though a red hot mouse had clawed its way deep into her buttocks and was twisting and turning in its new found den. She knew this was going to kill her, and for the first time in her life she welcomed death. But the physician was right about Mina: she was young and strong, and the Reaper didn’t even glance her way. In her head down position, Lethe would not even grant her the boon of unconsciousness.

Like a true craftsman, the Warden stopped again to evaluate his work. His accuracy had suffered somewhat, but that was to be expected, given the greater freedom of movement he had allowed the young traitress.

But she was suffering, that was sure. Her face was a mask of pain. Her eyes were clenched in a narrow squint, and her face was flushed and swollen. She seemed to be staring with bright intensity straight in front of her.
The blisters had developed nicely. They were swollen now, and filled with blood. As well, the repeated blows had turned the underlying flesh purple.

For Mina, it was unbearable. The greater portion of her mind was filled with sheer animal suffering. The still cogent portion prayed and pleaded for death. Her heart was pounding inside her. Her breathing was necessarily quick and shallow from her strained position, though if she could have stopped her breath entirely she would have done it, and gladly. Her body seemed to be vibrating with muscular tension. The pain was unrelenting. She grunted aloud with every stroke. They cut into her like a red hot knife, leaving a throbbing, sickening ache. The Warden had been correct when he had whipped her feet. That now seemed like a nothing, a lark, compared to this. She would have done anything, anything at all, to end it. But her body, in complete disregard of her will and her suffering, labored on.

“Mr. Tompkins, sir,” the physician interrupted. “I have observed the prisoner is developing some serious boils upon the upper aspect of her gluteal prominences. You must allow me to lance them, sir, lest they fester and mortify the subcutaneum.”
“I will lance them myself, Doctor,” the Warden told him. “Never fear. I won’t allow any festering or mortifying.”
“But it takes a trained hand, sir,” the Doctor objected, holding up his arthritic and visibly trembling own.
“A trained hand!” The Warden muttered, and paid him no further mind. Gripping the pizzle with both hands, one on the handle, and the other a foot or so apart, he sawed vigorously into one of the blisters. The coarse leather broke the blister open, and immediately blood spilled out over Mina’s buttocks, welling up from the torn blister.

Mina screamed an incoherent, grunting cry and nearly passed out. It felt like her flesh was being flayed from her body! As she clenched her gluteal muscles another streak of fire lit inside her bowels to match the fire on the surface of her buttocks.

The Warden relentlessly sawed open the blister on her other cheek as well, and Mina jerked and ripped at her bonds in her distraction, and then gagged and vomited bile in the extremity of her suffering.

The Doctor heard Mina’s distressed gagging and held up a hand for the Warden to pause. He busily checked Mina’s back with his stethoscopic horn, and looked into her eyes. Satisfied that Mina had regained her breath, he turned his attention to the freshly opened blisters. He offered a compress to staunch the flow, which the Warden accepted. After pressing down hard for a few moments, it appeared that the blood flow slowed acceptably.

“She is fit enough to continue. However, my recommendation is that you strike her elsewhere, lest she weaken from further from loss of vitality.” The Doctor had approached him to too closely, and the Warden was subjected to the full force of the man’s breath.
The Warden frowned.

“You drunken sawbones quack,” the Warden said quietly. “’Weaken from loss of vitality’, will she?” the Warden sniffed. “You should weaken from loss of drink, you sot.”
“Humph!” the Doctor said, and retreated to the edge of the platform.

But it was true, after all. Mina had weakened considerably over the course of her ordeal, as how could she not? Her grunts and struggles had grown markedly less fierce, and with the blood welling up from her wounds, Tompkins decided it would be best to bestow the last half dozen to the crease where her upper thighs joined her buttocks. It would be no favor.

He wiped the blood from the end of the whip, and found his distance.

During the delay Mina had dared to let herself believe that her punishment was over. She pulled at the straps binding her wrists with desperate impatience to be released.

Then another lightning bolt struck her. Lower down this time, but as excruciating as the previous blows had been. She wrenched in her bonds again, and cried out with despair and agony.

Five more strokes followed hard upon it, two more to the same spot, then to her opposite leg; three more vicious blows at the join of hip and thigh.
“Thirty!” shouted the Sergeant at Arms. The crowd cheered. The Warden ignored them, but took the neckerchief from the crack of Mina’s ass and, unfurling it, found a corner of it that was not stained by blood or sweat, and made a show of wiping his brow.

Before being unbound, Mina was once again sluiced with a bucket of seawater. Burning into her welts, cuts, and blisters, it revivified every nerve cell. Mina thrashed in her bonds as her body burned. Only when she quieted again, utterly spent with her exertions and her suffering, mewling softly like an injured cat, did the Warden signal for her to be untied and released from the hurdle.

This is excellent. Bravo!
 
