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_CADRE_

Magistrate
It's been a loooooong time since I've posted here. This is a new crux fantasy I had some help in finishing. So please enjoy and feel free to critique. I will post in small blocks of ten to fifteen renders at a time.
 

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_CADRE_

Magistrate
It's been a loooooong time since I've posted here. This is a new crux fantasy I had some help in finishing. So please enjoy and feel free to critique. I will post in small blocks of ten to fifteen renders at a time.
 

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Hair and Nails
Just commenting early on what will be one of the best threads of the year. Just a heads up for all of you who enjoy crux series and amazing artwork!!
 

_CADRE_

Magistrate
Just commenting early on what will be one of the best threads of the year. Just a heads up for all of you who enjoy crux series and amazing artwork!!
Much appreciated - thank you. But I encourage all to be critical with detailed feedback. I'm a perfectionist and if you notice something minor out of place, let me know! It's my first crux comic, and if I get enough feedback, I may consider making more to even publish on renderotica.
 
Wow, this looks great, so far. Got a raft of elements I enjoy and an unusual plot, adding a scourging so early got my attention! Same with a variety of loincloths to enjoy! Thank you!

I suspect I’m going to enjoy this.

I don’t know if it is easier in other platforms , but I found the white text on red background a bit challenging to read on an iPhone.

Second paragraph had two “also”s - sorry if that’s too much nitpicking, I usually don’t mention such minor issues but you asked and I used to be a sub editor so such things stick out sometimes.

I look forward to the next installment.
 

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sorry if that’s too much nitpicking, I usually don’t mention such minor issues but you asked
Pictures 012 and 013 (Text 001 & 002) are in the wrong order; one says Laelia is 'wealthy'. one 'not rich'.

I also did a lot of proofreading.

But these in no way spoil the excellent story.
 

_CADRE_

Magistrate
Wow, this looks great, so far. Got a raft of elements I enjoy and an unusual plot, adding a scourging so early got my attention! Same with a variety of loincloths to enjoy! Thank you!

I suspect I’m going to enjoy this.

I don’t know if it is easier in other platforms , but I found the white text on red background a bit challenging to read on an iPhone.

Second paragraph had two “also”s - sorry if that’s too much nitpicking, I usually don’t mention such minor issues but you asked and I used to be a sub editor so such things stick out sometimes.

I look forward to the next installment.
This is the exact input that was looking for. Aesthetics, typo’s, unrealistic poses, etc
 

_CADRE_

Magistrate
The next chapter. Suggestions included. Let me know your thoughts. :devil:
 

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Hair and Nails
I tend to agree, but I will hold my judgment. You have yet to see how cruel the fates can be...
 
Oh that white text is far easier to read, thank you. I think the text panels are in the wrong order, typo for “manace to Rome” obviously should be “menace”

This is really nice, the renders are cute, whiplash marks nice. Laelia’s choice will display her duplicity…
 
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