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Catherine tried not to flinch as the scribe read out her sentence: "Since the accused does not respond to gentle admonishment we have to proceed to the question." The two torturers, their faces hidden by masks, advanced upon her and roughly grasped her arms, leading her to the heavy wooden ladder leaning at an angle to the wall of the torture chamber that was in the same house where she was imprisoned. What an ordeal these last three months had been. Who would have known that one of the brats who always sneaked into her garden and orchard would come down with a cough that ended in his death. And just her luck that her spiteful neighbor to the west had to overhear Catherine as she cursed the children as they ran away "The Devil take you all."

Now here she was embroiled in a witch process and who knew how it would end. With the worst part of it being the humiliation at every step. Chained like a dog to the wall and forced to do her business in a bucket placed just a few feet from her. And a succession of guards coming and going all day and night, many making the lewdest of comments about her starting with being a whore to the Devil. It's true that she was no youngster anymore. Just last May she had turned 50, but she was still in fine condition. Nature had endowed her well, especially with large breasts and a round behind, with all of her hard labor keeping her from ever getting fat, but still pleasingly plump as her mother had once put it when she asked about her appearance when she was still a girl.

In the little village in Thuringia where she lived at least once a year there would be an accusation of witchcraft, especially during times of scarcity or when an unusually high number of children would die of something or another. In the other cell in the town prison was Anna Marice C.. also accused, but who had already confessed and was being tortured to find out the names of accomplices. Catherine shuddered at the thought that she had been named as one at the Sabbath conducted by the Devil. If that was true, she was already as good as gone.
Knowing herself to be innocent she had kept up a brave front all this time. And curiously to her even that was being held against her, with some of her guards telling her that it was certain proof of her guilt if she showed no tears or remorse. It was all no use how she behaved, with all assuming her guilt beforehand. At least she had been forewarned the last evening before her torture by the jailers wife, who she had been friendly and often gossiped with as to what would follow. The two torturers quickly got her out of the shift that was her only article of clothing, and lead her naked as the day she was born, in front of a roomful of men, all of whom she knew many years., to a framework made to expose anyone strapped to it to the maximum extent possible. She almost cried in her shame as she looked out and couldn't help but to hear the scribe observe "Look how she even now does not show remorse." After trying her to the framework the chief torturer produced a pair of shears and with no further ceremony began to cut Catherine's hair, starting with the hair on her head, then to her armpits, and lastly to the secret place only seen before by her husband. After what seemed to be an endless amount of time, the torturer then took out from his belt a knife which gleamed with its sharpness, and he then trimmed away what was left of her hair down to the very roots, leaving her hairless. Then they bound her eyes so that she could not see, and just as the jailers' wife had warned her, they began pricking her here there and everywhere, especially in her shameful parts in order to find the Devil's Mark. After what seemed an interminable amount of time, this stage ended much to her relief. The worst of it being that as they pricked her rear end she had felt a fart working itself down and she knew that if she were to release it they would accuse her of summoning the Devil to aid her.

At last this stage was over, but as she had been warned, with much worse to come. She felt the torturers unbind her wrists and ankles and remove the bandage from her eyes. None too gently they then lead her to what she knew would be the principle place of torment, the ladder. At the command of the torturer she began to mount the ladder, which had 20 rungs, with a roller at the bottom. Especially humiliating to her was how her body was so exposed being completely hairless. At the fourth step of the ladder, at the command of the torturer she turned herself around, facing outwards, and having a good look at all those in the room, noticing that many were leering at her. Her hands were tied behind her back with a rope running to the 3rd rung from the top, and another rope lead to a wheel fitted with a lever and cogs below her feet. Catherine knew that this torture would involve being stretched at the ankles which would force her arms to move upwards, eventually resulting in dislocation. The judge gave the signal to the torturers to proceed. Catherine then braced herself, but amazingly to her there was no pain, and the judge then ordered the torturers to unbind her.

As she was pulling on her shift she heard the judge order the scribe to write "The prisoner, since not enough evidence has been gathered against her, is now freed. Of course if anymore evidence mounts against her," he observed giving her a sour look, "she will be brought back here and we will then proceed to Tormentorum Realis not just the Territio Verbalis of today.

Later that day as she was being taken from her cell the jailers' wife whispered to her "Good for you. Anna Marie C. never mentioned you. " Catherine walked slowly from the prison back to her home. Several of those who saw her refused to acknowledge her presence, looking down at the ground or up at the sky to avoid her eyes. She knew that while she was free today she could be brought back into suspicion at any time. And having been touched by the executioner, she was now considered unclean by all, and not fit for decent company.
 
