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Auburn Hair In The Moonlight

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Wragg

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Now fades the glimm'ring landscape on the sight,
And so the air a solemn stillness holds,
Save where the victim fights for breath tonight,
As falling night her agony enfolds;

The guard is sleeping, ‘neath an old elm tree
Now she can only to the moon complain
As, on her cross, she hangs in agony
Though closing darkness masks her naked shame.

She strives to move, on four sharp points of pain
Each breath forthcoming with a deep’ning groan,
Now someone stirs, along a nearby lane
The dying victim no longer is alone.

The climbing moon reflects on auburn hair
The victim’s lover tiptoes to her side
A shining teardrop penetrates the air
As she beholds her lover, crucified.

A gentle kiss – her darling knows she’s there
She gazes down to see if it is true;
Then she inhales a painful draught of air:
“Oh, God! You’ve come, I can’t believe it’s you!”

There, on her cross, emotion unrestrained
As love and pain and terror were combined
“Although I’ve longed to see your face again
“I know I’ll never feel your lips on mine!”

Then, very gently, a ladder touched her cross
Quickly the girl with auburn hair undressed.
She climbed, and then with care she leaned across
And stroked her lover’s bruised and bloodied breast.

One cross outlined against the pale moonlight
Two loving bodies ‘gainst the rough hewn wood
A final ecstasy in life’s last night
The pow’r of love can never be withstood.
 
Now fades the glimm'ring landscape on the sight,
And so the air a solemn stillness holds,
Save where the victim fights for breath tonight,
As falling night her agony enfolds;

The guard is sleeping, ‘neath an old elm tree
Now she can only to the moon complain
As, on her cross, she hangs in agony
Though closing darkness masks her naked shame.

She strives to move, on four sharp points of pain
Each breath forthcoming with a deep’ning groan,
Now someone stirs, along a nearby lane
The dying victim no longer is alone.

The climbing moon reflects on auburn hair
The victim’s lover tiptoes to her side
A shining teardrop penetrates the air
As she beholds her lover, crucified.

A gentle kiss – her darling knows she’s there
She gazes down to see if it is true;
Then she inhales a painful draught of air:
“Oh, God! You’ve come, I can’t believe it’s you!”

There, on her cross, emotion unrestrained
As love and pain and terror were combined
“Although I’ve longed to see your face again
“I know I’ll never feel your lips on mine!”

Then, very gently, a ladder touched her cross
Quickly the girl with auburn hair undressed.
She climbed, and then with care she leaned across
And stroked her lover’s bruised and bloodied breast.

One cross outlined against the pale moonlight
Two loving bodies ‘gainst the rough hewn wood
A final ecstasy in life’s last night
The pow’r of love can never be withstood.


Hmmmmmmmmmm...very nice....tender and romantic!
 
Now fades the glimm'ring landscape on the sight,
And so the air a solemn stillness holds,
Save where the victim fights for breath tonight,
As falling night her agony enfolds;

The guard is sleeping, ‘neath an old elm tree
Now she can only to the moon complain
As, on her cross, she hangs in agony
Though closing darkness masks her naked shame.

She strives to move, on four sharp points of pain
Each breath forthcoming with a deep’ning groan,
Now someone stirs, along a nearby lane
The dying victim no longer is alone.

The climbing moon reflects on auburn hair
The victim’s lover tiptoes to her side
A shining teardrop penetrates the air
As she beholds her lover, crucified.

A gentle kiss – her darling knows she’s there
She gazes down to see if it is true;
Then she inhales a painful draught of air:
“Oh, God! You’ve come, I can’t believe it’s you!”

There, on her cross, emotion unrestrained
As love and pain and terror were combined
“Although I’ve longed to see your face again
“I know I’ll never feel your lips on mine!”

Then, very gently, a ladder touched her cross
Quickly the girl with auburn hair undressed.
She climbed, and then with care she leaned across
And stroked her lover’s bruised and bloodied breast.

One cross outlined against the pale moonlight
Two loving bodies ‘gainst the rough hewn wood
A final ecstasy in life’s last night
The pow’r of love can never be withstood.
Ohhhhhh nooooo, I love this :)
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The poets among you will have recognised the strains of Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard by Thomas Gray.

It was 'a moping owl doth to the moon complain' but maybe a nude woman hanging on a cross beats a moping owl any day.

Thanks for the nice remarks, as Cxslave spotted she's the auburn haired one, Barbaria's the one complaining to the moon.

Barbaria would say that it's only the moon who listens when she complains.

W
 
Very good Wragg, though it's a shame the rude forefathers of the hamlet don't get a look in! :D

The hammer tolls the knell of my last day,
The slobbering crowd files slowly past the tree
My body heaves and writhes in cruel crux-play,
While I long to leave this world of agony.
 
Barbaria would say that it's only the moon who listens when she complains.

W

Got that right!:rolleyes:
Very good Wragg, though it's a shame the rude forefathers of the hamlet don't get a look in! :D

The hammer tolls the knell of my last day,
The slobbering crowd files slowly past the tree
My body heaves and writhes in cruel crux-play,
While I long to leave this world of agony.

Love the image of a "slobbering crowd" ..... so apt:)
 
Very good Wragg, though it's a shame the rude forefathers of the hamlet don't get a look in! :D

The hammer tolls the knell of my last day,
The slobbering crowd files slowly past the tree
My body heaves and writhes in cruel crux-play,
While I long to leave this world of agony.
Ah!

Iambic pentameter

Can you beat it?

And to have some of Eulalia's poetry on the same thread as mine!

My cup of joy overflows

W
Oh, and before anyone else says it, I know perfectly well that you'd not be able to tell what colour Cx's hair was by moonlight, I just thought it a romantic title:bdsm-heart:

W
 
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Got that right!:rolleyes:


Love the image of a "slobbering crowd" ..... so apt:)
Yes! I do, too!
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It's bill a testament
A revealing clue
Not a threat
When born anew

He shall drool
With a wanton savor
Never knowing
It's sweet flavor
 
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