Poems and other stuff, by Baracus

[Crux-Emperor Baracus X]

(here's my first attempt at prose...hope it satisfies...??)

SLAVE LIFE CRUELTY

Chained to Oars
Condemned to Crucifixion
Suspended sentence
How many Years... ?!
At Executioners whims.

Suffering the Whips
Back-breaking toiling
"MOVE,YOU FUCKING SCUM !!"
Crack,scream Crack scream..
Constant indescribable pain.

Once a Nobleman...
A man of influence
Betrayed by Romans
Sentenced to die
False charges,no appeal.

Wife imprisioned,tortured
Enslaved into Prostitution
Frequently Raped,no respite
Daily routine of degradation
Awaits her Beheading gladly.

Son in Heavy Chains
Sent into the Mines
Toiling Naked and Vulnerable
Sodomized and brutalised
Hunger and Thirst daily.

Daughters both Virgins
Stripped naked,gang raped
Sold into slavery bondage
Brothel life awaits
Cursing their misfortune.

Back to me,unfortunately
Disgraced stinking of sweat
Filthy loincloth, barely covered
Old,discoloured and torn
Stained over the years....

Every single morning ritual
I masturbate,or be flogged
present my jism as proof..
Any sex is denied...
I daren't risk temptation.

As I strain and heave cursing
Only have one single thought
"For Mercy's sake have pity,
Crucify me now,PLEASE...
I just want to DIE ......!! "

 

[windar]

I don't know if Amazon delivers to slave galleys (I think you need to have Prime) but this book might help.

 

[Crux-Emperor Baracus X]

ANY feedback will be appreciated.... it's a miserable life chained to the Oars clad in a stinking wet loincloth and no conversation.

 

[old slave]

Crucify me now,PLEASE...
I just want to DIE ......!! "

I slack off a little
The whip slashes my back
I slack off some more
They try to hurt me
The Master laughs at me.

A filthy blond girl
Thrown at my feet
Wrists in chains
Bruises and cuts
Is this a treat?

To get me to row?
Turn her over
What horror is this?
'Tis my eldest girl
They've brought her here!

"You'll row, you bastard
Else she gets whipped
No slacking, no rest
We'll whip her breasts
You'll see and hear it all".

"When she's nearly dead
It's the cross for her
Her cries and her moans
Will torture your brain
But your body suffers no pain."

"And then as a treat
Your youngest we'll bring
More screams to help you row"
I'll row, and I'll row
To save my poor girls.

This is my life
I do not rest
I do not slack
I cannot DIE
Yet I hear her cry.

 

[Crux-Emperor Baracus X]

A Victim's viewpoint....

Crucified,I hang....
The unceasing AGONY
Burning,indescribable PAIN
Wrists roped then nailed
Ankles perforated twice also.

Stinking of sweat and piss
I've defecated myself
The defeat,and humiliation
Torn loincloth soiled constantly
Hangs embarrassingly low

Trembling with tiresome effort
Shivering in agonised spasms
Muscles constantly cramping..
"Fucking Hell, it HURTS,please...!!"
(HOW MUCH MORE of this ??)

I cannot,Goddamn BREATHE
Gagged,spittle drooling rivulets
My throat is so parched
Head is really pounding thumping
Chest is rapidly heaving pumping

Blistering heat excruciating pain
Eyes sting with salty sweat
Hair hangs lank and greasy
"Crown" of Thorns bloodied
A cruel sadistic reminder.

Forcibly, l look down....
witness my fluttering torso
Filth and sweat caked,drying
Loincloth's come aside....
Exposed flaccid Penis,the shame.

Dimly,I hear the hostile crowd
Jeering and taunting perpetually
Letting their feelings known
Roman citizens enjoying it
Apparently I truly "deserve this"

I carried that patibulium
Having been sadistically flogged
Publicly sodomized and sucked off
Via Crucis I'd endure for miles
The weight,humiliation and discomfort

The Nailing,naturally I'd screamed
No point being impassive
Fuck...it REALLY bloody HURTS
Burning shocking agony
My body racked and jolted.

As I hang it's been ages
Lost all track of senses and reality
I desperately try to breathe....
That Cornu......it's massive
Penetrated intimately and violated.

Every movement's an effort...
Please,I WANT to die soon...
I hate,HATE this vicious execution
Surely I deserved some dignity ?
Not this degradation on the Cross..?

It's getting darker...
I'm getting weaker
Feeling faint. light headed.
Give up struggling
Awaits.....my.......*expires*

Finis

 

[Madiosi]

I slack off a little
The whip slashes my back
I slack off some more
They try to hurt me
The Master laughs at me.