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Territio Catherine tried not to flinch as the scribe read out her sentence: "Since the accused does not respond to gentle admonishment we have to proceed to the question."
The two torturers, their faces hidden by masks, advanced upon her and roughly grasped her arms, leading her to the heavy wooden ladder leaning at an angle to the wall of the torture chamber that was in the same house where she was imprisoned. What an ordeal these last three months had been. Who would have known that one of the brats who always sneaked into her garden and orchard would come down with a cough that ended in his death. And just her luck that her spiteful neighbor to the west had to overhear Catherine as she cursed the children as they ran away "The Devil take you all."
Now here she was embroiled in a witch process and who knew how it would end. With the worst part of it being the humiliation at every step.
Chained like a dog to the wall and forced to do her business in a bucket placed just a few feet from her. And a succession of guards coming and going all day and night, many making the lewdest of comments about her starting with being a whore to the Devil. It's true that she was no youngster anymore.
Just last May she had turned 50, but she was still in fine condition. Nature had endowed her well, especially with large breasts and a round behind, with all of her hard labor keeping her from ever getting fat, but still pleasingly plump as her mother had once put it when she asked about her appearance when she was still a girl.
In the little village in Thuringia where she lived at least once a year there would be an accusation of witchcraft, especially during times of scarcity or when an unusually high number of children would die of something or another.

A story from my homestate! Thank you!
 
It's a good account of a torture. However, as Madiosi says, it would benefit from some editing. You might also expand the descriptions of the various tortures for full erotica or dramatic effect. A nice short piece. Could use a couple of manips, for illustrations.
 
Maybe a advise. When you write with word or similar app, save the file as .txt. Open it again and than copy and paste in the message field.
 
Owwww, a desert of words. This text needs paragraphs.
Thank you to those who made constructive criticism. I too hate to read "desert of words" writings. I'm afraid the text came out that way because of my ignorance of posting technique. The original as I had written it had about two to four sentences in an average paragraph. And I would very much appreciate if any could illustrate this little story since my artistic technique is even worse than my ability to post text. Perhaps an illustration by Ducans whose work I greatly admire?
 
Thank you to those who made constructive criticism. I too hate to read "desert of words" writings. I'm afraid the text came out that way because of my ignorance of posting technique. The original as I had written it had about two to four sentences in an average paragraph. And I would very much appreciate if any could illustrate this little story since my artistic technique is even worse than my ability to post text. Perhaps an illustration by Ducans whose work I greatly admire?
I seeing no barrier for a repeat try, @damhouder .
;-)
 
It’s vividly described, and yet not delicate or clean. Kind of reminds me of the work of John Waters, if he did torture porn.
 
It’s vividly described, and yet not delicate or clean. Kind of reminds me of the work of John Waters, if he did torture porn.
John Waters? You mean the famous John Waters who did that cult classic "Hairspray?" Some of the scenes of Hairspray were filmed close to where I live these days and a friend working for a local newspaper interviewed Waters. A movie which brought us back to the 50's when Jim Crow was alive and well and America was still great.
 
[QUOTE = "Beate, post: 429422, member: 14705"] Yes, and I'm looking forward to the next one of you. [/ QUOTE] >>>> Danke.
 
Territio

Catherine tried not to flinch as the scribe read out the order of the University which was supervising her trial. "Since the accused does not respond to gentle questioning we will proceed to the embarrassing question."

The torturer and his assistant, their features hidden by masks, advanced upon her and roughly grasping her arms brought her close to the heavy wooden ladder like apparatus leaning against the wall in the basement of the house in which she had been imprisoned now for weeks. What an ordeal these last months had been. Who would have known that one of the brats who regularly raided her garden and orchard would come down with a mysterious ailment which would kill him in a matter of weeks. And just her luck that her always spiteful neighbor would hear her shout at the children as they ran away "I hope the Devil carries you all away."

Now she was embroiled in a witch process and who knew how it would end. With the worst of it being the constant humiliations that went on everyday. To be chained to the wall like a dog and to have to do her business in a wooden bucket that was emptied only sporadically. And a succession of watchers and keepers with their constant lewd comments feeling free to fondle her at any occasion and her inability to get away from them.

It's true that she was no youngster anymore. She had turned 50 last May, but she still had a fine figure with large breasts and round rump, all of which attracted the glances from the menfolk of the village. She was still "pleasingly plump" as her mother had described it when as a girl she had asked if she was attractive.

With all of the time now on her hands as she sat chained in her cell it occurred to her that rarely was there a year when a witch process had not taken place either in her village or nearby villages in Thuringia. And those trials always seemed to coincide with hard times, wars, crop failures, epidemics which swept people, especially children, away.

In the other cell of the town prison lay Annaliese Myer, who had a long reputation as a witch who had already confessed under torture and was being tortured repeatedly to obtain the names of her companions at the Devil's Sabbaths. Catherine shuddered at the thought that she had already been named as an accomplice. Which would mean it was all up for her.

Knowing herself to be innocent, she had kept up a brave front all of this time. And curiously to her even this through her under even greater suspicion. It was said by many who guarded her that the Devil helped his own, giving them courage, and even appearing invisibly in the prison and torture chamber to aid and comfort his servants so that they would not confess. Fortunately for Catherine, thanks to her gossiping with the jailers' wife, she had advance warning of what lay before her. Still, nothing could allay her shame and mortification as was stripped naked as the day she was born and obliged to pass before the gaze of men that she had known all of her life in the village.
The torturers led her to a frame equiped with straps that was close to the large heavy wooden ladder which she knew to be the chief instrument which would be used upon her. As Catherine quickly discovered the frame was designed to expose the human body as completely as could be imagined. Methodically the torturers tied her to points which spread her body to the utmost. Quickly the master executioner took a shears to the hair on her head, then to her armpits, and lastly to a place which only her husband had seen in their years of marriage. He did that job of depilation quickly, but then worked at a very slow and methodical pace with a sharp knife to shave off any fragments of her hair that was left, reducing those formerly hairy spots to smoothness.

