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Did I even mention San Jose? I did a search for it in my original text and didn't find it.

From the northern part of Malibu Canyon it might make sense to go north and take the 101 E to Sepulveda and avoid the 405 Fwy coming south, but from the beach, I don't believe there's a real alternative to the Coast Highway.

But, I've only been out there once in the last several years so perhaps things have changed drastically.

Not sure what you mean by 'Vista del Mar.' I don't recall a major street by that name. The Pacific Coast Hwy (Rte 1) is the non-fwy alternative to the 405 if you're coming south through the beach cities (Redondo-Hermosa-Manhattan) from the Malibu-Santa Monica area.

It strikes me that this post would have been a good candidate for a PM. :) oh, well.
Opps I mentioned the wrong 'San' city. You said '"Oh, it's down in La Jolla, just north of San Diego'. I still say you can't make it in three hours during daylight. This is no criticism. The first time I was in LA was in '61 and you drove past orange groves to get from Newport Beach to Lakewood. Believe me I am enjoying both the story and the recent history, my friend!!!
 
I still say you can't make it in three hours during daylight.

San Diego proper is about 120 miles south of LA, and the Torrey Pines golf club is well north of downtown San Diego. So three hours would be the outside travel time most of the time.

But you never know in LA. A few months ago I took the family to the LA Zoo, about 30 miles from where we live. But we got a later start than I would have wanted in the morning and ended up coming home at rush hour. And it took us 2 1/2 hours to traverse those thirty-odd miles.
 
Installment 24 {Nirvana and Despair}

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As he tipped backward, he tightened his grip on Amalie’s buttocks and he pulled her down onto the couch with him. Amalie giggled softly and, supported by David’s grasping fingers, knelt between his thighs on the edge of the plush davenport, her tube-topped breasts at his eye level, her taut nipples defiantly outlined against the skin-tight fabric.


Feeling David's dark eyes staring fixedly at her bold-thrusting breasts, she arched her back, offering her thinly-veiled young breasts to the caressing glow of the lamp-light, and then leaned forward, accentuating her tempting cleavage.


‘You’d like to shee them, David, wouldn’t you?” she whispered teasingly, giggling prettily when she realized that she had slurred her words.


“God, yes!” David rasped, invoking, in his lust, a deity in whom he had never believed.


“If I let you see them ... and touch them, will you kiss me … here?” Amalie purred, undoing the waistband of her skirt and slipping her fingertips inside her silky white panties. She threw her head back and closed her eyes as she stroked her most sensitive flesh. Her motion caused her spine to arch deliciously once again, throwing her superb breasts into even bolder relief.


“Yes!" growled David, his voice more animal than human.


“Promise?” she repeated teasingly, straightening slightly and lifting her hands to her chest. She raked her thumbnails across her impudent nipple-buds and pressed her breasts together, accentuating their mouth-watering decolletage


"Yes, damn it!”


Amalie gave David another seductive smile as her fingertips flew to the upper brim of her tube top. Then while David’s feverish fingers clenched and unclenched the flesh of her rounded bottomcheeks, her fingers began rolling the clinging fabric downward, a quarter-inch at a time, each turn of her wrists bringing more of her delicious breasts into view.



David licked his dry lips feverishly as Amalie’s fingers toyed teasingly with the fabric, inching the material downward until the upper part of her top clung lasciviously to the upper edges of her inviting areolae.


David ducked his head forward, hoping to bury his lips in Amalie’s nude cleavage, but she placed her left hand against his forehead and gently but firmly fended him off. She placed her right forefinger, the one that had touched her sex, in her mouth and licked it with feline fastidiousness. She slid her graceful fingers to the lower edge of the tube-top and rolled it upward, slowly baring the undercurves of her breasts to David’s passionate gaze, until the tube-top was only an inch-wide rope of fabric across her swollen nipples.


David, maddened by lust, could take the teasing no more. He reached between Amalie’s impudent breasts, grabbed the flimsy band of fabric and gave it a ferocious downward wrench. The sound of the synthetic material tearing fueled his lust as Amalie’s quivering love-mounds sprang into view, her proud nipples bursting with desire.


“David!” Amalie scolded him in mock reproach, but when his greedy lips found her left breast and his moist tongue began to lave it with ardent kisses, she pressed him back again the couch once again. Even though her breasts were still tender from Tony’s abuse, she offered her pink-tipped hillocks to David with wanton abandon.


Removing his other hand from Amalie’s buttocks, David attacked her luscious globes with manly pleasure, first sliding his hands under their underslopes and lifting them higher, then, encircling her mouth-watering tit-globes in his hands and molding them as assiduously as a potter molding his best clay.


His senses swimming from wine and passion, David felt as if he were drowning in a dreamy sea of desire. The silky voice on the tape player was singing an anthem of sexual license


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"Times New Roman","serif"">Your gonna fly away, glad your going my way
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"Times New Roman","serif""> The music is played for love,
"Times New Roman","serif""> Cruisin' is made for love
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He took one of Amalie’s nipples into his mouth, suckling it roughly, hearing Amalie’s gasps of pleasure-pain, remembering how Tony had abused her tender lust-nuggets on the prior night, but not really caring, lost in his own quest for pleasure.


As his mouth – and his teeth - moved from one tasty, turgid nipple to the other, Amalie’s hands flew to the waistband of his loose-fitting sweat pants and, after a bit of inebriated fumbling, began to tug at them.


“Let me see it, David. Let me touch it.”



And if you want it, you got it forever …




David lifted his hips slightly, allowing Amalie to peel his sweat pants and boxer shorts down a few inches, and a moment later her eager fist found his erection and lifted it into view.


David held his breath for a moment, praying that Amalie would not compare his swollen manhood, which stood as tall and proud as he had ever known it to stand, unfavorably to Tony’s formidable phallus. But Amalie seemed pleased by both its size and appearance.


“It’s beautiful, David,” she purred sinuously, while his fingers continued to fondle her breasts. “I want to touch it.”


David, suspended on the very precipice of desire, nearly exploded when Amalie’s fingertips touched the tip of his erection. He shuddered with pleasure, but took a deep breath and fought desperately against the onrushing urge for climax. “Not now, please, not now,” he prayed silently. Fortunately some benign god of lust heard his prayer and gave him strength.


Strength to pull Amalie closer still, strength to strip her panties down off of her lovely legs and throw the scrap of white silk onto the green-felted pool table, strength to attack her magnificent pleasure-mounds with his hands and mouth and teeth and tongue, while Amalie gently stroked his shaft.


Tony Cannizzaro had evidently taught her well, for seventy Arab virgins could scarcely have given David more pleasure than the touch of Amalie’s hand on his cock. She began at the base of his shaft, caressingly it gently for a moment while the back of her hand brushed, warm and firm, against his tingling testicles. Then she moved her hand upward slowly, using her nails to tease him and her soft, relentless grasp to enslave him.


Let the music take your mind,

Just relax and you will find…


When he felt that he could not long withstand Amalie’s sensual caresses, David pulled her down alongside him on the couch. Flat on her back, her legs slightly parted, wearing only her brief white skirt, Amalie writhed sensuously, as the flickering light threw sensual shadows across the hills and planes of her body. While David tore off his clothes, Amalie smiled at him seductively and lifted her right leg, draping it gently atop the back of the sofa. “Don’t forget your promise, David,” she whispered, as the movement of her bare leg caused the skirt to billow high on her thighs, permitting David a glimpse of the glorious petals unfolding between them.



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"Times New Roman","serif""> To every little part of each other



David dutifully lowered his head between Amalie’s widespread thighs and inhaled the sweet, musky scent of her feminity. Utterly ignorant of how to proceed, he lavished a few kisses on the insides of her thighs and was rewarded with soft moans of pleasure which encouraged him to edge forward until his lips were pressed against her labia, and her taste was on his tongue.


He probed gently, tonguing her vulva, teasing her taut clitoris as he felt her hands guiding his head, pulling it closer. Then, his fleshy rod throbbing with desire, he slid his long lean arms forward, up over Amalie’s moist, undulating belly and took her delicious breasts in his hands more firmly than before.


As he squeezed Amalie's splendid tit-globes, he envied Tony’s roughness, his power. Losing interest in performing oral sex upon Amalie, David adjusted his position so that he was kneeling upright between her widespread legs, his erection red and throbbing only inches from her moist love-slit, while his hands continued to ravage Amalie’s breasts, still tender from her ordeal on the prior night.


“But, David --- you promised,” Amalie murmured protestingly and tried to pull his head back down to her love-nest, but now there was no stopping him.


David released her right breast long enough to guide his throbbing erection to Amalie’s moist opening. For fear of seeming amateurish, he slid his cock-tip around Amalie’s pussylips for a moment or two before sliding his shaft into her with one punching thrust.


“Aaaaghhhh!” David groaned with pleasure as he felt the warm cavern of Amalie’s pussy tighten deliciously around his cockshaft. He paused, taking a deep breath so that his arousal would not plunge off its lofty plateau into the beckoning gorge of desire, and then he drove his slender hips forward again.


Having stepped back from the brink, David's lunges began to find a primitive rhythm, As he worked his blood-swollen member back and forth in Amalie’s moist, cock-clutching vagina, he re-directed his attention to her succulent breasts, handling them even more roughly than before, crushing her resilient mounds in his hands and taking her clamp-ravaged nipples between his fingers and thumbs.


Amalie gasped in pain, but David, adrift on a sea of desire, was deaf to her moans. All of his dark dreams, honed in dark booths and darker daydreams, surged to the forefront of his desire and demanded reality. He was, at last, buccaneer and slavemaster, warlord and czar, and the temptation to dominate this beautiful girl-woman was more than he could resist.


Holding Amalie's hips he elevated his own and pumped his body into her brutally, as if he were trying to punish her with his pistoning cock. Moving his hands back to her sumptuous breasts he clawed at them savagely, gouging his nails into her tender tit-flesh.


"David … David, you're hurting me," Amalie moaned, but her plaintive groans only added to his excitement.


As the singer's voice and the background music soared to a climax, so also did David.




Let the music take your mind,

Just relax and you will find…



He felt the rapids of lust racing through his loins and racing headlong toward the cataract.


As he fired burst after burst of lust-seed into Amalie's pleasure slit, neither he nor Amalie heard the front door open, or the footsteps in the hall.


"Hey, Ammie," Tony's voice trumpeted loudly from the hallway. "I got DQ'ed for throwing my fucking sand wedge and … " As Tony Cannizzaro burst into the room he yelled, "Geesus!! What the fuck is going on?"


From the moment of his first syllable, Amalie had begun to pound at David's shoulders and to scream, "Get off me! GET OFF ME!!"


"You fucking prick!" Tony roared. "C'mon, Skip!" The two men sprang forward, and pulled David, still woozy from orgasm, off of Amalie Desjardins.


"Fucking Chinese rapist prick!" Tony raged as he drove his massive fist into David's ribcage, sending him sprawling against the pool table. He followed with a left that exploded against David's jaw.


"Not rape… not rape," David groaned in agony, as Skip's fist slammed into his kidneys. "Tell them…" he pleaded imploringly to Amalie.


"What the fuck is he talking about, Ammie?"



Amalie climbed to her feet unsteadily, and smoothed her tiny white skirt over her hips as if that gesture could somehow restore normality to her existence.


Her wits befuddled, Amalie grasped desperately for a straw. "I don't know, Tony," she said shaking her head. "We were drinking and talking and then I think I blacked out."


"Umpppffff!!" David groaned as Tony's meaty fist plowed into his ribs again. "Fucking Prick Bastard Chinese. You put something in her drink, didn'tcha?"


"No… Amalie … tell them … for God's sake."


"What's he sayin'," Ammie, Tony barked, turning toward her threateningly.


Amalie was as pale as the moonlight streaming through the window. "Tony .. it's like I told you! I swear it."


"Hold 'im up, Skip. I'm gonna kill the bastard!"


"Amalie …David begged again.


Tony glared at Amalie uncertainly, weighing the evidence of the scratches and bruises on her nude breasts against the seeming sincerity in her attacker's voice. He raised his fist to her threateningly.


"No, Tony, no," she pleaded hysterically. "You know I love you, honey."


"Yeah?" Tony grunted reaching for one of the pool cues in the rack while Skip pinned David against the pool table. " Well, you're gonna have to prove it to me, baby!"


"Stretch out his arm, Skip," Tony growled as he handed Amalie the pool cue. Between them Amalie's boy friend and brother managed to stretch David Chao's right hand so that it extended down the rail of the pool table.



"Stick out your fingers, One-ball. Or I swear I'll break every rib in your body!"


David opened his hand, so that his right hand was positioned palm down against the rail.


"Hit it, Amalie! Hit it with the butt of the cue."


Amalie held the cue in both hands uncertainly, clutching its fat end a few inches up the tapered handle. Tremblingly she positioned the butt of the cue about a foot above David's outstretched hand.


"Hit the sonofabitch!! Did he fucking rape you or didn't he?"


"Yes!" Amalie cried out as she brought the cue down heavily on the back of his hand.


