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Turnabout-For-Kim-Sequel

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With all the talk in Fantasy Unlimited about off-topic gas, it is time for me to post something on topic. I did recently post some of my crude illustrations, which only a few people liked and maybe only a few people saw. On the off chance it is the latter, I am posting links--the stories themselves will provide the context. In Turnabout-For-Kim, someone commented that "further adventures" of the crux team would be welcome. You can't just turn this kind of thing on (bad pun, sorry), but after thinking about it off and on for a good while I hope I have come up with something passable. I will post part I later today. In the meantime, here are the links. Thanks in advance for any interest. If Google-translate screws up my idiosyncratic, vernacular, American English, I will be happy to clarify any garbled nonsense. The drawings, of course, need no translation.


 
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Caitlin tensed and held her breath. She was aroused as well. Her nipples were erect, and she hoped they didn’t show through her clothes. The verdict had been read. She was guilty, as she had freely admitted during the trial. She had stalked and killed the man who raped her. She felt it was a blow for all women. Now, the female judge was going to pronounce the sentence. She wanted to be a hero, a sort of martyr, and she knew what she wanted the sentence to be.

She was not disappointed. “You have shown no remorse. The court cannot condone vigilante justice. I sentence you to be crucified, naked, tomorrow.”

She was 33. She was proud of her body. She actually took some satisfaction from imagining drooling men who could not touch her. She wanted women to know that she had not taken the sex kitten route, that she had stood up for herself and could disdain male attention and be who she was, comfortable with herself and in no need of being defined by others. She did wonder fleetingly if the judge, maybe 50 or so, possibly got something out of imagining a young woman slowly dying naked in public, writhing on a cross.

She was taken to the holding cells for those whose crucifixions were imminent. She had to surrender her clothes and shoes, and was given a bra, a T-shirt, and shorts to wear for the night. She had to designate someone to pick up her effects—her lawyer in this case. She was given an enema. She was told that the gummi bears in her cell and water would have to get her through the night. Apparently, they were going to let her keep her nipple ring. It wasn’t that large, and maybe the matrons didn’t want to bother with the hassle of getting it off.

There was a young man, not much more than 20, in the cell next to hers. He was arrogant, full of himself. He jammered on. He was a star runner at his elite school. He had had sex with a girl, had drugged her, and she had died. That had not been his intent. His family was rich, and lawyers were working now to get his sentence reversed. He seemed confident they would. She was disgusted, but didn’t show it. She knew how to be noncommittal but seemingly engaged in a conversation with a male asshole—the more arrogant they were, the easier it was to do. She doubted he would get off, and actually liked some aspects of this situation. First, she would see him die in agony for what he had done. Second, he would clearly get off on her, but would be unable to do anything about it. Seeing and hearing his frustration would be priceless.

A woman in a uniform showed up, escorted in by a matron. She introduced herself as Verna, head of the crucifixion team. She explained the security procedures. The order of the crucifixions had been determined by lot—the young man was first, followed by Caitlin. They would be handcuffed in the transport van, and also during the reading of their sentences. They would be stripped on the site. There was a sizable crew, and extra police, and there were tasers that there would be no hesitation in using. Resistance would be futile and not well tolerated. Other than the crucifixion itself, the team would not engage in any brutality. They were professional. The condemned would be given a drug-laced liquid to lessen the pain before being nailed to their crosses. There was a slide show of past crucifixions—more than one hundred and fifty to date--that would play through the night on the wall opposite the holding cells. These should answer any questions the prisoners had about details. The van would leave at 7:30 AM for the execution site. Verna advised that they try to get some sleep. The staff would have them up early and clean out their bladders and bowels once more. Then she was gone, the lights went low, and the slide show started. The young man in the next cell seemed eager to watch the women on the slides as they suffered. Caitlin watched the first few, then tried to sleep. She suspected that the young man would stay up to masturbate.
 
It had been a little over a year since Kim had been crucified by her own team. Verna was not yet completely over it, and Maria was having an even harder time. Verna was worried about her. She seemed to have developed a cruel streak, relishing using her well-honed skills to inflict maximum pain on those she crucified.

A replacement for Kim had been hired almost immediately, Carla. She was only 21. She had served her apprenticeship, and Caitlin would be her first crucifixion. Maria would crucify the rapist (and apparently was looking forward to it, given what she knew about the case.)

The team was waiting at the site. A large crowd had gathered, but there were two particular groups right outside the fence that stood out, both holding signs. One was a group of loud young men, friends of the rapist, with signs demanding his release. The other was a group of young women, quiet, with signs commemorating his victim, bearing her picture. Fortunately, there was a formidable police presence.

The van pulled up, and the police escorted it inside the gate. The doors opened and the first prisoner on the schedule, the rapist, emerged, hands cuffed behind his back. He was led to where Maria was waiting. He seemed cocky [pun intended—sorry] and confident that any minute now the high-priced lawyers his family had hired would appear with at least a reprieve (he didn’t know that they had missed the deadline to file their expertly drawn brief, and his sentence was now certain to be carried out—mundane details weren’t their strong suit). The sentence was read, amid catcalls from his cronies at the fence. As Maria approached him to do the stripping, he suggested a hook-up with her. She shut him down with a withering look and a gesture to the taser. She moved behind his back, pulled his T-shirt over his head and down his arms and back. She deftly removed the handcuffs momentarily, let the shirt drop, and re-engaged the cuffs. Then she pulled off his shorts.