Then they bound her eyes with a bandage to blind her, and as the jailers wife had told her, they began their examination for the Devils mark upon her body. First looking for visible signs then testing here there and everywhere for what was invisible, concentrating especially on the most private of her parts. And adding to her predicament was that she felt a fart trying to break loose, and fearing that if she were to release it the torturers would claim that she was trying to summon the Devil to her aid.

After what seemed a great deal of time the two torturers finished this phase, unbound her from the frame and led her over to the ladder, telling the court officials that certainly she was a witch, but the Devil had cleverly hidden the mark on this one. At this point the master torturer began a new phase of the examination. Master Jakab took her to see his collection of tools that lay upon a tray near the ladder.

He said to Katherine "Now, whore of the Devil, and witch, look upon the toys with which I am about to play with upon you. He picked up an instrument, "This is the thumbscrew. When we squeeze upon it those fingers of yours which did the Devils work will feel the just reward for such evil. Picking up another instrument he said "And these are the Spanish Boots. What the thumbscrews will do to your fingers is as nothing compared to what these will do to your legs if you do not confess.

"And all of these instruments will be used upon you while laying upon the ladder which will stretch you apart and keeping you firmly in our power." He then picked up another tool, an instrument which looked much as if it was the bow to a fiddle, with a cord made of horse hair held tautly. "This beauty is the hair cord. I'll fiddle a pretty tune upon your body, paying special attention to that place where you and the Devil sported so often. It will be just punishment for lusting after the Devil with his huge member and frigid nature."
Then he said to Catherine "Now that you've seen what I am about and what will happen will you spare yourself from an ordeal."
She shook her head "No. I will not confess when I have committed no crime." With that the torturer said "Very well" and motioned for her to mount the ladder. Very slowly she began to step upwards, feeling the eyes of all present boring into her. When she got to the fourth step Master Jakab ordered her to turn about and face forward. He and his assistant bound her. First they tied together her hands behind her back, and then tied the two joined hands to a rung on the ladder. Then they tied together her ankles, and attached the ankles to the drum at the foot of the ladder which was equiped with a large lever and a set of cogs in order to hold fast the prisoner under tension.

At a signal from the torture master his assistant climbed down in order to be at the ground level in order to work the lever. Master Jakab stayed on the ladder next to Catherine with his hand upon her heart, and signaled once again to the assistant.

Catherine gasped, expecting at any moment to be engulfed in pain. But nothing happened. It was if time had been suspended and the totally unexpected had taken place. Then the scribe spoke "It is the order of the higher court at the University that Catherine Stein is now only menaced with the torture. And since no further evidence has been supplied that would increase our suspicion that the torture is suspended."
Then the judge spoke " As a subordinate justice I must defer to my superiors. But let me warn you Catherine Stein, that if there is even the slightest further suspicion upon you that you will back upon the ladder, and this time everything that has only been shown to you today will be used upon your sinful body. And this court will also observe that monies must be paid for the cost of the imprisonment and placing the accused in the view of torture, which I expect will come up to some 50 thalers or more."
Later that day as Catherine got together her few personal articles from the cell the jailers' wife leaned over and whispered to her.Good for you. Annaliese said nothing about you."

Catherine walked slowly from the prison back to her home. She pulled the scarf tightly about her newly shaven head. People she came across avoided her eyes, looking up at the sky or down at the ground, all trying to avoid her gaze. She knew she was now be considered an outcaste. A foul and filthy executioner had defiled her by his hands upon her body, and as such she would have very little place in the world.
 
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I have to apologize for how this posting came out again. It was all set out in nice short paragraphs and yet now appears in a jumble again. I guess I'm not sufficiently well versed in these matters.
 
Hallo Damhouder,
ein kleiner Tipp: Versuche die Abstände nicht mit 1 x Return, sondern mit 2 x Return zu erstellen.
Das kann schon genügen, damit man besser angezeigt wird.

Viel Glück,
Bea
Bea, English please! ;)
Hello Damhouder,
a little tip: Try to create the distances not with 1 x Return, but with 2 x Return.
That can be enough to make it easier to see.

Good luck,
Bea
 
I have to apologize for how this posting came out again. It was all set out in nice short paragraphs and yet now appears in a jumble again. I guess I'm not sufficiently well versed in these matters.
Hallo Damhouder,
ein kleiner Tipp: Versuche die Abstände nicht mit 1 x Return, sondern mit 2 x Return zu erstellen.
Das kann schon genügen, damit man besser angezeigt wird.

Viel Glück,
Bea
Hi damhouder, I have edited in the breaks, exactly as suggested by Beate.
 
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