"Aghhh!" David cried out. He could almost feel the fragile bones in his wrist disintegrating.


"Again! Break every fucking bone in his hand!"


"Tony .. isn't that enough?"


Tony eyed Amalie's naked breasts hungrily. He was going to have some fun with her tonight after he finished working over this pool-hustling rapist and after he got rid of her fawning brother. Big time fun. But first he had to make sure…


"Hit him again!" he repeated icily.



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Amalie hammered David's splintered hand twice more to prove her virtue to Tony Cannizzaro, and Tony and Chip took turns as well. Two hours later, Tony and Chip dumped a naked and unconscious David Chao on a deserted section of Malibu Canyon Road. He woke up eighteen hours later, his face and his right hand hideously swollen.. He knew instinctively that he would never write with that hand again, much less play pool or hold a woman in his arms.


His pride and spirit crushed, his body beaten and humiliated, David's dreams of honors at Cal Tech and a career at Jet Propulsion Laboratories withered away as quickly as had the use of his hand. Within a month he had dropped out of school; within another month he was back in China, disabled, destitute, alone.


David Chao regained much of his inner strength some months later, and began a new career. But he could never forget what Amalie Desjardins had cost him – his health, his education, his career, and his self-esteem with regard to women. When he began to mount the ladder of success in the Chinese ministry in which he had sought work, he took his sexual pleasures as he found them, and as his salary and prestige grew, so too, did his opportunities. But his encounters, even ones with the most talented and expensive women of pleasure, while at times incredibly arousing, were unfailingly sordid and spiritless. Never again, after touching the heights and depths of passion during that unforgettable weekend in Malibu, did he seriously entertain thoughts of long-term relationships with women, of marriage, of children.


In China there is a proverb -- a man without a child is hardly a man at all.
 
Installment 24 {Nirvana and Despair}


Oops, I apologize for the formatting errors with regard to the Smokey Robinson lyrics. Usually I give my Word file a final edit, then post the chapter here and then re-read it here to make sure that everything's OK. But obviously I neglected to do that here. I guess I should have left them in standard text in the ms, and switched them to italics here.

Oh, well
 
Installment 25 {In which we return to the present ... and Tanya's dire predicament}

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Chapter IX 2005 Tanya's Punishment






"You bastards will pay for this," Tanya Spencer fumed. After a series of deep upward thrusts, Sheik Abdul had exploded inside her, but his hairy hands were still clawing at her naked breasts. Moments earlier Julius Baraka prodigious member had spent its fury deep in her throat. He had climaxed with such ferocity that his cock had managed to spit a few droplets of semen onto her cheek seconds after his withdrawal.



"No, it is you who will pay, Miss Spencer," David Chao said with a scowl. “Bring her to the table over there!"


The Arab and the African quickly wrestled Tanya over to a small, beautifully polished cherrywood table in the dining alcove, while the colonel, unaccountably stepped aside to turn a burner on a stove in the kitchenette to the "On" position and placed a brimming tea kettle on top of it. Upon returning to the dining room and seeing that Julius Baraka had his long arms securely wrapped around Tanya Spencer, the colonel turned to the sheik. "Remove the leaf from the table, my friend, so that we can position this young woman properly.


With an evil glint in his eye, Abdul pulled at the far end of the table, opening up a narrow gap where the leaf, which had extended the length of the tiny table by about a foot, fit in. He repeated the process at the other end of the table, and then removed the leaf, leaving an opening on the small, newly square tabletop.


"Lean her forward, your excellency. If I have not miscalculated, our guest is of exactly the desired height."



Using his great strength the giant African pinned the fronts of Tanya's thighs against the edge of the table with his powerful legs, and then slowly added pressure to her back and shoulders, forcing her upper body forward and down.


It was only then, when Tanya saw her cane-reddened breasts descending toward the open jaws of the pulled-apart table that she divined Colonel Chao's purpose, and increased the fury of her struggles. But Baraka's strength was overpowering and inch by inch the big African forced her downward while Sheik Abdul eased the two panels of the table closer together, narrowing the opening.


With a final triumphant growl Baraka forced Tanya's body down until her mid-section was flat against the table, with her luscious lust-mounds resting against the near edge of the opening in the table. At a nod from the Colonel, sheik Abdul slowly began to press the far end of the table inward.


At first, Tanya felt just a pinch of discomfort as the panels of the table closed gently on her pendulous breasts. But Sheik Abdul was not a man of half-measures, and he continued to increase the pressure against his end of the table in infinitesimal gradations until the clean sharp edges of the cherrywood table-top had been driven deep into the upper curves of her breasts.


"Aaagghh!!" Tanya moaned. "You bastards!"


"Silence her, if you would, while we deal with her tardiness."


Baraka strode back to the main room, and snatched up Tanya's lacy panties. Spying the six-thonged whip he had used earlier, he grabbed that, too, and returned to the dining alcove, where Tanya Spencer remained bent helplessly over the table.


Baraka pulled roughly at her blond mane and jammed the sweaty panties into Tanya's mouth. When she spat them out and cursed, Colonel Chao smiled thinly. There is a first aid kit in the bathroom, Julius. Bring it here."


The African did as he was bid and returned a moment later with a rectangular metal box. Chao extracted a roll of adhesive tape and handed it to him. "Try the gag again. And this time tape it shut!"


Within moments, Tanya Spencer was choking on her frilly panties, with several strips of adhesive tape stretched tightly across her mouth.


"Excellent, my friend. Now we may continue our evening in peace. "Miss Spencer," David Chao began as he tapped his nubby cane against her naked buttocks, "tardiness is the ultimate discourtesy. You were sixteen minutes late. One stroke per minute of delay would be an appropriate punishment. What do you think, Minister?"


The towering African fingered the thongs of his whip as he eyed the backs of Tanya's thighs and the shapeliness of her buttocks with voracious glee.


"After you, my friend," he bowed politely to the colonel.


"Thank you, your Excellency." David Chao took a step to his right, so that he would have a better angle for a left-handed swing. He eyed Tanya's sweetly rounded bottom ovals for a moment and then swept the cane-switch sharply down across the base of her buttocks.


CRACKKK!! "NNGGHMMPPH!!!" Tanya screamed into the gag, and her hands grabbed at the edges of the table, hoping to free her breasts from their predicament. But Abdul, his lips twisted into a cruel grin, had no difficulty in maintaining the pressure.


THWACKK!! From behind Tanya and to her left, Baraka's long black arm swept the whip through the air in a sweeping arc, and the thongs tore into Tanya's thigh-flesh with a vengeance.

"MM! MPFH! MPPPFFHH!!" she groaned again, as her bare legs danced in place.


The colonel waited until Tanya's feverish writhing subsided and then positioned the irregular rod across the blonde's quivering buttocks, bisecting the lovely cleft between them. Then with a quick motion he pulled the cane away and then swung it forward again, slicing Tanya's tempting bottom ovals with a wicked diagonal stroke.


CRACKK!! "NNGMPHH!" Tanya rose up on her toes as she tried to endure the pain.


THWACKK!! Julius Baraka lashed her again, across the small of the back this time, the fierce tails of the whip clawing at Tanya's flesh, as her body surged against the table, adding to the ghastly toll the panels of the table were taking on her imprisoned breasts.




His virile ardor growing with each passing blow, David Chao brought the cane-switch crashing down on Tanya back-side again, leaving a third lurid mark across her shapely bottomcheeks.


CRACKKK!!! Tanya groaned miserably into the gag and danced again, her feet churning as if in flight, but she was unable to escape the vise-like pressure on her throbbing breasts.



Julius Baraka, his re-swollen erection forming a prodigious lump in his boxer shorts, had drawn his knotted whip back for the sixth stroke when he paused at the incongruous sound of the tea kettle whistling on the gas stove.


"One moment, my friend."


Baraka and the sheik watched mystified as Colonel Chao stepped back into the kitchen. He returned a few moments later pushing a cart on which stood a steaming teapot, three cups and saucers, and a spray bottle, newly filled to the brim. "Let us let the tea brew for a moment gentlemen," Chao said as he fingered the trigger-mechanism on the spray bottle. The maid, a pretty local girl, had used it to clean the mirrors and glass tabletops this morning. Unfortunately she had left a streak on the mirror in the bedroom," he mused, remembering how he had made Rosina, the young Columbian woman, prostrate herself over the edge of the bed and pull her short skirt high up over her soft, supple thighs. He had undone his belt, and after warning Rosina not to cry out, lest she receive an even more severe thrashing, he had administered ten stinging left-handed strokes across the backs of her bare, brown legs.


But while he was flogging her, the spray-bottle had caught his eye, and now he was about to put it to good use.


"I heated rather too much water for this teapot, I'm sorry to say. But perhaps we can put the extra water too good use," he explained, picking up the plastic spray bottle gingerly in his gloved left hand, and wincing slightly as his hand came into contact with the bottle which now held almost scalding hot water. "But I have always found wet female flesh very appealing. How about you, gentlemen?" he added as he gave Tanya's bottom-ovals a succession of squirts with the spray bottle, moistening every inch of her backside.


Tanya's feet almost left the floor when she felt the near-boiling water against her bottom. The muscles in the backs of her thighs tensed and she rose up, to escape the steaming spray, only to be pulled up short by the imprisoning grip of the table top.


"I believe it was your turn, your Excellency," the colonel said softly, stepping back so that Baraka would have a clear shot at the moist nether ovals that glistened so invitingly.



THWACKKK!! The African delivered another blistering stroke that sent Tanya's hindquarters into fresh gyrations of agony. "MMGH! MMGHM!! MFFPPH!"


The Colonel adjusted his thick glasses and then strode toward the cabinet which housed the implements, returning a moment later with a twenty-inch double-stitched leather strap, and an oblong wooden paddle with a monogrammed CP, emblematic of Don Roberto's enclave, deeply etched into its striking surface. Placing the paddle on the table, he swung the strap high over his head, and lashed it across Tanya's quivering bottom-globes with a vicious snap of his wrist.


SMACKKK!! "MGWWHH!!" The seventh blow, that of the strap, was a new kind of pain, different from that of the cane or the whip, but in its own way equally devilish. Tanya's pelvis churned in misery, as her tormentors eyed ogled her nudity with unexampled lust.


But this time Baraka did not follow the colonel's stroke with one of his own. Instead he placed the whip gently on the table, and took Tanya's rounded bottom in his hands. He spread his long dark fingers across Tanya's moist and tender backside, smoothing the remaining moisture on her glistening flesh. His hands fondled her buttocks greedily and then slid outward to the tops of her hips as he edged forward and ground his equine erection against the sweet, dark cleft between her buttocks.


"This is just an appetizer, my dear. I can't wait for the entrée," he whispered wickedly into her ear, the dark menace in his voice and the vigorous pressure of his hips against her buttocks auguring the vilest of outrages against her defenseless body.


"Nghh! Nghh!!" the panic-stricken beauty cried frantically into her gag. The thought of any of her captors, but especially the huge-cocked African, sodomizing her sent waves of terror through her nude body.


Waves of nausea and revulsion swept over her as she remembered how Don Roberto had punished her a few weeks earlier when she had tried to thwart his attempts to plunder her sole remaining virginity.
 
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Installment 26 {Tanya's Torment Continues}


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The handsome Don had swept Tanya off her feet when he had first met her at a party in LA. He had romanced her with candlelight dinners, expensive wines and all night jazz clubs and had made love to her with finesse and invention, transporting her to realms of ecstasy she had never known.


But once she had stepped off the plane at Ciudad Paraiso, he had changed. He had worshipped her splendid body from Palos Verdes to Palm Springs during his brief vacation in California, but once he set foot back in his native Colombia, and took up anew the reins of his drug-smuggling and white slavery empires, the romance melted away like the ice cubes in the cocktails served in his sweltering masculine paradise, and only lust, cruel domineering lust, remained.


At the end of her first week in Ciudad Paraiso, Don Roberto was in a foul mood over the disappearance of a drug courier. He had reclined on a plush divan, and forced Tanya to tongue his swollen genitals until his manhood was toweringly erect. Then he had made her bend forward over a nearby armchair. Thinking that he was going to enter her vagina from behind, as he had skillfully done many times before, Tanya willingly complied. But when she felt the tip of his cock pressing aggressively against her puckering anus, she panicked and ran into her bedroom and locked the door.


Don Roberto had flown into a rage and pounded savagely on the door, but Tanya, who had thrown a brief nightgown over her nakedness, grew ever more frightened, and refused to open the door, hoping that he would eventually calm down.


When she had refused to unlock the door Don Roberto had summoned three of his goons, who, upon arriving had quickly kicked in the door and seized Tanya who had been cowering in a corner. The Don, who by now was running late for a flight to the interior to search for the missing courier, directed the leader of the unholy trio to rip open her flimsy peignoir while his cronies pinioned her arms helplessly behind her. Don Roberto, 'El Hombre,' had only had time to deliver six savage slaps to Tanya's bold-thrusting breasts, and give each of her sensitive nipples a vicious twist before admonishing his men that, "This gringa thinks she's too good to take it up the ass. I want you boys to teach her a lesson!"


