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You're right of course, it's only the presence of 'plantations' and 'Sheriff' that made N America more likely, but who knows what words would be used post-apocalypse. And I can well believe there was minimal schooling, resulting in all the bankrupsies.

As for schools in Britain, yes CP has gone, but a heirarchy exists, bullying is rife, little kids don't get to eat every treat Mummy packs for them.

Be a boring old world though (and not much of a story) if Barb and Pat go to a mine, work hard, retire.
 
You're right of course, it's only the presence of 'plantations' and 'Sheriff' that made N America more likely, but who knows what words would be used post-apocalypse. And I can well believe there was minimal schooling, resulting in all the bankrupsies.

As for schools in Britain, yes CP has gone, but a heirarchy exists, bullying is rife, little kids don't get to eat every treat Mummy packs for them.

Be a boring old world though (and not much of a story) if Barb and Pat go to a mine, work hard, retire.

Barb credits the liberal, free-thinking public schools of her blue state for instilling in her the importance of questioning everything and striking back at injustice. Hasn't exactly been the best policy here on CF, as all it seems to do is get me nailed naked to another cross of wood, but ... :rolleyes:
 
You're right of course, it's only the presence of 'plantations' and 'Sheriff' that made N America more likely, but who knows what words would be used post-apocalypse. And I can well believe there was minimal schooling, resulting in all the bankrupsies.

I suppose we had antebellum slavery in the US South in mind when we wrote this story and PP. I don't know about schooling and bankruptcy; back in 2008 we saw the products of the finest universities in the world bring the world to the verge of bankruptcy.

Be a boring old world though (and not much of a story) if Barb and Pat go to a mine, work hard, retire.

Maybe. I might take a crack at such a story some time;):)

Barb credits the liberal, free-thinking public schools of her blue state for instilling in her the importance of questioning everything and striking back at injustice. Hasn't exactly been the best policy here on CF, as all it seems to do is get me nailed naked to another cross of wood, but ... :rolleyes:

You're improving though.;) I may claim a teeny bit of credit or blame as the case may be;)
 
Barb credits the liberal, free-thinking public schools of her blue state for instilling in her the importance of questioning everything and striking back at injustice. Hasn't exactly been the best policy here on CF, as all it seems to do is get me nailed naked to another cross of wood, but ... :rolleyes:

Where would we be without you questioning everything, and it does work in your favour sometimes, like when............or maybe..................yeh, I see what you mean, but you resurrect as a better person each time, better able to hold your tongue, read small print...............OK you make an awesome victim (Damn you Tree) protagonist in stories.
 
Where would we be without you questioning everything, and it does work in your favour sometimes, like when............or maybe..................yeh, I see what you mean, but you resurrect as a better person each time, better able to hold your tongue, read small print...............OK you make an awesome victim (Damn you Tree) protagonist in stories.

tumblr_n7qmdemxef1rl4zspo1_1280.jpg about sums it up :rolleyes:
 
Chapter 5, Catfight (Barb 2)

As of today, by my reckoning, Pat and I have endured nearly two months of hard slave labor in the salt mine. I had thought it was nearly over on that first day when Zelda whipped me to exhaustion on the crusher, and at the end of that day when she and her enforcer pals slipped that noose around my neck and pulled the cart from under my feet. Fortunately George came to my rescue, and both Pat and I were whisked away from Zelda and Jake's clutches.

Not that life on the night shift under George was any bed of roses. He and his enforcers worked us hard. We were assigned to various details. We were sent back to the crusher a number of times, in addition to being tasked to break new salt chunks with picks and shovels from the white veins of mineral exposed at the working ends of the mine's many shafts, hauling carts full of salt and debris out, dragging timbers in to shore up the new diggings, and working the soup kitchens.

It was all hard back-breaking work, done in the nude, sometimes in the unbearable heat of the crusher shed and other times in the dank cold of the working ends of the mine shafts. And all work was done under the constant threat of the lash. While George's enforcers may have been a bit more restrained that Zelda, they were still ready to apply the whip to any perceived slowdown in work, and they kept a record of daily output or effort for each of the slave girls and meted out whippings each day when we assembled in the 'long tunnel' before or after our shift.

I felt the sudden bite of the lash often during the first few weeks as I struggled to keep up. I also quickly learned that there was a 'pecking order' among the slave girls, in which the more experienced ones ... the ones who had been there the longest, whom Pat and I referred to as the 'boss' girls ... forced the new girls, like Pat and me, to do the most physically demanding work and often to pick up the slack whenever the 'boss' girls found ways to shun work. Over time, though, as new girls arrived in fresh intakes, Pat and I gained at least some status.

