What for?The votes are in and our girl is moved to the dungeon!
What for?
Lock her up!!!The votes are in and our girl is moved to the dungeon!
This is the link for the voting:Check out the last pagesof the link below to see how people voted.
http://www.cruxforums.com/xf/threads/impalations-not-from-this-world.5888/
Yes, but voting is closed for this poll. More voting to come!This is the link for the voting:
http://www.cruxforums.com/xf/threads/how-shall-this-girl-be-tortured.6387/
There are quite a number of us who do not find the poll format conducive to real expression or discussion of the artwork or stories. Never mind, I expect some people like them, but you might get better feedback if people simply comment.Vote here for the next poll!
http://www.cruxforums.com/xf/threads/spare-the-girl-or-torture-her-poll.6425/
I see your point in moving the story along. I guess I try and show details of the process too much sometimes. Thanks for the compliments, these comics take time and I put a considerable amount of effort to put together.There are quite a number of us who do not find the poll format conducive to real expression or discussion of the artwork or stories. Never mind, I expect some people like them, but you might get better feedback if people simply comment.
I personally think the quality of your renders is very good, and you set a scene nicely. You might try to advance the story a bit faster. Frame by frame there are times when she only changes her expression a little or moves one of her feet. This is great if you are doing stop-action animation, but for a comic format, it makes us less interested, I think. I keep thinking that if I wait a week or so, something might actually have happened to her that is interesting. 20 frames of her gazing at 5 dildos and looking terrified makes one wonder whether the guards really know what they're doing. I'm surprised she has the energy to stay frightened. Try moving it along and you may increase interest in the story. It has good potential.
I see your point in moving the story along. I guess I try and show details of the process too much sometimes. Thanks for the compliments, these comics take time and I put a considerable amount of effort to put together.