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A Enhancement/continuation of the renders/short stories found in the links below.

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Don't know If I will be able to post next week, so:

Merry Christmas
Thanks for all the comments, inspiration and likes!!
 

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A continuation of the scene above.

7:55 newly promoted Obergefreiter Lanzmann is keeping watch near the gallows. His bored is quite bored and begins to bark, apparently wanting some attention.

8:00 the sanitater checks the women and declare them dead.
Removes the clothing and impounds them for army use.
probably going to end up as cleaning rags.

8:05 Wolff, Lanzmann's dog is now getting the attention she craves.
The hanged terrorists are declared official death.
Everyone is a bit more relaxed now. Kreuzfeld is even sitting down on the job, near the gallows.
Leutnant Hartman smiled, watching from behind the window. while hearing the report of the sanitater.
Good veteran soldiers.. Looking relaxed while keeping their eyes wide open for any trouble. No need to intervene.
Most of the villager have gone back to their work.
Only 1 old woman is still watching. Grandmother of the 3 young ones, mother in law of the elder hanged woman.
The hanged bodies are still swinging and rotating by the wind.

The officer returns to his desk.
Status reports, acquisition forms etc don't write themselves.

Thanks to Tyrone4450 (on PIXIV) for commisioning this sequel and for his permission to me post it as part of my work :)
 
Extreme cruel hanging- Most likely the final fight for air will turn the faces of the victims dark purple with swallon tongues protruding out of widely open mouth - but Crumera shows the poor executed victims not as terrible - better so !
 
Think this will be the conclusion of the Taurica series
(maybe I have a weak spot for her)

After three full days on the cross, she was getting almost to weak to push herself up.
Fever wracked her body, in her mind her surroundings changed to a more familiar scene.
The dusty road close to the farm she grew up in.
She saw her long dead mom coming closer.
She felt her moms hands embrace her and her lips touching her cheek.

Ow mom it hurts so much!!
I know dear, I can feel your pain.
Please hold me mom!!

It is almost time! she heard her mom whisper in her ear.
Just let go. Lower you head close your eyes.
She felt her mom push her lower back and at once she was standing on the grass.
Her mom holding her, the pain was gone.
it felt strange when she closed her arms around her mom.
Time to leave this place, the world seemed to dissolve around her,
giving way to a bright light.
Her mom's voice in her ear whispered: don't be scared it is going to be alright.

Not a big version this time
 

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Think this will be the conclusion of the Taurica series
(maybe I have a weak spot for her)

After three full days on the cross, she was getting almost to weak to push herself up.
Fever wracked her body, in her mind her surroundings changed to a more familiar scene.
The dusty road close to the farm she grew up in.
She saw her long dead mom coming closer.
She felt her moms hands embrace her and her lips touching her cheek.

Ow mom it hurts so much!!
I know dear, I can feel your pain.
Please hold me mom!!

It is almost time! she heard her mom whisper in her ear.
Just let go. Lower you head close your eyes.
She felt her mom push her lower back and at once she was standing on the grass.
Her mom holding her, the pain was gone.
it felt strange when she closed her arms around her mom.
Time to leave this place, the world seemed to dissolve around her,
giving way to a bright light.
Her mom's voice in her ear whispered: don't be scared it is going to be alright.

Not a big version this time
Yours give me imagination of "it hurts, my son" as i m matured woman on the cross and my son is trying to ease my pain with his hands . i m such a pervert :(
 
When the stolen gold was discovered both slaves claimed innocence.
Accusing each other of the theft.

When the master questioned them Juno managed to attack Vera.
She would have scratched her eyes out if she wasn't stopped by the bodyguards of their master.
After being restrained both kept screaming the other was the thief.


Masters hangover couldn't endure their screaming for long.
The gold had been recovered, so there was no pressing need to find the guilty one.
He had them both delivered to the tender care of the carnifex.

All the way to the execution place both were heard to proclaim loudly the other did it.
Vera laughed when Juno was nailed to her cross. Juno in a lot of pain hanging from the nails, still managed to diss Vera while she was nailed to the cross next to her.


The carnifex crucified them in a manner they could watch each other.
Insult flew for a short while between them.

Soon after the equipment was stowed and the guards settled into a normal watch routine, they run out of steam.
Silenced at last by the agony they now had to endure.


