voyeurjerome
Assistant executioner
Hello.
I propose a new text. I feel free to tell me what you think. Thank you.
Two women are burned alive.
The text :
The torment of Virginia and Christine
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Virginia Christine looked at the stake.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
The cries of the latter started as soon as the flames began to lick her feet. The executioner perfectly mastered his art and fire now reached the mid-calf. The cries redoubled intensity.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
They stood on the square.
Christine also at the stake who had not yet turned bided his time, soon she would cry as her friend. Virginia had tried to be brave, but when she was tied naked to the stake it had begun to cry and beg.
Christine had encouraged her voice: "Do not show them your fear, you're the strongest. "
Now she could do nothing to relieve her friend. She was trying to encourage him again: "Courage my love, we will soon be fulfilled. "
But she heard only? Virginia was in such pain. The flames ate her bare legs.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHRRGGGGGGGGG
The screaming continued unabated. Sometimes interrupted very briefly, they returned immediately.
It is their love between women who had conducted them there. Both married to notable had not forgiven them their infidelity and homosexuality.
Fire diminished, but not shouting.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AHHHHHHHHHHHHRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH
Then the fire was extinguished, Virginia continued to shout a good time then her cries became less frequent and became less high.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhh
Ahhhhhhhhhh
She wept, wailed, screamed at times. The flames touched her more but she was in utter pain.
Christine knew it had to turn, they would let it burn r a moment, then let the fire die. They would call fire to the pile of his companion until the flames reached her buttocks. Then it would be his turn again.
They made Virginia drink after a wet sponge, not mercy, but for it to take longer.
Virginia grimacing, crying, screaming, moaning.
Christine despite the imminence of his own torment encouraged:
"Courage, my love I am with you, I'll join you."
She stood on a tiny platform with his feet sticking out. A string to the size impeded. His feet were attached to each side of the post. His hands tied behind his back. A string passed under her armpits completed the ensemble.
She was now looking straight ahead. She tried to remain dignified and proud and keep a straight face. She saw her husband who was watching carefully. Then the executioner approached holding a torch in his right hand. He stood in front of her and looked into her eyes. She managed to hold her gaze but his hands behind his back tightened and she felt a cold sweat in his body.
Ahhhhhhhhhh
Sometimes Virginia cried out.
The hangman, still looking kindled few branches underfoot Christine. As always at this point, absolute silence was in the crowd. All watched the fire progressed, their eyes from the flames in the face of Christine, all waiting for the fire button and the first cry. Only moans, gasps and squeaks of Virginia were heard.
There was little wood. Christine was preparing waiting in a fire. She looked away, his lips moving like a silent prayer. She was beginning to feel the heat of the flames. It was becoming stronger; Christine began to move his head.
Suddenly his whole body stiffened and she grimaced through clenched teeth. The flames had just reached his toes and toes. Do not cry do not cry. She put all her energy to resist biting his lip.
HUMMMMMMPHHH
She let out a muffled groan. The flames continued to wrap his feet, giving him extreme pain.
HUMMMMMMMM.
She even managed to get himself; the executioner seemed surprised .... He had never even known anyone who does not shout to stage even though he knew the flames, the fire would win the battle.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh.
Virginia let out a cry above;
"Virginiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee" cried Christine dropping his first cry.
She went again.
Aiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
She screamed more and more strong. His feet had now disappeared in the flames which reached the middle of his calves. Five minutes after the fire has touched it suddenly uttered his first real roar that rose on the square.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
But this time, there was no joy in the crowd, fascinated by the courage of women.
The fire continued to torture her.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Worse like Virginia, the executioner let the fire go out.
Christine went the cry then declined slowly.
ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHahhhhhhhhhhhhh.
She was in pain most extreme and handed him a sponge on a pole and she drank greedily.
The flames were gone but the pain was dominating, ubiquitous, overwhelming.
She moaned softly.
