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jacksjg89

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So I have a million stories buzzing through my head all the time. My Honorable story, coming so slowly, my heart of darkness/apocalypse now tribute story, my naive daughter of confederate general during civil war story, how criminals should actually deal with Nancy Drew story, and so much more, and I'm constantly getting news ones.

So I wanna throw this one out here for someone else. It's a college sorority hazing story of sorts. Girls wakes naked and chained in a shower, when the cold water tap in turned on her. She is then escorted downstairs where all of her sisters are, and their leader makes a speech. The girl had snitched on one of them for doing something that was actually wrong, and she was given a choice, either be.kicked.out of the sorority or go through a redemption ritual, of which our heroine choose the latter. She is then thrown into the back of a car and they drive out into the wild, where a fraternity is there preparing her cross. And also, pictures and video cameras are constantly in use. I had an idea that the entire story might take place in a court room, where the girl had died on accident, and the video tape was being played as evidence, but that's up to you.
I would have liked to write this, but I know as little about sororities as I do about fraternities, except that they love to humiliate others to demonstrate their power. So, who wants this?
 
nice idea Jacks - 'fraid (well, rather glad actually) I know no more about sororities than you do.
I like the thought of 'what criminals should do to Nancy Drew' -
I think 'what vampires should do with Buffy' would be a promising line too! :D
 
I thought up the Nancy Drew thing while watching the recent movie. In their, she is kidnapped, but thrown clothed and unbound into a room with no ceiling, and as she escapes, the guy who's.suppose to be guarding her is sleeping. In my version, all her clothes are removed and searched, she's strung up by her wrist in a meat freezer, and the guy who's guarding her, well, he ain't sleeping. And then she's shot and buried in a shallow grave. More realistic, right?
 
too quick an ending, plenty of interesting possibilities while she's strung up in the cooler! :D
 
too quick an ending, plenty of interesting possibilities while she's strung up in the cooler! :D
I don't wanna be the kind of person (too late) that just talks about stories instead of writing them, but I imagine she would find a way out of the cage and has a chance too escape, but she finds out there's another girl being held captive, so, still naked with her hands cuffed, tries to help her, and fails miserably. In this version, she meets her end being turned into an ice statue.
 
nice idea Jacks - 'fraid (well, rather glad actually) I know no more about sororities than you do.
I like the thought of 'what criminals should do to Nancy Drew' -
I think 'what vampires should do with Buffy' would be a promising line too! :D
The vampires would drain her of every drop of her blood!
And Buffy rests between between Slayings:

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Pass the soap!
 
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