"No problem, boss," their leader, a thug named Rogelio had replied. "By the time we get done with her, she'll be begging for it!"


And Rogelio had been as good as his word. The three goons had stripped the gown from her body and had subjected her to the most humiliating gang rape imaginable. They had slammed her to the ground and then while two of the men pinned her outstretched arms to the carpet, the third had straddled her chest and forced his swollen cock down her throat. Then he had given way to his cronies and each of them had taken her in the same fashion.

Then they had paused for a few seconds, asking her if she was ready to beg them to fuck her in the ass, but still she resisted, giving them license to pursue other pleasures.

Led by Rogelio, the vicious trio had proceeded to press heated needles, whose tapered points were so fine that the marks they left were imperceptible, against the under-curves of her naked breasts and the supremely sensitive petals at the entryway to her vagina. Tanya had held out as long as she could, but after half an hour of then needle torment, the pain had put her courage to flight. When yet another pair of red-hot needles were only millimeters from her swollen nipples she had been forced to beg them to "fuck me in the ass; please fuck me in the ass," the obscene wording on which they had insisted.


And fuck her they had, two of them holding her down while the third filled her forbidden canal with his thrusting cock. Each of the three men had taken her twice, with a brief intermission after each cycle, an intermezzo which afforded her cruel captors an opportunity to engage in a fresh round of sadistic byplay to re-kindle their flagging lust.



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The ghastly horror of that evening came back to Tanya in a rush. Out of the corner of her eye she saw Baraka pick up the spray bottle. A moment later she heard the soft squish of the pump mechanism, and then she gasped into her gag and wriggled in anguish as fresh bursts of steaming-hot water splashed against her burning backside.

Tanya tried again to squirm free, but the Sheik’s relentless pressure on the twin leaves of the table, had turned them into cruel jaws that entrapped her naked breasts, and held her fast.


The golden-blonde beauty was still wriggling when Julius Baraka seized the paddle and gave her a thunderous WHAPPP!! across her ripe-rounded bottom-cheeks, atomizing the droplets of water and sending Tanya into fresh convulsions of distress.


"MGGHHHHHH!!!" Tanya's body shuddered as the combination of scalding water and scalding blows continued to wreak havoc on her nether-ovals. She knew her gyrations of agony only served to further inflame her tormentors' lust, but she was powerless to control them.


Colonel Chao waited until Tanya's frenzied writhing had subsided somewhat and then lashed out with the strap again, flaying the rounded summits of Tanya's bare backside with the inch-wide strip of cowhide.


SMACKK!! "UNNGGHHH!!"


"My friends, my arm is itching. When shall I have my turn?" The very whiskers of Ahmed's woolly beard seemed aroused; his eyes were dark with malice.


Julius Baraka took his eyes off Tanya Spencer's twitching buttocks long enough to glance in Sheik Abdul's direction.

"Of course, of course, your highness. Be my guest," he exclaimed, extending the paddle.

Tanya felt a momentary relaxation of the dreadful pressure on her breasts, while the two men changed places, but within moments the giant African was leaning forward, pressing the edges of the table top even more brutally against her young, pendulous breast-globes then the Arab had done.


Abdul meanwhile was turning the paddle over in his hands, studying the aerodynamically-inspired pattern of holes which had been drilled into the polished instrument in order to hasten its progress toward its rounded target. He shifted his glance to Tanya's temptingly upraised posterior. Her thighs were parted slightly, giving him a cock-pleasing glimpse of her inviting labia and the golden tendrils which graced them.


WHAPPP!!! The muscular Arab smashed the paddle into Tanya's bottom-flesh with so much force that her mound of Venus was crushed painfully against the table. "MMMPHHHHFFGHHH!!" Tanya groaned despairingly.


Colonel Chao paused for a moment to let the rosy glow spread across Tanya's wriggling buttocks, and then he bent slightly at the knees and delivered the eleventh blow, another strap-stroke that etched a line of fire across her reddening bottom ovals.


SMACKKKK !! "UNGHH!!" Tanya's arms wrestled with the edges of the table, trying once again to free her tortured breasts from the table's grip, and this time, Baraka, anxious to see the superb breasts which had been so cruelly imprisoned, released the pressure on the edge of the table, even as he reached out and took Tanya's wrists in his own.


Taken aback by this new freedom, Tanya's upper body rose up off the table just as Abdul punished her burning buttocks with yet another prodigious paddle-smash.


WHAPPP!!! Julius Baraka's timing had been perfect. He was treated to the thrilling sight of Tanya's opulent breasts, wearing the livid marks left by the table-edge, bouncing madly on her chest in reaction to the sheik's horrific blow.


Even in her agony, Tanya tried to pull her wrists free from the African's grip, but could not. Applying ever increasing pressure, he tugged on her arms, almost lifting her off her feet, until her upper torso was pressed flat against the table.


For a moment the cool smoothness of the tabletop almost felt good against the taut nipples of her beleaguered breasts, but only until Colonel Chao whipped the flesh-searing strap against the tops of her thighs, setting them on fire once again.


SMACKKK!!


WHAPPPPP!!! This time sheik Abdul followed the colonel's stroke with one of his own, rekindling the coals burning just under the rosy skin of her bottomglobes.


"That makes fourteen," Colonel Chao observed calmly as he adjusted his eyeglasses. "Only two strokes remain of the sixteen." He ran the strap through his fingers menacingly. "Would you gentlemen be so good as to turn her over on her back?"


The tall African released Tanya's wrists, but sprang forward around the table so quickly that his momentarily liberated prisoner could only stagger backwards into Sheik Abdul's waiting arms.


"Across the table the other way, this time, I think," the Colonel directed, and within seconds her two captors had lifted Tanya bodily onto the table. Pressing his genitals against her golden hair, Abdul pinned her shoulders to the table, while Baraka pulled her body toward him until her defenseless vagina rested against the other edge of the table. Lowering his shorts, Baraka inserted the purplish-black tip of his huge member into Tanya's beckoning slit.


Meanwhile Colonel Chao had been refilling the spray-bottle with freshly heated water from the tea-kettle. Tanya shook her head from side to side in horror as he pointed the bottle-trigger at her throbbing breasts.


"Nghhhhh!!" "Nghhhhhh!!" she begged, but the colonel was not to be denied. He squeezed the trigger and began shooting streamlets of sizzling water at Tanya's defenseless breasts.


"Unnghh!!! UNNGGHHHH!!" Tanya screamed into the gag, but Chao persisted, slowly moving the spray bottle in a clockwise arc around each of Tanya's breasts, so that not an inch of her beautiful breast-mounds escaped the scalding spray. He lingered longest on her distended nipples, drenching them thoroughly.


Then he picked up the strap.


"PLnnnghh!! Plngghhh!!!"


"I have always hated lateness in a woman," the Chinese colonel hissed menacingly. He set the water bottle down and uncoiled his strap letting the tough leather slither across Tanya's proud-jutting breasts. The tips of her breasts, despite being reduced to tiny quivering peaks by the agonizing dowsing, responded to the scraping of the strap by rising boldly once again into stiff steeples of nipple-flesh.


"Lovely!" David Chao whispered devoutly, as he stepped back and shook the strap once, like a commander snapping a recruit to attention, and then he lifted his long left arm high above his head. While his two cronies tightened their grip on Tanya's bucking body, the colonel swept the strap through the air in a great arc, its tip nearly kissing the ceiling at its apex, before it began its lightning-like descent and finally exploding across Tanya's honey-gold breasts with a ferocious SMACCKKK!!!


"NNGHHH!!!! MMPHHHH!!" Tanya screamed into the stifling gag as waves of agony surged through her tender treasures. The strap had strafed an inch-wide path of pain across the upper slopes of her breasts.


"Fifteen," intoned David Chao softly, as he raised the strap for the final blow.


Tanya could only watch in horror as the leather lash rocketed downward at the very centers of her breasts. Julius Baraka took this instant to strike, driving his dark man-weapon deep into her defenseless pussy with a violent lunge a millisecond before the strap struck her spray-sensitized nipples with fearful force, bathing them in a sea of pain….
 
Installment 27 {La Sala de Juegos}




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Chapter X Degradation and Depravity


Tanya Spencer's eyes flickered open. Standing in front of her, naked, stroking his immense erection, was Julius Baraka. She tried to retreat from this horrific apparition only to realize that, subsequent to her violation on the table in the dining alcove, she had been dragged to another part of Colonel Chao's penthouse suite and imprisoned in a strange device.


"Welcome to La Sala de Juegos," Miss Spencer. The 'game rooms' of the penthouse suites at El Castillo are equipped with a number of remarkable features, are they not?"


The voice of Colonel Chao, who stood off to her left, was icy, merciless, and sent fresh shudders of horror churning through Tanya's lovely frame.


Because, as her awareness slowly returned after her brief bout of unconsciousness she realized that she was more helpless, more vulnerable than ever.


For she was imprisoned in a bizarre swing which hung from the ceiling of La Sala de Juegos, a labyrinthian webwork of straps which held her nude body securely in place.


In the full-length mirrors which lined the walls, she saw that she was suspended in a kneeling position, her shins parallel to the floor, some three feet off the ground. Her arms were stretched high over her head, like those of a penitent imploring mercy of a wrathful god, and her slender wrists were strapped together and lashed to a sturdy metal anchor in the ceiling.


But despite her kneeling posture, and the supplicant extension of her

wrists, Tanya had been positioned in a manner that would have driven the most celibate of monks mad with desire. The position of the noose that held her wrists was a bit forward of her center of gravity, so that she was compelled to lean forward slightly with her back arched in such a way that her rosy buttocks were thrust out obscenely behind her. The encircling mirrors also revealed the fact that Sheik Abdul was standing behind her naked and hairy and aroused.


"A magnificent device, Colonel!" Abdul exclaimed as he cupped Tanya's buttocks in his greedy hands and squeezed them with lascivious gusto. "The caliphs of Baghdad could not have had slaves prepared more perfectly."


He sank his nails into Tanya's bottomflesh and spread her resilient cheeks, chortling with lewd delight as he admired her secret portal.


Tanya shivered in revulsion as the sheik spat copiously into his hand, and then applied the spittle to the tip of the unusually thick phallus that rose, dark and menacing, from a forest of wiry black pubic hair.


"Nummghhh! Pluhnghh, nummghhhh!" Tanya begged but the fat Arab snuggled closer to her and nestled the length of his cockstaff into the enticing groove between her rounded buttocks.


"Mmmmm," he growled pleasurably, as he enjoyed the indescribable sensation of Tanya's bottomcheeks squeezing the entire length of his member. "Now is the moment, Baraka, now is the moment. And thank you, my friend, for binding her thighs together. Already I can tell that the sensation will be enhanced immeasurably."


"Do not mention it, Your Highness. Consider it a gift from one old friend to another." Julius Baraka's lips split into an evil grin as the dark-skinned giant hefted Tanya's naked breasts, which her suspension had thrust forward shamelessly. Using his index fingers to lift her ripe lust-globes ever so slightly, he positioned his thumbnails against the underside of her areolae.


Tanya closed her eyes and waited for the pain to come, but there was none. There was none, that is, until she felt the insistent pressure of the sheik's penis against her anal aperture. It was only then, when the evil Arab tried to penetrate the circlet of desire between her bottom cheeks, that Baraka drove his nails into the pebbly brown halos which encircled her strap-seared nipples.


"Angghhh!" Tanya groaned in anguish as her body buckled under the double pressure exerted by her captors.


"By the beard of the prophet, she's a tight one," the sneik snarled as he thrust forward again, breeching Tanya's delicate rosette, his fat cock punishing the sphinctered walls of her anal orifice. "They tell me you're too proud to take it in the arse," Abdul muttered as he tugged at her golden hair so that he could whisper into her ear. "But tonight you will learn that women are meant to please their masters, not to refuse them." He emitted another guttural growl as he gripped Tanya's shapely hips and worked his short but meaty phallus even deeper into her forbidden passage. Tanya's rectal muscles worked overtime trying to repel the intruding engine, but her frantic writhings only served to incite him, not repel him. And with every hard-fought centimeter of progress in the constricted passageway, his brutal thrusts picked up speed and power.


"Ungh! Ungh! Ungh!!" the tawny beauty groaned as the son of the emir pounded away at her body.


"Excuse me, Your Excellency, but with your permission?" Baraka looked over his shoulder to see Colonel Chao running an extension cord to a table lamp not unlike the one that Tanya had thrown at the sheik earlier. "You must learn respect for other people's property, my dear," the colonel said, as he plugged one end of the extension cord into the wall and then plugged the lamp into the receptacle at the other end. Chao flicked a switch on the lamp, lighting its bulb, and then, using only his left hand, he unscrewed the cap that held the lampshade in place. Discarding the lampshade, he glanced down at the bare, brightly burning bulb. "Sixty watts," he mumbled under his breath, as Sheik Abdul rammed his knobby man-root deeper into Tanya's rear canal. "That will do nicely!"