In case anybody has missed it, yesterday I posted an illustrated version of Miss Berkeley's Voyage, if anybody wishes to remind themselves how Mina's sister suffered, now with pictures. http://www.cruxforums.com/xf/threads/miss-berkeleys-voyage.4091/page-2
Thanks for the reminder. It gave me the opportunity to look at the terrific pictures and reread the original. It's an outstanding story. I'm afraid my own "Mina," like most sequels, is a poor imitation.
 
I can only hope the warden will have a chance alone with Mina to pursue his lusts... To feel his hips slam against the wounds he inflicted... To pierce her involuntary clutching, demean, hurt, and conquer her...
Thanks for the comment, Corvid. I was actually thinking more along the lines that Ebo would carry out that task. Kinda get his own in first and "spoil" her for anyone else. Right now, though I'm a little burnt out with Mina, and deciding whether to continue or just wrap it up.
 
Thanks for the comment, Corvid. I was actually thinking more along the lines that Ebo would carry out that task. Kinda get his own in first and "spoil" her for anyone else. Right now, though I'm a little burnt out with Mina, and deciding whether to continue or just wrap it up.
I´m waiting like for the next part like an addict for the next shot. If you have to, than let it rest for a while, but please don´t shorten the story!
 
I´m waiting like for the next part like an addict for the next shot. If you have to, than let it rest for a while, but please don´t shorten the story!
Thanks Connoisseurs! You're comment is like a shot in the arm! I don't think readers realize how important feedback is to writers, especially when the writer ain't getting paid in any other coin. I'll get to writing on "Mina" again, but I can't promise anything more than my usual snail's crawl.
 
Thanks Connoisseurs! You're comment is like a shot in the arm! I don't think readers realize how important feedback is to writers, especially when the writer ain't getting paid in any other coin. I'll get to writing on "Mina" again, but I can't promise anything more than my usual snail's crawl.
She will appreciate that!
 
Thanks Connoisseurs! You're comment is like a shot in the arm! I don't think readers realize how important feedback is to writers, especially when the writer ain't getting paid in any other coin. I'll get to writing on "Mina" again, but I can't promise anything more than my usual snail's crawl.

I understand what you mean about feedback.

Brute that I am, I'm enthralled by the image of poor Mina being victimized for a man's pleasure just when she incorrectly believes she has reached the apex of her suffering; more, that the new torment will not end with a count, but only when he is satisfied.

Your work on this story has been vivid and very enjoyable to read. Please, do continue, at whatever rate best suits the flow of your imagination.
 
I understand what you mean about feedback.

Brute that I am, I'm enthralled by the image of poor Mina being victimized for a man's pleasure just when she incorrectly believes she has reached the apex of her suffering; more, that the new torment will not end with a count, but only when he is satisfied.

Your work on this story has been vivid and very enjoyable to read. Please, do continue, at whatever rate best suits the flow of your imagination.
Thanks for the comment and the kind words. Besides the pat on the back, which is always welcome, this is another reason I, and I'm sure most writers welcome feedback. I'm not writing just for myself. I want readers to enjoy what I'm writing, and everyone has slightly different personal preferences. Jackie requested that I not forget the perspective of the victim, so I've tried to incorporated that viewpoint. And you, Corvid, like the idea of a victimizer having essentially unlimited power over the victim. OK, I'll see what I can do.
 
When I was new here on CF I have made several suggestions for a few ongoing stories. I then realized that - if considered - it would become my phantasy I´m reading, not that of the author. As I have lived long enough to already know all that turns me on, it would only be a repetition. It is much more fun to be surprised (even when I am disappointed from time to time).
I have to confess though, that I was relieved when JS wrote that Mina will get satisfaction in the end. May her matyrium be long and hard until then:teeth:
 
When I was new here on CF I have made several suggestions for a few ongoing stories.
I think there is a difference between offering suggestions on what will make a story stronger based on elements of good writing, versus putting forward your own personal preferences. I have at times confused the two. I try not to offer suggestions based on my own preferences, and I'll only offer suggestions if a writer says that he or she welcomes feedback.
I then realized that - if considered - it would become my phantasy I´m reading, not that of the author. As I have lived long enough to already know all that turns me on, it would only be a repetition.
But everyone has a slightly different perspective, even with a similar fantasy. Myself, I love it when a story coincides with my own personal preferences. It's going to be different enough to seem fresh to me.
It is much more fun to be surprised (even when I am disappointed from time to time).
That too. I have been turned on to some new kinks, (ponyplay, piercing) that I never had considered erotic before. So it's all good.
 
It's quite lovely to imagine a tormentor having unlimited power over a beautiful victim, and I'm certainly not going to object to that.

But I've [also] mentioned to King Diocletian in the past that one of the things I enjoy about his stories is the sense that the assailants are under their own restraints- that propriety, or law, or the oversight of someone of a superior rank prevents them from going as far as they would like. That creates a kind of sexual tension that can, in and of itself, be quite enjoyable.

But for me, that pleasure is increased manifold when the assailant finally gets a chance to do what they really want, and the pressure of that tension and frustration then explodes in their treatment of the victim. That they be punished in effect not just for having aroused their captor's lusts, but for his being kept from sating them, even though neither is her fault.
 
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