Two days later the master discovered his youngest son was the real culprit.
The following morning he himself escorted his son to Aquilla to begin his military career.
They passed by the two crosses where the two slaves were still clinging to their miserable existence.

When the master returned 2 days later, one cross stood empty, the other he noticed was getting occupied by a screaming male slave.

Comments, feedback etc would be appriciated
:)
 

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When the stolen gold was discovered both slaves claimed innocence.
Accusing each other of the theft.

When the master questioned them Juno managed to attack Vera.
She would have scratched her eyes out if she wasn't stopped by the bodyguards of their master.
After being restrained both kept screaming the other was the thief.


Masters hangover couldn't endure their screaming for long.
The gold had been recovered, so there was no pressing need to find the guilty one.
He had them both delivered to the tender care of the carnifex.

All the way to the execution place both were heard to proclaim loudly the other did it.
Vera laughed when Juno was nailed to her cross. Juno in a lot of pain hanging from the nails, still managed to diss Vera while she was nailed to the cross next to her.


The carnifex crucified them in a manner they could watch each other.
Insult flew for a short while between them.

Soon after the equipment was stowed and the guards settled into a normal watch routine, they run out of steam.
Silenced at last by the agony they now had to endure.


Two days later the master discovered his youngest son was the real culprit.
The following morning he himself escorted his son to Aquilla to begin his military career.
They passed by the two crosses where the two slaves were still clinging to their miserable existence.

When the master returned 2 days later, one cross stood empty, the other he noticed was getting occupied by a screaming male slave.

Comments, feedback etc would be appriciated
:)
Nice little story! I like the cruel twist - I hope that youth's time in the army was as painful as being crucified (and went on a lot longer)
 
Me, I would have crucified the kid who dared to steal. He would have understood...

As google translated it.
You could have done that as the language here is english.

Enlistment in the roman legion will last at least 20 years.
maybe he fit in, maybe he desert and gets caught and crucified himself.
Maybe some gauls will take him prisoner and nail him to a tree.

Who knows?
 
When the stolen gold was discovered both slaves claimed innocence.
Accusing each other of the theft.

When the master questioned them Juno managed to attack Vera.
She would have scratched her eyes out if she wasn't stopped by the bodyguards of their master.
After being restrained both kept screaming the other was the thief.


Masters hangover couldn't endure their screaming for long.
The gold had been recovered, so there was no pressing need to find the guilty one.
He had them both delivered to the tender care of the carnifex.

All the way to the execution place both were heard to proclaim loudly the other did it.
Vera laughed when Juno was nailed to her cross. Juno in a lot of pain hanging from the nails, still managed to diss Vera while she was nailed to the cross next to her.


The carnifex crucified them in a manner they could watch each other.
Insult flew for a short while between them.

Soon after the equipment was stowed and the guards settled into a normal watch routine, they run out of steam.
Silenced at last by the agony they now had to endure.


Two days later the master discovered his youngest son was the real culprit.
The following morning he himself escorted his son to Aquilla to begin his military career.
They passed by the two crosses where the two slaves were still clinging to their miserable existence.

When the master returned 2 days later, one cross stood empty, the other he noticed was getting occupied by a screaming male slave.

Comments, feedback etc would be appriciated
:)
I love you put armpit hairs :)
 
Think this will be the conclusion of the Taurica series
(maybe I have a weak spot for her)

After three full days on the cross, she was getting almost to weak to push herself up.
Fever wracked her body, in her mind her surroundings changed to a more familiar scene.
The dusty road close to the farm she grew up in.
She saw her long dead mom coming closer.
She felt her moms hands embrace her and her lips touching her cheek.

Ow mom it hurts so much!!
I know dear, I can feel your pain.
Please hold me mom!!

It is almost time! she heard her mom whisper in her ear.
Just let go. Lower you head close your eyes.
She felt her mom push her lower back and at once she was standing on the grass.
Her mom holding her, the pain was gone.
it felt strange when she closed her arms around her mom.
Time to leave this place, the world seemed to dissolve around her,
giving way to a bright light.
Her mom's voice in her ear whispered: don't be scared it is going to be alright.

Not a big version this time
I too have a weak spot for the lovely Taurica. The loveliest of all your lovely ladies. So sad to see her final appearance.

Any chance you'll change your mind?
 
Thanks Yupar! think it makes the armpits more believable:p

Think she could have a twin or maybe she is coming to star in an alternative timeline some day.
 
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