Nonetheless, during the early weeks, I was bound at least a half dozen times ... in front of everyone ... to one of the long tunnel's whipping posts to take the standard punishment of 12 hard lashes for infractions or poor performance ... a punishment that was in fact often due to the 'boss' girls on my shift managing to blame me for their own sloth. Pat suffered roughly the same as me from the unjust 'inner workings' of the slave girl regime at the mine. Our backs were almost always sore from our most recent whipping.

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The worst experience, though, happened about two weeks after intake. For the most part, our daily mealtime fare was pretty meager ... consisting of bowls of porridge or gruel and stale bread. Once a day they added small chunks of meat to the gruel or porridge to provide a bit of protein to what was barely more than a starvation diet. We soon learned that the 'boss' girls thought they were entitled to the meat in the new girls' bowls. And the enforcers invariably looked the other way whenever they came around to demand these tidbits from Pat's and my bowls.

After several days of this, I had had enough. Both Pat and I had been losing weight and feeling constantly hungry ... I had begun to worry about that ... and when two of the 'boss' girls ... Brenda and her dimwitted but muscular friend Pam made the usual demand during an 'end of shift' meal, I rebelled ... kicking at Dinah, who was nearest to me, with my right foot as I pulled my bowl protectively close to my chest, and hissing "Fuck off!"

"Well, look who is getting uppity," sneered Brenda, glancing quickly over her shoulder to see who might be watching. "Looking for a thrashing, are you Barb?"

"You heard me. Leave us alone!" I said, a little louder, hoping George might be around to hear.

Brenda came closer, leaned into my face while suddenly reaching out to tip my bowl, the contents of which sloshed down the front of my body.

It took me a second to realize what had happened. Then, tossing my empty bowl aside, I flew at her in a rage, butting her in the stomach with my head. She went down on her back with me on top of her.

We began rolling around on the tunnel floor, tangled together, pummeling and cursing at each other, the chains of our shackles rattling and clinking. The rest of the night shift came running over ... excitedly shouting "fight, fight" ... to form a tight circle around us.

Eventually I managed to gain the upper hand, ending up on top, pinning Brenda beneath me. I sat aside her chest, triumphantly leaning over her, holding her wrists down above her head, panting heavily, my breasts hanging just over her reddened contorted face.

"Enough?' I asked.

But just then Pam intervened, grabbing me from behind by the hair, jerking me half to my feet, and belting me in the stomach with clenched fist. I flew backwards with the force of the blow and landed hard on my butt, holding my belly and gasping for air. Pam followed in hot pursuit, circling around to kick me in the back of the head. I crumpled over and rolled on my side, pulling my knees up tight against my chest, expecting another hard kick.

But it didn't come because Pat had come to my rescue, jumping on Pam's back from behind, and throwing an arm lock around the woman's thick neck. With a roar of surprise and fury, the giant woman spun around, trying to dislodge Pat ... who hung on for dear life ... from her back.

Meanwhile, Brenda had gotten to her feet, grabbed a length of wood from a nearby stack of timbers used for shoring up the mine shafts and was about to clout Pat over the head with it ... when Jake, who happened to be on his way into the mine to get his day shift up and moving came charging down the long tunnel shouting, "What the fuck! Stop! Freeze!"

Zelda was right behind him, screaming "Move out of the way!" at the cheering circle of slave girls, cracking her whip at them for emphasis ... and then in an amazing display of skill with a whip, knocked the length of timber from Brenda's grasp.

"What the fuck is going on here?" repeated Jake.

Still gasping for air, I was unable to answer ... and looking around, noticed in dismay that George was nowhere to be seen. He must have left right after the food was passed out! There would be no help from him!

"They started it," yelled Brenda, pointing at me and then at Pat, who had relinquished her hold and was sliding down off Pam's back. "That little bitch tried to kick my friend Pam, and then she assaulted me!"

Zelda intervened. "I knew it!" she said, flicking the tip of her whip at me to catch me under the chin, while gesturing for me to get up off the ground. "I knew from a start that the little bitch was nothing but trouble. We should have hanged her on the first day!"

"No! That's a lie!" It was Brenda who started this!" I gasped, struggling to my feet and rubbing my stinging chin.

