lsd, I really appreciate that you appear to have read my first fantasy story and have made your suggestions known. I actually did write that last part with your suggestion that Lady Agetha has masochistic nature which she first discovers while being whipped. I did this for you and it was not my original intent. I hope that this aspect of her whipping was enjoyable for you to read. Thank you.
On the other hand and as Mark has noted this is my fantasy not yours and if I continue it will be my imagination that dictates the story. I am not fond of the thoughts of bestiality or extremes of torture or cuxifiction so do not expect to read those elements in any of my future writings if they are posted. I did include the male dog in the story as a way to demonstrate her humiliation as others stood by and watched the dog sexually arouse her with it's tongue. I love oral sex and the sensation of a tongue on my pussy but so far never with a dog. So thank you and everyone for your comments and critiques. I am humbled.