As he stepped out of his shorts, both his deep, conspicuous blush and his huge erection greeted the crowd. Maria hustled him over to the waiting patibulum and the team attending it. Stripped naked, his fit body exposed for everyone to see, the rapist seemed to have lost a lot of his swagger, apparently realizing that the lawyers were cutting it too close for comfort if they were to postpone what was now his imminent crucifixion.

Maria turned him around to face the crowd, and sat him down on the tarp. Several sets of hands grabbed his arms and stretched them out. Someone sat on his outstretched legs, and he was pulled onto the wood and the patibulum shoved under his shoulders. Quickly, they tied him down. He was increasingly nervous and started to protest, but Maria shoved the plastic straw attached to the bottle with the palliative into his mouth and told him to “suck it up”. As he drank, Maria looked at the erection and thought to herself that she’d be doing something soon to tone it down.

He finished the foul-tasting liquid (everyone did because they thought it would help), and Maria’s expert fingers wasted no time in finding the right spot on his left wrist. She had the first nail in position and the hammer came down before he had much chance to react to what was happening. He howled in pain, and all the team thought it was as loud and shrill a reaction as they had heard. His erection faded, though his cock did not go completely limp. His boisterous friends at the fence went deathly quiet, as if in shock.

When Maria finished nailing his arms, the team hoisted the patibulum into place, dragging him along, and secured it with L-brackets. Every one of his muscles was taught and stood out in high definition. He screamed and cried at the top of his lungs. Maria bent his left leg, positioned it against the stipes, and drove a large spike through the side of his foot into the wood. She repeated the procedure with his right leg. And it was done. As they packed up the gear and disposed of the hazmat, he was almost hysterical as he hung crucified. It was a pretty poor performance from such a macho ego. They left him to put on his show until he got tired. His victim’s friends betrayed no emotion, but they watched intently and one could feel their satisfaction.

It was time for number two, and Carla’s debut with Caitlin.
 
Carla watched Caitlin emerge from the van. She had seen the previous crucifixion. The rapist had been so dramatic, Carla was afraid Caitlin would be spooked and the crucifixion would be difficult. But she seemed calm, like someone who had come to terms with her fate. She ignored the standard crowd noise, the random cries of “crucify her!” in particular. (It helped that the boisterous friends of the rapist had left and left him to die alone.) Carla kept thinking about the line from the Bible that Pilate “wondered exceedingly”. She needed to concentrate on the technical aspects so she wouldn’t botch the job, and couldn’t “wonder exceedingly”, but it did seem to her that Caitlin was almost embracing crucifixion as a duty, and maybe even an honor, of some kind.

Caitlin looked familiar to Carla, and Caitlin kept looking at her, as if she recognized Carla as well. But no one said anything. The team did not engage with the condemned except for giving instructions. There was no small talk, even if a prisoner tried to initiate some.

Caitlin and her escort stopped in front of Carla. “Here?”, she asked. Carla nodded. One of the escorts read the sentence over the PA system. Carla moved behind Caitlin and lifted Caitlin’s T-shirt over her head. She unfastened the bra and pulled that over her head as well. Both garments slid down her arms and fell to the ground when Carla quickly undid the hand cuffs, then refastened them. Caitlin sucked in her stomach and thrust out her chest a little. The shorts came off easily. She had a fantastic body.

Carla noticed the nipple ring. “Damn”, she thought, “how did they miss that?” It was small, maybe they didn’t want to bother. It would only add a small addition sparkle when the body was drenched in sweat.

Right on schedule, the rapist on his cross provided a massive erection while his writhing body was still covered in sweat. It seemed he had no control over his sex drive at all. Caitlin noticed and cracked a subtle, smug smile.

“Over there?”, she asked as she stepped out of her clothes, nodding toward the patibulum lying on the ground surrounded by the team. She seemed to be in a hurry. Carla nodded and escorted her over. She sat down immediately, unbidden, on the tarp and spread her arms. Hands grabbed them, someone sat on her legs, and she was spread out with her shoulders against the patibulum. Her good-sized breasts flopped over her ribs and lay flat against her chest. There apparently was going to be no resistance. They had her tied down in short order. Carla had her drink the palliative.

When it was gone, Caitlin laid her head back, closed her eyes, and drew in her breath. Carla found the sweet spot in her left wrist. It would be the first time Carla had driven nails into a real, living body, and she didn’t want to botch it. She told herself to concentrate on the task, ignoring the nude body with its well-defined ribs that would soon be writhing in pain. She brought her hammer down, ignoring the screams. They were lusty, but not panicked and desperate and self-pitying as the rapist’s had been. They basically just said, “hey, this hurts”.

The patibulum with Caitlin—still screaming--attached was lifted into place and secured. Carla unhesitatingly handled the legs, bending them and driving the spikes through the sides of the feet. It was done.

The newly crucified body shone with the glistening sweat and the glint of the ring in the left nipple. Some of Caitlin’s posture was due to the pain, but as she writhed it seemed to everyone that she was also showing off her naked body, making a point of some kind. Her crucifixion was clearly not something she shied away from. It had significance for her, it was a statement.

Carla had a flash of insight. Caitlin had been one of her teachers when Carla was eight years old, and she had no bad memories of her. Carla told this to Verna and Maria when they came over to congratulate her on the technical soundness of her first crucifixion. “But”, said Carla, “we have to follow the law. We can’t let sentiment get in our way.” Verna nodded approvingly. Carla was now part of the team.
 
This is really good so far. I cant wait to read the rest!
Thank you for your interest. I really intended to stop here. Being crucified is exciting. Hanging crucified is, in addition to its other disadvantages, kind of boring. Polly Plummer managed to get around this in "Modern Judicial Crucifixion". Maybe I can steal her idea and add a fourth part. I'll think about it. Thanks again.
 
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