The original (or at least an older) version of the story is "Jamilla’s crucifixion" by Marius Zebo.
The English seems OK to me. And at the start the author specifically states that "Passing this story on to others, or publishing it in any way without permission of the author,MariusZebo, is illegal." Just so you know.
Like I said, starting a sentence with a conjunction is poor grammar and style . . .
Thanks for the author's name - I'll tag it into my copy for any future use. The story was found on a public site a long, long time ago, altered for personal use and now shared.
Some ideas I've found have been very good indeed, but poorly executed (pun intended). That improved versions supplant or run alongside originals in the CF archives can only be good, can it not? Who drives a model T Ford these days?
I've seen clarification here about the use of photos from copyright (pay) sources and public (free) ones, on which basis M.Z's restriction would have no import. I'll let you know his comments if he ever gets in touch with me, unless he posts here first.
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I have a few other stories that are modified originals, some much more so than this particular example. I hope they'll be posted and enjoyed in due course.
For a more recently published 'matched pair' I have the author's written permission to use the idea.
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Afficianados of 'The 39 Steps' story will know of at least four film versions of it, none of which is true to Buchan's original. All very entertaining though . . .