The legs of the two women were burned almost to the knees. The legs were black, covered with blisters. Toes looked like pieces of charred wood. Unbearable smell of burned flesh was.
The executioner and a doctor examined them. They knew immediately that Virginia would not last long, but Christine was solid, it was going to be very long and very painful for her.
Meanwhile, the executioner's assistants had delivered dry wood under the legs of two women to the knees.
The executioner approached the pyre of Virginia with a torch. This was experiencing the deepest terrors.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNN"
"Please, not this, not"
Christine turned to her she obviously made an effort, she winced, groaned and said, "My love is over soon."
She cried so much pain was important.
But the executioner kindled again the stake of Virginia. The flames went up almost immediately resumed shouts
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHI.
They seemed it would never go out.
The fire progressed slowly.
Before the flames have reached the lower abdomen of women. The executioner approached the pyre of Christine. The shouts of Virginia not faltered The public was becoming disgusted and shouts went up: no. He held the torch once again he looked at the woman in the eye. This she had lost her beautiful ,. The terror showed in his face. She now knew the suffering that was his and that would further increase intensity. But she was not pleaded. She closed her eyes, closed mouth, while he set fire to the wood.
The flames touched the and this time the shouts came almost immediately.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
It was now the cries of the two women who stood on the square. For long minutes they rang.
The executioner put the wood in the woodshed of Virginia which disappeared completely in flames. The cries were silenced quickly. Only Christine shouting now.
The flames devoured her sex, her buttocks, then slowly climbed her breasts disappeared in the flames.
The executioner controlled the rising flames. The public began to be Disgusted and shouts went up:
" Enough ! "
" That's enough ! "
"Finish it!"
The executioner turned to the judge, the latter nodded his head as the executioner rajouta wood and flames surrounded complement the woman. For two minutes she screamed again and then suddenly the screaming stopped.
Only the crackling of the wood could be heard.
The crowd began to disperse. The executioner and his assistants continued to fuel long e heat until nothing remains are two women.
At nightfall, the fires still glowed.
I propose a new text. I feel free to tell me what you think. Thank you.
Two women are burned alive.
The text :
The torment of Virginia and Christine
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Virginia Christine looked at the stake.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
The cries of the latter started as soon as the flames began to lick her feet. The executioner perfectly mastered his art and fire now reached the mid-calf. The cries redoubled intensity.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
They stood on the square.
Christine also at the stake who had not yet turned bided his time, soon she would cry as her friend. Virginia had tried to be brave, but when she was tied naked to the stake it had begun to cry and beg.
Christine had encouraged her voice: "Do not show them your fear, you're the strongest. "
Now she could do nothing to relieve her friend. She was trying to encourage him again: "Courage my love, we will soon be fulfilled. "
But she heard only? Virginia was in such pain. The flames ate her bare legs.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHRRGGGGGGGGG
The screaming continued unabated. Sometimes interrupted very briefly, they returned immediately.
It is their love between women who had conducted them there. Both married to notable had not forgiven them their infidelity and homosexuality.
Fire diminished, but not shouting.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AHHHHHHHHHHHHRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH
Then the fire was extinguished, Virginia continued to shout a good time then her cries became less frequent and became less high.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhh
Ahhhhhhhhhh
She wept, wailed, screamed at times. The flames touched her more but she was in utter pain.
Christine knew it had to turn, they would let it burn r a moment, then let the fire die. They would call fire to the pile of his companion until the flames reached her buttocks. Then it would be his turn again.
They made Virginia drink after a wet sponge, not mercy, but for it to take longer.
Virginia grimacing, crying, screaming, moaning.
Christine despite the imminence of his own torment encouraged:
"Courage, my love I am with you, I'll join you."
She stood on a tiny platform with his feet sticking out. A string to the size impeded. His feet were attached to each side of the post. His hands tied behind his back. A string passed under her armpits completed the ensemble.
