OS Restoration Ltd has the contract from Batley Town Council to convert the redundant mill chimneys
into modern whipping posts.
Poor #4, showing signs of erectile dysfunction
I have to admit,when I saw those 4 large upright things, whipping posts were not my first thought.
On the third lash, one of the knots sliced into Priya’s left nipple, causing blood to well up and begin trickling down her breast. The pain was hideous. The fifth lash hit in the same spot and the flow increased. Priya howled, barely able to remain conscious. When he had given the sixth lash, Fong laid the whip down and came right up to Priya. “I really enjoyed that,” he said.
This flogging scene is very well done, but in all honesty I have to confess that I find the use of actual people's names - and the names of very nice people that I have come to e-know a bit, at that - as characters both distracting and disconcerting. For me it trivializes the harrowing plight of the prisoners, making it almost cartoonish to one who is not already steeped in that tradition. I don't mind flirtatiously using the name of a character in a throwaway line or vignette, but as a central figure in a story ... it just sucks a lot of the erotic tension out of the story. For me.
I have no illusions that I'm going to change the local customs, of course.
I welcome opposing views and perhaps an insight into how this strange (to me) practice took hold.
I was planning to discuss this on my PM thread, but since you've brought it up here, why not?
I was thinking of doing that, but I thought that it was only fair that I give "Jungle Hell,", the third story in your Trabbian Trilogy, a shout out in the listings so that other new members would have a chance to check it out. It's a well-written saga, (as are all your stories,) but for me the elements of menace and peril are greatly diminished by the 'just-for-fun' use of the names of friends, however attractive and charming and interesting and talented those friends might be.
Having given that shout-out, would you like me to re-post #205 on the PM thread? You can follow with #206 and then I can re-post #207, if you feel that others might like to comment, but fear that doing so here would kind of hi-jack this story thread?
Excellent, Well written. Also a rare to find such stories featuring East Indian women need more. Its not too kinky its just right . Enjoyed it.
Cheers
Thank you very much. Have you read the first two in the series? Priya is an interesting character-I need to come back to her at some point.
Beautiful indeed!I just LOVE these whip marks. Aren't they beautiful?
Pp agrees Jackie. They are. But they would look all the more beautiful if they wrapped around her ribs and across her breasts.I just LOVE these whip marks. Aren't they beautiful?
Well found Jackie.It's a nice scene, though I think we can all agree a woman should be stripped naked for such a punishment...
For those who may be interested, I found the TV whipping scene featuring the shots of those whip marks. I spent some time the other day looking for it, to no avail. Then just stumbled on it by accident a few minutes ago. It's a nice scene, though I think we can all agree a woman should be stripped naked for such a punishment...