willowfall
Senator
Hi guys;
It has been a while (ok a long while) since I actually finished a story. But here it is, the only one I've finished in a long time and it is outside my normal genre. Please feel free to critique as much as you like as long as you are civil. My writing will only mature with input from the audience. Feel free to say what you like or do not like about the story and in the more detail the better.
If you decide to share the story with other groups please feel free to do so , AS LONG AS I GET CREDIT for it. I have seen stories of mine published under other people's names.
Thank you in advance for all your input.
kisses
willowfall
It has been a while (ok a long while) since I actually finished a story. But here it is, the only one I've finished in a long time and it is outside my normal genre. Please feel free to critique as much as you like as long as you are civil. My writing will only mature with input from the audience. Feel free to say what you like or do not like about the story and in the more detail the better.
If you decide to share the story with other groups please feel free to do so , AS LONG AS I GET CREDIT for it. I have seen stories of mine published under other people's names.
Thank you in advance for all your input.
kisses
willowfall