Tanya groaned as the Arab continued to pound away, surprised that this mysterious Chinese -- even with his poor eyesight – should be so interested in something as innocuous as a light bulb. But her puzzlement quickly turned to fear, as Colonel Chao pointed the lamb bulb at her bare belly.


"Electricity is quite remarkable, you know," he continued in a professorial tone. In less than a minute a light bulb at room temperature can become quite remarkably hot." He held the glowing bulb a fraction of an inch from Tanya's enticing navel and waited for the sheik's next barbaric thrust.



When it came, the force of the Arab's lunge drove the inviting nook of Tanya's navel against the hot bulb. Chao pulled the lamp back quickly, but not before the golden-haired beauty's torso had recoiled from the bulb with a convulsive movement that caused her internal muscles to clench themselves even more securely around Sheik Abdul's pistoning cock.


"Ooohhhhh," the bearded Arab groaned ecstatically, as he wedged his throbbing member still deeper into Tanya's rectum. "Again. For the love of Allah, do it again."


Terrified, Tanya swung her golden mane from side to side. "Nghhhh! Nghhhh!!"


"It will be my pleasure, your highness," Chao whispered, touching the bulb to the soft flesh of Tanya's strapped-together upper thighs and holding it there for the fraction of a second it took for her over-taxed nervous system to transmit the pain signals from the flawless perfection of her tanned legs to her brain. Her body jerked violently once again, transferring fresh waves of indescribable pleasure to the sheik's genitals.


His hairy body bathed in perspiration, the Arab kept up his jack-hammering pace while Colonel Chao used the lamp bulb to circumscribe each of Tanya's shamelessly proffered breasts. Beginning at the tops of her jiggling mounds, and proceeding counter-clockwise in time with Abdul's bullish thrusts, he meticulously drew a dotted circle of pain around each of her throbbing pleasure-globes, tilting his glowing weapon inward from time to time so as not to neglect the edges of her taut, tender nipples.

Gauging the dreadful paroxysms of agony that shook Tanya's body with an almost scientific precision, the colonel never permitted the rounded surface of the fragile glass to stay in contact with the sweet convexity of her sweat-slick pleasure orbs for more than a heartbeat. But there was no need to do so; even the most fleeting touches of the flesh-scalding light bulb to Tanya's strap-seared breasts elicited prolonged shudders of anguish that propelled Sheik Abdul ever-deeper into his sexual paradise.


The Arab's grunts grew faster and louder as he neared his climax. When his hips surged forward against Tanya's upthrust derriere in a final convulsive effort, Colonel Chao began moving the glowing bulb rapidly back and forth between the twin tips of Tanya's breasts, searing each of her delectable buds with a series of fleeting touches that even the most frantic twists and turns of her lusciously-endowed torso were unable to escape.


"YESSSSSSSS!!!" A final violent shudder shook the oil sheik's squat body as he pumped his derrick into Tanya's body one last time before a gusher of man-lust surged out of his pleasure-drowned penis, irrigating Tanya's forbidden canal with his foul seed.
 
Installment 28 {In which Sheik Abdul finds a new use for an extension cord}


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Despite the pounding she had just taken, Tanya gasped with relief as she felt Abdul withdrawing his dripping erection from her abused rectum.


But her relief was to be of short duration.


For Julius Baraka was now behind her, stroking his equine phallus and massaging his plum-like testicles as he admired the tempting curvature of Tanya's body in the enslavement swing. Her arms uplifted submissively, her back arched seductively, her bottom up-thrust shamelessly, her ripe-rounded asscheeks ready for rape.


"Enjoy her well, my friend," the sweaty sheik grinned lasciviously, slapping Baraka on the back with one hand while he gave Tanya's bottom an obscenely familiar squeeze with the other. "I have a stable of the finest Arabians in the world, but never have I mounted such a beauty!"


Tanya cringed with shame as Baraka edged forward and pressed his blood-thick genitals against her behind, dreading a second assault that, based on the African's size and athleticism, promised to be even more ferocious than that of the sheik


For his part, as he studied the golden goddess whose tempting body was so perfectly positioned for plunder, Julius Baraka fantasized that he was a tribesman of an earlier era. He pressed the tip of his long, blue-black phallus between Tanya's buttocks imagining that he was a primitive African of the colonial period revenging himself on the imperialists who had brutalized and impoverished his once-proud nation, by raping the most beautiful of their daughters.


He ground his hips against Tanya's bottom, enjoying the warm pressure of her bottomflesh against his testicles, even as he slid his long arms around her torso and seized her honey-gold breasts in his black hands.


Tanya gasped in pain as the African cupped her breasts, which were still sore from the strap and the searing touches of the lamp bulb. She groaned into the gag even louder when he dug his dark fingers into her sensitive breastflesh.


"Magnificent!" Baraka mumbled under his breath as he kneaded Tanya's tits in his powerful hands, targeting her uptilted nipples with his thumbs and forefingers, while he continued to mash his genitals against her behind.


But Julius Baraka could no longer defer the pleasure of entry and plunder, and he released Tanya's aching breasts so that he could spread her buttcheeks wide, revealing her winking rosette, and the drippy detritus of Sheik Abdul's lust.


He positioned the tip of his obsidian shaft against Tanya's bumhole, tightened his grip on her hips and then drove forward with his own.


"MGHHPPH!" Tanya groaned in despair as she felt Baraka's man-weapon punch into her nether-canal. But whereas the Sheik had screwed his fat prick into her incrementally, an anus-stretching fraction at a time, Baraka disdained gradual encroachment for a quick strike.


"MPPPHHHH!!" Tanya's second plaintive moan followed hard upon Baraka's next thrust, which drove his rutting penis deep into her with a single thrust. As Tanya tried to catch her breath, she saw that Sheik Abdul undoing the extension cord that powered the lamp that the colonel had used on her breasts. 'Thank God', she thought, relieved that part of her ordeal, at least, was over.


Baraka thrust again, fondling Tanya's buttock-flesh with gusto as he buried his dark member ever deeper in Tanya's muscle-rich passageway. He closed his eyes, concentrating on the waves of dark pleasure surging through his loins as Tanya's involuntary pelvic spasms ratcheted up the pressure on his cock, easing it momentarily now and then only to grip it even tighter. Suddenly Tanya's body lurched wildly in the confining swing and Baraka opened his eyes to find his lust-slave tugging desperately at the straps which imprisoned her wrists.


And well she might, for Sheik Abdul, had unplugged the lamp, not to spare Tanya the misery of the hot bulb, but to get his hands on the extension cord which attached it to the wall.


Sheik Abdul's piggish eyes never left Tanya's deliciously ripe breasts as he leisurely doubled the cord in his hands. "Let us see if our beautiful steed responds to the whip with the same spirit as my proud Arabians," he chortled, as he wiped the sweat from his bristling beard. The stocky Arab took a step or two to his right and then swept the rubber cords downward across the top of Tanya's left breast.


THWAPP!!!


"UNNNNGHHH!!!" Tanya's stifled cry was the loudest to date, and inspired Baraka to piston his body forward in a Satanic frenzy. Where Abdul's cock-thrusts had been short, slow, and compact, the giant African's were long, rapid, stabbing, impaling Tanya's body deeper and deeper on his lust-spear.


Abdul, grinning through his beard like a grotesque demon, moved slightly to his left so that he faced Tanya almost dead on, and then with a withering sidearm slash he whipped the ends of the cord across the lateral curvature of her left breast.

The sheik leered as Tanya threw back her head in agony and her sweaty, shuddering love-mounds bobbled deliciously on her chest, her tempting nipples dancing for his pleasure. His follow-through having swept his arm all the way across his body, the burly sheik swung his arm back in the opposite direction, making a second resounding THWAPP!! as he scourged the outer contours of Tanya's other breast with the stinging cords.


Tanya's twin paroxysms of pain heightened Baraka's pleasure even more, and he stabbed still deeper, marveling at his golden-haired prisoner's ability to take inch after inch of his dark truncheon. His fingernails gouged deeper into her hips as he quickened his pace.


The Arab had slid further to his left, now and Tanya regarded him with horror as his lust-filled gaze fastened on the very centers of her breasts. As Baraka continued to sodomize the tawny-skinned beauty, the sheik bent forward and took Tanya's left nipple between his lips. He suckled it like a hungry babe, occasionally pausing to swipe at the thickening stalk of desire with his thick tongue. Not content with the speed with which Tanya's bud was hardening, he seized the russet nubbin between his front teeth and stretched it to its limits.


"EGHHHHH!!! ENGHHHHHH!!" Baraka's moans of pleasure were growing louder with every thrust.


Having stretched Tanya's lust-nugget to its fullest, Abdul tightened his toothy grip, biting down harder and harder until Tanya's nude body began to oscillate with pain.


Seizing the moment Baraka drove harder, deeper. "Take it you white whore, take it!!" he snarled, as he unleashed his final crescendo of lust, his dark testicles slapping noisily against Tanya's naked bottom.


Meanwhile the Arab had released his grip on Tanya's succulent nipple and retreated slightly.


"ENNNGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" Baraka groaned, and Abdul, sensing that the African was at the precipice of desire, whipped the rubber cords viciously across Tanya's breast, aiming at and finding the crest he had nurtured to ripeness. Tanya recoiled in agony and at that very moment Baraka's tall body cannoned forward in a final ecstatic thrust before spasming again and again as he emptied his seed into Tanya's forbidden passageway.


"Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh," the African moaned deliriously as he slowly extricated his dripping member from Tanya's aching rectum.



Panting heavily, her breasts ablaze with pain, her pelvis aching, the sweat-drenched blonde shot a furious glance at Colonel Chao, the silent, unsmiling sadist who had orchestrated her terrible ordeal, but who had still made no move to possess her himself.


The colonel was pacing slowly back and forth, rubbing his angular chin with his left hand. "Gentlemen, I trust that by now that you have had your fill of our pleasure-slave?"


The dismissive tone of his voice made it quite clear to his guests that their part in the exploitation of Tanya Spencer's nude, pain-wracked body had come to an end. "If you do not mind, I would prefer to enjoy Miss Spencer alone. Do not fear for your safety. Once Miss Spencer has viewed our little film, I assure you that she will not dare to inform Don Roberto of the nature of her … performance here tonight. In return, I trust that you will honor your commitments to my government as we have agreed?"


At the words, 'little film' Tanya stared at the stern, bespectacled Chinese in puzzlement, but the Arab and the African quickly nodded their agreement.


"Gentlemen, there are showers through either of those doors there," the colonel continued. "Feel free to refresh yourself before you leave."


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A short time later, the two men who had pillaged Tanya's body so ruthlessly emerged from their separate showers to finish dressing in the Sala de Juegos. Somewhat to their surprise, Tanya was still suspended in the same position, while Colonel Chao paced back and forth in front of her nude body, lost in thought, his gloved left hand menacingly fingering the six-thonged whip he had used earlier. But there seemed to be no fresh weals on Tanya's taut-stretched body.


As Julius Baraka finished buttoning his shirt, he addressed his pensive host. "I must say that it has been a great pleasure doing business with you, Colonel. I look forward to seeing you in Caracas next week." The African gave Tanya Spencer's sweat-soaked body a final affectionate glance. "I hope you have as much sport with her as we did. Are you sure that you won't need any … assistance? I'm sure that the sheik and I would be more than happy to restrain our lovely plaything in any fashion you wish. It's the very least we could do."


"No, that will not be necessary, " the colonel responded, slapping the tails of the whip gently against his thigh. "I tested those bindings very carefully earlier today, and they are as secure as they are adaptable. I assure you that Miss Spencer will not leave this suite until I have quite finished with her."


"As you wish. Next week in Caracas then. What do you say, your highness? Do you think Carmelita Calderon could be persuaded to take on the three of us?"


The black-bearded sheik grinned licentiously. "Unlike this one, La Calderon loves her work; a suitable monetary inducement will surely suffice." Having donned his flowing robes once again, Sheik Abdul smoothed them over his bulky frame with a vanity incongruous for one of his portly build. After regarding himself from all angles in the wall mirrors he stepped up behind Tanya Spencer and cupped her lush, scarlet-streaked breasts for a final time. "I can't say that I have minded losing our wager, Baraka," he said as he squeezed Tanya's breasts until moist pearls of suffering formed in the corners of her brown eyes. "Her tits are as real as her tears – and as tasty as the mangos of Malabar." Abdul pinched her nipples between his fat fingers, finally releasing the sensitive buds reluctantly when he saw that Baraka had finished adjusting his silk tie and was ready to depart. He clapped the African on the back. "Will you take a drink in the plaza as partial payment of my debt?"


"By all means," Baraka agreed cordially. Colonel Chao smiled sardonically; ten minutes early these two men had been lust-crazed brutes. But now, their dark desires sated, they were once again urbane men of the world. How narrow is the gap between civilization and savagery!
 
