gregorsamsa45
Assistant executioner
My Ordeal in the Pirate Kingdom
Part 01
Hi there! I have written a new story,but this time it happens in old times and in a unknown place(I made this changes to not offend anyone)
Hundreds of years ago,there was a pirate kingdom ruled by a king,who was a sadistic man who liked to make his subjects hardly work.
I was a young construction worker,and I was participating in the building of a new palace for the king. It was a very inmense project,and it was supposed to be the new residence of the king.
One day,a normal day of work,I was assigned with the work of carrying bricks to the construction place. That day,I was a bit tired and distracted,and when I tried to put a brick in his place,I accidentally dropped it to the sea(which was next to the future palace).
Unfortunately,the inspectors realised my mistake,and fastly came to me,took me from my arms and took me away from the construction(the situation was very confusal and I didnt understand what was happening) until the chief inspector took a stick from below his jacked. In that moment I felt a chill and knew what was to happen.
The man,who was very strict,ordered the inspectors to tie me and take off my shirt. So they did what he ordered,and inmediatly the chief inspector said"meeting the stick will make you more responsible". When he was about giving me the first stroke with the stick,I heard some steps coming near.
It was the king,who find out my mistake, coming to solve this issue by his own hands. The inspectors were silent because they feared the king too. Inmediatly,holding a long bullwhip,he violently took out the stick from chief inspector's hand and threw it to the floor.
I fastly was aware that the king wanted a better lesson for me,and found it out when the sadistic man,with a thick voice,exclaimed "inspectors,you were about giving this irresponsible boy a little reprimand. That useless stick does nothing!" I am here to bring the true discipline"
While hearing the king's words,I started feeling a cold across my shirtless back,and I had chills. I had the "privilege" of receive the most powerful man's punishment. I was shocked.
The sadistic monarch started shaking his whip on the air,and he started embracing my back with harsh lashes. He made a drawing on my soft back,and I wad feeling a pain I didnt feel anytime before.
The other fellow workers of the construction watched shocked the situation,and they knew very well that my punishment would be their punishment the next time.
This will continue
Part 01
Hi there! I have written a new story,but this time it happens in old times and in a unknown place(I made this changes to not offend anyone)
Hundreds of years ago,there was a pirate kingdom ruled by a king,who was a sadistic man who liked to make his subjects hardly work.
I was a young construction worker,and I was participating in the building of a new palace for the king. It was a very inmense project,and it was supposed to be the new residence of the king.
One day,a normal day of work,I was assigned with the work of carrying bricks to the construction place. That day,I was a bit tired and distracted,and when I tried to put a brick in his place,I accidentally dropped it to the sea(which was next to the future palace).
Unfortunately,the inspectors realised my mistake,and fastly came to me,took me from my arms and took me away from the construction(the situation was very confusal and I didnt understand what was happening) until the chief inspector took a stick from below his jacked. In that moment I felt a chill and knew what was to happen.
The man,who was very strict,ordered the inspectors to tie me and take off my shirt. So they did what he ordered,and inmediatly the chief inspector said"meeting the stick will make you more responsible". When he was about giving me the first stroke with the stick,I heard some steps coming near.
It was the king,who find out my mistake, coming to solve this issue by his own hands. The inspectors were silent because they feared the king too. Inmediatly,holding a long bullwhip,he violently took out the stick from chief inspector's hand and threw it to the floor.
I fastly was aware that the king wanted a better lesson for me,and found it out when the sadistic man,with a thick voice,exclaimed "inspectors,you were about giving this irresponsible boy a little reprimand. That useless stick does nothing!" I am here to bring the true discipline"
While hearing the king's words,I started feeling a cold across my shirtless back,and I had chills. I had the "privilege" of receive the most powerful man's punishment. I was shocked.
The sadistic monarch started shaking his whip on the air,and he started embracing my back with harsh lashes. He made a drawing on my soft back,and I wad feeling a pain I didnt feel anytime before.
The other fellow workers of the construction watched shocked the situation,and they knew very well that my punishment would be their punishment the next time.
This will continue
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