Thanks, Jollyrei - I've written sex scenes before but this is my first attempt at manipping one!
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The Illustrated Chronicle of the Lady Jasmine
- Thread starter Wragg
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xso
Tribune
Wonderful and beautiful love scenes, thank's for these creations! However I think they ought to be punished for their infidelity, they deserve to be crucified! (And we crux perverts would like to watch that scene....
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bobinder
ARTISAN
Of course it is...
Outstanding! - love it, Wragg!
bobinder
ARTISAN
A clever ploy by Jasmine - making Marcus regret the loss of the house slaves (and simultaneously identifying with their role...)Jasmine heads home
... and now he is lulled into thinking that Jasmine derived a certain satisfaction from her visit to the South Gate!
Excellent use of Jasmine's expressions with her words in this sequence!
xso
Tribune
This is really a super series, thanks again W! Jas seems to be out of her mind..... She could have continous sex with her beautiful friend, new attractiv slaves and a life in luxery.... and she still babbels about her crucified slave girls.... Ok, looks promising for us crux perverts however...
Well this isn't going to end well.
Up to a point, I suppose. The fact that she's likely to get herself killed is perhaps a down side.
You are on a creative roll, Mr. Wragg. Some superb use of close-up shots, and Marcus looks sufficiently like the sort of person we would like to see "peeled" with a dagger.
A clever ploy by Jasmine - making Marcus regret the loss of the house slaves (and simultaneously identifying with their role...)
... and now he is lulled into thinking that Jasmine derived a certain satisfaction from her visit to the South Gate!
Excellent use of Jasmine's expressions with her words in this sequence!
This is really a super series, thanks again W! Jas seems to be out of her mind..... She could have continous sex with her beautiful friend, new attractiv slaves and a life in luxery.... and she still babbels about her crucified slave girls.... Ok, looks promising for us crux perverts however...
Well this isn't going to end well.
Up to a point, I suppose. The fact that she's likely to get herself killed is perhaps a down side.
You are on a creative roll, Mr. Wragg. Some superb use of close-up shots, and Marcus looks sufficiently like the sort of person we would like to see "peeled" with a dagger.
Thanks! Sometimes I wonder about this thread. I sat and thought, "I'm making a manipulation of hands peeling an apple, and I'm going to upload it to the internet." Weird.
Her somewhat overdeveloped sense of injusted is leading her into trouble waters, perhaps. Indeed.
Especially on a forum concerned with the torture and death of naked people. All good. We have a strong suspicion that he's going to die.
Anyway, one has to do the build-up, and you are doing a complete story here - there are bound to be some linking images like this. Anyway, look at that knife.
Loxuru
Graf von Kreuzigung
A manip where he cuts his finger, that would be extremely cruel and unseen violence on this forum!Thanks! Sometimes I wonder about this thread. I sat and thought, "I'm making a manipulation of hands peeling an apple, and I'm going to upload it to the internet." Weird.
I second the appreciations posted above here!
Debates as turmoil goes on....
Frank Petrexa
Tribune
At least there aren't any "alternative facts". Everybody agrees about what happened.
The plot thickens. Jasmine confronts the murderer of her father and her beloved slavegirls, but does she have a plan? The suspense is building.
See?
What's this? An admission of guilt from Marcus?
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Is the tide turning in Jasmine's favour?
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