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Installment 29 { In which Tanya shares a story}



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Chapter XI Elemental Passions



Colonel Chao escorted the two men to the door, and then returned to the "Game Room", where he let his eyes wander briefly over Tanya's honey-gold flesh, once again marveling at the evenness of her tan, at the subtle curvature of her thighs, at the fleecy tendrils of pubic hair that made a pretense of guarding her girlish treasure. And at her magnificent breasts, still proud-thrusting despite the half-dozen whip-weals that marred their otherwise unblemished perfection.


And at her face. That face that glared at him with a mixture of fear and fury. At her eyes, those exotic, dark-irised orbs that had haunted him all day.


"Miss Spencer," he began, "perhaps you heard me make reference to a certain film a few moment ago?"


Tanya nodded uncertainly, finding it difficult to believe that her predicament could possibly get any worse.


"I am going to remove the tape and the gag now, so that you will be able to speak. I would urge you not to cry out, until you listen to what I have to say. Because as long as you bound as you are, it would be child's play for me to replace the gag in an instant. And if you force me to do that," he added, as he draped the tails of the whip across her naked thighs, "I assure you that you will come to regret your wilfullness. Do you understand?"


Tanya, having little choice, nodded her head in agreement.



"Let's see. Where were we?" the colonel went on, as he ripped away the first of the adhesive strips that held Tanya's gag in place. "Ah, yes. The film. Not long ago my friends and I had the good fortune to look in on you while you were in, shall we say, a compromising position."

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As she pondered the colonel's latest statement, Tanya noticed that his voice had changed since his conspirators in rapacity had left. While it was certainly more stern than friendly, the hostility that had permeated it since she had arrived late at his door, had all but disappeared.


Tanya looked up at him, half in fear, half in surprise. When he finished peeling off the tape, and pulled her panties out of her mouth, a flood of words, bottled up for many minutes, poured out of her in a torrent.


"My affairs are none of your business," Tanya hissed angrily. "Besides, why were you bastards spying on me?"


"So that my friends could enjoy you as they have without fear of your turning to Don Roberto and demanding satisfaction."


"And what's to stop me, once you set me free?" Tanya snapped, tugging futilely at her bonds.


"You are a beautiful young woman, Miss Spencer. But you have much to learn. And knowledge, I assure you, is power."


"Stop speaking in riddles!" Tanya fumed. What are you talking about?"


"I will tell you in a moment. But first …. " Colonel Chao trained his bespectacled eyes on Tanya Spencer's luscious breasts and reached deep into a pocket. A moment later he removed an expensive-looking jewel box.


Tanya stared at her mysterious captor, utterly perplexed.


David Chao popped the box open with his good hand and placed it on the table while he removed a glittering object. "Again, I remind you not to cry out," he murmured as he strummed Tanya's right nipple gently until it blossomed under his touch. When her dark nugget was pleasingly stiff, he whispered, "I cannot tell you how long I have waited to do this." Then, using the back of his almost lifeless right hand to prop up her plump breast, he screwed one of a pair of diamond-studded clamps onto Tanya's tender nipple.


Tanya gasped in pain, but when Colonel Chao placed a silencing finger across her soft lips and gestured meaningfully toward the knotted whip, Tanya bit her lower lip with stoic determination.


Moving with almost sacrificial reverence, the colonel fingered Tanya's left nipple until it too swelled to his touch, and then he removed the second clamp from the box and affixed it as he had the first.


"It is a sight even more beautiful than I imagined," Chao whispered and stepped back to drink in the sight of Tanya Spencer with her arms bound high over her head, her impossibly beautiful breasts languishing in the grip of the fiendishly tight clamps.


As Tanya squirmed enticingly in her bonds, David Chao's thoughts went back to that long ago Saturday morning in the book store when that grainy ninety seconds of film had awakened in him the dark obsession that had led him to this moment. And to that unforgettable night in Malibu, several months later, when he had watched furtively as "Big Tony" Cannizzaro had applied a pair of glittering clamps to the tempting nipples of Amalie Desjardins.



With the air of an artist who has just completed the masterpiece of a lifetime, David Chao lit an unfiltered cigarette, and collapsed into the chair. He exhaled leisurely as he studied Tanya's tawny body through a wispy veil of smoke.

“You'll never get away with this!" Tanya seethed, grimacing and turning her shoulders gently in hopes of easing the stinging bite of the clamps, but her movements merely served to make her jewel-tipped breasts dance deliciously from side to side. "When Don Roberto hears how the three of you have treated a girl with a golden bracelet…"

"But he will never hear of any such thing," David Chao answered, placing the cigarette in an ashtray and once again taking up the six-thonged whip.

"And why not?" Tanya asked tremulously, her eyes fixed apprehensively on the knotted strands of leather that David Chao was slapping crisply against his thigh.

"Foolish girl. A plaything of Don Roberto's really should be more careful about her choice of lovers." He shook the whip gently, separating the strands so that each one would be free to leave its own bitter sting.

"What do you know of my… my lovers?"

David Chao moved closer to the girl in the swing, his fingers clenching on the stock of the whip. "I know that she …."

"She?" Tanya said flushing. She had had no idea that anyone knew of her afternoon liaisons with the dark-eyed Letitia.

"That she," David continued, draping the wicked thongs across the tops of Tanya's breasts and then letting the knotted ends of the whip slide into her splendid cleavage, "was only eighteen."

Tanya swallowed nervously, as she felt the strands of leather slither across the soft flesh of her breasts. Trying to retain her poise, she stammered, "Le …" she began, and then caught herself. "My … friend is only eighteen?"

David moved his hand slightly, so that the tails of the whip meandered lazily across Tanya's mouthwatering lust-globes, catching briefly on the nipple clamps, causing Tanya to wince in pain.

"Not only that, Miss Spencer," David Chao murmured softly has he swept the tails of the whip lightly across Tanya's outthrust breasts. "Has your lovely, sweet-tongued Leticia bothered to inform you that she is the daughter of Don Roberto?"

Tanya's body went rigid in the swing, and the color drained from her face. "You're crazy!" she gasped. "It's impossible. Don Roberto never mentioned having a daughter!"

"Oh, every family has its secrets, you know," David whispered as he slapped the thongs against Tanya's firm young breasts again, a little harder this time. The leather strips struck the sparkling clamps quite sharply, but he had fastened the clips very securely on Tanya's delectable nubbins and while the blow jarred them, it did not dislodge them. "I'm surprised that you never noticed the resemblance – the lean body, her dark wavy hair, her flashing eyes."

A mysterious smile formed on David Chao's face as he retreated and took another long puff on his cigarette as he let his eyes leisurely explore the curves and hollows of Tanya Spencer's nude body.

“Family resemblances can be quite remarkable," he said as he removed his glasses, cleaned them and replaced them. He sank back down in the chair and stared intently at Tanya again. But this time, Tanya realized, it was with unseeing eyes; it was as if the intense glare of Colonel Chao was fixed on a vision that he had conjured from the shadows of the Sala de Juegos.

David Chao was silent for a long moment and then he lifted the cigarette to his lips and inhaled deeply. "Your resemblance to her is quite striking you know?" he whispered as he exhaled a curling column of cigarette smoke.

“To her? To whom?” a dazed Tanya Spencer responded, once again confused by the colonel's enigmatic words.

“That golden hair, the soft, lovely skin, even the scent of your body. I would have recognized you anywhere, even through these.” He tapped his thick, steel-rimmed glasses meaningfully.

“What are you talking about?” Tanya replied, grimacing under the claw-like grip of the nipple clamps.

“Your mother.”

“My mother?!” Tanya repeated in shocked disbelief, as she tugged, tugging frantically at the straps which held her. “Who are you? What do you know of my mother?”

“I know this!” the David Chao whispered fiercely, extending his khaki-sleeved right arm, the arm that had hung so limply for so long at his side, its gray kid glove concealing the unused hand beneath. Using his good left hand, he stripped away the glove on his right hand, revealing a mangled knob of flesh and bone that had once been a human hand. “I have your mother to thank for this!”


Tanya turned her head away from the colonel's grotesque injury. “I don’t believe you; my mother is a good woman!”

“She betrayed me – and she ruined my life. She took from me everything -- education, career, a chance at love, marriage, children. What woman would spend her life with a man with … with this?” he exclaimed angrily, shaking his deformed fist.”

“My mother would never do such a thing!”

“Ah, but she did," David Chao seethed with righteous indignation. She and your ignorant bully of a father!”

“My father?!?”

“Yes, your father!”

“You must mean Tony Cannizzaro. My mother told me he was a brute. No better than you and your friends. He began cheating on her and abusing her during their honeymoon, she told me once, and he never stopped until the day he died.”

“He came to an untimely end, your father, as I recall,” David Chao continued pensively. “In a sleazy motel in a crime-infested area in South Los Angeles.” He exhaled another spiral of cigarette smoke. “The authorities seemed to believe that he must have gotten rough with a hooker who was under the protection of a very nasty pimp."

David Chao paused and puffed at his cigarette silently before exhaling another acrid column of smoke. "It was quite an unusual case as I recall. It's not often, I don't suppose, that a murder victim is found with a pool-cue shoved down his throat.”

David Chao's face was wreathed in an enigmatic, almost omniscient smile. He tilted his chair back leisurely and tapped his left hand gently against the ashtray as he neatly deposited a long cylinder of ash.

“I don't know," Tanya responded uncaringly as she tried once again to free her upraised wrists. "If you ask me, the bastard probably deserved it. But he wasn’t my father.”

David Chao’s tilted-back chair crashed to the floor. He glared at Tanya angrily. “What do you mean Tony Cannizzaro wasn't your father? Ah, I see. It's just like your mother to fill you with you such lies!”

“I’m sorry if it upsets you, although I don’t see why it should. Did you arrange for your disgusting friends to rape me merely because you thought I was HIS daughter?"

“But it’s impossible,” David Chao repeated, but now without quite the air of certainty that had enshrouded his every prior action. He reached for the same pocket computer he had used in the plaza to verify the date and time of his cronies’ bout with Carmelita. He punched angrily at the buttons. “Aghh! Where is it? This stupid thing,!” he growled, as he continued to punch little buttons. “Yes, yes, here it is," he said finally breathing an audible sigh of relief. "Tanya Cannizzaro, born February 24, 1984, Cedar Sinai Hospital, Los Angeles, Ca. Daughter of Anthony and Amalie Cannizzaro. 21 inches. 6 pounds and 7 ounces. Social Security Number …"

“Your precious computer is wrong. I was born in 1983, not 1984. Not that it matters. But the rest is right. Except for one thing – Tony Cannizzaro was not my father.”

“Of course he was your father. I have made inquiries with everyone who knew your mother in those years; she was terrified of Tony Cannizzaro. She was much too afraid of him to cheat on him.”

“Well, I’m sorry to disappoint you, but Tony Cannizzaro was infertile. My mother told me once that Tony berated her for years for not giving him a son. But shortly before he died, they learned that it was his sperm count, not her fertility, that was the problem."

David Chao felt his head begin to spin at this revelation. “But if Tony Cannizzaro was not your father, then who …”

“I don’t know,” said Tanya Spencer. Nor did she know why this strange conversation had begun to drain the vindictiveness from her erstwhile tormentor. But since it had, she decided that, like Scheherazade, her best chance at survival was to keep talking.

“But I can tell you this," she went on. My mother told me once, with tears in her eyes, that aside from Tony, she had only slept with one other man before she met Tom Spencer, my step-father. That she had been with him only once. And that she had made a mistake for which she could never forgive herself. Just thinking about him seemed to upset her greatly. She never spoke of him again.”

As she spoke those words Tanya noticed that the mastermind of her subjugation had turned deathly pale. “Are … are you… are you all right?”

David Chao had pressed his hands to his face, knocking his glasses to the floor, where they lay at his feet. He rocked slowly back and forth in the chair, his chest heaving silently as if he were suffocating in an airless world. His right hand, his maimed hand, shook uncontrollably.

Mystified by the colonel's agitation, and comforted by the fact that his thin-lipped ferocity had spent itself, Tanya continued to search her memory. “I remember … it was a Thanksgiving morning when I was about twelve or thirteen when she told me about my father. She was sitting at the kitchen table chopping celery and onions for the stuffing while she told me -- I can still see the tears from the onions streaming down her face. And … it was the strangest thing: when she had finished telling me that Tony was not my father, she began whispering the names of the elements. You know, in chemistry. She …"

Tanya was interrupted by a muffled moan coming from her tormentor that seemed to rise up from the very depths of his soul.

"…she had begun to teach them to me when I was eight or nine, reciting them to me as if they were a second set of ABC’s. Hydrogen, Helium, Lithium, Beryllium, Boron …”

“Carbon, Nitrogen, Oxygen …” David Chao's hushed, half-strangled voice joined Tanya's in an eerily-echoing harmony.

Tanya Spencer glanced up quizzically at David Chao who had begun to move toward her with an anguished expression on his face. “Oh, you know them too?” she murmured.

David Chao bent and retrieved his glasses. His good hand shook as he glared at them, blaming his folly in part on the weakness of his vision. He slowly put the glasses back on, adjusting them with minute care, as if by straightening them perfectly, he might make sense of a world suddenly gone mad. There was a ghastly soullessness to his eyes as he crossed, ashen-faced, to Tanya, his movements those of an automaton.

