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I loved the description of the stilettos clicking during the anal. I’m not big on anal but hearing those stilettos click made it far more interesting! And yes, your description made me feel pinned to that table as well, maybe I enjoyed the pain- that would be so me!

The rather prosaic ending, felt extremely real, prostitution is repetitive like any job, anyone gets worn down by such a schedule… a real grind, you might say! :)

Very nicely written, I would be pleased to read anything you care to write.
Yeah, I love stilettos and I try to always wear them. About the ending, you know, escort are said to earn a lot of money, but this is in front of a lot of work. That's what I wanted to show. Kisses! :)
 
Well @GabriellaSivilla, I'm sure glad I found this thread! Wow, really well written. At the start you apologised for your mother tongue not being English but your written English is very, very good and to be honest, because you write in the first person with short, punchy sentences and statements, I found myself reading and hearing your very sexy Italian accent, which added to the experience.

I loved 'Gabriella the whore' who is clearly very adept at her job ... would very much like to read more.
Great job!
 
Thanks soooooo much @Fossy!!! That's really kind of you! I studied (not so much) English at school, then tried to improve it watching movies. But I have still a long way to go! :)

About the story, well, usually men meeting escort look at these meetings like they are going to an amusement park. And that's correct, they pay and they have the right to get what they have paid for. I wanted to write the story from the point of the view of the escort, because I wanted to show how different is for the girl. I wanted to depict the anxiety of a girl travelling to reach a hotel room in a distant city where she is to meet a series of complitely unknown men who will fuck her. Men whom she is going to suck their cocks, to lick their balls, to spread her legs for. That's the reason why I introduced all the details, the preparation before and after the meeting, the messages with the agency, her feeling during the penetations, all to give a touch of realism. Of course, she does it because she is paid, and has a much easier life thanks to the job she has chosen. Nice dresses, shoes, all. But she has to do compromises, and things that she would not probably do otherwise. That's why there is the anal scene: everything has a price to be paid.

But, of course, do not think too much, just enjoy the story! Kisses! :)
 
Thanks soooooo much @Fossy!!! That's really kind of you! I studied (not so much) English at school, then tried to improve it watching movies. But I have still a long way to go! :)

About the story, well, usually men meeting escort look at these meetings like they are going to an amusement park. And that's correct, they pay and they have the right to get what they have paid for. I wanted to write the story from the point of the view of the escort, because I wanted to show how different is for the girl. I wanted to depict the anxiety of a girl travelling to reach a hotel room in a distant city where she is to meet a series of complitely unknown men who will fuck her. Men whom she is going to suck their cocks, to lick their balls, to spread her legs for. That's the reason why I introduced all the details, the preparation before and after the meeting, the messages with the agency, her feeling during the penetations, all to give a touch of realism. Of course, she does it because she is paid, and has a much easier life thanks to the job she has chosen. Nice dresses, shoes, all. But she has to do compromises, and things that she would not probably do otherwise. That's why there is the anal scene: everything has a price to be paid.

But, of course, do not think too much, just enjoy the story! Kisses! :)
Maybe it's just my preference but if I like a character I want to know more about her. Of course I like reading about the sex, but I would love to know about Gabriella the Whore's background. What is her story? Why did she become an escort? What are her future plans? And then, of course more 'escapades' ... just a thought :) ...
 
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