She was now looking straight ahead. She tried to remain dignified and proud and keep a straight face. She saw her husband who was watching carefully. Then the executioner approached holding a torch in his right hand. He stood in front of her and looked into her eyes. She managed to hold her gaze but his hands behind his back tightened and she felt a cold sweat in his body.
Ahhhhhhhhhh
Sometimes Virginia cried out.
The hangman, still looking kindled few branches underfoot Christine. As always at this point, absolute silence was in the crowd. All watched the fire progressed, their eyes from the flames in the face of Christine, all waiting for the fire button and the first cry. Only moans, gasps and squeaks of Virginia were heard.
There was little wood. Christine was preparing waiting in a fire. She looked away, his lips moving like a silent prayer. She was beginning to feel the heat of the flames. It was becoming stronger; Christine began to move his head.
Suddenly his whole body stiffened and she grimaced through clenched teeth. The flames had just reached his toes and toes. Do not cry do not cry. She put all her energy to resist biting his lip.
HUMMMMMMPHHH
She let out a muffled groan. The flames continued to wrap his feet, giving him extreme pain.
HUMMMMMMMM.
She even managed to get himself; the executioner seemed surprised .... He had never even known anyone who does not shout to stage even though he knew the flames, the fire would win the battle.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh.
Virginia let out a cry above;
"Virginiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee" cried Christine dropping his first cry.
She went again.
Aiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
She screamed more and more strong. His feet had now disappeared in the flames which reached the middle of his calves. Five minutes after the fire has touched it suddenly uttered his first real roar that rose on the square.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
But this time, there was no joy in the crowd, fascinated by the courage of women.
The fire continued to torture her.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Worse like Virginia, the executioner let the fire go out.
Christine went the cry then declined slowly.
ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHahhhhhhhhhhhhh.
She was in pain most extreme and handed him a sponge on a pole and she drank greedily.
The flames were gone but the pain was dominating, ubiquitous, overwhelming.
She moaned softly.
The legs of the two women were burned almost to the knees. The legs were black, covered with blisters. Toes looked like pieces of charred wood. Unbearable smell of burned flesh was.
The executioner and a doctor examined them. They knew immediately that Virginia would not last long, but Christine was solid, it was going to be very long and very painful for her.
Meanwhile, the executioner's assistants had delivered dry wood under the legs of two women to the knees.
The executioner approached the pyre of Virginia with a torch. This was experiencing the deepest terrors.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNN"
"Please, not this, not"
Christine turned to her she obviously made an effort, she winced, groaned and said, "My love is over soon."
She cried so much pain was important.
But the executioner kindled again the stake of Virginia. The flames went up almost immediately resumed shouts
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHI.
They seemed it would never go out.
The fire progressed slowly.
Before the flames have reached the lower abdomen of women. The executioner approached the pyre of Christine. The shouts of Virginia not faltered The public was becoming disgusted and shouts went up: no. He held the torch once again he looked at the woman in the eye. This she had lost her beautiful ,. The terror showed in his face. She now knew the suffering that was his and that would further increase intensity. But she was not pleaded. She closed her eyes, closed mouth, while he set fire to the wood.
The flames touched the and this time the shouts came almost immediately.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
It was now the cries of the two women who stood on the square. For long minutes they rang.
The executioner put the wood in the woodshed of Virginia which disappeared completely in flames. The cries were silenced quickly. Only Christine shouting now.
The flames devoured her sex, her buttocks, then slowly climbed her breasts disappeared in the flames.
The executioner controlled the rising flames. The public began to be Disgusted and shouts went up:
" Enough ! "
" That's enough ! "
"Finish it!"
The executioner turned to the judge, the latter nodded his head as the executioner rajouta wood and flames surrounded complement the woman. For two minutes she screamed again and then suddenly the screaming stopped.
Only the crackling of the wood could be heard.
The crowd began to disperse. The executioner and his assistants continued to fuel long e heat until nothing remains are two women.
At nightfall, the fires still glowed.