A filthy blond girl
Thrown at my feet
Wrists in chains
Bruises and cuts
Is this a treat?

To get me to row?
Turn her over
What horror is this?
'Tis my eldest girl
They've brought her here!

"You'll row, you bastard
Else she gets whipped
No slacking, no rest
We'll whip her breasts
You'll see and hear it all".

"When she's nearly dead
It's the cross for her
Her cries and her moans
Will torture your brain
But your body suffers no pain."

"And then as a treat
Your youngest we'll bring
More screams to help you row"
I'll row, and I'll row
To save my poor girls.

This is my life
I do not rest
I do not slack
I cannot DIE
Yet I hear her cry.

Poems should have a title...

 

[Eulalia]

Poems should have a title...

OS is extending Baracus's poem - I think they work well together,

ANY feedback will be appreciated.... it's a miserable life chained to the Oars clad in a stinking wet loincloth and no conversation.

You've imagined yourself pretty strongly into the situation -
I like the way each stanza presents a new angle in a few words,
the form isn't too strict, but it keeps things well-focused
and carries it along with a steady rhythm -
you should certainly try working on, and varying, this style of writing.

 

[Crux-Emperor Baracus X]

Yeah thanks Eul. I'm new to this and it's been a long time since I felt confident enough to share my personal thoughts....

 

[Jollyrei]

Good to have a new poet around.

 

[Crux-Emperor Baracus X]

Hiya folks !! I understand that I've been awarded trophies in the past but I can't seem to find notifications
could anyone point me in the right direction ?? Thanks and enjoy your crucifixion fantasies.

 

[Madiosi]

Hiya folks !! I understand that I've been awarded trophies in the past but I can't seem to find notifications
could anyone point me in the right direction ?? Thanks and enjoy your crucifixion fantasies.

Look "Help" right on bottom and then "Trophies"!

http://www.cruxforums.com/xf/help/trophies/

 

[Crux-Emperor Baracus X]

I hang on my Cross....
Naked,condemned to die
A penalty so serious,my guilt
I,Baracus deserved nothing less
Nailed to the coarse wood,dying

Through the haze of pain
I'm dimly, vaguely aware...
There's someone else crucified
Sharing my awful bloody fate
Who?? I raise my eyes....

It's a Woman,a young one
An attractive one at that...
Pale,soft and quite feminine
Her flesh dirtied and bloodied
Naked on her T-Cross of pain.

She looks across at me,focuses
Eyes meet,starts to speak...
Voice cracking with emotion,effort
Full of feeling and hatred
An unknown,foreign tongue

What's she trying to say ??
Sounds angry,bitter,imploring
I cannot understand,I'm so sorry
Shaking her head,she whimpers
Her face drops,tears soon follow

Like me,she struggles,it's cruel
Her arms wrapped round beam
Legs crudely parted bound behind
Displaying her sex,violated obscene.
Punishment hideously uncomfortable

I try to show sympathy it's sincere
But she doesn't understand...
She curses everyone,me included
I've made her more uncomfortable
I can only apologise, in vain

For ages,we both suffer and hang
Struggling to breathe and live,(why?)
Hunger,Thirsty,burning intense torturous
We've both defecated,to our shame
Suffering the agonies in the heat...

Soon,she's losing,fading fast
Not strong enough to continue
Full of pity and hate,suffered enough
She croaks her last rasping words....
"MMM....MMM...Messa......" *dies*

 

[old slave]

ANY feedback will be appreciated....

I hope you didn't mind my extension, your poem got into my head as I was gardening so I just had to sit at the keyboard and add my horrible twist to your man's thoughts.

There is a long and honorable history of poems on this site, though not so many recently, so what she says:

You've imagined yourself pretty strongly into the situation -
I like the way each stanza presents a new angle in a few words,
the form isn't too strict, but it keeps things well-focused
and carries it along with a steady rhythm -
you should certainly try working on, and varying, this style of writing.

 

[Crux-Emperor Baracus X]

SLAVE LIFE CRUELTY...(The prequel... ) SENTENCED TO DIE....(part l)

Trembling,with fear and emotion
I stand,(falsely) accused,been tried
Nervously await my "justice"
The Verdict soon,gravely,delivered
What's it going to be....?!

"Baracus...we have reached a verdict
The court of Senate has decided
Your crime is too great to ignore
You have NO right of appeal
We find you...GUILTY, ,of treason!!"

The penalty is announced,severe indeed
Death by Crucifixion, but suspended
To last longer on the cruel Cross
Endure two years of Hard Slavery
Build up my strength.(should I survive)

I babble,incoherent, protesting screaming
It's inevitable, I already know the outcome
"NO,NO,it's totally untrue,I DIDN'T DO IT
PLEASE,will nobody listen...??
By all the Gods,I don't deserve this.....!!"