As his hands moved toward her breasts, Tanya Spencer inhaled fearfully, bracing herself for a fresh round of torment. But this time Colonel Chao's hands were gentle as he unscrewed the first of the fiendish clamps. Tanya bit her lip to stifle a gasp of pain. When the colonel undid the screw-clamp, it felt as if electricity, rather than blood, was surging back into her tender buds.

Although he seemed to move quickly it seemed to Tanya that her strange captor had aged ten years during the minute or two it took him to free her from her bonds.
 
Installment 29 { In which Tanya shares a story}



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Chapter XI Elemental Passions



Colonel Chao escorted the two men to the door, and then returned to the "Game Room", where he let his eyes wander briefly over Tanya's honey-gold flesh, once again marveling at the evenness of her tan, at the subtle curvature of her thighs, at the fleecy tendrils of pubic hair that made a pretense of guarding her girlish treasure. And at her magnificent breasts, still proud-thrusting despite the half-dozen whip-weals that marred their otherwise unblemished perfection.


And at her face. That face that glared at him with a mixture of fear and fury. At her eyes, those exotic, dark-irised orbs that had haunted him all day.


"Miss Spencer," he began, "perhaps you heard me make reference to a certain film a few moment ago?"


Tanya nodded uncertainly, finding it difficult to believe that her predicament could possibly get any worse.


"I am going to remove the tape and the gag now, so that you will be able to speak. I would urge you not to cry out, until you listen to what I have to say. Because as long as you bound as you are, it would be child's play for me to replace the gag in an instant. And if you force me to do that," he added, as he draped the tails of the whip across her naked thighs, "I assure you that you will come to regret your wilfullness. Do you understand?"


Tanya, having little choice, nodded her head in agreement.



"Let's see. Where were we?" the colonel went on, as he ripped away the first of the adhesive strips that held Tanya's gag in place. "Ah, yes. The film. Not long ago my friends and I had the good fortune to look in on you while you were in, shall we say, a compromising position."

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As she pondered the colonel's latest statement, Tanya noticed that his voice had changed since his conspirators in rapacity had left. While it was certainly more stern than friendly, the hostility that had permeated it since she had arrived late at his door, had all but disappeared.


Tanya looked up at him, half in fear, half in surprise. When he finished peeling off the tape, and pulled her panties out of her mouth, a flood of words, bottled up for many minutes, poured out of her in a torrent.


"My affairs are none of your business," Tanya hissed angrily. "Besides, why were you bastards spying on me?"


"So that my friends could enjoy you as they have without fear of your turning to Don Roberto and demanding satisfaction."


"And what's to stop me, once you set me free?" Tanya snapped, tugging futilely at her bonds.


"You are a beautiful young woman, Miss Spencer. But you have much to learn. And knowledge, I assure you, is power."


"Stop speaking in riddles!" Tanya fumed. What are you talking about?"


"I will tell you in a moment. But first …. " Colonel Chao trained his bespectacled eyes on Tanya Spencer's luscious breasts and reached deep into a pocket. A moment later he removed an expensive-looking jewel box.


Tanya stared at her mysterious captor, utterly perplexed.


David Chao popped the box open with his good hand and placed it on the table while he removed a glittering object. "Again, I remind you not to cry out," he murmured as he strummed Tanya's right nipple gently until it blossomed under his touch. When her dark nugget was pleasingly stiff, he whispered, "I cannot tell you how long I have waited to do this." Then, using the back of his almost lifeless right hand to prop up her plump breast, he screwed one of a pair of diamond-studded clamps onto Tanya's tender nipple.


Tanya gasped in pain, but when Colonel Chao placed a silencing finger across her soft lips and gestured meaningfully toward the knotted whip, Tanya bit her lower lip with stoic determination.


Moving with almost sacrificial reverence, the colonel fingered Tanya's left nipple until it too swelled to his touch, and then he removed the second clamp from the box and affixed it as he had the first.


"It is a sight even more beautiful than I imagined," Chao whispered and stepped back to drink in the sight of Tanya Spencer with her arms bound high over her head, her impossibly beautiful breasts languishing in the grip of the fiendishly tight clamps.


As Tanya squirmed enticingly in her bonds, David Chao's thoughts went back to that long ago Saturday morning in the book store when that grainy ninety seconds of film had awakened in him the dark obsession that had led him to this moment. And to that unforgettable night in Malibu, several months later, when he had watched furtively as "Big Tony" Cannizzaro had applied a pair of glittering clamps to the tempting nipples of Amalie Desjardins.



With the air of an artist who has just completed the masterpiece of a lifetime, David Chao lit an unfiltered cigarette, and collapsed into the chair. He exhaled leisurely as he studied Tanya's tawny body through a wispy veil of smoke.

“You'll never get away with this!" Tanya seethed, grimacing and turning her shoulders gently in hopes of easing the stinging bite of the clamps, but her movements merely served to make her jewel-tipped breasts dance deliciously from side to side. "When Don Roberto hears how the three of you have treated a girl with a golden bracelet…"

"But he will never hear of any such thing," David Chao answered, placing the cigarette in an ashtray and once again taking up the six-thonged whip.

"And why not?" Tanya asked tremulously, her eyes fixed apprehensively on the knotted strands of leather that David Chao was slapping crisply against his thigh.

"Foolish girl. A plaything of Don Roberto's really should be more careful about her choice of lovers." He shook the whip gently, separating the strands so that each one would be free to leave its own bitter sting.

"What do you know of my… my lovers?"

David Chao moved closer to the girl in the swing, his fingers clenching on the stock of the whip. "I know that she …."

"She?" Tanya said flushing. She had had no idea that anyone knew of her afternoon liaisons with the dark-eyed Letitia.

"That she," David continued, draping the wicked thongs across the tops of Tanya's breasts and then letting the knotted ends of the whip slide into her splendid cleavage, "was only eighteen."

Tanya swallowed nervously, as she felt the strands of leather slither across the soft flesh of her breasts. Trying to retain her poise, she stammered, "Le …" she began, and then caught herself. "My … friend is only eighteen?"

David moved his hand slightly, so that the tails of the whip meandered lazily across Tanya's mouthwatering lust-globes, catching briefly on the nipple clamps, causing Tanya to wince in pain.

"Not only that, Miss Spencer," David Chao murmured softly has he swept the tails of the whip lightly across Tanya's outthrust breasts. "Has your lovely, sweet-tongued Leticia bothered to inform you that she is the daughter of Don Roberto?"

Tanya's body went rigid in the swing, and the color drained from her face. "You're crazy!" she gasped. "It's impossible. Don Roberto never mentioned having a daughter!"

"Oh, every family has its secrets, you know," David whispered as he slapped the thongs against Tanya's firm young breasts again, a little harder this time. The leather strips struck the sparkling clamps quite sharply, but he had fastened the clips very securely on Tanya's delectable nubbins and while the blow jarred them, it did not dislodge them. "I'm surprised that you never noticed the resemblance – the lean body, her dark wavy hair, her flashing eyes."

A mysterious smile formed on David Chao's face as he retreated and took another long puff on his cigarette as he let his eyes leisurely explore the curves and hollows of Tanya Spencer's nude body.

“Family resemblances can be quite remarkable," he said as he removed his glasses, cleaned them and replaced them. He sank back down in the chair and stared intently at Tanya again. But this time, Tanya realized, it was with unseeing eyes; it was as if the intense glare of Colonel Chao was fixed on a vision that he had conjured from the shadows of the Sala de Juegos.

David Chao was silent for a long moment and then he lifted the cigarette to his lips and inhaled deeply. "Your resemblance to her is quite striking you know?" he whispered as he exhaled a curling column of cigarette smoke.

“To her? To whom?” a dazed Tanya Spencer responded, once again confused by the colonel's enigmatic words.

“That golden hair, the soft, lovely skin, even the scent of your body. I would have recognized you anywhere, even through these.” He tapped his thick, steel-rimmed glasses meaningfully.

“What are you talking about?” Tanya replied, grimacing under the claw-like grip of the nipple clamps.

“Your mother.”

“My mother?!” Tanya repeated in shocked disbelief, as she tugged, tugging frantically at the straps which held her. “Who are you? What do you know of my mother?”

“I know this!” the David Chao whispered fiercely, extending his khaki-sleeved right arm, the arm that had hung so limply for so long at his side, its gray kid glove concealing the unused hand beneath. Using his good left hand, he stripped away the glove on his right hand, revealing a mangled knob of flesh and bone that had once been a human hand. “I have your mother to thank for this!”


Tanya turned her head away from the colonel's grotesque injury. “I don’t believe you; my mother is a good woman!”

“She betrayed me – and she ruined my life. She took from me everything -- education, career, a chance at love, marriage, children. What woman would spend her life with a man with … with this?” he exclaimed angrily, shaking his deformed fist.”

“My mother would never do such a thing!”

“Ah, but she did," David Chao seethed with righteous indignation. She and your ignorant bully of a father!”

“My father?!?”

“Yes, your father!”

“You must mean Tony Cannizzaro. My mother told me he was a brute. No better than you and your friends. He began cheating on her and abusing her during their honeymoon, she told me once, and he never stopped until the day he died.”

“He came to an untimely end, your father, as I recall,” David Chao continued pensively. “In a sleazy motel in a crime-infested area in South Los Angeles.” He exhaled another spiral of cigarette smoke. “The authorities seemed to believe that he must have gotten rough with a hooker who was under the protection of a very nasty pimp."

David Chao paused and puffed at his cigarette silently before exhaling another acrid column of smoke. "It was quite an unusual case as I recall. It's not often, I don't suppose, that a murder victim is found with a pool-cue shoved down his throat.”

David Chao's face was wreathed in an enigmatic, almost omniscient smile. He tilted his chair back leisurely and tapped his left hand gently against the ashtray as he neatly deposited a long cylinder of ash.

“I don't know," Tanya responded uncaringly as she tried once again to free her upraised wrists. "If you ask me, the bastard probably deserved it. But he wasn’t my father.”

David Chao’s tilted-back chair crashed to the floor. He glared at Tanya angrily. “What do you mean Tony Cannizzaro wasn't your father? Ah, I see. It's just like your mother to fill you with you such lies!”

“I’m sorry if it upsets you, although I don’t see why it should. Did you arrange for your disgusting friends to rape me merely because you thought I was HIS daughter?"

“But it’s impossible,” David Chao repeated, but now without quite the air of certainty that had enshrouded his every prior action. He reached for the same pocket computer he had used in the plaza to verify the date and time of his cronies’ bout with Carmelita. He punched angrily at the buttons. “Aghh! Where is it? This stupid thing,!” he growled, as he continued to punch little buttons. “Yes, yes, here it is," he said finally breathing an audible sigh of relief. "Tanya Cannizzaro, born February 24, 1984, Cedar Sinai Hospital, Los Angeles, Ca. Daughter of Anthony and Amalie Cannizzaro. 21 inches. 6 pounds and 7 ounces. Social Security Number …"

“Your precious computer is wrong. I was born in 1983, not 1984. Not that it matters. But the rest is right. Except for one thing – Tony Cannizzaro was not my father.”

“Of course he was your father. I have made inquiries with everyone who knew your mother in those years; she was terrified of Tony Cannizzaro. She was much too afraid of him to cheat on him.”

“Well, I’m sorry to disappoint you, but Tony Cannizzaro was infertile. My mother told me once that Tony berated her for years for not giving him a son. But shortly before he died, they learned that it was his sperm count, not her fertility, that was the problem."

David Chao felt his head begin to spin at this revelation. “But if Tony Cannizzaro was not your father, then who …”

“I don’t know,” said Tanya Spencer. Nor did she know why this strange conversation had begun to drain the vindictiveness from her erstwhile tormentor. But since it had, she decided that, like Scheherazade, her best chance at survival was to keep talking.

“But I can tell you this," she went on. My mother told me once, with tears in her eyes, that aside from Tony, she had only slept with one other man before she met Tom Spencer, my step-father. That she had been with him only once. And that she had made a mistake for which she could never forgive herself. Just thinking about him seemed to upset her greatly. She never spoke of him again.”

As she spoke those words Tanya noticed that the mastermind of her subjugation had turned deathly pale. “Are … are you… are you all right?”

David Chao had pressed his hands to his face, knocking his glasses to the floor, where they lay at his feet. He rocked slowly back and forth in the chair, his chest heaving silently as if he were suffocating in an airless world. His right hand, his maimed hand, shook uncontrollably.

Mystified by the colonel's agitation, and comforted by the fact that his thin-lipped ferocity had spent itself, Tanya continued to search her memory. “I remember … it was a Thanksgiving morning when I was about twelve or thirteen when she told me about my father. She was sitting at the kitchen table chopping celery and onions for the stuffing while she told me -- I can still see the tears from the onions streaming down her face. And … it was the strangest thing: when she had finished telling me that Tony was not my father, she began whispering the names of the elements. You know, in chemistry. She …"

Tanya was interrupted by a muffled moan coming from her tormentor that seemed to rise up from the very depths of his soul.

