It's been a loooooong time since I've posted here. This is a new crux fantasy I had some help in finishing. So please enjoy and feel free to critique. I will post in small blocks of ten to fifteen renders at a time.
Much appreciated - thank you. But I encourage all to be critical with detailed feedback. I'm a perfectionist and if you notice something minor out of place, let me know! It's my first crux comic, and if I get enough feedback, I may consider making more to even publish on renderotica.Just commenting early on what will be one of the best threads of the year. Just a heads up for all of you who enjoy crux series and amazing artwork!!
Pictures 012 and 013 (Text 001 & 002) are in the wrong order; one says Laelia is 'wealthy'. one 'not rich'.sorry if that’s too much nitpicking, I usually don’t mention such minor issues but you asked
This is the exact input that was looking for. Aesthetics, typo’s, unrealistic poses, etcWow, this looks great, so far. Got a raft of elements I enjoy and an unusual plot, adding a scourging so early got my attention! Same with a variety of loincloths to enjoy! Thank you!
I suspect I’m going to enjoy this.
I don’t know if it is easier in other platforms , but I found the white text on red background a bit challenging to read on an iPhone.
Second paragraph had two “also”s - sorry if that’s too much nitpicking, I usually don’t mention such minor issues but you asked and I used to be a sub editor so such things stick out sometimes.
I look forward to the next installment.