"Please spare my Wife and family.PLEASE !!
They are innocent and undeserving
Please don't make them suffer needlessly
Show some mercy I'm begging of you all...
I was set-up..Betrayed by enemies unknown."

Big strong giant Guards,take my arms
Drag me To the Cells,protesting wildly
I'm fighting.kicking yelling,to no avail
Descending dark gloomy smelly steps
Towards imprisonment, an uncertain fate.

Neck,collared,Wrists,Ankles manacled,
Stripped of my Noble Robes,Naked.
Laughing,cruelly they proffer me.....
A dirty,stinking,discoloured Loincloth
"Hurry up,put this on...SCUM !!"

Thrown into my unlit prison cell
Door slams,bolts drawn,I'm trapped
I slump to the ground,it's cold,sticky
Totally utterly hopeless despair
I can only cry bitterly and wait.....to Die !!

END of Part One.....

 

[Crux-Emperor Baracus X]

SLAVE LIFE CRUELTY The Prequel
SENTENCED TO DIE (Part ll)

l sit in the stygian total darkness
A foul-smelling tiny cell,my "home"
Plenty of time to reflect,my injustice
On the events that had conspired
My fate having been decided...Death

What DID I do to deserve this ??
I'd been a Nobleman,in high places
Someone begrudgingly accused me...WHY ?!
A whirl of emotions,shame and anger.
How long MUST I wait,in this hole ??

Slumped on the floor,undignified
Disgusting excuse of a Loincloth
Pathetic,barely covering my privates
I've soiled and pissed myself,vomited
Combination of cold,fear and nerves...

After what seems like forever and ever
The unmistakable noise of bolts drawn
Cell door flung open loudly...."crash!!"
I blink my eyes at the blinding torchlight
Framed in the doorway are 2 giant men

"GET UP,YOU FUCKING BASTARD !!
Ha ha it's time for you to serve....
We're taking you to the Galleys
Gonna be chained to Oars and whipped
You'll soon wish you were fucking DEAD !!"

He reaches in,grabs my wrist chains
Up I get,confused i stumble and sway
I'm led out trembling weak and afraid
Brutally encouraged by the cane
Sharp pains across my backside !!

In the courtyard I see many others
Unshaved,smelly filthy wretches
Empty red eyes,gazing in the distance
Mostly Menfolk,condemned to Slavery
Bizarrely I see there's frightened Women too.

Looking around,I cynically observe....
The males,like me,are "clothed"....
Not so,the unfortunate Females...
Their naked shame and degredation
It's clear to see they're being taunted

"Look at those little Bitches,cor,look !!"
"Those Tits I'd suck forever,yeah !!"
"I'd fuck that one,She's hot for it !!"
"Show us your cunt,you dirty Whore!!"
"Enjoy your lives as a Sex-Slave,sluts !!"

Angrily,I felt such shame for them
It's no way to live or be treated,the sadists
Admittedly I'm also in desperate straits
What will our destination be....??
Chains attached,coffled,we march...to Hell

END of Part ll

 

[ShadowWolf]

I hang on my Cross....
Naked,condemned to die
A penalty so serious,my guilt
I,Baracus deserved nothing less
Nailed to the coarse wood,dying

Through the haze of pain
I'm dimly, vaguely aware...
There's someone else crucified
Sharing my awful bloody fate
Who?? I raise my eyes....

It's a Woman,a young one
An attractive one at that...
Pale,soft and quite feminine
Her flesh dirtied and bloodied
Naked on her T-Cross of pain.

She looks across at me,focuses
Eyes meet,starts to speak...
Voice cracking with emotion,effort
Full of feeling and hatred
An unknown,foreign tongue

What's she trying to say ??
Sounds angry,bitter,imploring
I cannot understand,I'm so sorry
Shaking her head,she whimpers
Her face drops,tears soon follow

Like me,she struggles,it's cruel
Her arms wrapped round beam
Legs crudely parted bound behind
Displaying her sex,violated obscene.
Punishment hideously uncomfortable

I try to show sympathy it's sincere
But she doesn't understand...
She curses everyone,me included
I've made her more uncomfortable
I can only apologise, in vain

For ages,we both suffer and hang
Struggling to breathe and live,(why?)
Hunger,Thirsty,burning intense torturous
We've both defecated,to our shame
Suffering the agonies in the heat...

Soon,she's losing,fading fast
Not strong enough to continue
Full of pity and hate,suffered enough
She croaks her last rasping words....
"MMM....MMM...Messa......" *dies*

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Your descriptive nature is quite interesting.