"…she had begun to teach them to me when I was eight or nine, reciting them to me as if they were a second set of ABC’s. Hydrogen, Helium, Lithium, Beryllium, Boron …”

“Carbon, Nitrogen, Oxygen …” David Chao's hushed, half-strangled voice joined Tanya's in an eerily-echoing harmony.

Tanya Spencer glanced up quizzically at David Chao who had begun to move toward her with an anguished expression on his face. “Oh, you know them too?” she murmured.

David Chao bent and retrieved his glasses. His good hand shook as he glared at them, blaming his folly in part on the weakness of his vision. He slowly put the glasses back on, adjusting them with minute care, as if by straightening them perfectly, he might make sense of a world suddenly gone mad. There was a ghastly soullessness to his eyes as he crossed, ashen-faced, to Tanya, his movements those of an automaton.

As his hands moved toward her breasts, Tanya Spencer inhaled fearfully, bracing herself for a fresh round of torment. But this time Colonel Chao's hands were gentle as he unscrewed the first of the fiendish clamps. Tanya bit her lip to stifle a gasp of pain. When the colonel undid the screw-clamp, it felt as if electricity, rather than blood, was surging back into her tender buds.

Although he seemed to move quickly it seemed to Tanya that her strange captor had aged ten years during the minute or two it took him to free her from her bonds.
Nice twist... :) :clapping:
 
Installment 30 {Finale}


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Malibu


After David Chao had liberated Tanya, he directed her toward one of the adjoining bathrooms. At his urging, she climbed into the glistening state-of-the-art shower, relishing its purifying cascade, but wincing as she braved the needle-like spray that jetted into her upper torso from three directions. At first the powerful spray felt like just another weapon as it raked her naked flesh, but after a minute or so she found a control that adjusted the forceful power spray into a gentle pulsing fountain that felt soothing, almost caressing.

As Tanya did her best to cleanse the innermost parts of her body, she tried to understand the strange behavior of this man who had leered at her nude whip-ravaged body with such obvious interest only minutes earlier, but who had now left her to shower and dress alone and seemed to be on the verge of letting her go free.

She hurriedly toweled herself dry, and then stepped warily back into the Game Room with the bath towel wrapped around her naked body.

"Your clothes are in here," he muttered softly, as she followed him back into the palatial living room.

As she reached for her cut-offs, David Chao averted his gaze so that she could drop the towel, turning to look out into the night through the bay window overlooking the balcony. He stared soundlessly into space, his good hand gripping the rail so hard that his fingers were white. Tanya winced gingerly as she tugged the shorts up over the livid weals on her buttocks and stretched what was left of the T-shirt trimmed in cardinal and gold over her equally tender breasts.

When he sensed that Tanya had finished dressing, David Chao turned toward her once again. “You must go quickly,” he said, his voice almost inaudible. "You must leave Ciudad Paraiso."

“But …” Tanya began again, still trying to make sense out of the bewildering series of events that had befallen her.

“Whatever do you, do not got go back to Il Convento. There is no time. I will call a taxi while you go down to the lobby. Take it directly to the airport. There is a private plane leaving for Los Angeles,” he paused to glance at a clock, “in about ninety minutes. I chartered the flight earlier today.”

“But how? I have no tickets, no papers, no money. They will never let me go.”

“Take these,” he said, opening a drawer and pressing an envelope into Tanya’s hands.

She glanced at it quickly. Inside the envelope there were a number of official looking papers, and a considerable amount of Colombian and American currency. She stared at the colonel, mystified by this new turn of events.

"But why? I don't understand any of this."


“Please, do not ask me any more questions. I will call ahead and explain that I … that I have been detained. You will be traveling under the protection of my diplomatic passport. Don Roberto himself has signed the documents in that envelope. The people at the airport will give you no problems. But you will need to know the password I will give them which will assure them that you are my guest. The password will be … 'Malibu'. Can you remember that?"

"Malibu …" Tanya repeated softly.

"But you must go now. Now!”

“What is this all about?" Tanya pleaded, looking at him beseechingly. “How do I know I can trust you, after what you have done to me?”

“I’m sorry, but you have no choice but to trust me. If Baraka or the Arab were to tell Don Roberto of your relationship with his daughter – his men would make your time in my suite seem like a vacation. Is it not so?”

“Y-yes.” Tanya shuddered as she recalled her horrific encounter with Don Roberto's thugs.

“Then go! Go!”

And Tanya Spencer turned and fled for the door.



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For a moment David Chao stood motionless, trapped in a ceaselessly shifting kaleidoscope of memories. Then he gathered himself and picked up the phone and arranged for a taxi to pick Tanya Spencer up in front of El Castillo and rush her to the airport. That done, he called the airport and explained that a young woman would be flying to Los Angeles on his charter and that she should be extended every courtesy. As for himself, he said, unforeseen circumstances had arisen, and his stay in Ciudad Paraiso would be extended indefinitely.


Satisfied that his wishes would be honored, he let the telephone fall to the floor, his left hand now as lifeless as his right. He moved toward the balcony and opened the glass door and stepped out onto the sky-patio. A few hundred yards away, the lights of Il Convento interrupted the darkness of the night-time sky and the mountains beyond. Seven stories below him, he could see Lilliputian late-night revelers enjoying themselves in Don Roberto's Plaza, some fresh from an erotic encounter, others en route to one, a few, perhaps, emboldened by drink or drugs or lust, in the midst of one.



Glancing to the west, toward the Pacific, David Chao reminisced about that long ago Saturday in Malibu, those dozen hours with Amalie Desjardins that had been the happiest time of his life. In his mind's eye he pictured Amalie Desjardins sunning herself on that early-morning strand, her happy smile as she led him on that delightful pilgrimage up the Pacific shore, past Ventura, through Santa Barbara, around Point Conception…. He paused, a sad smile breaking through his despair, as the irony of that place name drove a dagger through his heart.


To be sure Amalie had wronged him when, tipsy and terrified, she had done the bidding of Tony Cannizzaro. But had he not wronged her almost as badly the night before when he had stood silently watching, leering, enjoying the sacrifice of her body and soul on the altar of his own lust? And had he not wronged her when he had handled her beautiful young body so roughly in those last fleeting seconds before the sound of Big Tony's voice had augured his doom?


His life had been forever soured by his long-sought revenge, a revenge which tonight he had taken out on a person, a child, his child, more innocent of guilt than he himself had been. Should he have told Tanya? Could she possibly have forgiven him? Might they not have shared a brief embrace before … He sighed ruefully. Until a few moments ago, he had not forgiven Amalie – why should their daughter forgive him? No, it was for her mother to decide how much to tell Tanya, when the daughter shared the account of her ordeal and its strange conclusion with her mother, as she surely would.


No, it was better this way….

David looked down at the square until the taxi pulled up, and Tanya rushed out to meet it, holding her tattered shirt together as best she could. She paused for just a moment to glance up at his sky balcony. Then she slipped into the back seat of the cab, and David watched its crimson taillights until he could no longer see them, as the vehicle made its way toward the nearby airport


David Chao, ever the scientist, glanced down at the plaza measuring the distance to the square, calculating silently to himself. At thirty-two feet per second, per second ….



********



Seven stories below, Julius Baraka, sitting at one of the tables at the far end of the Plaza, clinked his nearly empty glass against the brandy snifter offered by Sheik Ahmed. "Shall we have another, my friend? What a night, eh? What a beauty!"


But the Sheik, distracted by a sudden movement, did not answer. The black-bearded Arab cast his eyes upward toward the towering façade of El Castillo. "Forgive me, my friend. I thought I saw something moving up there. Probably just my imagination. Which of those sky-patios would be the colonel's do you suppose?"


Baraka beamed at him in good humor. "Those tumblers of brandy on top of such an exhilarating evening have gone to your head, my friend. Only a moment ago you were telling me that you thought you might have seen our lovely Tanya dash out of the hotel and jump into a cab. I assure you that the colonel has the proud Miss Spencer well in hand. What a wildcat she was, eh? “


Baraka paused for a moment, and took a deep breath in the manner of a man who had just enjoyed the most sumptuous of feasts. “You know, my only regret is that the colonel shooed us out of there rather suddenly. It seems he prefers to take his pleasures privately, but I must tell you that I wouldn't have minded helping him to … " Baraka paused, suddenly realizing that the sheik had not taken in a word he had said.


"Look there," said the sheik pointing a pudgy finger toward the topmost story of the great hotel. "There's someone up there, climbing up on the railing of the balcony."


"Don't be ridiculous!" Baraka scoffed, turning to glance upward himself. "It must be a shadow."


But the two oil ministers could only look on transfixed as the dark shadow leapt into the darkness, its arms stoic and lifeless, as if their immobility might somehow hasten his fall. The dark outline of a man's figure seemed to take on solidity as it plummeted, picking up speed at thirty-two feet per second per second, until its billions of atoms, clutched tightly by the inexorable grip of gravity, bombarded the pavement with a ghastly thud, leaving it awash in a sea of gore.




The End
 
Installment 30 {Finale}


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Malibu


After David Chao had liberated Tanya, he directed her toward one of the adjoining bathrooms. At his urging, she climbed into the glistening state-of-the-art shower, relishing its purifying cascade, but wincing as she braved the needle-like spray that jetted into her upper torso from three directions. At first the powerful spray felt like just another weapon as it raked her naked flesh, but after a minute or so she found a control that adjusted the forceful power spray into a gentle pulsing fountain that felt soothing, almost caressing.

As Tanya did her best to cleanse the innermost parts of her body, she tried to understand the strange behavior of this man who had leered at her nude whip-ravaged body with such obvious interest only minutes earlier, but who had now left her to shower and dress alone and seemed to be on the verge of letting her go free.

She hurriedly toweled herself dry, and then stepped warily back into the Game Room with the bath towel wrapped around her naked body.

"Your clothes are in here," he muttered softly, as she followed him back into the palatial living room.

As she reached for her cut-offs, David Chao averted his gaze so that she could drop the towel, turning to look out into the night through the bay window overlooking the balcony. He stared soundlessly into space, his good hand gripping the rail so hard that his fingers were white. Tanya winced gingerly as she tugged the shorts up over the livid weals on her buttocks and stretched what was left of the T-shirt trimmed in cardinal and gold over her equally tender breasts.

When he sensed that Tanya had finished dressing, David Chao turned toward her once again. “You must go quickly,” he said, his voice almost inaudible. "You must leave Ciudad Paraiso."

“But …” Tanya began again, still trying to make sense out of the bewildering series of events that had befallen her.

“Whatever do you, do not got go back to Il Convento. There is no time. I will call a taxi while you go down to the lobby. Take it directly to the airport. There is a private plane leaving for Los Angeles,” he paused to glance at a clock, “in about ninety minutes. I chartered the flight earlier today.”

“But how? I have no tickets, no papers, no money. They will never let me go.”

“Take these,” he said, opening a drawer and pressing an envelope into Tanya’s hands.

She glanced at it quickly. Inside the envelope there were a number of official looking papers, and a considerable amount of Colombian and American currency. She stared at the colonel, mystified by this new turn of events.

"But why? I don't understand any of this."


“Please, do not ask me any more questions. I will call ahead and explain that I … that I have been detained. You will be traveling under the protection of my diplomatic passport. Don Roberto himself has signed the documents in that envelope. The people at the airport will give you no problems. But you will need to know the password I will give them which will assure them that you are my guest. The password will be … 'Malibu'. Can you remember that?"

"Malibu …" Tanya repeated softly.

"But you must go now. Now!”

“What is this all about?" Tanya pleaded, looking at him beseechingly. “How do I know I can trust you, after what you have done to me?”

“I’m sorry, but you have no choice but to trust me. If Baraka or the Arab were to tell Don Roberto of your relationship with his daughter – his men would make your time in my suite seem like a vacation. Is it not so?”

“Y-yes.” Tanya shuddered as she recalled her horrific encounter with Don Roberto's thugs.

“Then go! Go!”

And Tanya Spencer turned and fled for the door.



********



For a moment David Chao stood motionless, trapped in a ceaselessly shifting kaleidoscope of memories. Then he gathered himself and picked up the phone and arranged for a taxi to pick Tanya Spencer up in front of El Castillo and rush her to the airport. That done, he called the airport and explained that a young woman would be flying to Los Angeles on his charter and that she should be extended every courtesy. As for himself, he said, unforeseen circumstances had arisen, and his stay in Ciudad Paraiso would be extended indefinitely.


Satisfied that his wishes would be honored, he let the telephone fall to the floor, his left hand now as lifeless as his right. He moved toward the balcony and opened the glass door and stepped out onto the sky-patio. A few hundred yards away, the lights of Il Convento interrupted the darkness of the night-time sky and the mountains beyond. Seven stories below him, he could see Lilliputian late-night revelers enjoying themselves in Don Roberto's Plaza, some fresh from an erotic encounter, others en route to one, a few, perhaps, emboldened by drink or drugs or lust, in the midst of one.



