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Would everyone mind posting or messaging me what your top 3 favorite renders are so far? I’m exploring which camera angles are best, which scenes invoke the most emotion, which ones are the most realistic, etc

Oh hell that is an impossible task Cadre. There are so many good ones, personal preference will sway my choices but this is a wonderful series. I commend you for the close ups on her face as she slowly fades away, and I absolutley love the several pics where the executioner toucher her body while she struggles for air, and discusses how applying pressure could help her. In numerical order I'll pic these ones out as favourites but it's a difficult choice.

The pov and confronting their fate
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So pitiful, so helpless
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The arched back, agony of the nails
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Legs broken, her futile struggle for breath
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In her pain she can feel pity for another even less fortunate
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he feels the life going out of her, she feels the touch of one with callous disregard for her future
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Beauty in death, tragic waste
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It is finished. I do like some rib action, true crux is all about suspension and tension
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Oh hell that is an impossible task Cadre. There are so many good ones, personal preference will sway my choices but this is a wonderful series. I commend you for the close ups on her face as she slowly fades away, and I absolutley love the several pics where the executioner toucher her body while she struggles for air, and discusses how applying pressure could help her. In numerical order I'll pic these ones out as favourites but it's a difficult choice.

The pov and confronting their fate
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So pitiful, so helpless
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The arched back, agony of the nails
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Legs broken, her futile struggle for breath
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In her pain she can feel pity for another even less fortunate
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he feels the life going out of her, she feels the touch of one with callous disregard for her future
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Beauty in death, tragic waste
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It is finished. I do like some rib action, true crux is all about suspension and tension
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This is perfect feedback! Thank you so much! Would those scenes be better or worse with less talk bubbles and text sound effects?
 
This is perfect feedback! Thank you so much! Would those scenes be better or worse with less talk bubbles and text sound effects?
I am on the side of 'less'. As an English speaker, I can read them OK but non-English speakers would have to type the 'bubbles' into a document and translate them. ...plus it makes your art hard to use in a manip :cool:
 
Would everyone mind posting or messaging me what your top 3 favorite renders are so far? I’m exploring which camera angles are best, which scenes invoke the most emotion, which ones are the most realistic, etc
This is a very difficult task since all renders are very good! Personally I like very much 027, condemnation, 059 carrying, and059 nailing.... but all are very good! Keep up the good work!
 
Would everyone mind posting or messaging me what your top 3 favorite renders are so far? I’m exploring which camera angles are best, which scenes invoke the most emotion, which ones are the most realistic
A very difficult task, given the incredible quality of your work, but these resonate most with me:
51213F47-3E59-4C39-B4FA-C819536021A1.png #29 The pleading eyes.
ECFD2116-86C1-4D3D-AD76-08ED52A4DBFA.png #55 The look of despair.
9C271431-B9B9-4F18-853A-87625E85C173.png #63 Mila pose.
84D06881-5D28-42F3-8F50-82C9712340B0.png #66 Mila facial expression towards guards.
A9450775-CDC6-4599-93F0-55A36F10809C.png #81 Cassia facial expression.
922129C6-4009-40BF-AF88-17129F1066DC.png #88 The Hands intertwined.
FDCA2DF4-3C3E-4F95-8BEF-8141540A47A2.png #95 The arch!
8C55C7A4-79CE-458F-AC93-2F3B1C312479.png #97 The empathy
 
Feel free to be honest everyone: are the talk bubbles distracting aesthetically, or is it bad dialogue? I’ve been struggling to make realistic dialogue given the
This is perfect feedback! Thank you so much! Would those scenes be better or worse with less talk bubbles and text sound effects?
I think the talk bubbles are fine though the dialogue feels a bit too contemporary to me. I feel the text sound effects are not needed and distract me from the drama of your images. Just an opinion... Your work is outstanding, regardless!
 
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