"Silence," snapped Zelda, laying a sharp lash right across the tops of my thighs and then before I could raise my arms to protect myself, following up with a second one across my breasts, driving me back against the wall of the tunnel.

"Alright, enough!" shouted Jake, grabbing Pat by the arm and propelling her up against the wall beside me. "Fighting is a serious breach of the rules. In George's absence, I am taking command here. You two ... what are your numbers? ... oh yes, 1491 and 1492 ... you two will be severely punished. You will spend the entire day on stake-out. See to it Zelda! The rest of you are dismissed."

The other girls dispersed, conversing excitedly and glancing over their shoulders as they left ... Brenda and Pam looking very pleased with themselves.

Zelda cracked her whip on the ground, and growled, "OK, get moving! Let's go you two!"

Uh oh....

:mad::mad::mad::mad::mad::mad::mad:

:rolleyes:
 
"I'm an overseer, I whip you and look down on you.
I'm a boss girl, I look up to my overseer, but I beat you and look down on you.
I'm a slave, I know my place"

Credit to the Two Ronnies for the idea, and to all the English Public (Private) Schools who enforced it, I blame the American education system for Barb's behaviour.
seriously - well, sort of - the 'boss girl' character's always an interesting one in stories like this,
she can torment and bully the poor wretches under her command to her heart's content,,
yet she still has to ingratiate herself and take whatever shit comes from the men or women above her,
and that only feeds her vicious fury that she takes out on her underlings!
 
Damn. That took some catching up.
Someone can whip Brenda and Pam for my money. Maybe Sarah can join the mine crew under Zelda.
Lots of people to hate here. :mad::mad:

In for the ride now. (Sorry for the short comment. I'm extremely enthusiastic about the story, but I'm also a bit under the weather at present.:doh:)
 
Damn. That took some catching up.
Someone can whip Brenda and Pam for my money. Maybe Sarah can join the mine crew under Zelda.
Lots of people to hate here. :mad::mad:

In for the ride now. (Sorry for the short comment. I'm extremely enthusiastic about the story, but I'm also a bit under the weather at present.:doh:)

Glad you caught up, Jolly. Lots more story to come. Lots of people to be dealt with. Maybe even a few good ones or at least ones who try to do good.;)
 
Glad you caught up, Jolly. Lots more story to come. Lots of people to be dealt with. Maybe even a few good ones or at least ones who try to do good.;)
In my school that wasn't a 'catfight'. As a tall skinny kid I got picked on (I was 'bigger') until I saw 'Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid' when in one of the opening scenes Paul Newman asked about the rules of a knife fight. The bad guy replies "Rules in a knife fight??? There are no rules!!!"

Newman kicks him in the balls and wins the fight. A young Tree learned a lesson and less than a week later 'the bully' was disgraced and I was never bothered again. Quit giving the 'bully' power!!!
 
seriously - well, sort of - the 'boss girl' character's always an interesting one in stories like this,
she can torment and bully the poor wretches under her command to her heart's content,,
yet she still has to ingratiate herself and take whatever shit comes from the men or women above her,
and that only feeds her vicious fury that she takes out on her underlings!

Yep, don't we all just hate her! :mad:
 
In my school that wasn't a 'catfight'. As a tall skinny kid I got picked on (I was 'bigger') until I saw 'Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid' when in one of the opening scenes Paul Newman asked about the rules of a knife fight. The bad guy replies "Rules in a knife fight??? There are no rules!!!"

Newman kicks him in the balls and wins the fight. A young Tree learned a lesson and less than a week later 'the bully' was disgraced and I was never bothered again. Quit giving the 'bully' power!!!

So, you kicked the bully in the balls?
 
Chapter 6. The Stakeout (Barb 3)

Zelda and two other enforcers marched Pat and me down the long tunnel, through the mine entrance and out to a gravel pit some distance behind the mine office shed. We were to be punished for fighting with the boss girls over food. Jake had called our punishment a 'stake out'. It wasn't very hard to imagine what he meant by that.

On reaching the gravel pit, we were ordered to sit down. While we sat side by side, knees pulled up under our chins, Zelda produced a key and removed our shackles. The two enforcers scurried around us, using mallets to pound 6 wooden stakes into the ground.

"Lie down ... on your backs, between the stakes!" snapped Zelda.

We shifted our positions to comply. As I lay back gingerly ... the stones were sharp ... I glanced up at the sky. There was not a cloud in sight ... the sun was rising quickly ... the long summer drought was promising to deliver another dry heat-scorched day.