Glancing to the west, toward the Pacific, David Chao reminisced about that long ago Saturday in Malibu, those dozen hours with Amalie Desjardins that had been the happiest time of his life. In his mind's eye he pictured Amalie Desjardins sunning herself on that early-morning strand, her happy smile as she led him on that delightful pilgrimage up the Pacific shore, past Ventura, through Santa Barbara, around Point Conception…. He paused, a sad smile breaking through his despair, as the irony of that place name drove a dagger through his heart.


To be sure Amalie had wronged him when, tipsy and terrified, she had done the bidding of Tony Cannizzaro. But had he not wronged her almost as badly the night before when he had stood silently watching, leering, enjoying the sacrifice of her body and soul on the altar of his own lust? And had he not wronged her when he had handled her beautiful young body so roughly in those last fleeting seconds before the sound of Big Tony's voice had augured his doom?


His life had been forever soured by his long-sought revenge, a revenge which tonight he had taken out on a person, a child, his child, more innocent of guilt than he himself had been. Should he have told Tanya? Could she possibly have forgiven him? Might they not have shared a brief embrace before … He sighed ruefully. Until a few moments ago, he had not forgiven Amalie – why should their daughter forgive him? No, it was for her mother to decide how much to tell Tanya, when the daughter shared the account of her ordeal and its strange conclusion with her mother, as she surely would.


No, it was better this way….

David looked down at the square until the taxi pulled up, and Tanya rushed out to meet it, holding her tattered shirt together as best she could. She paused for just a moment to glance up at his sky balcony. Then she slipped into the back seat of the cab, and David watched its crimson taillights until he could no longer see them, as the vehicle made its way toward the nearby airport


David Chao, ever the scientist, glanced down at the plaza measuring the distance to the square, calculating silently to himself. At thirty-two feet per second, per second ….



********



Seven stories below, Julius Baraka, sitting at one of the tables at the far end of the Plaza, clinked his nearly empty glass against the brandy snifter offered by Sheik Ahmed. "Shall we have another, my friend? What a night, eh? What a beauty!"


But the Sheik, distracted by a sudden movement, did not answer. The black-bearded Arab cast his eyes upward toward the towering façade of El Castillo. "Forgive me, my friend. I thought I saw something moving up there. Probably just my imagination. Which of those sky-patios would be the colonel's do you suppose?"


Baraka beamed at him in good humor. "Those tumblers of brandy on top of such an exhilarating evening have gone to your head, my friend. Only a moment ago you were telling me that you thought you might have seen our lovely Tanya dash out of the hotel and jump into a cab. I assure you that the colonel has the proud Miss Spencer well in hand. What a wildcat she was, eh? “


Baraka paused for a moment, and took a deep breath in the manner of a man who had just enjoyed the most sumptuous of feasts. “You know, my only regret is that the colonel shooed us out of there rather suddenly. It seems he prefers to take his pleasures privately, but I must tell you that I wouldn't have minded helping him to … " Baraka paused, suddenly realizing that the sheik had not taken in a word he had said.


"Look there," said the sheik pointing a pudgy finger toward the topmost story of the great hotel. "There's someone up there, climbing up on the railing of the balcony."


"Don't be ridiculous!" Baraka scoffed, turning to glance upward himself. "It must be a shadow."


But the two oil ministers could only look on transfixed as the dark shadow leapt into the darkness, its arms stoic and lifeless, as if their immobility might somehow hasten his fall. The dark outline of a man's figure seemed to take on solidity as it plummeted, picking up speed at thirty-two feet per second per second, until its billions of atoms, clutched tightly by the inexorable grip of gravity, bombarded the pavement with a ghastly thud, leaving it awash in a sea of gore.




The End
:clapping::clapping::clapping:

No, not because it's the end. :doh:

Because it was a well-written, well plotted, entertaining story! :)
 
Installment 30 {Finale}


View attachment 474558

Malibu


After David Chao had liberated Tanya, he directed her toward one of the adjoining bathrooms. At his urging, she climbed into the glistening state-of-the-art shower, relishing its purifying cascade, but wincing as she braved the needle-like spray that jetted into her upper torso from three directions. At first the powerful spray felt like just another weapon as it raked her naked flesh, but after a minute or so she found a control that adjusted the forceful power spray into a gentle pulsing fountain that felt soothing, almost caressing.

As Tanya did her best to cleanse the innermost parts of her body, she tried to understand the strange behavior of this man who had leered at her nude whip-ravaged body with such obvious interest only minutes earlier, but who had now left her to shower and dress alone and seemed to be on the verge of letting her go free.

She hurriedly toweled herself dry, and then stepped warily back into the Game Room with the bath towel wrapped around her naked body.

"Your clothes are in here," he muttered softly, as she followed him back into the palatial living room.

As she reached for her cut-offs, David Chao averted his gaze so that she could drop the towel, turning to look out into the night through the bay window overlooking the balcony. He stared soundlessly into space, his good hand gripping the rail so hard that his fingers were white. Tanya winced gingerly as she tugged the shorts up over the livid weals on her buttocks and stretched what was left of the T-shirt trimmed in cardinal and gold over her equally tender breasts.

When he sensed that Tanya had finished dressing, David Chao turned toward her once again. “You must go quickly,” he said, his voice almost inaudible. "You must leave Ciudad Paraiso."

“But …” Tanya began again, still trying to make sense out of the bewildering series of events that had befallen her.

“Whatever do you, do not got go back to Il Convento. There is no time. I will call a taxi while you go down to the lobby. Take it directly to the airport. There is a private plane leaving for Los Angeles,” he paused to glance at a clock, “in about ninety minutes. I chartered the flight earlier today.”

“But how? I have no tickets, no papers, no money. They will never let me go.”

“Take these,” he said, opening a drawer and pressing an envelope into Tanya’s hands.

She glanced at it quickly. Inside the envelope there were a number of official looking papers, and a considerable amount of Colombian and American currency. She stared at the colonel, mystified by this new turn of events.

"But why? I don't understand any of this."


“Please, do not ask me any more questions. I will call ahead and explain that I … that I have been detained. You will be traveling under the protection of my diplomatic passport. Don Roberto himself has signed the documents in that envelope. The people at the airport will give you no problems. But you will need to know the password I will give them which will assure them that you are my guest. The password will be … 'Malibu'. Can you remember that?"

"Malibu …" Tanya repeated softly.

"But you must go now. Now!”

“What is this all about?" Tanya pleaded, looking at him beseechingly. “How do I know I can trust you, after what you have done to me?”

“I’m sorry, but you have no choice but to trust me. If Baraka or the Arab were to tell Don Roberto of your relationship with his daughter – his men would make your time in my suite seem like a vacation. Is it not so?”

“Y-yes.” Tanya shuddered as she recalled her horrific encounter with Don Roberto's thugs.

“Then go! Go!”

And Tanya Spencer turned and fled for the door.



********



For a moment David Chao stood motionless, trapped in a ceaselessly shifting kaleidoscope of memories. Then he gathered himself and picked up the phone and arranged for a taxi to pick Tanya Spencer up in front of El Castillo and rush her to the airport. That done, he called the airport and explained that a young woman would be flying to Los Angeles on his charter and that she should be extended every courtesy. As for himself, he said, unforeseen circumstances had arisen, and his stay in Ciudad Paraiso would be extended indefinitely.


Satisfied that his wishes would be honored, he let the telephone fall to the floor, his left hand now as lifeless as his right. He moved toward the balcony and opened the glass door and stepped out onto the sky-patio. A few hundred yards away, the lights of Il Convento interrupted the darkness of the night-time sky and the mountains beyond. Seven stories below him, he could see Lilliputian late-night revelers enjoying themselves in Don Roberto's Plaza, some fresh from an erotic encounter, others en route to one, a few, perhaps, emboldened by drink or drugs or lust, in the midst of one.



Glancing to the west, toward the Pacific, David Chao reminisced about that long ago Saturday in Malibu, those dozen hours with Amalie Desjardins that had been the happiest time of his life. In his mind's eye he pictured Amalie Desjardins sunning herself on that early-morning strand, her happy smile as she led him on that delightful pilgrimage up the Pacific shore, past Ventura, through Santa Barbara, around Point Conception…. He paused, a sad smile breaking through his despair, as the irony of that place name drove a dagger through his heart.


To be sure Amalie had wronged him when, tipsy and terrified, she had done the bidding of Tony Cannizzaro. But had he not wronged her almost as badly the night before when he had stood silently watching, leering, enjoying the sacrifice of her body and soul on the altar of his own lust? And had he not wronged her when he had handled her beautiful young body so roughly in those last fleeting seconds before the sound of Big Tony's voice had augured his doom?


His life had been forever soured by his long-sought revenge, a revenge which tonight he had taken out on a person, a child, his child, more innocent of guilt than he himself had been. Should he have told Tanya? Could she possibly have forgiven him? Might they not have shared a brief embrace before … He sighed ruefully. Until a few moments ago, he had not forgiven Amalie – why should their daughter forgive him? No, it was for her mother to decide how much to tell Tanya, when the daughter shared the account of her ordeal and its strange conclusion with her mother, as she surely would.


No, it was better this way….

David looked down at the square until the taxi pulled up, and Tanya rushed out to meet it, holding her tattered shirt together as best she could. She paused for just a moment to glance up at his sky balcony. Then she slipped into the back seat of the cab, and David watched its crimson taillights until he could no longer see them, as the vehicle made its way toward the nearby airport


David Chao, ever the scientist, glanced down at the plaza measuring the distance to the square, calculating silently to himself. At thirty-two feet per second, per second ….



********



Seven stories below, Julius Baraka, sitting at one of the tables at the far end of the Plaza, clinked his nearly empty glass against the brandy snifter offered by Sheik Ahmed. "Shall we have another, my friend? What a night, eh? What a beauty!"


But the Sheik, distracted by a sudden movement, did not answer. The black-bearded Arab cast his eyes upward toward the towering façade of El Castillo. "Forgive me, my friend. I thought I saw something moving up there. Probably just my imagination. Which of those sky-patios would be the colonel's do you suppose?"


Baraka beamed at him in good humor. "Those tumblers of brandy on top of such an exhilarating evening have gone to your head, my friend. Only a moment ago you were telling me that you thought you might have seen our lovely Tanya dash out of the hotel and jump into a cab. I assure you that the colonel has the proud Miss Spencer well in hand. What a wildcat she was, eh? “


Baraka paused for a moment, and took a deep breath in the manner of a man who had just enjoyed the most sumptuous of feasts. “You know, my only regret is that the colonel shooed us out of there rather suddenly. It seems he prefers to take his pleasures privately, but I must tell you that I wouldn't have minded helping him to … " Baraka paused, suddenly realizing that the sheik had not taken in a word he had said.


"Look there," said the sheik pointing a pudgy finger toward the topmost story of the great hotel. "There's someone up there, climbing up on the railing of the balcony."


"Don't be ridiculous!" Baraka scoffed, turning to glance upward himself. "It must be a shadow."


But the two oil ministers could only look on transfixed as the dark shadow leapt into the darkness, its arms stoic and lifeless, as if their immobility might somehow hasten his fall. The dark outline of a man's figure seemed to take on solidity as it plummeted, picking up speed at thirty-two feet per second per second, until its billions of atoms, clutched tightly by the inexorable grip of gravity, bombarded the pavement with a ghastly thud, leaving it awash in a sea of gore.




The End
You asked elsewhere so in my opinion the story and twists were great but I felt you go bogged down in the torment in the middle. I still give it an 'A'!!!
 
but I felt you go bogged down in the torment in the middle.


In terms of the structure of the story ''the middle' would seem to relate to the flashback with Amalie, the cheerleader. Is that the part that you thought got bogged down? Or did you (more likely) mean the latter part, where the three men were rather unpleasant to Tanya? Perhaps that section went on too long. I suspect that I drew it out a bit because there were some rather long stretches with no 'thrill scenes' at all.

And I'm sure I thought that the torments involving the table leaf, the spray bottle, and later the lamp bulb and the extension cord were somewhat original and worth keeping on that score.

In any event, I value your opinion and thank you for it.

Thanks to you also, Wragg!
 
In terms of the structure of the story ''the middle' would seem to relate to the flashback with Amalie, the cheerleader. Is that the part that you thought got bogged down? Or did you (more likely) mean the latter part, where the three men were rather unpleasant to Tanya? Perhaps that section went on too long. I suspect that I drew it out a bit because there were some rather long stretches with no 'thrill scenes' at all.

And I'm sure I thought that the torments involving the table leaf, the spray bottle, and later the lamp bulb and the extension cord were somewhat original and worth keeping on that score.

In any event, I value your opinion and thank you for it.

Thanks to you also, Wragg!
You asked an opinion and yes I referred to the latter part. But do not concern yourself with my preferences. I've written more than a few threads that have been panned by others. While I would like everyone to enjoy every post it is not realistic. I do encourage writers to take the time to read other writers' threads. If you want comments you need to offer some.

I enjoyed the tutoring section and the very well done ending chapters.
 
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