I am totally against the free hand swinging!!!
me2I am totally against the free hand swinging!!!
Thank you MadiosiNow as PDF in the archive
http://www.cruxforums.com/xf/resources/ex-tv-by-laeti-dazza-productions.683/
Thank you Madiosi
You like it Gibbs.? That gives me hope. It could have been so much better, if I had put my foot down and had stuck to a more traditional 3D theme.
Great !!! But in my opinion the executioners should not be naked. And I'd appreciate if there were a bunch of well dressed wealthy women as spectators, who lustfully observe the executions.
No, you are right the executioners should not be naked. In an ideal world, they would be wearing sequined gowns, one in turquoise the other in Lilac. High heels and shiny nylons. Sadly, the guy who wrote the story did not see it this way though.
As for the crowd. Well, I suppose its a TV program anyway.
Though the main problem is making the picture. This computer used to crash out at 7 characters. And whilst we now have ways around that problem. Assembling a crowd is difficult. It makes the computer run slowly and the controls are jerky, The render times phenomenally long.
Or you can sacrifice picture quality. In short, you need a fuck of a lot of computer power., bearing in mind "off the shelf" computers don't come much better than the one I'm using.
anyway, a great story. a workaround could be to show a crowd of spectators (well dressed obviously wealthy women, who can afford to see the tv-show live) entering the execution chamber (these could be the students-there you have already something like a crowd, but dressed - the similarity of faces shouldn't matter), and then, during the executions, one or two excited - if not lewd and lustful faces.
perhaps nxt time
anyway, a great story. a workaround could be to show a crowd of spectators (well dressed obviously wealthy women, who can afford to see the tv-show live) entering the execution chamber (these could be the students-there you have already something like a crowd, but dressed - the similarity of faces shouldn't matter), and then, during the executions, one or two excited - if not lewd and lustful faces.
perhaps nxt time
I'm going to add to that. My last comment, made it sound like viewers are not discerning. Some are, some aren't. I suppose its all relative. The number of discerning viewers is increasing, as improvements are made in 3D . Thus you will get people who will check out your pictures to the last detail. Sometimes, they will see things and draw interpretations I never intended or considered. In other words, they appreciate and enjoy the work of the artist. It often stimulates their imagination.anyway, a great story. a workaround could be to show a crowd of spectators (well dressed obviously wealthy women, who can afford to see the tv-show live) entering the execution chamber (these could be the students-there you have already something like a crowd, but dressed - the similarity of faces shouldn't matter), and then, during the executions, one or two excited - if not lewd and lustful faces.
perhaps nxt time
Well Howdy Twisted m8!Well. While idly checking to see if old links still work BAM! I run into my two favorite purveyors of erotic death and execution. My good luck. I appreciatted the story AND the story panels. Original and fresh work on older themes. The new industrial garrotes make me giggle and envioius. Poor Latitia's little sister. She never catches a break either it would seem. If I were to nit pick I would only say that the death struggles might have been worth more attention. Being the pervert I am my imagination started a whole new story concerning the necro freaks clean up squad that have fun with the corpses on the way to the creamatorium. My. You two do fire us up! As usual the two of you have done great work and it was a pleasure to find you both here. Bravo!
Nope - stuck for inspiration.Is any new disaster coming???
One would think Manon and Laetitia could be caught in lesbian activities and need to be eliminated... is that a good start?Nope - stuck for inspiration.
Now would be the time for any inspired story writer to come forth.