"Spread your legs and hold out your arms," ordered Zelda, kicking at my ankles for emphasis. I opened my legs and threw out my arms, the movement caused the grit and sharp stones beneath me to dig uncomfortably into my bare ass and back.

As soon as we had done so, Zelda's helpers busied themselves binding our wrists and ankles to the stakes with strips of leather. When they had finished, we lay naked and spreadeagled. Our bindings allowed just enough slack to move or flex our limbs a bit, but little more than that. We were helplessly and hopelessly exposed to the elements.

"Ok, 1491 and 1492 ... let this be a lesson to you! Have a lovely day," chirped Zelda, flashing a wicked smile. "We'll be back to get you when the day shift is over."

I raised my head to watch her go, then lay back as the harsh rays of the sun beat mercilessly down from above. I tugged experimentally at my bonds, adjusted my position slightly and turned my head to look helplessly at Pat, who just shook her head resignedly before lying back and closing her eyes.

The temperature in the gravel pit rose steadily as the day wore on. The sun beat down relentlessly. By high noon we were literally baking. My body was sheened in sweat. My lips were parched; my throat was dry. I desperately wanted something to drink.

From time to time, I would raise my head in the hope that someone ... George, Zelda, anyone! ... would come to our aid ... at least to bring us a little water to wet our mouths! I would squint through the shimmering heat waves, but there was nothing to see but rock, gravel, sand and clear blue sky. Defeated, I would once again throw my head back, close my eyes, and suffer on.

And as I laid there I listened to Pat's breathing. At first she was panting heavily, and if I turned my head I could see her chest rising and falling, sweat-covered and glistening in the harsh light. But after a time, her breathing became shallower, and she began to make croaking sounds with each breath. I began to fear that we would both die of heat stroke.

To add to our misery, the leather thongs that bound our ankles and wrists to the stakes became moist with sweat and began to contract in the heat, digging painfully into our flesh. Smears of blood had appeared on my wrists beneath the abrading leather.

By mid afternoon ... the absolute heat of the day ... the air in the gravel pit had become stiflingly hot. We were caught in an oven. It was unbearable and I began to panic. I raised my head to call out, looking down between mounded breasts at my sunburned body. I opened my mouth to shout for help, but all that came out was ragged croak. My head fell back. Feeling woozy, defeated, I closed my eyes.

A little later, Zelda returned. I was only half conscious by then. She poked me in the ribs with the toe of her boot. When I didn't respond, she kicked me hard. I winced and opened my eyes. The mean bitch was standing over me holding a jug of water.

"I'll bet you two are powerfully thirsty," she said with a look of false concern on her face. I nodded feebly. Pat stirred beside me.

"Then watch this," she said, as she poured the contents of the jug on the ground between our heads, raising a little cloud of dust and spattering us with specks of wet sand and gravel. I turned my head and opened my mouth pathetically, straining at the neck, but the stream of water was just beyond my reach. She laughed, tossed the empty jug aside, and walked off.

Hours later, after on and off periods of drifting in and out of consciousness, I was vaguely aware of people standing over me. Slowly I opened a swollen eye lid. A face drifted in and out of focus. I strained to make out its identity. It was George, and behind him two of his enforcers.

"Untie them and get them inside," he ordered.
 
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Glad you caught up, Jolly. Lots more story to come. Maybe even a few good ones or at least ones who try to do good.;)
Tree just got cut out of the plot...
So, you kicked the bully in the balls?
Yep...
MM 6. The Stakeout (Barb 3)

Zelda and two other enforcers marched Pat and me down the long tunnel, through the mine entrance and out to a gravel pit some distance behind the mine office shed. We were to be punished for fighting with the boss girls over food. Jake had called our punishment a 'stake out'. It wasn't very hard to imagine what he meant by that.

On reaching the gravel pit, we were ordered to sit down. While we sat side by side, knees pulled up under our chins, Zelda produced a key and removed our shackles. The two enforcers scurried around us, using mallets to pound 6 wooden stakes into the ground.

"Lie down ... on your backs, between the stakes!" snapped Zelda.

We shifted our positions to comply. As I lay back gingerly ... the stones were sharp ... I glanced up at the sky. There was not a cloud in sight ... the sun was rising quickly ... the long summer drought was promising to deliver another dry heat-scorched day.

"Spread your legs and hold out your arms," ordered Zelda, kicking at my ankles for emphasis. I opened my legs and threw out my arms, the movement caused the grit and sharp stones beneath me to dig uncomfortably into my bare ass and back.

