Lol. I'm good at talking. Not so much writing. The two stories I posted recently were written years ago.Lord. Rip Van Winkle has awoken. The good sized post in a week! I can't keep up! I'm too busy just trying to write a few things of my own.
Great idea windar!The case was assigned to Detectives Stan Goldman and Barbara Moore. Moore immediately got herself kidnapped along with the others and Goldman decided that retirement couldn't come a day too soon.
Perhaps you could keep them for a little bit just to ensure that the women receive the very same harsh treatment as any other male slave and then sale them!
Hmmm. . . Barbara kidnapped by Jose and his gang . . . A tempting thought.The case was assigned to Detectives Stan Goldman and Barbara Moore. Moore immediately got herself kidnapped along with the others and Goldman decided that retirement couldn't come a day too soon.
I enjoyed the story a lot. There were two things I’d have left out, but that’s ok. It’s your tale after all. And mostly my “ cup of tea”.. thank you for sharing your creative writing!
I welcome your comments. The devious minds here on CF often give me better ideas than I had originally, even if it's on what to leave out.
