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The Procedure (ongoing series)

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John Delves Richardson said:
This is a story done exclusively with images. I will publish a picture per day in this thread. By now, I only have a general idea about how the story will develop.

Looking forward to reading your comments!

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"Tim and Ronnie entered the cellblock like they did on any other morning. Nothing was new about today, except that Ronnie had a bit of a headache. Tim looked at their new prisoner, Tallulah Bankfield. She was just waking up and looked disoriented, but not unpleasant. Tim decided, looking at her, apprehensive and not sure what was happening to her, that he really hated the colour orange..."

Interested to see what happens next. :)

Barbaria1 said:
Looks like morning and for this prisoner what only morning can bring ...
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Something like this, you mean?
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I prefer corn flakes and tea, myself.
 
Thanks for the interest!

Kathy said:
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens
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You won't be disappointed! ;-)


Barbaria1 said:
Looks like morning and for this prisoner what only morning can bring ...
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She has lost any awareness of time. I suppose that se is detained for a limited amount of time. Still, she has no idea what kind of people she is dealing with.

Gibbs505 said:
The prisnor doesn't look to unhappy. Maybe she doesn't know that today will be different?
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I think you're right.

twonines said:
Breakfast?
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In a sense

Jollyrei said:
"Tim and Ronnie entered the cellblock like they did on any other morning. Nothing was new about today, except that Ronnie had a bit of a headache. Tim looked at their new prisoner, Tallulah Bankfield. She was just waking up and looked disoriented, but not unpleasant. Tim decided, looking at her, apprehensive and not sure what was happening to her, that he really hated the colour orange..."

Interested to see what happens next. :)


Something like this, you mean?
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I prefer corn flakes and tea, myself.
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Thank you. A very appropriate choice of girl (yum!) and a nice text that for now coincides with my story. I have a few renders readyto be published.
 
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Barbaria1 said:
Alright, don’t just sit there. On your feet, bitch. They’re waiting for you down in Interrogation Room 3A. Best not to keep them waiting for long. It’ll only make things worse for you!
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"And what is that defiant expression on your face? I think we need to speak. Get out. NOW."

(In the end, I couldn't resist adding some words)
 
John Delves Richardson said:
It's time for today's picture.


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Barbaria1 said:
Alright, don’t just sit there. On your feet, bitch. They’re waiting for you down in Interrogation Room 3A. Best not to keep them waiting for long. It’ll only make things worse for you!
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John Delves Richardson said:
"And what is that defiant expression on your face? I think we need to speak. Get out. NOW."

(In the end, I couldn't resist adding some words)
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So, no corn flakes then? :( :(
 
Nice concept!
Nice contrast focus on the prisoner..

Curious what happens next :)
 
John Delves Richardson said:
Third picture.
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“Okay. Okay. I’m coming. No need to get huffy. What’s the gun for? Does it look like I have anywhere to run? What a bunch of idiots you guys must be! I demand legal counsel! Everyone is entitled to legal counsel, right? I’m not talking till I get a lawyer!”
 
Barbaria1 said:
“Okay. Okay. I’m coming. No need to get huffy. What’s the gun for? Does it look like I have anywhere to run? What a bunch of idiots you guys must be! I demand legal counsel! Everyone is entitled to legal counsel, right? I’m not talking till I get a lawyer!”
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I have the slight suspect that what they are really interested in isn't exactly her voice.
 
Barbaria1 said:
“Okay. Okay. I’m coming. No need to get huffy. What’s the gun for? Does it look like I have anywhere to run? What a bunch of idiots you guys must be! I demand legal counsel! Everyone is entitled to legal counsel, right? I’m not talking till I get a lawyer!”
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She's not particularly diplomatic, but you have to admire her attitude and convictions. :)

John Delves Richardson said:
I have the slight suspect that what they are really interested in isn't exactly her voice.
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What exactly are you getting at? These are professional men - I doubt they are here to listen to her sing. :confused: :rolleyes:

John Delves Richardson said:
Third picture.
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"Oh my God, Ronnie! She's coming right at me!!"
"Calm down Tim. I just opened the door to let her out. We have to let her out to take her for interrogation, right? And put away your gun, you idiot."

Excellent pictures. I see they are sparking a lot of imagination. Really interested in where you're taking this. :) :) :)
 
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