As soon as we had done so, Zelda's helpers busied themselves binding our wrists and ankles to the stakes with strips of leather. When they had finished, we lay naked and spreadeagled. Our bindings allowed just enough slack to move or flex our limbs a bit, but little more than that. We were helplessly and hopelessly exposed to the elements.

"Ok, 1491 and 1492 ... let this be a lesson to you! Have a lovely day," chirped Zelda, flashing a wicked smile. "We'll be back to get you when the day shift is over."

I raised my head to watch her go, then lay back as the harsh rays of the sun beat mercilessly down from above. I tugged experimentally at my bonds, adjusted my position slightly and turned my head to look helplessly at Pat, who just shook her head resignedly before lying back and closing her eyes.

The temperature in the gravel pit rose steadily as the day wore on. The sun beat down relentlessly. By high noon we were literally baking. My body was sheened in sweat. My lips were parched; my throat was dry. I desperately wanted something to drink.

From time to time, I would raise my head in the hope that someone ... George, Zelda, anyone! ... would come to our aid ... at least to bring us a little water to wet our mouths! I would squint through the shimmering heat waves, but there was nothing to see but rock, gravel, sand and clear blue sky. Defeated, I would once again throw my head back, close my eyes, and suffer on.

And as I laid there I listened to Pat's breathing. At first she was panting heavily, and if I turned my head I could see her chest rising and falling, sweat-covered and glistening in the harsh light. But after a time, her breathing became shallower, and she began to make croaking sounds with each breath. I began to fear that we would both die of heat stroke.

To add to our misery, the leather thongs that bound our ankles and wrists to the stakes became moist with sweat and began to contract in the heat, digging painfully into our flesh. Smears of blood had appeared on my wrists beneath the abrading leather.

By mid afternoon ... the absolute heat of the day ... the air in the gravel pit had become stiflingly hot. We were caught in an oven. It was unbearable and I began to panic. I raised my head to call out, looking down between mounded breasts at my sunburned body. I opened my mouth to shout for help, but all that came out was ragged croak. My head fell back. Feeling woozy, defeated, I closed my eyes.

A little later, Zelda returned. I was only half conscious by then. She poked me in the ribs with the toe of her boot. When I didn't respond, she kicked me hard. I winced and opened my eyes. The mean bitch was standing over me holding a jug of water.

"I'll bet you two are powerfully thirsty," she said with a look of false concern on her face. I nodded feebly. Pat stirred beside me.

"Then watch this," she said, as she poured the contents of the jug on the ground between our heads, raising a little cloud of dust and spattering us with specks of wet sand and gravel. I turned my head and opened my mouth pathetically, straining at the neck, but the stream of water was just beyond my reach. She laughed, tossed the empty jug aside, and walked off.

Hours later, after on and off periods of drifting in and out of consciousness, I was vaguely aware of people standing over me. Slowly I opened a swollen eye lid. A face drifted in and out of focus. I strained to make out its identity. It was George, and behind him two of his enforcers.

"Untie them and get them inside," he ordered.
I think Zelda is blowing up Loath-o-meters around the world!!!
 
Tree just got cut out of the plot...

Yep...

I think Zelda is blowing up Loath-o-meters around the world!!!


Tree, I don't think you're nearly as bad as you pretend to be.:) I hope not, anyway:D

But all of us have elements of good and bad in us. What Barb and I have tried to do in stories like this one and Plantation Plight and Berlin Diary is write characters who are complex, like real people are. Whether we have succeeded, you will have to judge.

Charles is a terrible husband, a sadist and a lousy businessman, but he's in the throes of an obsession and sees his world collapsing around him. He makes a lot of really bad decisions, but probably all of us have known people who have made self-destructive choices. Hell, we've probably all made a few ourselves. We'll hear more from Charles tomorrow and you guys can all judge for yourselves. Some of the other characters will evolve and change as the story progresses. Not Zelda, but she isn't a major character in this story.
 
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When I was in junior school, we had all watched the latest 'cowboys & indians' film at the local cinema. Naturally, boys re-enact that film at playtime, and I was the one they chose (or maybe I volunteered, I honestly can't remember) to stake out in the sun like that, following the plot of the film.

The thing is, I do remember, vividly as if yesterday, that my thoughts as they held my wrists and ankles (no ropes, just hands) was "It's a good job they don't realise how much I'm enjoying this".

The scene above instantly resurrected those thoughts from so long ago, thoughts that started so young and have never left me.
 
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